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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Chapter 9
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Questions:
1. Did I do a better job with Adi-Neelam this time? (I really hope so)
You did a great job finally they're becoming attracted towards each other....
2. Did Rehaan's story surprise you?
Umm ya a lot!! hopefully he'll tackle Zeenat
3. What do you think Samira and Zaid's secret is?
OMG that part has me really scared.....is Samira sick or something??? coz i've been reading My Sister's keeper and then u mentioned one of his cousins had lukemia......😕and she's looking frail soo.....i havent read chap 10 yet so dunno if you reveal anything or not...
4. What did you think of the chapter?
All in all it was a great chapter! loved adi-neelam scenes specially the last one...One thing i really like you always give sweet endings😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

"Sounds good. Bhaiya kahaan hain?"
Aditya sighed. "Main usko teen baar jaga chuka hoon. Now it's your turn." And with that he headed down the hallway towards the elevator.
OMG Zaid's always making me laugh
Entering the apartment, Samira set her basket down on the kitchen table and walked to Zaid's room. Finding the door halfway open, she glanced inside. Zaid was awake, but he was still sitting in his bed, rubbing his eyes sleepily.
Zaid's sleepy eyes suddenly became alert, as if he had just remembered something important. "Tumne to naashta kar liya, na? You went to the dining hall this morning?"
She could see the concern in his eyes and she knew exactly why. "Haan, Bhaiya. Rehaan was at the dining hall with me. You can ask him if you want."
"I believe you," he replied. "But did you eat enough? Agar kuch aur khaana ho to bataa do. I can make something for you."
Samira stared at him silently, her expression unreadable.
"Kya hua, Samira?" Zaid asked.
Abruptly, Samira leaned toward Zaid and hugged him tightly, resting her head against his shoulder. Surprised and confused, Zaid slowly put his arms around her, returning the hug.
Awwwwww☺️that is such a sweet moment and i'm liking zaid more and more😆

No questions! Just give me a detailed review if you have time.

I really loved the fight scene between deepali and adi and the way neelam surprised him it was great had me laughing and the best part was the confession.(forgetting that Hina is acctually potrayed be Deepika) I loved the scene between those two! just love how caring zaid is (i'm somewhat biased too though coz after all its ranbir😆😛) but still and then how he shows everyone what they talked about by kissing hina
This is the best chapter for me!!😃and like always you gave it a very sweet ending!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG i missed out on so many updates!!! COuld plz ADD ME TO THE PM LIST i really want to know when you update plz do send me pms whenever you update
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umm did you make a new thread??😕 coz i know i commented before on your fanfic but i can't find any of my previous comments😕😕 were they deleted???😕 umm i'm really sorry if i broke any rules😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Rabia!

Forgive me for being SO late with commenting but I have been losing track of time lately. =) Thanks for the extra long chapter though... made for terrific reading!

First, I loved the title - Sky is the limit. Going along with it were so many things you wrote, like the song for instance. It was perfectly weaved in. A classic song that one!

Anyway, so coming to the chapter, Samira-Zaid part was the last word in amazing. I loved how she opened up in front of him and how he said he understood. How important it is to just have sum1 say that at times. I hope e'thing gets fine for her soon.

Deepali is so contagious. Her confidence, her spirit, her vivacity - she's a darling. And you write her so well! I adored the little interaction she had with Neelam.

God, I loved that clarification abt the word 'match'. =) Even if it hadnt been like a footnote, it cud have been sumthin Samira mite say. LOL

What do I say abt the Zaid-Hina scene? The whole setting was perfect and all that happened was perefct too. :D I am so glad happiness is all around... Neelam's all cheerful, Deepali blows life into everything always (looking forward to a Karan Deepali scene next chapter.. yeay!), Zaid and Hina have a new beginning.... Gosh. Nazar na lagey.

Thanks for the super chapter Rabia.. brilliant work as always... keep them coming!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey rabia.. thank god, i cud finally catch up.. i LOVE the way the story is progressing.. seems like itz all happening in front of me.. there's something real abt the way you go.. i wish i was there at the hang gliding..loll ..nd the zaid-hina confession was suchh a good surprise.. loved whole of it..nd the way all the others teased, so true..i've come across something so similar..itz shockinggg..😆 .. samira nd rehaan - ahh, wow.. i fancy their understanding.. they're so meant-to-be..😳 ..aditya nd neelam are too cute, seriously.. you did complete justice to them, i think.. i dun think it cud be any better.. but i wish karan nd deepali weren't this mad at each other.. ..but hope they come closer later.. nd all the best to yusuf nd aisha..😉😛..
their friendship is like greatt.. i love all of itt so muchh.. really really really..am so much in love with all of themm..
great goinn..
plz update soon..
do add me to the pm list..😳
thanks ..
take care..😳

ps : i hope you count this in ur "long-comment" list..😉😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Once again...sorry for the delay everyone. Stupid exams. Please give me a few more days for Chapter 11. I'll finish it as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

ohhhh Rabia!!

Update time! After ages.. haha lol...as always. Sorry yaar, I just get so busy.
uhms where to start??
I love the little leap you took, i think the fact that in this part you've shown their friendship growing (eg. Zaid's worry for everyone while they went gliding, his love for Hina) and Neelams confidence growing.. it was sweet. Glad you liked it...
i would have never thought that Samira would have had anorexia and it's a sensitive topic your dealing with... but i guess you studying medicine it will be treated properly.. that brother sister scene was really cute. The trust they have in each other.. it was just a really good scene... written beautifully again.
: ) I was really hoping it would surprise everyone...yes, it is sensitive and I'll do my best to do justice to it. I love the Zaid-Samira relationship too...
Sister scene, Neelam and Deepali... was adorable. It's something i'd do.. start singing in the kitchen and pull my sister in too.. the song fitted beautifully.. i had a listen of it.. nice song. : ) Lol...I do that all the time. It's a classic AR Rahman song...one of my favs.
Group outing was great, the way you've written that whole part out was great, i could imagine everything.. the sights... and even the little chase between Adi and Deepz.. Thanks so much Sonia!
I agree with you 100% that it was a fun filled part. loved it.
Thanks for the PM
No problem!
xSonia

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

RABIA!!*hugs* Meera!!!

Missed me? 😉 Of course yaar!

I definitely missed your ff for these last few months that I haven't read or commented 😳 *hides away* I'm very sorry about that btw! 😳 It's okay...I'm glad you're back. 😃

I did catch up on the 4 chapters, thanks to Radz who recommended it to me WITHOUT knowing that I already read it from the beginning! Lol, that's so funny...I'm so glad to have Radz as a reader.

Anyways yes this comment will be short, only cus I don't want to have to give you crazy long comments on the last 4 chapters, just know that I am in awe of the way the story has progressed. Samira's problem, Rehaan and Zeenat;s relationship, Karan and Deepali's awesome ness! 😃 No worries...but I hope I get a long comment on the next chapter. Glad you like it!

All in all everything you've added in from the last time I read was fabulous! 😳 I just can not wait to see where you go ahead with this story! 😳Thanks so much!

I would like to be re-added to this pm list, since I noticed you're not continuing in the other thread! 😳 Certainly...when I post the next chapter, I'll add you and PM you...

Love you, Love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: _Naima1994_

Hey Rabia awesome chapter once again!!! 👏

Loved everything!!!!
Awww liked the way you handled the leap! Thanks so much Naima!
Samira-Zaid scene at the begining was sooo cute,
Samira has anorexia disorder??? Poor gal, well hope you will make her better soon!
Zaid is such a caring brother! Don't worry...she will get better soon...but the problem may come back later...
The Mehta family scene was soooooo Sweet, Deepz and Neelam and their mother!
Love their scenes! I wanted to make that part longer, but I couldn't think of what to add....anyway, glad you liked it.
Adi-Deepz little argument was soo funny!!! Poor deepz got ice dewn her back! haha! and wow neelam has changed! didnt expect her to drop water on Adi! Lolz looks like neither did Samira. haha, but loving this neelam so much more! Lol...fun to imagine wasn't it? I like this Neelam too. No one should miss out on fun because they are too scared of everything...
Hang gliding seems soooo cooll!!!!
I wanna gooo nowww!! lmao!
Lolz hopefully next time (if their is one) even samira and neelam will go and maybe zaid too! You should go! lol. I know I never could, because I am terrified of heights...yes, I'm just like Zaid in that matter...
WOOT WOOT
YES FINALLY!!!!
Zaid and Hina confessed!!!!!!!
Loved their little confession scene!!!
and the entire gang celebrating their love! how sweet!!! I loved writing the scene! *sigh* Romance is finally in the air...
Keep it up!!! ⭐️ Thanks again Naima!!

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

rabia!!! that was an awesome, fantabulous update!!

i loved it alot!! Thank you so much!
samiras story was damn sad yaar....i had tears in my eyes while reading it!! Aww, really?
haha....i loved how the gang was teasing zaid and hina....but i'm soooo glad they finally told each other their feelings!! Hehe...me too!
thanks for the PM No problem...
plzzzz continue soon!!! Will try...

Originally posted by: cute2stay

Yo Rabs, What up G?
Don't mind my wannabe gangsta-ness. I blame it on my bro coming home today and us listening to MJ, Pitbull and Sean Kingston all evening. 🤪 LOL! I totally understand....my bro has the same effect on me...
Ok so when I told you I read ch. 8, turns out I mistook ch. 7 for ch. 8. . Don't ask, my brain's a giant ball of mess right now. I just hope my comments will do justice to your writing. 😳 Here's to trying: Your comments are ALWAYS awesome!
So this is mostly for ch. 8 since I just read it. Overall, awesome read once again. My favourite part has to be Deepali lightening the mood and their group discussion. Deepali's adorable. Arranged marriage, I LOVE this topic. :D Mann this class sounds so fun! I wanna take it now. But as if, I live in such a white washed town that a desi-type class toh kya desi log hi mushkil se dikhte hain. And bollywood toh pooch hi matt. I'll tell my friends that last night I saw a bollywood movie and they'll be like, "OOOOO have you seen slumdog millionaire?" Kya karoon main in logon ka. *shakes head* Lol really? That's so funny...Actually I completely made up the class...I'm not sure if something like it really exists. But UC Berkeley (my undergrad) did have a lot of random interesting classes...that's what inspired me...
Annyyyyways, so ya kahan thi main...o ya love the arranged marriage topic. I totally agree with Neelam :D See my funda is that I don't trust myself at all to find me a good boy at all since I trust everyone blindly. And besides how would you know if this is the perfect guy for you? How the heck would you ever know that for sure you know? And I don't know why but I have more faith in arranged marriages for some reason. Maybe because in India esp. in our parent's generation most of the marriages were arranged and I've noticed a much less divorce rate with arranged marriages than love ones. Although that's obv. not always the case. And plus parents look at soo many other factors that we would never even dream of considering. For me it would just be all about the guy, if he's a chunga munda, I'm game. But parents look at family background, other relationships, etc. etc. which actually matters alot I think. In the long run anyways. Of course parents can also be wrong, but I think it's just the faith I have in arranged marriages and my trust in my parents that makes me ok with them. Even if I find the guy myself, I'd want my parents to be absolutely in love with that guy before I'd commit. I'd have to agree with you...I'm not sure if I trust my judgment completely...my parents would look for qualities that would matter in the long run...
O jeez....sorry about my arranged marriage rant there...gosh I can go on and on about this topic but I won't bore ya anymore. Back to your story. Ok I seriously hate it when guys are like "O you're a girl, you can't walk home alone" I mean I get that they're concerned or whatever but I hate that there's this fear for girls to walk alone at night. I mean why girls? Just cuz there's more stats supporting girls getting raped blah blah? It's just so unfair for girls to feel unsafe at night. *ahem*...sorry ending my rant there. But in your story toh the guys were being nice, plus this city is a really crazy one with dogs and stalkers and all so it's all good. But yaar...the statistics don't lie. Girls are more likely to be in danger...and it's not just about them being girls. It's about travelling in a group at night because there's always safety in numbers.
Plus I LOVEDD the moment after the walk you gave us! It was super sweet. :D So in terms of your story I loved that they all walked together. And you know how I've not liked Zaid and Hina much in the past. I TAKE IT BACK! :D This moment was really cute. Esp. Zaid blushing and caught in the moment by Adi and Samira. The two teasing him was adorable. It made me smile. =) Yay...so now you like all the couples right? That was always my hope...that people would have favorites but still like them all...Zaid and Hina's story had a kinda cliche bollywood movie start (since he basically loved her at first sight), but trust me...there's more to them...
Lovely update Rabia, esp. the end scene. Sorry for my befazool ke rants in between...I always ruin your update comments by those don't I? 😳 Apun sorry bolta hai. Arre yaar...kaisi baatein karti ho? I love your rants...
Can't wait to read part 9...will be back with my lambi bakwas after. Thanks for catching up with all of them so quickly...
OOO YAA questions! I basically answered your first and third one so will answer numero do. My fav couple is Karan and Deepali...surprise surprise. I just love their characters too much. But I love Samira and Reehan too. I love their understanding with each other. And Neelam-Aditya are too sweet. Zaid and Hina are ehhhh but they're kinda growin' on me after today's update. Ok did you say we had to pick one? :P Haha! It's okay...there's nothing wrong with liking them all...
Love,Pallavi Thanks so much!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Can't wait for Chapter 11. :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry guys! I know it has been a long wait...and I haven't been commenting on anyone else's fan fictions either. In fact, I haven't been spending much time on IF at all. The truth is that I recently became involved in a long distance relationship and that's taking up a lot of my time (in addition to school and extracurricular activities). Please give me a while to sort things out and figure out how to manage my time. I'll be back as soon as I can.
Edited by SuhanaSafar - 15 years ago
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Take your time, dear. All the best with everything you're doing. :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwhh !
Nice to know that you are into a relationship !
Best of Luck with it !
Hope you are able to find time to write,sooooooooooooon !!
Luv,
Vandu

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