Maslow's hierarchy of needs #2 part 35 pg 147

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Oh my God! 😳I never thought I would get to a 2nd thread on this FF!
Thanks so much to all of you guys, whose lovely, delightful comments are the reason that the second thread is being opened....Hope that all of you will contiue to be with me on this second thread! 🤗 🤗
This is the link to the first thread of the FF
Am updating the next part, shall post it soon! 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: suvrati

hey sam,sry sry sry fr commentating so late honey.
ok first thnx a tonne fr all ur pmz u send me inspite i was so late in reading the prts.
ok all the prt frm 17-23 were beautifully written keeping in mind the feelings of ankit,atul,armaan,ridz,anjali,rahul,muskaan...like u never do any injustice to any of ur characters that is so appealing..loved every bit of it..anjalis outburst at riddima,others shocked expression,all misconceptions abt rahul riddhima,anjali armaan seen as a couple.....armaan riddhima awesome dance...i liked it when armaan says he willl keep his distance when he feelos riddhimaas discomfort fr a close dance..then armaan consoling her after the outburst,armaan thinking of anjali n back to riddhimas thought in the end....riddhima thinking of armaan n i srsly loved this one specially this prt of her mental dellima

"What was it about him that appealed to her, she wondered? That they shared a love of books and reading? That he could be incredibly sensitive and caring? That underneath that arrogant faade was a genuine guy whom she could identify with? That he could make her smile through her anger and hurt? That he evoked in her a sense of anticipation as she walked into school every morning? That he incited the imp in her? That she loved his look of resigned acceptance whenever she got the better of him? That he had to just smile at her to lift her spirits? That he had a wonderful sense of humour? That he could laugh at himself? That people looked up to him? That she enjoyed his company? That she trusted him? That she found him maddeningly attractive?"

ok so now she is coming to the point..ufcourse doesnt all this means she loves hima...this much qualities r enough fr a person to fall in love wid i guess so....hahaha

n then the phone call betwwen them made me laugh ....seeing riddhimas irritation fr nt leeting know which book he was refeerring to!!!!

so atlast armaan asked her out n she agreed too .....finally somethingz gonna cook in their {long awaited official date fr us readers}date i am looking forward to it sam...
so finally anji apologise n riddhima getting a bit like jealous..no may be more considerate towards armaan n anjalis frieendship bond...ok so now even ankit is also feeling something towards ridz....god all is so ...........ummn its going in circles...n so ridz confusion led her to rejecting armaans dinner proposal...oh poor guy?bt hey finally ridz did nt lett him down....sam the date was perfest...a date is a date s a date afterall.loved all the prts specially armaans reasoning which he gave fr his name which his mom has decided to give him fr her accurate assumptions n all.....looking srsly forward to the nxt prts.hope to see more ar stuff......

Hi there! Good to see you back...hope what ever was preoccupying you is resolved! I am so glad that you like dthe parts!

SO you like dthe date? Am glad...I guess in a sense the acceptance of the evening out as a date is an acknowldegement of their enjoymenet of each other's compant an dthe fact that they are important for each other...they just need to allow their feelings the upper hand instead of their brains!
To spend time together, to show concern for each other, theer are little hints in their conversations to indicate how they feel about each other if only they allow themselves to say so!
Ridhima is like a little kid with him, isn;t it? Yet another sign of her comfort with him..and teh fact that he calle dher that late, confident in the knowldege that she would slam the ohone down on her is a measure of his confidence in their relationship!
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Originally posted by: spln




yup 23 i am indeed...but since thats not wat i will be all my life it aint half the reason for my thing to that number...its alota things....it just happens to alwaz be the right number!

anywaz...i had a fit reading abt ur brother n u....gosh...i duno when i described ameen n me any differently...yes thats precisely us....i alwaz say that we have incredible similar tastes in music reading flicks and everything n its unbelievable how we can still never agree....if we agree to the extent of watching a harrpy potter again, n that the 3rd we have to disagree about which scenes to replay over n over...its insane...yeh hes the quiet one, n me the often taken to be boisterous elder sister...no one believes wat a brat he is n i dont dominate n he prefers to let the illusions stay, its the onlyt thing he ever gets an edge for anywaz...for the remaining most ppl never consider him over me hahahah!/....its like i talk all the wile n he says this one potential thing ....n themn um like...dude u befit ur legal field....just wondering....was there a fav sport u enjoyed with ur brother??? curiosu since so much sounds similar....ameen n i have been scrabble freaks.,..so much that the same game woyuuld continue over a series of nights of the weeks left undisturbed in a corner of the room since neither would acceot defeat....at the end mostly, it was the call of a toss... i tell him he owes me for his vocab since i got him addicted to begin with...but then he more than paid off getting me hooked to soccer n rock metal!....ur right...its incredible how two ppl can be so similar n stark opposites anywaz!...great to know we arent the only blunder pair of siblings!

cheers hun,

keep leaving u essays all the time!(read: ignore conveniently!)

nj

LOve the essays, so keep 'em comming! I know what you mean about the sibling relationship! You sound amazing like us! The only sport that we both did together was swimming! We are both parcticaly water babaies, spening our evening in the pool with friends till the coach parctically threw us out os it was closing time! And we used to play badminton, perversely so, cos he is younger and would end up loosing to me and would sulk! While Iw oul strut around the place cos I had won! 😆 Quite the terrible sister i was! Other than that we share a great love of music which we have inherited from our mom - she is a trained classical singer! Other than that we are chalk and cheese!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey congrats for the 2nd thread...
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Originally posted by: shriya12

hey sam..no problem post ur parts whneva u r free..however it was a surprise knowing u r married..didnt knoe abt ths thpough...and blv me it was a pleasant one!..keep writing..will wait for the update...

Well, have been married for a little over a year, though have been going aroun for 5 years or a little bit more!

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Originally posted by: suv.patki

I fully agree regarding Armaan being abandoned. Well, all his friends seek his help and knowingly or unknowingly, Armaan ends up bearing the brunt. May it be the gate crashing incident or the bhaang one. Ummm, regarding Riddhima and her father - well, first reaction of being angry is something expected. Hoping to see he atleast hearing out Riddhima in today's part. Well, DMG has stuck to being closer to reality always ... so won't be able to bear loads of melodrama 😭 Looking forward to read your update post DMG ... now thats gonna be a treat 😃

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Yup, poor guy! His friends dessert him faster than a sinking ship! 😆 As for Ridhima, the less said the better! I can understand her reluctance to push her father but to just cry and not defend her man in front of her friends is terrible! Nikki deserves him far more! At least she has the courage to stand up for the guy whom she loves!
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Originally posted by: ishu124

Thanks for the PM! :)

That was really good! I like how you incorporated Armaan's name, and the whole Greek god part. I enjoying reading this ff the most because of all the literally elements and references you make. I think that's one of the things that set's this fanfic apart from so many others. Your writing style is very unique. We're you ever a thinking of being an english major or an author? I appericate the extra research you do for the small things like Arzoo and Amraan, the orgin of Armaan's name. Overall you're doing a marvelous, stunning and masterful job.

You're doing an excellent job, I can't wait for Atul and Anjali's little confrontation, i was a little sad cause i didn't see too much of Raul or Muskaan. I didn't mind, Armaan and Ridimaa's building relationship was nice to observe.

Well, continue soon. I'll be waiting for the next part and PM. :)

By the way, I know I have asked this before, but can I get a link to see the painting in Ridimaa's Study? I have been wanting to see the painting. Thanks.

Once again, continue soon, cause I am on the edge of my seat waiting! ;)

Ishu😛

Hi Ishu, first of all apologies for the delayed response. Blame my other half for it, lo!

You are welcome for the PM…thank you for the wonderful words! Nope, was never an English major but am very fond of reading…would love to write but its so far has been limited to memo/ case studies / papers and a few fun things for friends etc… even one fic is beginning to take its toll of my creativity, I would have made one lousy author!

I am so glad you liked the Tantalus and House of Arman reference! Have posted the next part, do read and tell me if you liked the Atul-Anji convo.

I am so sorry, did I not give the link to Guernica in my last response. I am enclosing the link here.

http://www.pbs.org/treasuresoftheworld/a_nav/guernica_nav/main_guerfrm.html

My apologies for the oversight.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujata23

hey congrats for the 2nd thread...

Thank you so much!
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hey sam di!!
2nd thread...OMG!!...not that it was unexpected,infact it was as obvious as the sun rising from the east!!..after all ure such an amazing writer!!!.....
CONGRATS!!!
u sooooo deserve this.
🥳
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Originally posted by: sweetestcoolest

hey sam di!!

2nd thread...OMG!!...not that it was unexpected,infact it was as obvious as the sun rising from the east!!..after all ure such an amazing writer!!!.....
CONGRATS!!!
u sooooo deserve this.
🥳
annahet

Thanks so much sweetheart! 🤗 and even more so for saying that I write well...shall treasure the comments!

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