MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55. - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago

Happy Holi to u too!!!!!!!you're update was awesomeeeeeeeeee do cont. soon!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi........
Thnkz for the update yaar...
Great i luved it...
MayUr won!..........
I totally knew they wud...sooo excited....
Gunjan parts were also gud....
Really nice questionz...it felt as if we were there....
The bif thought of Mayank was sooo cute...
Luv the dialogues...
U r really ud wid the dialogues/reactions and many scenes...
Congrtaz on that....
Continue soon...
Gud luck widthe next epi...
Bye Pallavi...
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Posted: 16 years ago
pallavai!!!!.....im out of words yaar......i loved every bit of dis update!!!...nd yay mayur won!!!!!!.......tnx alot fr d pm....plz continue soon yaar...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Pallavi di.......happy holi.......OMG I cant believe it your such a gud writer and also gud describer........I just loved the whole part each n every bit from MayUr to Uday-cj scenes nd sajan scenes were just fantasctic but what I loved the most in this part was d sajan dance........I mean u described all d dance steps so clearly tht I cud imagine it happening............U just blowed me off today..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
and yeah ! I'm so so so SORRY tht I cudnt comment on ur last part ( part 5)........exams cuming (16th) so my mom said if I ve to do well like always I must study harder than always........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey pallavi, no problems. All yor updates are worth the wait. oh my my you truly are living up to my expectations and indeed you always do much better. This update wassssssssssss awesome. Firstly the mayur praying part was so beautiful, touching and it literally brought tears to my eyes, i felt like i should come to you and give you a big hug and cry. It was so wonderful. Then the academic meet, where you tackled the questioning round so well. i am so pleasantly surprised at yuor versatlity, woman you have full command over your story and pen. you do so well, writing all kinds of scenes, whether it be cute, emotional, funny or romantic. i have become your big fan woman. keep it up!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi pallavi... once again congrats babes... it was really gud... the way u described the sajan dance sequnece was very very very gud.... and ur twist in dia character was awesome... hope dia really changes similarly in the show as well... ek request hai babes... request nahi demand he samjo jo mein tera next episode mein dekna chahati hoon... i will pm and tell u 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
Happy Holi! Thanks for the update! Wonderful narration n happy to see the transformation in Dia!
Good job!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Pallavi! 🤗
*Hails the dancing lady and wishes her a happy Holi.. puts some red and some blue on her cheeks* 😃

I just asked u wen u were going to update and what an answer - an update! Yippee. As always, I loved reading all of it.. complete with the descriptions, song and dance.

I loved how Mayank thinks abt the importance of Nupur in his life, how special she is to him..he prays too.. Awww.. God just had to listen to their prayers, coz they are so heartfelt..
And the question answers were really masaale-daar! 😆 I can just abt imagine the expressions on the judges' faces.. 😆
And the final win - satisying, soft and just right - I hope they win the meet in the show too, considering the amount of trouble they have gone into for participating..

Coming back to earth after swooning over Mayank, or rather trying to find some footing, I shud tell u I loved the Uday CJ scene. Can expect fireworks there sumtime!
Sajan part was quintessential cute stuff. Nice song choice.. dreamy and romantic.. Also loved Nupur's note to Gunjan. These 2 share such a sweet sisterly bond.. makes me wish I had a sister! U brought that out really well..

So update comes on Friday? Great! Coz thts wen I will be updating too.. 😊 Keep rocking.. love you..!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy pallavi.......beautifully written!!!!!

i loveed da way u present academic meet......great job👏👏👏

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