NIJ *hugs* u r one hell of a writer !!!!! i never cease to surprize at every new verse of urs they are just so blatantly YOU ... well u say most of them are random guess thats wat makes them wat they are ;)
u know wat i never knew kratz lives in chandigarh(i thot she resided in delhi) neither did i read that note of urs when i was bck deyr :(( its so irritating still cuming back to the verses man wat imagination n the one on the passion n ardour it was WOW!!! sum of the lines u write are so true n touching u know the one u wrote about childhood buddies got me grinning so bad i can so relate to it :D nij muahhzzz girl u are fantabulous !!!! i know lots of tareef haina haina ;)
well u got me thinking i wrote sumthing tooo :D
That last word, the last look
The last moment, look what all it took
Memories old and raw, hung suspended in the eyes
A sole tear felt like cold fire cutting through heated ice
We stood looking, wanting yet unwilling to let go
The word 'never' sprang to my lips,
But nothing came out as that clout was only his
My hands tried to grasp the lost warmth , my only love
That's when life intruded sneering at us without any doubt
Today we travel the same path , move towards the same end
Just with new strangers, loving, losing yet living -the unforgivable trend .
