Truely Madly Deeply in love❤️(mayur ff)PART 11pg26 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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this part is a bit short but plz dont get mad at me

Part 6

They both awaited for the sun to finally rise in the bright sky and shine with its magical brightness which had now also brought the corners of their hearts into light.

Nupur was feeling really bad as she didn't want to become an evil impact on mayank and muskaan's relationship as she had felt some reciprocating feelings from mayank towards herself.

N – this is crazy! Nupur u cant do this to some one. This is really bad!! Nupur this would be such a cruel thing to do!!!

She kept telling this to her self. She finally decided that she will confront these things with mayank. She picked up the phone with courage (not the cowardly dog ..btw..lolzz...ps-this was a lame joke)

And finally called him up.

N – come on…pick up the phone!!(it had just rang once)

And mayank didn't want to look that desperate so he waited till he finally picked it up. Oh wait … who am I kidding …he picked it up just as the bell went twice..lol

M – hi nupur(he said very indescribably- cuz it was soo cute)

N – hello… mayank…?umm

M – yea nupur…is everything alright..?(he asked very concerned- ly)

N – yea yea…everything is perfect….i just had one question..

M – don't hesitate just ask! We are friend cum neighbors cum lov(shit wat am I saying)

Never mind …u go ahead and ask

N – yea … thnx.. I wanted to know if your girl friend will be going too and if so are we pickin her up on the way … can I go directly to the airport to catch up with amit..?(she asked indirectly)

M – hold on a second! wat girl friend .. who girlfriend …. MY GIRLFRIEND..?

(he said astonishingly)wen did I get a girlfriend? I don't know about my own girlfriend..? wow.. that's strange..

n – why are you acting so shocked as if I don't know anything..? almost everyone knows! I saw her with u today in the caf!!

M – hold up nupur(then remembering meeting with muskaan he screams)MUSKAAN!!

N – fine I get it u love her atleast don't scream on the phone. I guess you like her name but I think others might be sleeping right now to hear it!! You can scream on the microphone tomorrow if u want to but not now.

And with this she slammed the phone and burst out crying!

M – hello?hello?nupur??(he was very confused)

Mayank had the weirdest feeling as he thought that he had just hurt nupur unintentionally but it still made him feel really bad….after a few seconds of confusion he walked really fast toward her house. He knocked at the door and shouted out her name but the only reply he got was – 'go away' while she continued to cry. Mayank finally opened the door which was already unlock. He ran around her house finding nupur. He finally saw her crying on the couch inside. He went close to her. She said the same thing again—' leave me alone mayank,…. Just go..!

He didn't care about what she was saying as he needed to clear things with her. He walked close to her and and sat right infront of her on his knees and moved her hand from her face and wiped her tears away. He held her hand on her lap and started to say

M – nupur… just listen to me once. Muskaan is not my girlfriend.

Nupur looked away when he said this so he turned her face towards him.

M – nupur…. She is just like my sister and when you saw me at the caf … I was actually there with her to talk about you..

N – me?(she was confused)

M – yes you!

Nupur was still not convinced by his so called explaination. but Mayank wasn't finished yet.

M – nupur… you are the first girl in my life about whom I have thought about every moment since we have met and you are the only girl who has made me complete now. And all I want to say now is .. is .. that – I love you!

He looked at nupur expecting that she would answer soon. She was confused and didn't know wat to say. She bend towards him and gave him a hug. And whispered—' I love you too!'

Then there was a long silence. Mayank held her hand and they both walked towards the balcony. She started to speak

N – I too have been thinking about u a lot

m- oh really???(he asked curiously and saw her blush)

n – and umm.. I am sorry about the muskaan thing..

m – oh no no don't be sorry nupur…. You have every right to be jealous….

N – huhhh??

M – I mean.. even I got a bit jealous with you and amit..

Nupur started laughing really loud.

N – omg mayank!! Are you serious???amit and me???? I cant believe this!!!

M – even I cant believe that you pictured me with muskaan!!

N – come on mayank that looked so obvious..!

M – what??? If me and muskaan looked obvious then what did you and amit look like??hey I have got the answer—more than obvious! I mean the way you used to hug him and kiss him!it was just so..

Nupur put her finger on his lips.

N – shhhh

And now just let me enjoy this moment that we have together.

Mayank smiled. They both continued standing in the balcony in silence. But that silence spoke a million words. They could feel the love that they had for each other. Suddenly it started to drizzle a bit. Nupur started to walk inside wen mayank held her hand and pulled her towards him. They both stared deep into each others eyes. At the same time the drizzle had gradually turned into heavy rain. Mayank slowly cupped her face with his hands and brought it closer to his and then they both kissed each other deeply. Nupur was so happy as this is how she wanted her first kiss to be. In the rain. It was perfect. They finished their kiss with a smile playing on both their faces. It was surely magical…and they looked at each other with the special love that everyone dreams of getting…..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Oh gosh zoe, man i have been waiting for your update like forever now, or atleast it felt like that. man it was soooooooooooooooo wonderful. oh my gosh i have got so many butterflies in my tummy right now. the part where they shared their first kiss was amazing. it was soooooooooo romantic and magical. wow they confessed and now they are going on a holiday together. holiday cum work. oh gosh this is just wonderful. the way you write is amazing, its soooo natural and relatable. lovely. please update soon. can it please be a little longer please. loved itttttttttttttt to the core totally.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
wowowow nice part i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Senny

Oh gosh zoe, man i have been waiting for your update like forever now, or atleast it felt like that. man it was soooooooooooooooo wonderful. oh my gosh i have got so many butterflies in my tummy right now. the part where they shared their first kiss was amazing. it was soooooooooo romantic and magical. wow they confessed and now they are going on a holiday together. holiday cum work. oh gosh this is just wonderful. the way you write is amazing, its soooo natural and relatable. lovely. please update soon. can it please be a little longer please. loved itttttttttttttt to the core totally.

thank you thank you thankyou thank you so much!!!!
and yess i will make the next part longer!!!😊
i am really really glad that you liked it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
awesome👏👏........i think i m in love wid ur ff⭐️ nd thanx for ur pm.......u r too sweet😊😊.........its ok if its short bt i lovd it a lot...............can sum1 start this kinda thing(ff) for sajan too........or if started,can give me the link???
luv,
khushali
Edited by khushali16 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow nice part i love it

thank you shafoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i am soo happy that u like it😃
keep responding!!!!u all really encourage me to write better😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: khushali16

awesome........i think i m d 1st one to comment.....

thnxxx!!😉
xx zoe xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
oh hey zoe, i loveddddddddddddd it. will wait for your next part eagerly.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
omg!!! that kiss scene was so beautiful!!!! your FF was amazing, zoe 😃 loved, it! cant wait until the next part...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
all i can say is Love is in the air!!! i can feel it...it was so beautifully put together...the kiss scene....umm have no words for it

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