Truely Madly Deeply in love❤️(mayur ff)PART 11pg26 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
hey zoe.................awesum update yaar
ya it was short but tooo gud..........so no chappals for u ....hahahaaaa
gr8......they shared there first kiss.....OMG............loved it completely
jst came in to take sum break from hectic research work....and seriously ur update freshn me up....
love u
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: pakirani

omg!!! that kiss scene was so beautiful!!!! your FF was amazing, zoe 😃 loved, it! cant wait until the next part...

thanks a lottt pakirani!!!!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

all i can say is Love is in the air!!! i can feel it...it was so beautifully put together...the kiss scene....umm have no words for it

thank you sooo much for ur reply!it really blessed me a lot😊
i am very happy u like it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hey zoe.................awesum update yaar

ya it was short but tooo gud..........so no chappals for u ....hahahaaaa
gr8......they shared there first kiss.....OMG............loved it completely
jst came in to take sum break from hectic research work....and seriously ur update freshn me up....
love u
continue soon

haha!!thnxx for no chappals😃
i am happy😊
and thnxx for ur reply!!it was really really sweet😛
xx zoe xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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superb part.kash real mein bhi kiss hoti.i wish.i love ur FF.......UPDATE SOON.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

superb part.kash real mein bhi kiss hoti.i wish.i love ur FF.......UPDATE SOON.😊

haha!!
i wish that too!! that wud have been the cutest scene ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyyyyyy!!!!this part is short too cuz i've got a class in like 15 mins so i'll write as much as i can!!!!
i will continue tonight so no worriesssssss😉
Part 7!
n - i think we shud get inside..
m - yea .. i guess..
(they both were drenched in water so nupur told him to wait while she wud go and get a towel for him)
nupur got a towel for him and started to dry herself out too. she went to her bathroom in order to get changed into dry clothes while mayank waited for her in her room. he took off his wet t-shirt.when nupur came back she saw him shirtless and inspite of living in florida she was a bit uncomfortable. but she dealt with it and walked slowly towards him.he took her hand and pulled her towards him and made her sit on his lap😳and he started playing with her hand..
and then he whispered..
m - i love u nupur...
n - i love you too mayank..
m- but i love you more ...(he started to play around)
n - well.. actually u r right..(she teased him)
m - omg!r u serious!(and he let go of her hand and looked away)
nupur smiled cuz he looked so cute even wen he was angry with her.she made him face her and then she kissed his forehead and said..
n - i have loved u ever since i have started to think about u. u r the first guy in my life who has made me go crazy after u.isnt this much attention from me enough for you..?
mayank held her hand once again and clutched it tight to his chest and then brought it up to his lips and kissed it. he had never fallen in love with anyone before. he cudnt think of a life without her. it wud be like living in a world with no air. he knew now that the heart that he had wud be incomplete without nupur as she had now become the beats of his heart. and after every beat his love for nupur increased.
m - living a life with you is all that i need now nupur. just promise me that u will never leave me...promise me that u will stick by me.
n - i promise!(and she gave him the cutest hug ever)
they both layed on the bed. mayank had one of his arms around her while the other hand was holding on to her hand. that night was the most fantabulous night for both of them. that night the stars twinkled the most and the moon smiled at the sight of them together. they were truely madly and deeply in love with each other. they had achieved something that every yuth dreams of. they both witnessed their dreams come true.
nupur suddenly remembered that she had to pack.mayank's eyes were shut wen they were lying down so she thought that he was asleep. but as soon as she tried to get up and go in order to start packing she couldnt move as mayank had gotten a tight hold of her hands and he pulled her back and said with his eyes shut
m - you promised u wud never leave me!
nupur smiled at his cuteness😉and pinched his nose lightly(like in one of the epi😳)
n - acha baba!i am not leaving u....but i need to pack otherwise u'll have to go to brazil without me , leaving me here!
m - i'll help u pack then..
they both walked towards her closet holding hands. mayank picked out 7 outfits for her to wear and didnt let nupur choose and he started to fold the clothes out and started putting them in her suitcase.and then he walked out of the closet and went to the bathroom while she cud put in her other stuff😉(he issssss soooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee)
he got back at the correct time. she was finished packing.and he picked her up in his arms and started to walk out the door.
n - arrey! wat do u think u are doing mister??
mayank smiled at this and continued walking..
n - oh no!someone help me!!
he opened his apartment door and made her sit on the bed and then finally spoke up.
m - ok... so i helped u to pack...now its ur turn...
saying this he sat down on the bed and showed her the closet. nupur smiled at this as she felt that he was treating her as if she was his wife and at the same time she blushed at this thought.she picked out clothes and started to pack them in the suitcase which was on the bed . mayank came from behind and hugged her.he moved her hair to one side and then kissed her neck which brought a tingly feeling to nupur.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
u r ff is great yaar i was waiting for it from such a long time
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh gosh zoe this was sooooooooooooooooo romantic. oh i am not the first one to read. man how i wish it won't end. I am soooooo excited to see what happens next. your updates are always sooooo passionate and enchanting. GREAT job. i am soooooooo glad to see that yo have updated soooooooooooo soon. thanksa lot for the pm. hugsssssssssss.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey zoe im sooo sry i didnt read ur prev part b4.....im cumin on If after 4 days so im really behind everything.........wonderful parts MN are soooo adorable.....really too gud part nd ill be waitin fr ur pm....tnx alot

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