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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

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Helluva people!

Name ain't important...though many of you must already know (read credit Hina n NJ's fictions)...I like writing short poems/verses/couplets on random occasions...and this thread..is my page...and includes my time...thoughts...and creation.

Stop by and read them...if you hold an interest in poems...(scroll down to the next post)

Nonetheless...I write for myself 😊

Hope you enjoy the read....

cheers,

nijaL

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Appreciate everyone for reading and replying to my little pieces of imagination. No more from me on this forum.

Ek din ki chandni

World full of reality

Dubara zaroor hogi

Somebody else will own.

Thank You. Good one, always..

Nijal

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

reserved :)

yay nij....yayyyyyyyyyy....

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oki 🤗this ones for u sam...for the prompt....she needed it....n i needed one too to itch her lazy bones into this!....she can do some wonders...reda the stuf shes pasted from before, ul know wat i mean....bits of it, draw u back over n over...n no um talking of the bits on NJ....just nijal typicals!....

🤗this ones for u nij....to have listened to me for once...nah that u alwaz do, i hardly allow alternates to that...but for actually implementing the thing....finally....all those hours i spent searching ur verses tonight, i got to read the NHN n Encounter thread all over again....the magic been missing a while nij...bring it back n on!!!...cause if someone can...its u!!!😳

lovya hun...for all here....n for the tons more u will bring on, this time, no lack of activity of losing into oblivions...nah none of that...burgeon like a weed, my blessing!😆

lovya nut....i cud write one whole book, on just why!

nj🤗(one more!)

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

waoh di🤗 all ur versions r superb one⭐️ too gud😍 my favourite one r Sangeeta di's😍😊😊, hina di's😛😛😛, & NJ's😛😛😛 also AR one😳😳 & Armaan😛 & Ridhima😉 & R😛M😉😉 omg😳😳 ur too gud😛 i m 1st time reading anything written by u😳😳 but i must say ur having a fabolus talent😊😊 and i wish to read more😳😛 plz continue it soon😛😉

"A Just Friend says..hi,..hello, ..bye, and walks away.
A Best friend always stop by your side & asks how r u doing ??

A Just Friend has never seen you cry.
A Best friend has shoulders soggy from your tears.

A Just Friend thinks the friendship is over,
when you have an argument.
A Best friend knows that it's not a friendship,
until after you've had a fight.

A Just Friend hates it when you call, after she has gone to bed.
A Best friend asks you, why you took so long to call.

A Just Friend, when visiting, acts like a guest.
A Best friend opens your refrigerator and helps herself.

A Just Friend jealous about your romantic history.
A Best friend wonders of your love story.....

A Just Friend expects you to be always there for any help.
A Best friend is always there, wherever you require any help."

"Learn frOm a candle.

which burn itself 4 lightening the others way.
Live in such a way that even u die
but always alive in the gr8 memories of others."

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww loved it sooo much missy

i adored everyyyyyyyyy bit of it

just toooo amazingly well written

do write more

thank for the pm NJ

swancy

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shriya

@shriya12

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

hey nijal..the verses these r grt..have always wanted to read something of this sort..grt work..keep it up!seems u put oin a lot of effort for this n its come out beautifully..amazing! keep writing..

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

Okayyy....i mite be late on this...but boy,i never ever knew u had the writer's streak in u....u chupi rustam...(even though this word's cheeessy and all, i will still use it hehe)....that was awesome...

First thing..yeah, thanks Sam for forcing this lazy head for getting here and making this post...dunno how u did it, cuz this ones a tough nut to crack...anyways...and nj, thanks for just even making her do this, i knw somehwhere arnd there, u were behind it too.

God knows um not a big poetic versical person...(not a word, i knw ;)...but this ws awesom nij....u really hit it off really well...i loved loved loved the one on NJ, that was SO true...and about Unleashing too...the characters, u captured the jist of it...it was just fascinating!!! Um waiting to read more.....

lov ya hon, n a special hug for just making me feel better :)...u r not such a prude, then, cuz we both might show a streak of sweetness once in a blue moon ehehe...naahhh, ur always sweet to me, but um just waiitng for the time u kick my arse heheh!!! :P...

*tyt hug*

Kiran

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ashu

@ashluvdmg

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

Hiya nij......!!

Mannnnnnn..!!a complete entertainment package....4 an hr i ws jus freaking bcz of boredum...afta dis,mann...i read the whole think atleast 20 times i guess...just luvd the first one ,krati's...

reli adorable...!!

hope v geh 2 c more of u nutters...!!

NUTTERS WID BRAINS..A RARE COMBO INDEED..!!

LUVED IT ....

CRAZY ASHU

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

*reserved =)

Will comment when im done with all!

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Awww Nij, those were brilliant!! Specially the first Armaan one!! These lines...

Our hunk was such as

sharp features, handsome body

well-built and strong.

Opposed to,

our attractive lady with

flaxen curves, sleek body

delicate and soft.

Eye them collectively

one molded soul.

Fabulous!! Wat a great start Nij. The following AR one is again outstanding!! Kudos, u r a star !! Reading those dedicated now!! Will get back!! :D Way to go!!⭐️

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