Maslow's hierarchy of needs #2 part 35 pg 147 - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago
Beautiful as always Sam! I still haven't gotten over the sophistication and excellent diction in your writing. I'm taken aback by it everytime I read a part.
I think the relationship between Rahul and Ridhima is my favorite of the story...I tend to appreciate true friendships even more than romances most of the time because I think good friendships have a higher probability of lasting through life. It's adorable how Rahul and Ridhima understand each other so well...and without the advice they have been providing one another, I doubt their love stories would have been at the brink of commencing as they are now.
I LOVED that sher by Faiz Ahmed Faiz that you used right before Ridhima contemplates about her feelings. Beautiful lines perfectly placed! 😃
I really think it's about time the Rahul-Muskaan relationship gets to the next level. Rahul has hinted as much as possible without just coming out and saying it...now it's Muskaan's turn to take some initiative.
Continue soon! I have one suggestion...Can you please post a little recap of the end of the previous chapter at the beginning of the current chapter? Sometimes I have to go back and find the previous chapter to remember how it ended.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: namelesssr

Only 🤗 and more 🤗, Sam.. missiles certainly not coming your way. Was going to retire for the night when I saw you'd updated ... will come back with my comments when I'm more wakeful, but before then wanted to let you know that I simply loved it as usual... need I say that everytime 😊

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Much as I love Atul's character, Rahul is giving him some competition in the likeability department. His "but there will be someone, and from what I have sensed today, not in the too distant future, who will mean the world to you and he must come before I do'if he does not, then you would be unfair to him, to your relationship and to our friendship..." couldn't have come from a person lacking maturity, magnanimity or sensibility when it comes to relationships and priorities. All too often conflicts arise when we feel slighted by our friends/siblings/offspring entering into new association because we claim "exclusive" ownership upon the person we love..., smothering him/her with our attentions... and our insecurities cause friction not only between our loved one and his/her new relations but take the relationship that we're being possessive about downhill!

To summarise... as you might've guessed... admire this avatar of Rahul. And didn't I say in an earlier response that I was looking forward to the RM relationship coming to fruition... and how it does come about.... and you certainly made the wait worthwhile, Sam.😊

Ohh... and I'll be waiting to see what Ridhhima has to say to Armaans's "love maketh a wit of a fool comment"... she has been going a tad too easy on him of late... at this rate Armaan's going to lose his touch.. and soon be eating out of her hand, not that I wouldn't want him to 😉

Miss Thou-who-shall-not-be-named, hugs! I am so glad that you liked the part. I must admit that this was written with the intention of giving Rahul and muskaan space and their story to move a little ahead but I did not realise that Rahul would walk away with the part! Poor Armaan! He's got competition from everyone! But yes, I admire the maturity of a very dear friend and I guess that's what has been reflected in Rahul's portrayal. It takes a lot of effort to sensibly manage relationships without letting go of them when new equations come into existence and so far he's doing a good job of it!

As for Armaan, I suspect much of capitulation to Ridhima is of free will as she herself acknowledges when she is thinking about him….so there is no hope pf redemption for him! As to the both of them finally finding their brains, there is a little bit of a wait!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spln

reserved sam...wohoo!!!

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sam the guys are onto a battle now, in my head that is, to grab the seat of my fav from the fic...gosh...i had a hard time figuring who i like dbetter n um still no whr in range of a conclusion..it was of course lopsided to Rahul's benefit, both in my biased head n by the part giving him so much to do in so many dimensions....but i still have to credit armaan for wat he is worth, with not long bits in the decently lengthy update, he remained significantly present nonetheless....

most significantly in ridhima introspection of the man he was...a lot of self experienced pointers there um guessing we wr treated to!...

rahul muskaan are an inevitable delight in every way they make appearnce...i duno who my fav guy is...atul armaan rahul compete very close for one getting gold...but know without a speck of doubt that RM here are my fav couple...if my bias for rahul isnt enough, muskaan a punjabi, from chandigarh....can't not do the trick for me, if it dint id dig my own sweet cozy grave!

alright...thzts most of it....anjali in a short appearence n ankit getting her outs it...um thinking...not of the trite obvious...but just the combination...the idea that u mentioned both the names anywaz in that short bit...it makes me think,,,,

waiting for the next, never seems like u update soon enuf which is more my impatience i guarantee...u ate going all well n entitled to breaks n gaps...keep giving us the best...n the throat...uurrgghhh rotten ENT issues...good luck with that...

nj😳

Hi NJ! I can see that Ankit is the only one who does not appeal to anyone! Lol! But I guess I am partly to blame since I have not really given him time and space of day! Bu yes, Rahul turned out to be quite a hero in this one!

And I absolutely plead guilty of many self pointers in this part especially in Ridhima's introspection about Armaan! And if I be really honest, much of Rahul is drawn from a very close buddy of mine…To date if I have a fight with my guy, he is the one I go complain to and he inevitably knocks sense into me and sends me back with my head screwed on right! Which is also why I understand Muskaan's trepidation about the RR relationship? I am lucky that my buddy is married to a really sensible woman, yet I make a conscious effort on to barge into their life, and, I guess distance helps!

Hope your throat is better now. I have had a miserable time with mine, so I can appreciate. I have this stupid low grade fever, the medicine that I am having makes me soporific so I have been operating at half mast!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

a wonderful update. lovely expressed the emotions and conflicts of the characters.

i just hope that soon anjali gets rid of her misconception that armaan loves her so that atul anjali track can also start.as i like atul's character very much.he is very understanding.

HI there! Welcome to the thread! I am so glad that you enjoyed the part! Hmmm.. Atul and Anji's track? Let me see! But hey hope to see you here more often!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

wow rahul now i feel u r a genious really man that was awsum two birds at a time marvelous i must say really lovely so the stupids love strucks are atleast thinking about the things, and then there rahul who moving his coin too at the same time indirectly conveyinghis feelings . can't wait to read more, little more clue to clear the for Anjali and this time Ankit too must be cleared plssssss i know i am expecting things at fast pace but what to odo can't see these confused souls.
luv Yamini
T.C

Hi Yamini! Confusions add to the spice of life! So they are here to say! Life would be so boring otherwise, would it not?

Confusion heard his voice, and wild uproar Stood ruled, stood vast infinitude confined; Till at his second bidding darkness fled, Light shone, and order from disorder sprung."

So for better sense to prevail, confusion must play its part! 😆

Yes, I agree Rahul is one hell of a smart guy! Unlike Armaan, he's got his lady love figured out pretty well so he's handling her the acordingly!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ttimpy

sammy............ur right on track..and i cant believe that rahul can be so conniving.........i mean its .......ek panth do kaaj ...........and hes managing it beautifully......on one hand he's being a good friend by trying to work out Riddhima- Armaaan issue and on the other he's subtly letting muskaan know that riddhima is just a friend and he has no romantic interest in her.............thats a brilliant strategy........

all the emotions that riddhima is feeling right now are so true and so very realistic......i mean most of the girls go thru it at one time or the other...........but i guess she or rather both armaaan and riddhima need a big whack on the head to clue them on to the right track.........wonder what that will be......................
i alsoliked the way rahul tried to clarify things with armaan..........it takes guts as well as showing how you always want the best for your friend......and if your wants the same thing then all the more reason for clearing up things..........
lkg fwd to the next update....................and i can obviously guess that the weekend was verrrry nice..........
tc

Hi there! Glad to see you back! Actually Rahul is quite conniving, isn't he? Or rather he is one smart cookie who has figured out how Muskaan's mind works and he is tackling it accordingly. He has left her with enough fodder to chew on, she is too bright not to make the connections and work things through!

I guess Rahul just cares a lot about Ridhima and he also recognizes that if he does not do that, he may just screw up things between Armaan and Ridhima and he cares too much about his friend to do that!

Yes, indeed, my weekend was fantastic! I am usually on Cloud 9 after one such weekend, but this time round the cold and cough proved to be the party pooper!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shyna...

Hey Sam....

Awesome part once again...I'm totally in love with RM here....the way Rahul made Muskaan see his point by taking Riddhima's example was a brilliant strategy....He sure is one mature guy....Just hope Muskaan see his point...
And all the confusion Riddhima is going through is like so realistic....Loved it...
Oh and Rahul apologizing to Armaan was a great thing to do....I just hope Armaan and Riddhima see light soon enough....
Waiting to read more....😊

And the reference thread is there on the very 1st page...it's a thread where everyone can recommend the stories they've read so far and found to be good...Your fic was recommended by a lot of people there so I thought of reading it....And I'm super glad I did...😃

Love
Shyna


Hi Shyna! Thanks so much honey! AM glad that you liked the part! Yup Rahul is a mature guy..not only for being able to think through what Muskaan may be going through but also in his ability to stand back and take a cold objective look at his own behaviour!

I think Ridhima's introspection is something that most people go through when you are struggling to deny what you really feel…it's just that she thinks too much and that might just be her undoing!

Shall update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: muzic_lyf

wow yaar.....u really too good in makin me speechless.......👏 although i m more of a chatter box......but ur stry n writing sense makes me go gaga on ur stry.......i m cmpltly in luv wid dis one.......

nw moving on to d stry...hmnn....d conversation betwn ammy n ridzi through msgs was really good....atleast dey startd flirting wid each other.....seems to me it wnt be too lng dat both of dem will acknowledge their true feelings for eachother......moving on to anjali.....i jus hope she dsnt create ny probs for both ammy n ridzi.......
n lastly rahul n muskaan........gurl i m in love wid both of dem.........d way rahul was tellin muski bout AR n stating wat he wanted to tell muski indirectly bout der own relationship was superb......
so lastly again i woud lyk to tel u dat u r dng an awsm job n keep up d good work.....n du continue soon......n ya tel me a few thngs bout u too......

Hi there! May I ask what your name is…that is if you want to reveal it…I am happy to address you as Music-lyf otherwise! In fact it's a lot more fun that way isn't it?

I am so glad that you enjoyed the part…and thank you for the wonderful words of appreciation! Ooops, I render you speechless! That is a gorgeous compliment so thank you very much my girl! I am much of a chatter box my self, so I can appreciate this so much more!

I think them flirting was a natural progression of what they have been thinking and feeling…though unfortunately, they do not seem to be able to verbalise their feelings!

Yup, Rahul is one hell of a smart guy! Now let's just see whether his strategy works or not! Lol!

Hmmm…what do I tell you about myself? I am a banker living in Damascus on my own while hubby lives sin another city! I love reading, traveling and basically being a bum! Actually I answered a lot of stuff about myself on the WOTW…this might tell you a little more about me!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1112148/romance-in-business-school-meet-the-new-wotw

What about you? Where are you based and how young are you?

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Robin_M

ok i officially LOVE rahul! hes amazing, what a guy! hehe
the way he immediately felt remorse for his childish outburst in front of armaan says a lot about his character! he really is a beautiful human being!
gosh and hes sooo determined to get muskaan, or at least get her to give them a chance! at least hes not wasting time or giving up! i feel he is the strongest of the lot!
his advice to ridz was bang on and finally got our little sea orchin to start thinking deeply about her feelings for armaan! his convo with armaan was too good, the boy really got a lot accomplished in one day!
and lastly his discussion with muskaan about "armaan and riddhima" was very well done! instead of putting her directly on the spot, he made his point very clear without being blunt! looking forward to seeing the affect of his words on muskaan, riddhima and armaan!
continue soon!

Hi there! I guess Rahul owes me one for this! Lol! I have all my readers rooting for him in this part! But I agree with you, he is a sweetheart, isn't he? And I agree, he is not dithering like the other four! What do they say? Fortune favorite brave! So he will probably end up with his lady love earlier than the rest!

And I am sure that Armaan, Ridhima and Muskaan will be forced to introspect – well Ridhima is already doing so – courtesy young Rahul..let's hope that it leads them all to the right conclusions!

Shall update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suvrati

hey sam the prt was very well written bt i guess the pace was too slow.......do llike something that atleast 1 of the pair comes close to confession ..........ok very tired now...will give a detailed comment so reserver

thnx fr the pm
bye tc
hugshugshugs

HI there! Hope you are feeling a lot better and rested now! Hmmm…I guess I am going to loose quite a few readers courtesy the pace but try as I might there are things that I want to write about that come in the way of a confession! I guess I draw inspiration from my own story where it took me over 6 months to say yes!

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