Once Upon A Bards Verse! - Page 10

@lupin_roza ...not a usual ff but smg like it yeah! :)

@Prasanthi...youre comments are so heart warming..every time i read them...i go back to read my verse to make sense to why you liked it so much! hahah! weirdo i koe..!! *eeehh*

@Sunaina .....*hugs* back...one coz that was sweet of you to grant me such praises....two coz my verses pulled me a close arm from you on your first comment for me...and lastly coz you noticed my name with a 'L' :D
thx for the comment sweets...glad you liked it so much..! i am up for writing verses but often i stumble wen i don't have a base for the verse! lol ...

@All ....check out the new one...in shade of "gray"...which bears no relation to the verse...! :D

@you-know-who...you away with your girls while i felt like versing...so heres another random..which i know isn't coming close to your favorites! but oh well...had to!

reserved :) first for once :)

*edit*

i did think ill sit and verse grey this time... but i cant get myself to it, too... erm... yawny!!... the laughy bit has subsided for the while...

a neat random, i cant deny... unusually, although it has persistently taken after its usual predecessors, in general, i like it.. more than them...

and i copied my fav lines here then deleted them, for once only, i want you to guess :D and tell me :)

the lone star, other than reminding me of that which we im certain will not see in this life, not even with my firm belief in miracles, it makes me wonder nij, and i wonder why i havent wondered before... why you take so much to the term... i mean, other than its obvious insinuation... for nijaL patel to be coining term so often... wonder whats your like for it :)

maybe its something as random as ocean's apart for a song... and still :)

oki, i re read again to see what i had not mentioned... and i stand corrected here, there are 2SETS of lines, my fav, in here, tell me both.. and other than those two, i love this one,

'... i shall love you tomorrow...' of course as usual you didnt think of this intentionally as it has come, but i cant think of many other things which as simply make an exception to such a typical cliche... what could have been an 'i love you'... or an ' i shall love you always...' with a tomorrow... became something like the black horse becoming the black stallion... you have a knack hun, and id be jealous if only i didnt know better :D

🤗 wyfy!... love you always, ... today, and tomorrow... sometimes i think, yesterday too !

~... yeh, i-did-know-who :) ... itz spidY for the while :D

Hey Nijal!!

hiya nijaL :)

i cnt find ur new verse..plz help me out 😕

hina ..thanks a lot for the help! i wanted to read tht..rly appreciate it...😊

@nj...as i said..started with it..went to the blog..and hence added the two together...yayy u for the favs..and lone star...u-know-it :P

@Pra.. :D guess karo...hai mera lone star...jo sky mein rehta aur mere dil mein bhi...lmao (*dipping face in a well*)

@Sunaina....yep the green was from the nutters thread...:D those few lines you mentioned...were not supposed to be part of the verse..but somehow they fit :D

@Hinz....thx for the post lol

@Shriya...blinking..yeah i wish i could...coz more often when i want to verse i can't...cuz i dunno what about :D


@All...verse for nj on her AoL update...😊

niji yar the latest verse was simply awesome
too good!I loved it
U R the best
muah!

lots of love
Hina