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Shahida

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

kwl ff nice intro 2 plz cont soon

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Pallavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowow tht was cool part

THANK YOU!!! 🤗

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Pallavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Inshira
kwl ff nice intro 2 plz cont soon

thanks alot inshira!! will continue tonight. 🤗

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Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

oh my gosh, its awesome pallavi. welcome to the forum and please update soon. loveddddd it.

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Pallavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Senny
oh my gosh, its awesome pallavi. welcome to the forum and please update soon. loveddddd it.

Hi Senny thanks so much yaar!! And ya I will update in like 5 hours just have to finish my work first lol. Really appreciate you commenting!! 🤗

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Kiran1018

@Kiran1018

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

hey pallavi

first of all, thanks a lot for updating so soon....this is really a treat for us......so thank you!

secondly, wwwwwwwwwwooooooowwwwwwwwwwww......that was soooooooooo cuteeeeeeeee....i absolutely loved the mayur scenes....it was so adorable the way both kept bringing chinu into the picture even after nupur finds out the truth.......and what i thaught was so swwwwweeeeetttttttttt was when mayank at the end was like, "is chinu ki to mein" and then changes saying, "actually galti chinu ki nahin, nupur ki hai" and then angrily says, "is nupur ki to mein..."....i couldnt stop laughing at that....too cute for words yaar....you have such a great imagination....tooo good...i think that was my favorite dialouge out of the whole part.....i m still smiling just thinking about it.

hmmm...its so like dia to do something like that to gunjan...every chance she gets she uses to embarrass poor gunjan......she needs to find a new hobby....i must say, you portrayed her just like the show...once again, i can imagine her thinking this way for gunjan.

the letter for gunjan was just too good.....sammy would say all those things to gunjan in the show.....thats what i just love about your fan fic...all the dialouges seem so real......and i loved the way he revealed himself to gunjan in the lette by calling her chasmish.....that was a great touch.

ok....i think you have to read other people's comments too....so i should shut up now.....i have a tendency of decribing and pointing out the things i really like about each part....lols.

the one thing i didnt like at all about your fan fic is............................its tooooooooooo short yaar.......make them longer pleaseeee....i really love reading this.....you know i saw the second part posted this afternoon but i didnt read it b/c wanted to save it so i can enjoy reading in peace and quiet.....lols...i know i m a dork.

plz update soon....and DONT stop writing!

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Pallavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sonia054u
hey pallavi

first of all, thanks a lot for updating so soon....this is really a treat for us......so thank you!

secondly, wwwwwwwwwwooooooowwwwwwwwwwww......that was soooooooooo cuteeeeeeeee....i absolutely loved the mayur scenes....it was so adorable the way both kept bringing chinu into the picture even after nupur finds out the truth.......and what i thaught was so swwwwweeeeetttttttttt was when mayank at the end was like, "is chinu ki to mein" and then changes saying, "actually galti chinu ki nahin, nupur ki hai" and then angrily says, "is nupur ki to mein..."....i couldnt stop laughing at that....too cute for words yaar....you have such a great imagination....tooo good...i think that was my favorite dialouge out of the whole part.....i m still smiling just thinking about it.

hmmm...its so like dia to do something like that to gunjan...every chance she gets she uses to embarrass poor gunjan......she needs to find a new hobby....i must say, you portrayed her just like the show...once again, i can imagine her thinking this way for gunjan.

the letter for gunjan was just too good.....sammy would say all those things to gunjan in the show.....thats what i just love about your fan fic...all the dialouges seem so real......and i loved the way he revealed himself to gunjan in the lette by calling her chasmish.....that was a great touch.

ok....i think you have to read other people's comments too....so i should shut up now.....i have a tendency of decribing and pointing out the things i really like about each part....lols.

the one thing i didnt like at all about your fan fic is............................its tooooooooooo short yaar.......make them longer pleaseeee....i really love reading this.....you know i saw the second part posted this afternoon but i didnt read it b/c wanted to save it so i can enjoy reading in peace and quiet.....lols...i know i m a dork.

plz update soon....and DONT stop writing!

Sonia you know what? I wish I could see you in person right now and give you a BIG hug!! I guess this will have to do 🤗 Yaarr you are like my motivation to writing this FF now seriously!! I am so touched by your comments you have no idea!! I just happened to catch your comment right now and had to reply right away!! You are too sweet for words!! I can't resist giving you another IF hug!! 🤗 And yaar don't worry about shutting up I love that you described each point it made your comment more special!! Thank you yaar thanks SO much!! And I am actually writting a Part 3 right now...having too much fun writing this 😆. It will take me another 1/2 hour to an hour to finish it. Please keep reading and commenting it means alot!! Love you lots!!

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Pallavi.. this is simply amazing work! 🤗
I love your screenplay and dialogues.. very true to the characters. Plus its nice how you are balancing everyone - no sidelining complaints at least in this FF.. ;)
Cant wait to read more.. do continue asap. You are very, very good!!

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: debby
Pallavi.. this is simply amazing work! 🤗
I love your screenplay and dialogues.. very true to the characters. Plus its nice how you are balancing everyone - no sidelining complaints at least in this FF.. ;)
Cant wait to read more.. do continue asap. You are very, very good!!

Aww thank you thank you Debbyji!! I gotta tell you I am inspired by your FF only na. I loved the idea of keeping the FF real and continuing with the actual MJHT show so the credit goes to you yaar. You started a trend I'd say! Lol ya I try to balance everyone but it's getting really hard...noone's complained yet but aage chalke kya pata. 😆

I hope you keep reading I am writing Part 3 right now. Thank you ji very much once again. 🤗