FF-'Unforgettable Love'---chapter 1

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Author's note: This is my first trying of writing a fan-fiction so please bear with me and read this piece of fan-fic into that light. Pardon me for my spelling, grammar or concept mistakes. If this fan-fic matches with any person, character, story unintentionally then I am really sorry for that as it's strongly a fictional writing and is meant to entertain readers not to harm anyone's feelings. I am a diehard fan of the serial: "Meet Mila De Rabba" and so my characters of this fan-fic is based on that but in completedly different concept. Enjoy!



Chapter: 1 (Introduction)



It's a bright sunny morning as sun is shining brilliantly, birds are murmuring and flowers are blooming outside after a long hard rain the other day. The alarm clock started to ring interrupting the deep sleep of the girl. She just do not want to wake up as she knew this day has nothing to offer to her and it will be another plain boring day the way all days are for her. So she tried to avoid the alarm clock by stopping it and going back to her sleep. 🄱Then suddenly, someone gave a big hit on her door. Without understanding anything she jumped from the bed and went to open it as the hit was getting harder and harder. 😲😲

Geet, what is this? It's already 7.30 am'.don't you want to go to school?? Says Geet's mom.


Geet's mom, who is known by LJ, is a very loving, caring mother as Geet is the only child and the apple of her eyes. But when it comes to studies, she listens to no excuse. She wants her daughter to have good grades as the final year of her school is approaching, she wants Geet to be a doctor while Geet wants to establish in singing career.


Mom, what is this let me sleep 🄱, please

No Geet, today is your final day before class test, you should attend the class.

Mom... 😲

(Stopping Geet) No I don't want to hear any excuses'I want you downstairs...

Mom 😲

Within 10 mins. You got me (nearly shouted) 😔


Geet looking helpless had to listen to her mom as she is a very obedient daughter of her parents. She is 18 years old, studying at 10 grades and her favorite subject is music and least favorite is biology. She is very beautiful, sweet and charming; she doesn't have any boyfriend though many of the boys in her school are already fida for her. But she doesn't give a damn to them as she feels its still not the right time for love, affair etc. 😊


She went to the bathroom and brushed her teeth, then took shower and put a nice pink dress. She has to take trouble drying her hair as she has very long, attractive black hairs. Thanks to her dryer for helping her out. As she was doing the hair she rushed to the dinning room where she finds her parents sitting and waiting for her to join in the breakfast.


Good morning Geet, said her dad SB

Yea bad morning (Geet replied quietlyšŸ˜•)

Did you say anything honey? Said SB

No dad, I said good morning'

SB, Geet's dad is a businessman, he is a very rich man who loves two things in his life, one-Geet, two-money, he just don't like to see any sorrow or sadness in his daughter's face as she is the daddy's little girl. šŸ˜Šā­ļø

Ok Geet I will drop you at school, said SB

Thanks dad but I can managešŸ˜•

No sweetie, I will drop you 😊

Geet says bye to her mom as she leaves with her dad for the school.


As she reached her school, she is welcomed by Tania. Tania is her best friend, they are the close friend since class 1 and they share everything, never hides anything from each other.

Hey Geet what's up? 😃😃

Nothing

Do you know Geet today we will have a new biology teacher

Ahhh...who cares whether we have a new or the old one both will be the same fish of the same pond.

You know what Geet I heard this new biology teacher is a sir

So..?? 😲😲

He is very good, handsome, stylish, hot and...

(Geet stopped Tania and said), he can be Hrithik roshan or Aamir khan'I just DON'T CARE'you got me, I don't care of him or about biology.. 😔

Geet he is also unmarried..šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

Ohhhh, I can see you have done a whole research on him by the night'huh??? šŸ‘šŸ‘ If you're so interested why don't you do the class as I am surely not going to do it?

Geet it's up to you but I am really excited. Are you sure you won't do it??

Yes

100%??

1000% 😔

He is very handsome (Tania tries to tease her šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰)

Good bye and geet run away to join the music class.

To be continued

Please feel free to post your feedbacks, concerns, suggestions as it will obviously help me to continue with this story. Please criticism is always appreciated, I will try to post the next chapter soon.



2009- This fan-fiction is written by Sara and it belongs to her only. Please do not try to copy, redistribute this elsewhere or do not claim this as yours. All rights reserved.







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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice.. but still confused... whose geet actaully?? i mean the female actor...
but its really nice.. continue soon!
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yes she is the lead actress of Sony tv's weekly serial Meet Mila De Rabba which air at 8.00pm India time. My signature banner has her photos where she is with Kulwant who plays her husband in the drama.

thanks for liking it.
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no problem, next chapter will be up soon, so don't forget to read and comment on it

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