Originally posted by: sana_sajan
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update
Originally posted by: sana_sajan
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update
Hello Ji. =] Hey Rinki! I guess it's time for me to formally welcome you to my fan fic. So glad to have you here and I absolutely love your comments.
Awww. Sami sees half-nangu Rehu. 🤣 I bet she loved the view, i know i wud. *SIIIGH* 😆 But jokes apart, i liked that part, it was right at the beginning and it made all my sleepyness go "whoosh" and fly away. *grins* And I loved how Hina teased Sami, i can see the tender bhabhi-nanad look right there. =] Lol, you are so funny. I was thinking of describing Rehaan's upper body in a little more detail, but then I decided to leave that for some other time. 😉
VISHAL! I love Amit. 😳 He's awesome. <3 && him as the older hawt cousin of Adi is perfect. Lol. && Vishu is such an athletic dude, i wud like faint at just hearing those things he's listing they do later on. 😆 && the food part was cute, *siigh* poor Adii. :( Im sure Vishu there will make him happier. <3 I LOVE Amit too! Such a hot guy.Will try to keep Vishal interesting.
Junaid bhai as the cook. Hawt. 😆 Idk why, but guys cooking gets to me. 😍 Ahem. && the whole Hina-Papa-Yusi part was nice, i can see how her family dynamics work. *nods* and its totally legit how her dad worries so much after her near death experience but her side is equally valid. She needs to be independent completely, without her family flipping out so much, it stresses a person out. Hopefully they find a compromise later on, maybe Zee can become the official bodyguard. 😎 That'd be cute. 😆 Guys cooking in the best! My fiance and I cook together and it's so much fun. 😊 Yea, I guess in Hina's situation, no one is really right or wrong. Maybe it's about time she discusses this openly with her father.
I really really hope there is no love triangle between Adi-Nee-Vishu. 🤣 That will make it so awkward for poor Adi. 😈 Muahaha. Ahem. =] Uh oh...you kinda guessed it. 😆 Well, actually it won't be a love triangle per se, but things will get complicated. You'll see what I mean.
Aww, Aishuu meets Yusi! <3 i love how they hit it off. So cute. :p Yay, you liked it!
Questions-
1]. Yes, i am able to keep track. If i forget, ill look back at the index. 😆
2]. I love them. Vishuuuuu. ☺️☺️☺️
3]. I liked that part, it was really cute. I love "Love at first sight" now, let's see Aishu's side. 😆
4]. Comment above shows that no? :p I loved it. =] Truly.Thank you so much dear! Really appreciate your comments.
Cant wait for the next part. Thanks tons for the PM, this totally brought my mood up to a happy level and made my day much better. Thanks a lot Rabia Di. =]Awww, you are so sweet...will continue as soon as I get a chance. Currently, I'm a little stressed about my impending USMLE Step 1 Exam (read, "the exam that will decide Rabia's future"). 😕
-Rinki
Originally posted by: Anhdara13
okay, love the new characters! seriously, I think I may fall in love with Vishal if he stays this awesome. 😆 He's like, an older, seemingly more rugged version of Aditya, and Aditya has Neelam (soon, anyways) and so far Vishal is alone. Can I keep him until you introduce someone for him? 😉😆 Aww, I'm so glad you like everyone Radz! About Vishal...well, you can keep him for now, but things are about to get complicated soon. 😉
the whole thing was written so well. Cannot wait for the other half. Thanks so much! Will continue ASAP.
Sorry for the crap comment, just, too tired atm. next part will have a better one, pakka! No worries hun. But I am looking forward the next one. 😃
Questions:
1. I just introduced several new characters. Are you able to keep track of everyone or am I going overboard?
Absolutely not! You've introduced all characters in the best way possible and I for one can keep track of everyone! I just love Vishal, Junaid, Aisa, Yousuf, Isra.. everyone!Good to know! I'm so glad it's not confusing.
2. What do you think of the new characters?
[COLOR=blue]Like I said I already love them.. specially Yousuf is just so caring and totally makes me think of Rajeev Khandelwal! 😆 Ayesha is also this jovial, sweet girl and you just can't help but like her.. 😆 Vishal on other hand is another version of Adi.. and I love him.. Is there a new entry for him as well?? 😉Yay! I'm glad you like them all...Hmm, new entry for Vishal? Can't say yet. You'll see what I have planned for him in the next chapter.
3. I'm sure Yusuf and Aisha's part must have seem rushed, but were his feelings convincing? I thought it might be interesting to have one "love at first sight" tale...but I hope it handled it well.
I think you explained Yusuf's feelings well.. and yes, its nice to have someone falling in love at first sight.. makes everybody have a different story na.. It was sweet.. and the line he used that I would have remembered her face was sooo sweet.. and I love how he kept staring at her mesmerized! It was very vrey sweet.. To answer you question, it was VERY well handled! 😃 Even though I tend to think the concept is a little unbelievable in real life, I still enjoy "love at first sight" stories. Glad it didn't come off as too fairytale-like.
4. Overall opinions on the chapter?
Overall opinion is gonna be short coz I have to rush back to my books.. Came to read the chapter.. 😆 Anyway, it was a very sweet part.. nice to see Hina-Samira bonding and Samira seeing Rehaan shirtless was cute and her embarrassment was even more adorable! 😆 I liked Adi and Vishal's bonding as well.. Overall, another nice chapter by you Rabia Di! A job well done! Looking forward to the next chapter! 😃 Oh. were you having exams? I hope they went well. Thanks for the wonderful comments!
Originally posted by: sheel_dmgdiva
it was a wonderful part .
reserved ..wil be back with a detailed comment 😳
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