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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

WOW WHAT A UPDT YAAR!!!

SORRY 4 MY LATE COMMENT!
REALLY ENJOY IT!!!
CONTSOON WHEN AS POSSIBLE!!!
SEE U SOON!!

Thanks so much Monu!!! And no need to apologize!! Will continue very soon!! Thanks a million yaar!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh pallavi, i am so sorry for replying so late honey. But i don't have words to express my feelings, i think you have done an awesome job. this is your best update. i instantly fell in love with it. i just can't get over it, its so beautifully and simply written. it is highly likely to touch everyone or anyone who reads it. please do update soon. will wait eagerly for it. God bless.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

Oh pallavi, i am so sorry for replying so late honey. But i don't have words to express my feelings, i think you have done an awesome job. this is your best update. i instantly fell in love with it. i just can't get over it, its so beautifully and simply written. it is highly likely to touch everyone or anyone who reads it. please do update soon. will wait eagerly for it. God bless.

Aww Senny it's ok yaar. No need to apologize esp not after such a great comment!! Thank you SO much you made me soo happy!!! Awww you are so sweet Senny!! I am so very touched!! Thanks a million I will continue today only. Thankss!!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh cool, great pallavi. you deserved it honey.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey pallavi.
its amazing i just read all five parts and its greatt!!!!.
keep it up.
hope ur happy by ur brand new read:)
luv Iqra
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute2stay

Hey Sanah!!! was waiting for your comment yaar and it made me soo happy!!! I know yaar ki tum log complain nahin karte but still I always get worried ki kuch zyada hi lamba to nahin hogaya!! 😳 Arreyy yaar uss belan ko na wahin pe waapis rakh de...unless tu nupur ki tarah paranthe sharanthe bana rahi hai. Aur agar bana rahi hai to please send me some ok? 😆😆 Anyways, sorry for my random rambling I will update in a few hours yaar! Love you!! 🤗

are yaar pallavi..!!! parathe kya...nups ki tarah tujhe strawberry ice-cream bhi khilaungi meri jaan....!!! tu update toh kar..!!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blushpink13

hey pallavi.

its amazing i just read all five parts and its greatt!!!!.
keep it up.
hope ur happy by ur brand new read:)
luv Iqra

Hi Iqra!!! Thank you SO much hun!!! And ya I'm sooo happy to have a new reader yaar!!! Thanks for the really sweet comments!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah tendulkar

are yaar pallavi..!!! parathe kya...nups ki tarah tujhe strawberry ice-cream bhi khilaungi meri jaan....!!! tu update toh kar..!!!😆😆😆
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sanah..!!

Hey Sanah,
Hayee main mar jawaan...ice cream woh bhi strawberry wali!! Meri favourite!! thanks yaar!! Chal teri baat to manni hi padegi kar rahin hoon update...in like 5 min...aur bahaut lamba hai iss bar!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 6:

Recap: Mayank and Nupur reach their academic meet and have to stay in one room. Samrat teaches Gunjan to dance where Dia catches them and is shocked. Uday asks Benji for help regarding CJ and Benji tells Uday to surprise CJ. Nupur prays that their team wins the academic meet for the sake of Mayank and Mayank overhears her prayers. Gunjan also prays for success at the valentine's ball mainly so that she doesn't disappoint Samrat.

Back to the praying scene where Nupur is praying.

Nupur: Aye Bajrang Bali, please meri aur Mayank ki team ko jita dena. Waise main to haarna phir bhi sehlungi. Par woh kya haina woh akdoo Mayank harna bilkul bardash nahin kar payga. Woh bilkul toot jayga. Aur waise bhi usne bahaut mehnat ki hai iss competition ke liye to please bhagwan haan? Humein pakka jita dena? Theekhai? Thank you thank you very much.

Mayank overhears all of this and is genuinely touched. A faint smile comes on his lips as he watches Nupur pray. He leans against the room wall and sighs as he watches Nupur sitting still with her hands clasped and eyes tightly shut. Mayank is overwhelmed by her innocence and her faith in him. He wonders how he could ever have doubted Nupur's character. She was so pure, so fresh and full of simplicity that left Mayank in utmost awe of her. Looking at her, Mayank knew that Nupur had come like a ray of shining light into his life. He tried to imagine the time of his life before he had met Nupur and he sincerely could not recall any distinct sweet memories that were not related to Nupur. Well except those with his mother of course. Mayank looked back at the night of New Year's Eve when his mom had asked him to list three things in his life that weren't connected with Nupur. He smiled as he remembered what a hard time he had had with that. Was it true? He thought. All the things his mother ever told him were coming back to Mayank. Yes, it was true, he thought. He needed Nupur in his life; it was hard to imagine his life without this girl always filling his day with useless chatter, her girly giggles and her usual bubbly self. On this day after looking at Nupur, Mayank had to admit that he thought about Nupur more than he himself was aware of. She brightened his day and made him realize that there was more to him than even he had imagined. She allowed him to rediscover himself, find more to life than he had previously experienced and well, she completed him. Yes, Mayank thought he needed her as a special friend in his life. Anything more, Mayank chose to ignore. As Mayank continued to watch Nupur, he was thankful. Thankful that she had stepped into his life, thankful that she had accepted him for who he was and most of all he was thankful to Devdar Sir for choosing her as his partner.

As Mayank noticed Nupur getting up, he quickly stepped out of his thoughts and then folded his hands, closed his eyes and looked up at the ceiling.

Mayank: Dear God…Uh…waise toh main prayers pe believe nahin karta. Main toh sirf apni mehnat pe believe karta hoon. Par ma kehtin hain ke agar do log ek saat ek time pe kuch maange toh woh zaroor sach ho jaata hai.. Isiliye main aaj apse pray karta hoon ke please Nupur ki prayers answer kar dena. Mere liye nahin to uske liye. Main jaanta hoon woh admit nahin karegi par usse bhi iss academic meet ko jeetke bahaut kushi hogi. To please aap uski baat sunlijiyega. Thank you God.

With this Mayank opens his eyes and sees Nupur standing in front of him.

Nupur: Mayank….tum yeh kya kar rahe ho?? (she asks moving her dupatta end in circles)

Mayank: Uh…kuch nahi. Nupur sahiba agar aap ready hain to ab hum chalen warna late ho jaynge.

Nupur: Offo Mayank yeh kya tum humesha 'late hojaynge, late hojaynge' raag japte rehte ho. Tumhare liye ek sujhna: Yeh besura raag hatao aur raam naam japto.

Mayank: Wahi to kar raha tha…

Nupur: Kya?

Mayank: Uh…kuch nahi..tum apna yeh lecture chalte chalte nahi sunasakti kya? Abhi chalen?

Nupur: Haan to chalo na…main kab keh rahin hoon na.

Mayank: Bahaut bahaut dhanyawaad.

As they start to walk Mayank looks up at the ceiling again and shakes his head.

Meanwhile Gunjan also wakes up and is praying to God much like Nupur:

Gunjan: Please bhagwan ji. Aaj valentines ball mein sab kuch teekh kar dena. Samrat ne meri itni madat ki hai. Please uski mehnat bekar matt jane dena. Please mera confidence matt todna taki main sabki umeedon ko niraash na karun. Mujhe hosla do bhagwan ke main sabki expectations puri kar sakoon….aur khaas karke Samrat ki.

After she is done, Gunjan takes a deep breath and sits down on her bed while she reflects on what she has just said.

Gunjan: Lekin…woh maine bhagwan se Samrat ki baat kyun ki? Agar main acha dance nahin kar payee to Samrat ko zaroor bura lagega. Par mujhe iski chinta kyun ho rahi hai? Nahin Gunjan, tuh aisehi soch rahi hai. Samrat sirf tera dost hai jisne teri itni madad ki hai. Bas isiliye tu usse nirash nahin karna chahti. (Gunjan smiles thinking of Samrat and all he's done for her) Dost nahin…woh mera bahaut acha dost hai.

With this she gets up to get ready.

Back to the academic meet scene. It's Mayank and Nupur's turn to present their project in front of the other competitors and judges. The judges state the rules to Mayank and Nupur:

Judge: Ok to ab main present karta hoon Excel College ki team: Mr. Mayank Sharma aur Ms. Nupur Bhushan. (people clap) Ok so Mayank and Nupur toh yahan pe jitney bhi competitors aur judges baithe hain woh tum dono se tumhare project ke baare mein sawal poochenge aur tumhe unke jawab dene honge. Yeh competition jeetne ke liye tum dono ko na sirf sahi aur informative jawab dene honge par hum judges tumhara confidence aur teamwork dekhenge. Aur uss hisaab se tumhe marks diye jaynge. So, you two, are you ready?

Mayank looks over at Nupur who is has her eyes closed and her hands folded and she is chanting the "Hanuman Chalisa". Mayank looks at her cutely and smiles slightly. He taps her on the shoulder and asks:

Mayank: Nupurr…tum yeh kya kar rahi ho?

Nupur: (opens one eye and then the other and looks up at Mayank) Offo Mayank Hunuman Chalisa jap rahin hun aur kya aur ab to main bhool bhi gayi main kahan thi. By god!

Mayank: Uh…woh sab to theek hai Nupur…par maine socha main tumhe inform kardun ki competition shuru ho chukka hai aur sab humain dekh rahen hain.

Nupur: Kya? Oh…

Judge: Toh kya aap dono ready hain?

Mayank looks at Nupur who gives him a slight smile.

Mayank: Haan sir…hum bilkul ready hain.

Judge: Very good. Ok then let's start.

Before they start Mayank again looks over at Nupur and sees her fiddling with her dupatta. He senses she is nervous so he holds her by the wrist and says:

Mayank: Nupur…don't worry yeh competition hum hi jeetenge.

Nupur: (looks up at Mayank) Sach? Tumhe kaise pata?

Mayank: (smiles) Kyunki main jaanta hun ki hum dono ki team bahaut kamal ki hai. Aur jab tak tum mere saath ho, kissi aur ko kuch bolne ka mauka hi kahan milne wala hai?

Nupur: (smiles at Mayank and the smile soon turns into laughter)

Mayank also starts laughing looking at her and they both share an eyelock and a grin. Meanwhile the judges notice their interaction towards each other and note this as a good teamwork example.

Judge: Toh kya jawaab hai tum dono ka?

Mayank and Nupur snap out of their moment and look around confusedly.

Mayank: Jee…jawab? Lekin sawal kya tha?

Judge: Kya??

Mayank: Uhh…I mean…can you repeat the question please?

Judge: Oh…haan haan of course. To question yeh hai ki aap logon ne yehi topic kyun select kiya?

Mayank: Kyunki sir aaj tak jitni bhi media studies pe research hui hai woh sirf bade shehron ke point of view se dekhi gayi hai. Saare media channels aur organizations zyadatar bade shehron mein he hote hain aur har waqt media mein sirf bade aur urban logon ke hi point of views diye jaate hain. Toh humne socha ki small town aur village logon ke bhi point of views consider karne chahiyen…isiliye humnein yeh topic choose kiya.

The judges nod and look at Nupur for her intake.

Nupur: Haan sir…humesha se duniyan ka to dastoor hi yehi hai. Sab humesha bade logon ki hukumat karte hain, unhe makhan lagatein hain aur unke hi pair dhote hain. Koi gaon walon aur chote sheron walon ko nahin poochta. Jab ki inh chote shehron wale logon ke pass kehne ko bahaut kuch hota hai lekin koi inki poochta nahin hai. Arey sirf isiliye na kyunki inke pass woh resources, woh paisa, woh imaratein aur woh mehnga samaan nahin hai?? Lekin to kya hua! Yeh chote shehron wale logon ke pass bahaut bada dil to hota hai. Aur to aur jabki bade shehar ke log apni busy duniya aur western culture mein ghus jaate hain, tab yehi humare chotte shehron ke log humare bharat ko define kartein hain. Arrey asli bharat ki pehchaan to chote shehron se hi to hoti hai. Aur yehi logon ke point of view humare bharat ko taraki de saktein hain. Isiliye hum sabko apne dil thode bade karke inhe bhi represent hone ka mauka dena chahiye. To auo hum sab milke aisa hi karke humare pyare bharat ki shaan badayen.

Nupur says all this in one breath and as dramatically as possible. When she's done, Mayank gives Nupur a strange look. He raises one eyebrow at her. The judges also look around at one another as they have never heard such a dramatic speech in an academic competition before. Not knowing what else to do, everyone starts clapping.

Mayank: (whispers to Nupur while still giving her the questioning look) Bharat ki shaan?

Nupur: (gives Mayank a spirited "I'm a true bhartiya naari" look) Aur nahin to kya (and holds her head high)

Mayank shakes his head and just hopes that the judges are pleased while Nupur seems really pleased with herself.

Judge: Ab…haan toh agla sawal yeh hai ki toh agar aap dono ne chote shehron wale logon ke point of views bhi consider kiye, toh usse apne kya find kiya?

Mayank: Sir, humne apni research se yeh find kiya hai ki chote aur bade shehron ke point of views kafi differ karten hain. Aur humne yeh bhi pata lagaya hai Sir ke India main chote shehron wale logon ki population bade sheher walon se zyada hai isiliye agar media ke through humein pure India ko represent karna hai to dono bade aur chote shehron ko consider karna chahiye. Aur difference yeh hai ki bade sheher wale logon ke paas western influence zyada hai kyunki unke paas woh resources hain to isiliye unke west se influence hone ka likelihood zyaada hai jabki chotte shehar wale log aisa nahin kar paate. Isiliye dono ke point of views consider karna zaroori hai naaki sirf ek ke.

Judges seem really impressed and nod in agreement to each other. This time they don't look at Nupur for fear she will start a ''deshbakhti' speech again. But Nupur as per usual has something to say so she says it:

Nupur: Haan sir aur pata hai kya? Asli masla to yeh hai ki bade shehar wale log west se influence hain lekin chote shehar wale na sirf aur sirf hindi picturein aur serials hi dekhte hain by god! Pata hai kya? Aaj kal to chote shehar ke log jo TV pe dikhta hai bas wohi karte hain…

Here Mayank senses that Nupur is going to go on and on off topic so he nudges her with his elbow to be quiet but Nupur ignores him and carries on.

Nupur: …Jaise ki apne Sharukh ko hi dekh lijiye. Woh dekha na ki usne R-N-B-D-J mein kaisa huliya banaya tha?

Everyone: R-N-B-D-J???

Nupur: Haan….by god aap log bhi na!! Are apni Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi aur kya!!! Haan to main kya keh rahi thi…haan pata hai usko dekhne ke baad na? Humare saare Morena ke mardon ne na apni apni moochen bana lin thi by god!! Aisa mere bauji ne bataya mujhe!! Mujhe to by god sunke itni hassi ayi na ki poocho matt!! Aur saari aurtein…woh to sab apne mardon ko sharukh hi samajh ne lagin!! (laughs) By god haina maze ki baat? Ab batayiye aapke bade shehron mein aisa hota hai kya bhala kabhi?

Judges: (all look at each other and shrug) Nahin to…

Nupur: Wahi to main keh rahin hoon. Ke…

Mayank: Haan haan…ab…humara agla question.

Nupur gives Mayank a I wasn't done yet look but Mayank ignores her.

So the question answers silsila continues on in this way with Mayank giving sensible answers while Nupur chatters on non-stop. Soon Mayank and Nupur finish their presentation and judges announce the results:

Judges: Haan to bahaut sochne ke baad hum judges ne winner decide kiya hai. Aur iss saal ki winning team hai…

Nupur holds Mayank's hand tightly in her hands and closes her eyes while Mayank gets chills up his spine and he gives her an intense look.

Judges: Mr. Mayank aur Ms. Nupur ki jodi!!! Congratulations guys!!

Nupur releases Mayank's hand and jumps with joy while Mayank too gets really excited and has a big grin on his face. Soon they both burst into laughter. While laughing Nupur puts her hand up for a high-five while Mayank puts his hand out for a hand shake. Laughing at this, they both switch and then Nupur does the handshake action while Mayank does the high-five action. Again they both start laughin and then Nupur says:

Nupur: Ek minute Mayank…kyun na hum dono kam karlein. Yelo pehle hand shake (they both hand shake) Aur ab de taali!! (They high-five!)

They both look at each other and smile. Then the judges say:

Judges: Humne apne pure competition experience mein aisi team nahin dekhi hai. Ap dono waqai ek achi team banate hain. Ap ke paas research evidence bhi tha, confidence bhi, aur (looking at Nupur) achi kahaniyan bhi. Research to sab karte hain lekin aapne apne personal examples aur achi achi kahaniyan sunake apni presentation ko ek personal touch diya jo baaki sabse hatke tha. It was a good balance of sensibility and humour. Aur haan…by god (he winks at Nupur) aaj ke pehle main iss competition mein itna kabhi nahin hassa!! So congratulations you both aap apni trophy yahan aake collect kar saktein hain.

Mayank and Nupur both look at each other and smile as they go get their trophy.

Scene back to Gunjan's room where she is getting ready for the Valentine's ball and she can't figure out what to wear.

Gunjan: Kya pehnun…mujhe to kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha hai…Agar di yahan hotin to woh zaroor mere liye ek achi dress select kar detin. Unke bina to mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha. Aisa karti hoon, di ki cupboard mein dekhti hoon…unki dress choice mujhse zyaada achi hai.

With this Gunjan goes to Nupur's closet and sees a big package that says Gunjan on it.

Gunjan: Mere liye? Khol ke dekhti hoon kya hai?

Gunjan opens it and finds a very pretty pink and green chudidaar suit with a note. She reads the note and it say:

Meri pyaari behena. Mujhe pata hai ki aaj tera Valentine's ball hai aur tujhe kuch bhi pehenein ke liye nahin sujh raha hoga. Isiliye main jaanti thi tu meri cupboard mein zarur check karege to maine pehle se hi tere liye yeh dress khareed liya tha. Tujh par kitna sundar lagega by god!! Main to yahan iss monkey mayank ke saat stuck rahungi par tu party zaroor enjoy karna haan? Aur haan zyada der Samrat se naraaz mat rehna. Woh itna bura bhi nahin hai. Chal apna khayal rakhna aur jab main waapis aun to yeh dress mujhe pehen kar zarur dikhana! Mujhe dekhna hai ke tujhpe kaisa lagega!! Chal tu ready hoja haan? Apna khayal rakhna!!

Teri pyaari Di.

After reading this note Gunjan smiles and has slight tears in her eyes.

Gunjan: Thank you Di. Yeh bahaut sundar hai! Kash aap bhi aaj yahan hotin…main aapko kitna miss kar rahin hoon. Please jaldi ghar waapis aajayo.

With this Gunjan gets ready for the ball.

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Scene shifts to Valentine's Ball Night!! Uday and Gunjan reach the party together.

Uday: Arrey Gunjan tum chalo main abhi aata hoon.

Gunjan: Arey par Uday bhayiya aap kyun nahin chal rahe?

Uday: Don't worry sis…main na bas kissi ka wait kar rahan hoon (blushes slightly and looks down)

Gunjan: (smiles) Mujhe pata hai…CJ ki na?

Uday: (looks up amazed) Wow Gunjan!! Tum kaise pata?

Gunjan: Bas aise hi…

Uday: Mujhe pata hai? Tum mind read kar sakti ho haina? Wow Gunjan abhi batao na mere mind mein kya chal raha hai.

Gunjan: Nahi nahi Uday bhayiya aisi koi baat nahin hai…

Uday: Gunjan please batao na…

Gunjan: Uh…theekhai….apke dimaage mein iss waqt…kuchnai hai??

Uday: (scratches his head for a while then his light bulb goes on) Arrey wah Gunjan!! Kya baat hai. Mere dimaag mein exactly yehi hai!! (gives her a big grin)

Gunjan: (laughs) Uday bhayiya ap bhi na…acha ap CJ ki yahan wait kijiye main andar chalti hoon.

Uday: Theekhai tum jao…waise bhi agar CJ mujhe apni sister ke saath dekhegi to acha impression nahin padega…(scratches his head stupidly again)…

Gunjan smiles as she walks away from there.

As Gunjan is walking she trips and falls over some stones but someone catches her just in time. Since her dupatta is also falling as she tripped, she lifts her dupatta and finds it on the person's face. As she lifts her dupatta off the person's face, she finds this person to be Samrat.

Gunjan: Samrat tum?

Samrat: (looks at Gunjan as if he's never seen her look so beautiful before) Aur nahin to kya chashmish tumhe bachane ke liye mere sivaye aur kaun aa sakta hai? (winks)

Gunjan: Samratt…acha ab chodo mujhe.

Samrat: Ok chashmish yeh lo…(saying this Samrat sort of releases her pretending to drop her, and Gunjan shrieks) Just kidding Chashmish. Main tumhe chod sakta hun kya?

Gunjan: Samrattt…

Samrat: Acha baba ok..tumhe meri company pasand nahi to main chala jaata hun.

Saying this Samrat releases her and starts to walk away…

Gunjan: Nahi Samrat maine aisa to nahin kaha….

Samrat: (smiles and turns around) To phir?? (he says this as he comes closer to Gunjan)

Gunjan: Uhh…kuch nahi…

Samrat: Chashmish kya tumhe pata bhi hai…ke tum kitni khoobsurat ho?

Gunjan: (looks up shocked and then seeing Samrat's intense gaze on her, looks down and feels shy)

Samrat: (comes closer to her and says) Aur jab tum aise sharmaati ho na…to aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho.

As he says this, Gunjan again looks up shocked and Samrat winks at her and says.

Samrat: Mujhe humare dance ka intezaar rahega Chashmish. (winks again and leaves)

As she watches Samrat leave, Gunjan can't believe what just happened and she feels like she is living in a dream. She had never been called pretty by anyone except her sister before and definitely not a boy. As she watches Samrat leave, Gunjan wonders why she had butterflies in her stomach and how suddenly, Samrat's short and sweet words made her smile like anything. She felt happy, really happy and she was ready to enjoy this night.

Scene shifts to outside where Uday is waiting for CJ. Just then CJ enters wearing a pretty dress with her hair open and looking very beautiful. Uday stares at her as her hair blows in the wind and she walks in slow motion with a smile on her face. The DDLJ tune starts playing in the background and Uday is in a dreamland.

CJ: Dude!!! (she taps Uday on the shoulder)

Uday: (snaps out of his dreams and finds CJ right infront of him) Haan…CJ tum!! Aur woh bhi inn kapdo mein…

CJ: Kyun koi problem hai?

Uday: Nahin…main to sirf yeh keh raha tha CJ…ki tum bahaut achi lag rahi ho…(and Uday looks down and blushes)

CJ: (smiles and rolls her eyes) I know…lekin please iske baad mujhe flatter matt karna. Waisee…jo question tumne mujhe poocha tha woh to mujhe tumhe poochna chahiye.

Uday: (scratches his head) Matlab….

CJ: Matlab yeh…ki yeh TUMNE KYA PEHENA HAI??? (shouts CJ)

So Uday is actually wearing tapori clothes. He has an untied scarf around his neck and a loose shirt over a vest and the shirt is tied in front with pants and a tapori type bracelet on his wrist.

Uday: O…yeh…ek minute…kyat ha (Uday scratches his head while he thinks of something) O haan…yeh to apun ka style hai CJ. (he runs his hand through his hair and pops his collar)

CJ: KYA??

Uday: Uh…mera matlab…

CJ: Dude, aaj Valentine's party hai aur tum iss tarah kyun dressed ho.

Uday: (speaks really fast as he says) Woh CJ mujhe laga tumhe aisa style pasand hai kyunki tum ek alag ladki ho aur tumhe kuch alag acha lagta hai aur isse alag mujhe aur kuch soojha nahin aur woh dekho bandar.

CJ: Kya? (CJ turns around to see and when she looks back she finds Uday gone. She looks around for him and finds him hiding behind a tree)

CJ: Acha to bandar yahan hai haan?

Uday: Nahin…woh to…(scratches his head)

CJ: Dude, tum mujhse chup kyun rahe ho?

Uday: CJ…tumhe mera style pasand nahi aya na…I know…it's ok..(He makes a sad face and starts to walk away)

CJ: Dude maine aissa kab kaha…haan tum thode ajeeb zaroor ho lekin itne bure nahin lag rahe tum.

Uday: Really? (makes a really excited face) Pata hai CJ maine socha iss look mein na sab mujhse dar jaynge aur koi tumhe disturb nahin karega.

CJ: Acha?

Just then a guy comes along with roses and goes towards CJ.

Random Guy: Wow girl you are so beautiful…please accept my roses and be my valentine.


CJ is about to punch his face when Uday comes in between and pops his collar and says to the guy:

Uday: Oye…ek minute haan…haan…abe oye yahan se kalti ho kya? Warna tujhe na…tujhe na…uh…

CJ: Warna tumhe aissa bhoosa padega ki tujhe teri nani yaad ajaygi samjha? Ab phut yahan se.

The guy feels scared and runs away.

Uday: Dekha CJ mera yeh style tumhare kitne kaam aya.

CJ gives him a questioning look which makes Uday look down and scratch his head. Seeing this CJ smiles and says:

CJ: Tumne kya mujhe yaheen bahar ghoomne ke liye Valentine's party mein bulaya hai? Andar chalen kya?

Uday: (gets excited) Haan of course CJ. And very excitedly he starts to walk inside when CJ stops him.

CJ: Ek minute.

Uday turns around confusedly. CJ comes up close to him while Uday feels nervous. She takes the two ends of his untied scarf and pulls him towards her. Uday gulps and feels really intimidated while CJ smiles at his reaction. Then she takes the two ends of his scarf and ties it around his neck and then backs off.

CJ: Isse tie karke tum zyaada tapori lagoge.

With this CJ winks at Uday and walks inside while Uday looks at her dreamily and can't believe what has just happened.

Scene shifts to inside Valentine's party and principal announces that it's time for the most awaited dance where his two star students: Samrat and Gunjan will now perform.

Gunjan looks at Samrat who gives her an "It's gonna be ok look". She goes to the center of the dance floor with Samrat but while she is walking there she trips a little. The crowd including Dia start laughing and Gunjan feels really nervous. Just then the "Bhakhuda" song beginning tune starts playing.

Hooooooo Hoooooo

Gunjan looks up at Samrat as the music plays who in turn looks at her.

tumhi ehsaason mein…
tumhi jazbaaton mein…
tumhi lamhaaton mein…
tumhi din raaton mein…

As these words are playing Gunjan is looking at Samrat and smiling who is smiling at her. This makes her feel relaxed.

Bakhuda… tumhi ho, (Samrat gives Gunjan her hand at this)

Har jagah, tumhi ho…(Gunjan takes his hand)

haan main dekhun jahaan jab…(Samrat spins Gunjan three times at this)

uss jagah… tumhi ho… (At this Samrat pulls Gunjan close to him and Gunjan looks up into his eyes)

ye jahaan… tumhi ho, (Samrat and Gunjan do one step to the right and pause then one to the left and pause)

wo jahaan… tumhi ho… (Samrat and Gunjan do one step forward and pause then one backwards and pause)

iss zameen se falak ke… (Samrat and Gunjan spin together two times then pause)

darmiyaan… tumhi ho… (Samrat picks up Gunjan by the waist and spins her fast then puts her down)

tum hi ho… beshubaa…. (Samrat holds both Gunjan's hands pulls her away then pulls her close again and at "beshubaa" he spins her so that comes in front of him in away that his face touches her hair and his arms are folded across the front of her waist)
tum hi ho… (Samrat and Gunjan sway right and left together to this part)

tum hi ho…. mujhmein haan (The do the pull away come close step again, and at "mujhmein haan" he lifts up Gunjan's arms so that they land on his shoulders)
tum hi ho…. (Samrat lifts up Gunjan by the waist again and spins her fast and then pauses while he puts her down)

tum hi ho… ho… (Samrat lifts her up this time vertically and spins her while Gunjan raises her arms at the ceiling)
hoooo....(Samrat slowly puts Gunjan down while she stares into his eyes and he into hers.)

And there dance finishes but they are really close to each other and still staring into each other's eyes. Then the music stops and Gunjan feels the Samrat's closeness and has just realized the intensity of their whole dance. She then feels awkward and runs away from there while Samrat is left confused. Samrat is about to run after her when Dia stops him and asks:

Dia: Hi Sammy, apni Candy ke saat dance nahin karoge kya.

Samrat: Zaroor Dia, lekin baad mein…abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai. And he runs away from there looking for Gunjan.

Meanwhile Gunjan feels bad that she left Samrat alone so she runs back to the dance floor but finds only Dia there who she overhears talking to herself:

Dia: Sammy ne mere saat na ache se baat ki. Aur na hi usne mere saat dance kiya. Aisa toh pehle kabhi nahin hua. Pata nahin kya hogaya hai Sammy ko. Hum itne ache dost the..hain…par phir bhi usne…(Dia makes a really sad face)

Gunjan sees and hears this and feels really bad for Dia so she goes to find Samrat. She finally finds him and says:

Gunjan: Samrat tum Dia ko aise chod ke kyun aye?

Samrat: (pleased to find her there) Chashmish tum…wahan se achanak?

Gunjan: Please Samrat humesha tum sabkuch bolte ho…aj mujhe bolne do. Samrat Dia tumhari bahaut purani dost hai. Tum usse mujhse bhi pehele se jaante ho. Naye dost banane se purane doston ko thodi hi bhool jaatein hain. Tum mere bahaut ache dost ho aur mera bahaut khayal rakhte ho. Lekin usse bhi zyada ache aur purane tum Dia ke dost ho isiliye tumhe usse aise chod ke nahin aana chahiye tha. Pata hai woh kitni udaas thi. Isiliye please main ab theekh hun tum uske paas jao.

Samrat: (shocked to hear Gunjan speak so much and that too about Dia) Lekin Chashmish…humara dance…

Gunjan: Samrat humara dance ho chukka hai aur hum iske baare mein baad mein baat karenge. Abhi tum fauran Dia ke paas jao. Usse tumhari zarorat hai.

Samrat: Theekhai Chashmish agar tum yahi chahti ho to theekhai main Candy se milkar aata hoon.

And then Samrat leaves and Gunjan feels better. Meanwhile Dia has heard this whole conversation and she reflects on it:

Dia: Gunjan ne…Sammy ko mere paas bheja? Lekin kyun? Agar woh chahti to usse apne paas rakh sakti thi lekin phir…shayad yeh Morena sisters itni bhi buri nahin hain. Aur waise bhi Sammy ke to itne dost hain to phir ek aur kyun nahin. Shayad Dodo sahi keh raha tha…yeh Morena cousins ki achayi hum sab pe overflow kar rahi hai. Gunjan to humesha mere saat sweet rahi hai…aur maine uske saat? Woh toh sirf Sammy ki friend hai aur kuch nahi. Aur woh itni buri bhi nahin hai…O my god I can't believe I'm saying this. Lagta hai in Morena cousins ka jaadu mujhpe bhi chal raha hai.

And then realizing something Dia says:

Dia: Aur I can't believe maine yeh kaha ki Dodo sahi keh raha tha!! As if!!

End.

I know I know guys...I see chappals everywhere. I said Sunday but now it's Wednesday. But...HAPPY HOLI GUYS!!! Yay!! I hope your day is filled with colours!! Anyway hopefully after that heartfelt wish you guys will forgive me. Actually kya hua na...ki Sunday ko I got called in for work and then I had dance practice...and then I watched filmfare. And then on Monday I had to study for an exam on Tuesday and then Tuesday I had class and then a group project and so I just wrote this. Butt it's really long guys!! Please don't hate me for it's lenght!! You know what? I think I really should take time to edit this!! It's wayyy to long na? You guys don't complain which is really sweet of you but still...But always by the time I finish I'm always so excited I just want to hurry up and post and never feel like editing. So sorry for my mistakes guys and hope you enjoy the long update!! O and no precap today cuz after writing such a long part I can't think anymore so I don't actually know what I want to write for next time. So next update is friday as per usual. Please read and comment. Tab tak ke liye bye guys. Sorry for my bakwas. Love you guys sooo much and a Happy and joyous Holi to all!! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome, loved the way you described SaJan dance..
aww, mayoo falling in love.. Loved Nupur's chappar chappar.. too funny. i could totally imagine it..
A very happy holi to you too. 🤗
Tania
Edited by Taniak - 16 years ago

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