Once Upon A Bards Verse! - Page 15

woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingsuperb ur true Gem

heyya nijaL...!!

niji*hugs*

just read both the controversial and the much like u verse
and yes like always u did it again !...I simply loved !!!...
i'll repeat wat i said earlier on the chat
the way u weave loose assorted words into a chain of dissimilar and sometimes opposed thoughts to make a story so real with every emotion clear ...i love the 'u' in every line ....
and as far as my understanding of poetry goes ,its not abt heavy language or an easy flow ,i think its the thought that comes strong and the lines leave a deep impact ....for quite some time....

and yes my fav lines were

Who are you? How long is forever?


and of course the ones that had me thinking ...for long ...and then i gave up...

Touch my fingers, walk besides me, again

World. My lies;Your Truth. I; You.




lovya niji ( hope u had scoffing down the gulab jamuns... and how u got my mouth watering...yummmm!)

muah!

Am I alone or are You with me?

Odd, how it started with this...like searching for something but stumbled upon this

In the midst of the bulging mass

Yeah...speculation...center of medias attention..the time when they should be left alone..they were hoovered by the press being pinned right n left..not even spared by their ardent fans...who in minutes despised their one time favorite idol..coin with two sides...wouldn't you rather not look or touch either...every peak follows with a trough...he saw them both..

Each one daring their tolerance

if battling their issues wasn't enough...thrown upon them was equally stressful issues...but on d professional front..

One mistake, the leaves crushed below

we don't even know....with passport guarantee...if mistake was committed...and if was..then was it just one? more than that couldn't be a mistake...intentional sin...! mistake..let's believe...shook the dry leaves...the noise deafening every listener's ears..

Leave me alone, I cry in pain and fear

punishment it is....its too much for one crime...it hurts...i feel it now....let me redeem...let me be..

Who are you? How long is forever?

Are you the one...who promised to be with me...in good times and BAD...then why let this first bad thing falter our relation....didn't we promise to last for long...or was it limited to years...that we can count....

Is tomorrow a lingering US?

what's our tomorrow like...me/you or US...

Nervous, dismayed, the future hazy ahead

i am tensed...and unsure...can't recall the last i was in this state..maybe school...definitely a long time age...scared of what the future might turn out as...

Grant me this wish, I'm desperate to follow

its a wish...but i am desperate for its turn of events....isn't my wish same as yours?

Squashed below the toes, deep within your heart

ants...so tiny that hundreds suffer at every moment...but its marks...black dots...shall always shine in your heart....somewhere....there

Fluttering wings, give me a chance, I stand

i feel like a butterfly...ready to take a leap...after a broken wing recovery...its my opportunity...give this to me.....

Renounce my faults, believe your heart,

ignore...this time...listen to what the beats are silently wispering....

Touch my fingers, walk besides me, again

our hands...still fit....a hold..it such is..

World. My lies;Your Truth. I; You.

everything is here...today....my wrongs....your rights...its all between you and me...for us to decide

Ultimately, settling on something definite

hoping...the shaky knots...will fasten tighter than before...passing the worst..

Hear, See, Feel, Capture her commanding wet smile.

tears...making way against my control....its not in my control...to stop the raised lips....just not


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Hey Nij!

heyyy nijaL..!!..