Nikbhi FF : Hum Tum - Last Part & Epilogue Pg. 85

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Rhea

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Posted: 15 years ago

#561

Thanks everyone for the comments (:

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Sheena

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Posted: 15 years ago

#562

wait a sec--I dont get this part--

The rest of gang watched in disbelief as Nikki became ecstatic over the news. Armaan and Rahul, who were reasonable causes for Nikki's pregnancy were astonished to see this reaction of her face. They were expecting shock and confusion on her face. Not happiness.

why were Armaan and Rahul reasonable causes for Nikki's pregnancy???? the only person reasonable for her pregnancy was Abhi, right??? 😕 😕 😕

Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 15 years ago

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-Archi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: Rhea256

Well...if the beginning is written perfectly..the rest turns out good anyways 😉

and yeaa. I'm on it! 👍🏼 8 more days till our surprise 😉😃

lol... thanks Rhea. Of course the beginning is good, cause I wrote it. lol 😆
7 days left and we have a long way to go 😕

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-Archi-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

wait a sec--I dont get this part--

The rest of gang watched in disbelief as Nikki became ecstatic over the news. Armaan and Rahul, who were reasonable causes for Nikki's pregnancy were astonished to see this reaction of her face. They were expecting shock and confusion on her face. Not happiness.

why were Armaan and Rahul reasonable causes for Nikki's pregnancy???? the only person reasonable for her pregnancy was Abhi, right??? 😕 😕 😕

lol... sorry about that. I wrote the beginning and forgot to check it over. I told Rhea to change it, but she is too lazy. so this is what it is suppose to say:

The rest of the gang watched in disbelief as Nikki became ecstatic over the news. Armaan and Rahul who were coming up with reasonable causes for Nikki's pregnancy, were astonished to see this reaction on her face. They were expecting shock and confusion on her face - not happiness.

Me and rhea should seriously edit our parts before we post them. 😕 but hopefully it makes sense now.

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maryam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#565

grt part continue soon tnx for the pm

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Ditto100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#566

Hey Rhea and Archi 😃

Wow - the truth is out! Looking forward to seeing how this develops. Feeling bad for Nikki - the last part where Armaan and Rahul turn their backs - something tells me they won't put their anger aside for Nikki's happiness (well, not quickly).

When I was reading this part:

Originally posted by: Rhea256
"I never thought Nikki would do something like this," Muskaan said quietly.
"Usse kuch nahi kiya Muskaan," Rahul said defensively in a harsh tone. "Nikki ne kuch gaalth nahi kiya hai."

"Be reasonable Rahul," Ridhima said. "She is not married and she is expecting."

"We can be wrong Ridhima," Armaan said seriously.

"Dr. Keerti checked three times," Anjali said quietly.

"So?" Rahul said. "I am sure we are missing something. So we should stop judging her, until we know for sure."

I thought that there might be a fight between the guys and girls. (Kinda similar to the disagreement over abortion in one of the earlier episodes of DMG.) It was interesting to see the girls so... judgemental (?). But then as Armaan and Rahul are Nikki's best friends naturally they will be protective of Nikki and her reputation. I think you presented this well.

Glad to see the girls being supportive

They knew and understood at that moment that Nikki never did anything wrong and their worries over her reaction for the past twenty minutes were pointless.

Looking forward to more. 😊

Edited by Ditto100 - 15 years ago

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anotheranfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#567

god rhea - you updated next part so soon :)

thanks a lot for that ..

Part was amazing as usual.. now that truth is out i wonder if armaan and rahul who weer being supportive of her when they didnt know the shole truth will forgive her easily..