Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152

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shayona18

@shayona18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

hi
Just read all the parts...
You are fabulous writer and totally new concept...
Please don't make us wait...
Continue soon...........

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

AWESOME UPDATE...TRUELY FANTASTIC👏

Raj MLA hai.....now this is a new character for him....because the raj in LRL did not like politicians at all.....it would be good to see what he would do if he was in politics....something that he has hated...

Ins ke dialouges were superb.....typical to his sort....i mean this is what we would have all imgined him to be....

Raj and naina have been married...par yeh kaise? aur iske bare mein raj ki mom ko bhi pata nahi hai....aur to aur if they were married how is it that raj did not recognize naina when he first saw her.....app to suspense pe suspense add karte ja rahe ho....

Raj's story and boldness while saying all this waas just brilliant....Vikram is absolutely furious on him........

And to top it all you have given us one more suspense.....whre did naina disappear?????

Ab itne sare suspense add kar hi diye hai to jaldi se story aage badhate huae update kar dijiye.....

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Wow Priya,

What a twist!!!! Rajveer an MP and Naina and JAj had already gotten married.....but there seems to be some kind of golmaal there as well cause naina first denies the marriage and anyway she doesn't recognise him at first does she? I mean, it's only when that stupid fiance of her calls raj by his name that she recognises him. hmmm...wait, she did recognise huda, i mean vishal....so does that mean she got married to vishal thinking he is raj or something.

D*** priya, this is too confusing....I'll get a headache trying to guess the plot, so I guess I'll stop trying to....btw LOVED the cute shayari at the end and also raj's "romantic" explaination and thanx soo much for the pm.

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

wonderful comic update. 😆

Raj itna bada nautanki hai mujhe nahi pata tha.😆 Kya story sunai hai us ne Arjun ko aur gusse me hi sahi Naina ko bhi haan kehna pada na.😳 Arjun to poora darmabaaj hai film ka naam bhi bahut comic tha jo ye dekh kar aaya tha.😆 Viram kitna natak dekha raha tha par Raj ne acche se lagam lagai us ki bakwaas par.😉 Par ab Naina kahan gum ho gayi?😕

Jaldi se update karna.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

waah waah kya nautanki update tha. 😆😆😆

Manana padega Priya commedy itna acche se likhti hai tu ki mujhe lagta hai ab shayad tere se acchi commedy koi likh hi nahi sakta hai yahan.😉😉😉

Raj ne Vikram ki dhamki ka jawaab dhamki me hi diya aur jo Vikram samajh raha tha ki Raj akela hai ab us ko pata chala ki already kitne log hain Raj k saath vahan par.😃😃😃

Ye Arjun ki bhi entry badi jabardast thi maana padega,😛😛😛 kya entry di hai tune us ko shaandaar.😆😆😆 Typical Indian police waala na.😉😉😉 Mujhe lagta hai vo Raj ko jyada pasand karta hai Vikram ki bajai ,😃😃😃 kaise haath roka tha us ne Rai Sahab ka.🥱🥱🥱

Kya mast movie ka naam bataya hai us ne jo vo dekh k aaya hai.😆😆😆 Raj ne kya kahani sunai hai sab ko Naina ko bachane k liye.😉😉😉 Arjun kitne interest se vo story sun raha tha aur Vikram apne daat pees raha tha.😆😆😆 Par ab mujhe lagta hai Vikram aur khatarnaak ho gaya hai.😕😕😕

Raj k dial kaafi funny the jo us ne kahe the apne dil par haath rakh k aur doosra jo mithai k liye bola tha us ne.😆😆😆 Ye Naina kahan gayab ho gayi achanak?😕😕😕

jaldi se update karo.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Hi Dear

Update was just too gud..

Wat is this mystery behind Naina's past...

Why is she so angry with Raj???????????Naina is not uttering a single word..Is she some cattle or wat??????Every other person is deciding abt her future n she is mum...😡...

Alekh's entry was refreshing but he was similar to some comic character..

Now that was an inresting twist..naina is Raj's wife or is he cooking some story..Watever it was It just shook me..😲.

Who was Raj reffering to when he made Naina say dat she was married to him..??

Wat is dat which hurts Naina so much n bcos of which she accepted watever Raj said????Rajveer too understands her pain n he knows dat she is hurt..😕😕😕

Raj n Vikram's encounter was really funny..Raj was throwing bouncers on Vikram n he didn't had any reply for dat..😆😆😆

Now where did Naina vanished off?????

Do update n clear all doubts..

last ki shayri bahut gud thi really

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digimon_pokemon

@digimon_pokemon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

both the updates were superb👏👏👏
👏👏👏
very interesting story so far and ur poem at the end was too cute😊

a lot of suspense and confusions.do clear them soon

looking forward to the next update😊
😊

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#108

that was awesome but confusing too

hope everything will be cleared soon

and sorry for the delay i was busy

plz continue soon

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Light Cracker

@shiropa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#109

🤣

yaar tune suspence me vi comedi daal di

🤣

paar ye naina kaha gayi

arjun's entry was superb. maine to visal ko arjun samjha tha. e visal kaun hai. matlab kaun play kar raha hain

you poem is superb

🤣

sorry reply korne me late ho gayi.bajay to tumko pata hi hain.😊

i had recently joined in RP fc. a rocking place.are you there too?

or next update kab kar rahi ho. isbar vi tumne eise point pe chora hain ke kya kahu.

again dying to know what will happen next.

par ek baat kya naina or raj ki sach me saadi hue thi??

warna naina ne eisa kyun kaha. jab ran ne usse us insaan ka vasta dia jisse vo sabse jaada pyaar karti thi

oh e story jitna dikh raha hain lagta hain usse kahi jada interesting hain.isliye update soon😛

and arjun is superb.maine kahi or arjun ko aise nehi dekha🤣

kisi ne thori socha hoga arjun vi kavi paan khane bala inspecter baan sakta hain😆

tell me kya suri ji is fic me vi hain.arjun ko dekh ke unki yaad ya gayi😃😃😃

and raj. e janab to bare sidhe dikhte the, pichli update me kitni herogiri sujh rahi thi or ab kitna shararat sujh raha hain.maine sapne me vi nehi socha tha ke vo aise is situation ko handle korega.😆

or sapne me aisa nehi socha tha itni suspence vari story me itna comedy vari update milegi.😆😆😆

sach me tum isse phele priyadarsana ki script writer to nehi thi.agar nehi thi to priyadarsana isse parke tmhe jarur apna script writer bana lenge😆😆

again gussa maat hona😳

you are a superb writer👏

flashback ke liye mar rahe hain😊😉😛

or tumhare update ke liye vi😛😛😛

dekho itni busy raheke vi tumhare liye kitni bari reply kar di😛😊

ab jaldi se bari si update de do😛😛😛

Edited by shiropa - 16 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi
lolz ..... your such a nautanki,...zarra nawaji ka shukriya😆

the poem at the end got me cracking ... aur mera gussa uran chu hogaya .... lolz..chalo achha hua...😆😃😛

by the next part, you have to make long ....hmmmmm😕

anyways L.O.V.E.D this part, especially when Raj said that Naina's his wife, and he made that story up, lolz ... i was laughing like mad ...ab mai hi nautanki hun...to mere fic ka hero bhi to mujh se hi inspire hoga na...!!!😆

i really want to know the Mystery about Naina's past.!!! ...us k liye to abhi time hai ...yaar!!! pahle un dono k present ko to secure kar dun....😛

so update as soon as possible

and btw i loved your Alekh, well Arjun lolz ... paan eeek ... disgusting ... i can just imagine red blotches around his mouth .... ewww!!!! gross!! ...thoda typical charachter diya hai yaar...usko!!!

anyways the update was great...thanx darling😳😳

but short...really

update soon and

take care...to u too...yaar😊

yasmin

Thanxxxxxxxxxxx Yasmin...!!!😊

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