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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: poori1993

wow just lived it through mayur scenes

Aww thanks so much Poori I'm glad you like the mayur scenes I had so much fun writing them!! Thank you ji very much!! A big hug to you!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys,
THANK YOU so much for reading and commenting!!! I really appreciate it!! I wrote this last night and I woke up this morning and was SO excited to find that people commented and liked it!! Really, you have no idea how happy you guys made me!! Ok so I will write another update in a few hours. And here's what it will be about:
Mayank and Nupur: are in the village and they have a cute village scene. Read to find out if they are starting to bond and their friendship is blossoming?
Samrat and Gunjan: Gunjan reads the letter and does she forgive Samrat?
Uday and CJ: a cute conversation between them.
Hope you guys read it and thanks again for commenting! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wow ! I've read a lot of ffs here nd I think urs looks really promisimg........plz do continue for my sake nd I will surely read nd comment weather I've time or no..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

oh wow ! I've read a lot of ffs here nd I think urs looks really promisimg........plz do continue for my sake nd I will surely read nd comment weather I've time or no..........

Thanks so much Adya!! Really appreciate you commenting and will def. continue today so please keep reading and commenting! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pallavi................its not good
but awesome yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
maaza aa gaya by god
the way mayur were planning there future was jst mindblowing
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys, here's Part 2 hope you like it:

Part 2

Recap: Samrat knows about Gunjan's dancing troubles and decides to help her by sending her a letter with Benji's help. Mayank and Nupur continue their nok jhok about the night before until Mayank realizes that he got carried away with Nupur's blabbering and decides to tell her that nothing bad actually happened. At this Nupur gets surprised and asks Mayank why he didn't tell her before.

Nupur: KYA?? Toh itni der se tum mujhe kyun pakka rahe the??

Mayank: (at a loss of words and hesitantly) Woh….woh mein…who mein batane hi wala tha lekin tum itna jo bolti ho ki kisi aur ko kuch kehne ka mauka hi kahan milta hai.

Nupur: Acha? To yeh bhi meri hi galti hai. By god Mayank ek to mein yahan pareshaan, bechari dukhiya najane kya kya soch rahi thi (shakes her head and puts her hand back and forth on her face) aur tum ho ki….aur to aur tumne bichare chunnu ka bhi khayal nahi kya (makes an about to cry face)

Mayank: Phir se chunnu? Tumhare chunnu ki to mein…(makes a fist)

Nupur: (shocked) Tum mere chunnu ko…??? By god Mayank meine tumhe kya samjha tha aur tum kya nikle?! (makes a roni type surat again)

Mayank: Apni befuzul ki bakwaas band karo aur yahaan se chalo. Mujhe phir se tumhaari wajah se bus miss karne ka koi shawk nai hai. (holds her wrist to make her get out from there)

Nupur: (frees her wrist and puts her finger on her chin and gives a sly smile)

Mayank: Ab kya hua? Tum aise muskura kyun rahi ho?

Nupur: Kyunki Mayank, mujhe pata chal chukka hai ki tum jitna gyaani banne ki koshish karte ho na utne smart tum ho nahi.

Mayank: (in his angry young man look) Kya matlab?

Nupur: Matlab yeh, ki mujhe lagta hai ki tum kuch bhul rahe ho…(Nupur is obviously enjoying this moment immensely)

Mayank: Nupur please aur time waste karna band karo aur seedhe seedhe batao tum kya keh rahi ho?

Nupur: Mein sirf itna keh rahi hun Mayank ki shaayad aaj kal tumhara dimaag kam nahi kar raha isiliye tumhe kuch yaad nahi rehta…

Mayank: (getting impatient and angry) Nupur tum…

Nupur: Mayank waise humari bus to 4 baje aane wali hai na, aur abhi to sirf subha ke 9 hi baje hain…yani humare pass pure saat ghante hain…(shouting) To tumhare 12 kyun baje hain?? Thodi der aaram se nahi bhait sakte kya?? Monkey kahin ke..

Mayank: (also shouting) Woh isliye kyunki mujhe pata hai ke 7 ghante bhi tumhare liye bahaut kum hain. Aur mujhe pata hai ki jab tak tum saath ho to koi no koi gadbad zaroor hone wali hai isiliye mein pehle se hi ahead ki planning ker ke chal rahan hoon.

Nupur: (with angry eyes) Theek hai theek hai…zyada banne ki zarurat nahi hai. (suddenly holds her head and stomach) By god Mayank, tumhari baaton se mera sar phata ja raha hai aur bhook bhi bahaut lag rahi hai.

Mayank (softens down a little) Meri baaton se nahin woh tumhari kal raat wali hurkaton se tumhara sar dukh raha hai…(then seeing Nupur's confused look says,) chodo, chalo bahar jaake gaon waalon se kuch khane ke liye puchte hain.

Nupur (forgets her anger and hurriedly agrees): Haan haan chalo.

Dia and Annie are walking in the hallway about to give the music CD to Gunjan for her dance.

Annie: Wow babes kya idea socha hai tumne Gunjan ko embarrass karne ka!

Dia: Thanks doll, Gunjan ko yeh slow song deke uski mushkil thodi aur bad jaygi. Woh kya haina, ki fast song pe to phir bhi woh bichari kuch kar paati, lekin slow dance itna modern aur western hai ki who bichari Morena ki behenji kuch nahi kar payegi.

Annie: wow you're so right Dia.

Dia: As always babes, Dia hamesha right hoti hai. Aur waise bhi slow dance ke liye to ek partner ki zarurat hoti hai, jo bichari sharmili Gunjan ke paas hai nahi. Which means? Another win for us! Right doll?

Annie: Of course Dia, you're always right!

Dia gives her evil sly smile.

Just then Samrat enters and sees them both.

Samrat: Hi Candy.

Dia: (pleased to see Samrat there) O Hi Sammy.

Samrat: Kya kar rahi ho?

Dia: Kuch nahi Sammy, woh bus Gunjan ko uski dance CD dene ja rahi thi.

Samrat: O to phir tum jao, mein tumhe baad mein milta hoon.

Dia: Ok Sammy, I'll see you later. (thinks to herself, Gunjan ke naam se Sammy ne react bhi nahin kiya, lagta hai finally Sammy ke dimaag se Gunjan ka bhoot uttar raha hai. With this she gives her sly sweet smile again)

Samrat decides to call up Benji to go ahead with his plan.

Samrat: Chal Benji, plan ko action mein dalne ka time aagaya. Woh letter to hai na tere paas?

Benji: Haan mere bhai...subha se yeh letter leke mein paaglon ki tarah ghum raha hoon. Jaldi se bata ki iss letter ka kya karoon taaki mein canteen jake kuch kha sakoon. Mujhe itni bhook lag rahi hai nahi to main yeh letter utha ke hi kha loonga.

Samrat: Agar tune aise kiya, to iske baad tu phir kabhi bhi kuch aur khaane ke layak nahi rahega. Ab sun, Dia Chashmish ko uski dance CD dene ja rahi hai. Lekin CD sunne ke liye to Chashmish ko music room hi jaan padega. To tu abhi jaa ke who letter music room ke stereo ke upper rakh ke aaja aur phir tera kaam khatam.

Benji: Matlab uske baad mein canteen ja sakta hoon?

Samrat: Of course dude.

Benji: Wow yaar, mein to abhi se yehi yeh soch ke excited ho raha hun ke mein kya order karunga!

Samrat: Pehle jo kaam diya hai woh pura kar.

Benji: Samajhle tera kaam ho gaya.

Samrat: Good.

Uday is walking down the hallway with his silly grin when he sees CJ sitting. Suddenly he sees everything pause and the Dilwale Dulhaniya tujhe dekha to yeh jaana saman tune starts playing. Uday's grin gets wider as he sees only CJ with her hair blowing even though there is no wind. Just then someone pushes past him as they are walking and he comes back to his senses and he goes up to CJ.

Uday: (nervously) O hi CJ.

CJ: (taking off her headphones) O hi dude.

Uday: Woh… woh actually CJ…mein tumse kuch poochna chahta tha.

CJ: Yeah..tell me.

Uday: Woh actually mein tumse yeh puchna chahta tha ki kya tum mujhse yeh puch sakti ho ki kya mein tumhare saath valentine's ball mein jaunga ya nahin? (Uday says this really fast and then looks up at CJ nervously for her answer)

CJ: WHAT?

Scene is back to Mayank and Nupur as they go out to meet the villagers to get something to eat.

A Gaon lady: Arey waah aap dono jag gaye. Sach mein kitni khoobsurat jodi hai. (They all still think Mayur are married)

Mayank: Uhh…haan woh actually humein nikalna tha to hum soch rahe the ki agar kuch khane ko mil jaaye…actually humein bahaut bhook lagi hai.

Lady: Arree haan haan kyun nahi ayiye bhaitiye to sahi. Mein aap dono ke liye khana parosti hoon.

Nupur (thinks of an idea to get back at Mayank for letting the villagers think they were married): Jee hum teeno keliye. Woh main, yeh aur mere chunnu ke liye bhi (she says rubbing her stomach and smiling shyly)

Lady: Arre wah! Yeh to bahaut kushi ki baat hai. Aiye na aap pehle bhait jayiye, aisi haalat mein aapko zyada der tak khade nahin rehna chahiye.

Nupur: Jee thank you ji, chaliye. (Nupur looks back at Mayank and gives him an evil smile and tosses her head and goes)

Mayank: (Gives Nupur an angry "mein tujhe dekh lunga look" and thinks to himself) By god yeh ladki to mujhe paagal kar degi. Aur phir se chunnu!! Iss chunnu ki to main! Actually galti chunnu ki nahin Nupur ki hai. Iss Nupur ki to main…!!

Back to college where Gunjan goes to the music room to listen to the CD. She goes to the stereo and finds a letter on top of it.

Gunjan: (reading the envelope) To Gunjan….mere liye letter? Kahin yeh phirse mera secret friend to nahi? Khol ke dekhti hoon. (reads the letter):

Hi Gunjan,

Agar tum yeh soch rahi ho ki kya yeh phirse tumhara secret friend hai, to tum bilkul sahi soch rahi ho. Yeh tumhara secret friend hi hai. (Gunjan smiles as she reads this). Aur actually ab main is secret friend ki mystery solve karne wala hoon taaki woh ab secret na rahe. Uska naam sunke please letter matt phenk dena. Ok chashmish? (At first Gunjan smiles, but after reading this she realizes who the not so secret anymore secret friend is and is shocked, but reads ahead) Mein jaanta hoon ke tum mujhpe bahaut gussa ho. Aur tumhe hona bhi chahiye. Meine tumse bahaut jhoot bole lekin aaj ke baad mein tumse sirf sach bolna chahta hoon aur humari friendship ko ek nayi shuruat dena chahta hoon. Actually mein tumhari speech se inspired hogaya (Gunjan can picture Samrat winking, but ignores this and continues reading). Chashmish main jaanta hoon ke beginning mein maine tumhe bahaut dukh diye aur tumhari help sirf ek bet jeetne ke liye ki thi. Lekin please mera believe karo ki jab tumne Talent Parade mein finally itna acha gaya to sabse zyada kushi mujhe hui. Aur is baar jab tum RJ speech dene se ghabra rahi thi to mujhse dekha nahi gaya aur main nahi chahta tha ke sirf tumhari low confidence ki wajah se log tumhara talent na dekh payen. Isi liye maine secret friend ka istamal kiya kyunki mein jaanta tha ki tum directly meri help nahin logi. Lekin tumhari speech sunne ke baad mujhe aihsaas hua ke mein phir wohi galti kar raha tha: tumse jhoot bol raha tha. Isliye maine yeh letter likhne ka faisla kiya kyunki main jaanta tha ke tum mujhse baat nahin karna chahogi. Aur ab mein jaanta hoon ke tum valentine's ball pe bahaut acha dance kar sakti ho, lekin agar tumhe apne aap par pura confidence nahi hai to mein phir se tumhare liye Guru Samrat ban sakta hoon kyunki mujhe tum par pura confidence hai. To kya kehti ho Chashmish? Please sab kuch bhula ke ek nayi dosti ki shuruat phir se karein?

Tumhara (hopeful) dost,

Samrat

After reading this letter Gunjan has tears in her eyes and says:

Gunjan: Yeh maine kya kar diya. Samrat ko itna galat samjha. Ho sakta hai ki usne jhoot bolke pehle galti ki ho. Lekin is baar usko maaf na karke main sabse badi galti karoongi.

With this she wipes off her tears and goes out from there.

End

Precap: Gunjan can't decide what to do and talks to Uday for support while Uday in turn finds support in his sister. Mayank and Nupur stay in the village till they have to catch their bus and Nupur shows Mayank how to have fun even in a troublesome situation and Mayank sees a new side to Nupur.

That's it guys I really hope you liked it and thanks to all of you who read and commented. I hope I won't dissapoint you guys this time. I will update again tonight by around midnight Canadian time. Thanks alot you guys are the besttt!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hey pallavi................its not good

but awesome yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
maaza aa gaya by god
the way mayur were planning there future was jst mindblowing

Haye yaar ruchi you scared me when you said its not good!! 😆 SOO glad you liked it though, really thanks so much for reading and commenting I really appreciate it. And ya I had so much fun writing the mayur part! I hope you read and like the next part too! Thanks yaar 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchimayur

masterpiece yaar

mindblowing, awesome, outsatanding
pallavi

😃😃🤗 Im soo happy right now!! Thanks yaar ruchi you're making me so happy by saying that! thank you jiii!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute2stay

😃😃🤗 Im soo happy right now!! Thanks yaar ruchi you're making me so happy by saying that! thank you jiii!

ur always welcome yaar...................ab jaldi update kardena..with lots of mayur😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchimayur

ur always welcome yaar...................ab jaldi update kardena..with lots of mayur😃

😆 jo aagya sarkar!! jaldi karon gi lots of mayur this time I promise. 😃

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