MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55. - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

Hey Pallavi di.......happy holi.......OMG I cant believe it your such a gud writer and also gud describer........I just loved the whole part each n every bit from MayUr to Uday-cj scenes nd sajan scenes were just fantasctic but what I loved the most in this part was d sajan dance........I mean u described all d dance steps so clearly tht I cud imagine it happening............U just blowed me off today..........

Hey Adya!! Thank you so much sweetie!!! Really so touched by your comments!! You know, this update was the hardest I've written so far as there was so much I had to put in it but I had fun writing it and now I'm sooo happy that you liked it!!! And ya the sajan dance at first I was like how am I going to write out a dance scene!! But bakhuda is like one of my fav songs so I listened to it and then just pictured sajan dancing and I just choreographed dance steps in my head and then wrote them out like that...so realy really thrilled that you liked it yaar!! And that was my goal to have people picture the dance so yay I succeeded!!! Really, yaar a BIG thankyou to you!!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

and yeah ! I'm so so so SORRY tht I cudnt comment on ur last part ( part 5)........exams cuming (16th) so my mom said if I ve to do well like always I must study harder than always........

Awww Adya it's totally fine yaar!! I was waiting for your comment though I figured you were just busy. Best of luck for your exams!! I'm sure all your hard work will pay off and you will ace them all!! Good luck dearie!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey pallavi, no problems. All yor updates are worth the wait. oh my my you truly are living up to my expectations and indeed you always do much better. This update wassssssssssss awesome. Firstly the mayur praying part was so beautiful, touching and it literally brought tears to my eyes, i felt like i should come to you and give you a big hug and cry. It was so wonderful. Then the academic meet, where you tackled the questioning round so well. i am so pleasantly surprised at yuor versatlity, woman you have full command over your story and pen. you do so well, writing all kinds of scenes, whether it be cute, emotional, funny or romantic. i have become your big fan woman. keep it up!

Senny you know what? You are a darling!! You are such a sweet person!! I've read your comment 10 times already and each time it makes me smile!! So glad I'm living up to your expectations!! And sorry I made you cry!! But I'm sooo flattered by your comments I can't tell you!! Aww and here I will give you a big hug!!! Thank you so much for making my day with your comment Senny! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sajanFan

hi pallavi... once again congrats babes... it was really gud... the way u described the sajan dance sequnece was very very very gud.... and ur twist in dia character was awesome... hope dia really changes similarly in the show as well... ek request hai babes... request nahi demand he samjo jo mein tera next episode mein dekna chahati hoon... i will pm and tell u 😛

Hey Pri thanks SO much!!! Ya I really don't like Dia in the show so I thought in my FF I can atleast make her a decent person na. And I feel like even in the show her character is not a bad person she's good andar se to I just wanted to show that. So glad you liked the dance!! O and of course dearie I would love to read your suggestion...or demand I should say!! Should I be scared yaar? Kahin agar maine teri demand puri nahin ki to I can just see you coming over to my house with a huge belan!! 😆😆😆 J/k yaar I'd be more than happy to hear your ideas. Ya please pm me can't wait to read it!! Love you!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shrishti gupta

Happy Holi! Thanks for the update! Wonderful narration n happy to see the transformation in Dia!

Good job!

Thanks so much Shrishti!!! Ya I am really fed up of Dia's character in the show so in my FF to I can make myself happy na? 😆😆 So glad I made you happy saath saath as well!!! Thanks a tonn dearie!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: debby

Pallavi! 🤗
*Hails the dancing lady and wishes her a happy Holi.. puts some red and some blue on her cheeks* 😃

I just asked u wen u were going to update and what an answer - an update! Yippee. As always, I loved reading all of it.. complete with the descriptions, song and dance.

I loved how Mayank thinks abt the importance of Nupur in his life, how special she is to him..he prays too.. Awww.. God just had to listen to their prayers, coz they are so heartfelt..
And the question answers were really masaale-daar! 😆 I can just abt imagine the expressions on the judges' faces.. 😆
And the final win - satisying, soft and just right - I hope they win the meet in the show too, considering the amount of trouble they have gone into for participating..

Coming back to earth after swooning over Mayank, or rather trying to find some footing, I shud tell u I loved the Uday CJ scene. Can expect fireworks there sumtime!
Sajan part was quintessential cute stuff. Nice song choice.. dreamy and romantic.. Also loved Nupur's note to Gunjan. These 2 share such a sweet sisterly bond.. makes me wish I had a sister! U brought that out really well..

So update comes on Friday? Great! Coz thts wen I will be updating too.. 😊 Keep rocking.. love you..!!

Debbyyy meri jaan!!! 🤗
Hehehe thanks yaar a very happy holi to you too!! I know holi is over in India but it's not yet over here so I will still wish you 😊 Thanks for playing holi with me!! I miss holi in India soo much!! I haven't played holi for sooo long!! So yay you made me happy!! 😃
I'm SO glad you liked the update!! Compliments coming from an awesome writer such as yourself really mean alot to me!! Ya I truly believe in the magic of prayers so I had to make them win na? 😳 Ya they better win in the show after it took them what like a month just to get to the competition!! That is if they're ever going to reach there!! 😆 Really?? You thought the questions were "masaale daar"??? Yay!! now I feel like I've succeeded!! Those are magic words Debby!! Music to my ears!! Haha ya I was laughing myself thinking about the judges' faces so really glad it made you smile too!! But Ive never taken media studies or anything so I was like how do I make questions on this but you know na how good I am at making up bakwas so that's what I did and so glad it turned out to be "masaale daar"!!! 😃
Thanks for liking the Uday-CJ scene I love them in the show too I hope they become a couple they're soo cutiee cute na? Aww glad you liked the sister part!! Debby dear I thought I was your sister!! You break my heart yaar 😆😆 Hehe j/k...Ya update on Friday same as you..except your friday is actually my thursday night so it's a little sooner for me which I love!! And my friday will be either your friday night or saturday morning. I can't wait for your update I'm getting excited already!!
Love you too behena! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sherizzz

heyyy pallavi.......beautifully written!!!!!

i loveed da way u present academic meet......great job👏👏👏

Thanks SO much Sherizz!!!! So glad you liked the ac. meet!! Love you yaar!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah tendulkar

Hey pallavi..!!

First of all happy holi yaar..!!!
and now...
finally u updated...!!!!
awww....it was such a sweet part...!!!!👏👏
d mayur scenes totally rocked..!!!!! 👏👏
n i luvd d way u described d sajan dance...!!!😳
n dia turning gud..!!! OMG..!! sweetness ka kuch zyada h overdose ho raha hai..!!!😆😆
so...as i promised dear..!! here's ur sweet strawberry ice-cream..for dat xtra sweet part...!!!😉
Keep writing..!!!
xxx
sanah..!!

hey sanah!!! Ek minute haan...just finishing up my yummy strawberry ice cream!! Haan chal...to kya kehna tha mujhe?? O ya THANK YOU dearest!!! 😃 For the sweet ice cream and the equally sweet comment!! And lol ya yaar maine update karne se pehle bhi khoob sari ice cream khayi thi na isiliye part bhi bahaut sweet tha!! 😆😆 I couldn't stand Dia's evil plans anymore yaar!! Sorry agar if it was tooo sweet yaar but I don't like Ekta style negative characters...wanted it to be realistic...afterall Dia's good at heart na? 😉 Anyway happy holi to you to dear and thank you again for liking it!! Love you!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

wowwwww

nyc part....
& happpy holi to u too.........

Awww thanks Anjalika!! You are so sweet dearie!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

Lol First of all Happy Holi i wish i was in india so much fin when holi comes..anyways i dont see chapal anywhere....intazar ka phal hamesha meeta hota hai and ur update was sweater thyan expected :) nice update cant wait to read more.....update soon :) and HAPPY HOLI TO EVERYONE.....hope ur life is filled with diffrent color forvere :)

Hey Vidisha thanks for the holi wishes yaar even I wish I was in India and could play holi!! Chal hum IF holi khelte hain *puts colour on your cheek* 😆😆 Atleast we can do that na? Thanks for no chappal!! Im really scared of those 😆😆 Thanks SO much sweetie made my day with your comment!! 🤗

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