Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: watch rajeev

even i m dying to know wat's going to happen next....sooooooo plzzzzz b4 i die update it dear😭mare tumhare dushman...i mean...phil haal to mai hi tumhari dushmaan hun...tumhare itne kahne par bhi mai sahi time par ud nahin kar pa rahio hun...!!! bt belive me yaar...i'll really try to ud soon...!!!

sorry yaar...!!! par koshish kar rahi hun...!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Thank u so much for all ur compliments frnds...dey r always so encouraging. I hope u all like reading this part too...!!!

EPISODE:-2
Rajveer Naina k ankhon mai apne liye kai sare expression ko ek sath mehsus kar raha tha...!!! Rajveer chah kar bhi Naina ko kuch bhi nahin kah pa raha tha...!!! Vo chahta tha ki vo Naina se apni galati k liye mafi mang le...par phir bhi...vo kuch bhi nahin kah pa raha tha...!!!
Lekin dhire dhire Naina ka hath Rajveer k hathon mai loose padta ja raha tha...!!! Naina k is bartaab ko Rajveer mahsus kar raha tha...!!! Lekin is baar bari us ki thi...us ne Naina ka hath tightly pakda hua tha...!!! Aise jaise vo Naina ko kabhi bhi apne se dur nahin kar sakta tha...!!!
Lekin Naina tut chuki thi...!!! Zindagi ne use itne sare bhayanak rang dikhaye the...k ab us ko apne aap par bhi yakeen nahin ho raha tha...!!! Ab us k ankhon main se anshu bhi nahin nikal rahe the...!!! Aisa lag raha tha... jaise vo bhi bahte bahte thak chuke the...!!! Vo kaise bhul sakti thi k...isi Rajveer ne us k sath kya kiya tha...!!!
Tabhi Rajveer k piche se Vikram ki awaz phir se sunayi diya:- "Hum ne tum se kuch kaha hai Rajveer...!!! Naina hamari mangetar hai...is liye use chod do...!!!"
Rajveer ne Naina ki taraf dekha...us k chehre par koi bhi expression nahin tha...!!! Rajveer ne tai kar liya tha k use kya karna hai...!!! Us ne usi tarah se Naina ka hath tightly pakadte hue kaha:- "Naina khud tumhare sath nahin jana chahti hai...!!! Isiliye Naina mere sath ja rahi hai...!!!" Rajveer k ankhon main bahat nafrat tha... vikram k liye...!!!
Vikram ne gusse main kaha:-"Is koi farq nahin padta yeh kya chahti hai...ya kya nahin chahti...!!! Naina bas mere sath chal rahi hai...!!! aur tum jante ho Rajveer... hum jo kahte hain vo kar k rahte hain...!!!"
Rajveer ne bahat hi calmly jawab diya:- "Janta hun...!!! Isiliye kah raha hun k dum hai to Naina ko mere hathon se le kar batao...!!! Naina ko agar kharonch bhi aayi to tum logon ki vo halat karunga k zindagi bhar tum log apni shaqal ko pahchan nahin payoge...!!!"
Rajveer ne itna kah kar Naina ka hath pakad kar apni jeep ki taraf jane laga to...Vikram k aadmyon ne Rajveer ko gher liya...!!! Rajveer k sath aaye log jo abhi tak Rajveer ki baat maan kar jeep main baithe hue the...!!! Vo sab bahar aa gaye...aur chillate hue Vikram aur us k aadmiyon ki taraf aage badhe...!!! Vikram sirf char aadmiyoun k sath aaya hua tha...!!! Aur Rajveer k sath kareeb 10-12 log the...!!! Itne sare logon ko ek sath dekh kar Vikram k log piche ki ore hat gaye...!!!
Rajveer ne mushkurate hue Vikram ko dekh kar kaha:- "Is baar aap ki manmani nahin chalegi...Rai Sahab...!!! Is baar vohi hoga jo main chahunga...kyoun ki is baar bhagwan mere sath hai...!!!"
Tabhi vahan ek police jeep aa kar ruki...patrolling karte hue...!!! Itne sare logon ko rashte k bichon bich shor machate hue dekh kar vo jeep ruki...!!!
Police k jeep dekh kar sabhi chup chap ho gaye...!!!Magar Rajveer ne Naina ka hath abhi bhi utni hi tightly pakda hua tha...!!!
Jeep main se utre...Ins Arjun Singh{ARJUN BIJLANI}...apne do havaldaar k sath...!!! Paan ki thuk ko niche zameen par phenka aur aur apne hathon se apni muh ko saf kiya...un ki cap jo thodi si tedhi hi pahni hui thi...vo vaisi hi thi...apne pant ko thodi si upar ki uthate hue paan ko chabate hue kaha:- " Yahan par kya ho raha...??? Lagta hai adhi raat ko sare bhuton ki toli yahi par khadi hai...bhangda karne k liye...!!! Are...Rai Sahab aap yahaan...!!!" us ne Vikram ko dekh kar kaha...!!!
Ins Arjun ne hairani se kaha:- "Lekin aap yahan in bhuton k sath kya kar rahe hain...!!! Aap to kal tak zinda the...!!! Mera matlab hai ki...hum to aap ki shadi main ja rahe the...!!! Ab sarkari naukari main roz roz rajwadi thali to naseeb nahin hoti na...!!! Is liye socha ki aaj ji bhar kar plate udayenge...aap ki shadi jo hai...!!! Lekin mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki aap to kisi aur k reception main aaye hain...!!!" Usne apni paan ki thuk ko nigalte hue Rajveer aur Naina ki taraf dekh kar kaha...!!!
Phir vo Rajveer ko thik se dekhne k baad chaunk kar salam bajate hue ...apni cap ko sidha karte hue kaha:- "Are...sir ji...aap bhi yahin hain...!!! Chalo achha hua...sath main reception main chalenge...!!! Vaise yeh hai koun...??? Jarur aap ki mangetar hogi...varna aap inhe itne kas kar kyoun pakadte...!!! Sahi hai...zamana bahat kharab hai...!!!"
Tabhi Vikram ne chilaate hue kaha:- "Apni bakwaas band karo ins...!!! Rajveer hamari mangetar ko jabardasti utha kar le ja raha hai...!!!
Ins Arjun ne hairani se kaha:- "Kya kah rahe hain...aap!!! Yeh aap ki mangetar hai...to phir M.L.A. Saheb ne inhe apni mangetar ki tarah kyoun pakda hua hai...!!!"
Rajveer ne apni chuppi todte hue...calmly kaha:- "Yeh shadi Naina k marzi k khilaf ho rahi hai...!!!"
Vikram ne gusse main kaha:- "Yeh sarasar juhth hai...!!! Is shadi main Naina ki puri razamandi thi...!!! Bas hum dono main thoda sa jhagda ho gaya...aur vo hum se naraz ho kar chali aayi...aur aab Rajveer use hamare khilaf bhadka raha hai...!!!"
Ins Arjun ne Vikram se kaha:- "Vaise Rai Sahab...yeh baat samajh main nahin aayi...k aisa koun sa jhagda ho gaya...jis ki wajah se shadi k mandap se ek ladki bhag aayi...!!!"
Phir us ne Rajveer ki taraf dekh kar kaha:- "Sir ji...Naina ji ko jane dijiye...!!! Aap ko yeh sab sobha nahin deta...!!! Dushmani apni jagah hai aur shadiwali baat apni jagah...!!! Is tarah se ek ladki k sath bartaab karna sahi nahin hai...!!! Agar Naina ji ko koi bhi prob hai to vo hamare sath...police station chale...main un ki help karunga...!!!"
Rajveer ko pata tha ki vo jis post par hai...us post ki wajood k chalte vo kanun ko apne hath main nahin le sakta...aur na hi vo naina ko in main se kisi k bhi hawale kar sakta hai...!!! Isiliye Rajveer ne apna trump card ka istemal kiya...!!!
Rajveer:-"Is ki jarurat nahin hai...Ins!!! Naina ki help karne k liye us ka pati zinda hai...!!!"
Sabhi chaunke...Ins Arjun k sath sath Vikram bhi aur Naina bhi...aur sath main vahan khade baki k sare log bhi...!!!
Ins Arjun badi hi hairani se idhar udhar dekhte hue kaha:- "Pati...??? Ab aap dono to yahaan hai...to phir in ka pati kahan se aa gaya...!!!"
Rajveer k chehre par ek suspence ka expression tha...!!! Us ne kaha:- "Pati...aa gaya...nahin...Ins...!!! Naina ka pati bilkul aap k samne khada hai...!!!"
Sabhi ko dushra jhatka laga...!!! Vikram to jaise gusse se pagal hi ho gaya:- "Apne zubaan ko lagam do Rajveer...!!!" Usne gusee main kaha...!!!
Rajveer thoda masti k mood main aa gaya tha...Vikram ko gusse main dekh kar...!!! "Zubaan par to lagam de bhi dun...Rai Sahab...!!! Lekin is dil ka kya karun...jo itne din k baad apni biwi ko dekh kar be-lagam hota ja raha hai...!!! {us ne apna hath apni dil ko sahlate hue filmi style main kaha...!!!} Ab aap hi batayiye Ins...aap ki nayi nayi shadi hui ho...aur aap ki biwi aap se naraz ho kar bahat dino k liye aap se dur ho jaye...!!! Aur ek din rashte main achanak mil jaye to aap kya karenge...???"
Ins Arjun:-"main....main to use apne kandhe par utha kar jabardasti apne ghar pe le jayunga...aur apni style se us ko manayunga...!!!"
Rajveer approve kar ne expression k sath kaha:- "Bilkul thik...main bhi yahi karne wala hun...!!!"
Vikram aab apne aap se bahar hoga...tha vo Rajveer ki taraf gusse se aage aaya...!!! Us ka hath us k kamar par tha...sayad vo apna gun nikal raha tha...!!!
Ins Arjun ne use rokte hue kaha:- "Ek min...ek min...!!! Pahle main jaan to lun ki pura mazra kya hai...!!! Mere yahan pe hote hue...aap main se koi bhi kanun ko hath main nahin le sakta...!!!"
Lekin Vikram ka to jaise dimag hi kaam nahin kar raha tha...!!! "Kanun gaya bhad main....tu dekh mai kya karta hun....!!!" Us ne Ins Arjun ko dhakka maar kar Rajveer ki taraf aage badha...!!!
Lekin phir se Ins Arjun ne us ka hath rok liya....aur is baar us ne kafi tightly pakda hua tha...Vikram ka hath...!!! "Mai itna bhi gaya-gujra nahin hun...Rai Sahab... k apne samne yeh sab hone dun...!!! Is tarah se bich rashte main...aadhi raat ko...yahan yeh sab karne k liye mai aap sab ko ander dal sakta hun...!!! Vaise bhi aaj sanivaar hai....aap ko bail bhi somvaar ko hi milegi...!!! Tab tak aap sab mere mehmaan ban sakte hai...!!! Aur ek baat...main naukar sarkaar ka hun...aap ka nahin...!!! Isiliye on-duty officer se izzat se baat ki jiye...!!!"
Vikram ruk gaya...vo janta tha...k us ki koi bhi galat harkaat us k political career ko khatam kar sakta hai...!!! Vikram piche hata aur kaha:- "Yeh jhuth bol raha hai Ins...!!! Naina is ki biwi naihn hai...!!!"
Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha:-" Naina meri hi biwi hai...aur yeh mai sabit kar sakta hun...!!!"
Ins Arjun kaha:- "Yeh aap kya kah rahe hai Sir ji...!!! Aap ki shadi aur in se...!!! Vaise mai abhi abhi ek film dekh kar aa raha hun...'Tohaar Biwi Hamne Bhagayi'...!!! Yahan par bhi mujhe mazra kuch aisa hi lag raha hai...!!!Biwi to hai...lekin pati koun hai aur bhagaya kisne hai...vohi samajhna baki hai...!!!" Vo phir se apni paan ki thuk zameen par phenkte hue...apna sar kuhjate hue... confusion ho kar kahne lage...!!!
Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha:- "Aap ki confusions mai clear kar deta hun...Ins...!!! Naina aur meri shadi aaj se 6 mahine pahle hui thi...!!! Hamari mazburi thi...jis ki wajah se humain yeh shadi chup kar karni padi...!!! Hum dono ne socha tha ki sahi waqt par hum dono yeh baat aapne aapne ghar main bata denge...!!! Lekin us se pahle hi yeh mujh se naraz ho kar...mujh se milna julna band kar diya...!!!"
Ins Arjun ne hairani se pucha:- "Kyon ...???"
Rajveer:- "Aap to jante hai na...Ins!!! khubsurat ladkiyan...kuch jyada hi nakhre karte hai...!!! Maine bhaav nahin diya...to gussa ho gayi...aur mujhe chod kar chali gayi...!!!" Us ne dukhi ho kar aise kaha jaise naina use bahat torture karti ho...!!!
Ins Arjun:- "phir...!!!"
Rajveer:-" Phir kya...!!! Mujhe laga gussa thanda ho jayega...to phir se mere paas wapas aa jayegi...aur sab thik ho jayega...!!! Lekin us se pahle us k gharwalon ko pata chal gaya...aur vo is ki zabardasti shadi karwana chahte the...!!! To...ab aap batayiye Ins...Naina kya karti...!!! Ab hindustani ladkiyan jis ko ek bar apna pati maan leti hain...us k gale to 7 janmon tak latki rahti hai...!!! Aur yeh to hamara pahla hi janam hai...!!! Kya karti bechari...vahan se bhag aayi...!!! Apne ek laute pati k zinda rahte vo kar sakti thi kya kisi aur se shadi...??? Kadi nigrani thi us par...lekin mere pyar ki pukar se vo sare bandhan tod kar apne pati k paas aa gayi...!!!"
Vahan khade sabhi log...badi hi hairani k sath Rajveer ki sari kahani sun rahe the...!!! vishal badi mushkil se apni hassi ko control kar raha tha...!!!
Ins Arjun:-" Yeh aap kya kah rahe hai...sir ji...!!!"
Rajveer turant bol pada:- "Mujhe pata tha...!!! Aap ko yakeen nahin aayega...!!! Aap khud hi Naina se puch lijiye na...!!!"
Rajveer ne Naina ka hath chod diya...!!! Ins Arjun ne Naina se pucha:- "Kya yeh jo kuch bhi kah rahe hai vo sab sach hai...!!!"
Naina ne gusse main Rajveer ki taraf dekh kar kaha :- "Nahin...!!!"
Vikram ne mushkura kar kaha:- "Dekha Ins...maine sahi kaha tha na...k Rajveer sara sar jhuth bol raha hai...!!! "
Rajver ne Naina ko apni taraf ghuma kar kaha:- "Sach sach kaho Naina...k hamari shadi nahin hui thi...!!! Tumhe kassam hai Naina...us insaan ki jis se tum is duniyan main sab se jyada pyar karti ho...!!! Ab kaho Naina ki hamari shadi nahin hui thi...!!!"
"Haan...hamari shadi hui thi...!!!" Naina ne nazrain jhuka kar badi mushkil se kaha...sath hi us k ankhon se do boond anshun bhi gir kar zameen par pade...!!!
Rajveer Naina k dard ko mehsus kar raha tha...!!! Lekin us k paas is waqt Naina ko bachane k liye...is k alwa aur kuch bhi nahin sujha...!!! Use pata tha ki us haadse ko yaad dilane par Naina ko kitni takleef hui hogi...Rajveer ko bhi dard hua...!!! Lekin us k paas aur koi option nahin tha...!!!
Ins Arjun khush ho kar kahne laga:- "Lijiye Rai Sahab... sari mystery solve ho gayi...!!! Yeh to maan hi gayi ki yeh Rajveer Sir ki patni hain...!!! Chalo koi baat nahin...baat to mithai ki hi hai na...!!! Aap k ghar main khate...ab Sir ji k ghar main kha lenge...!!! Mubarak ho...sir ji...!!! Aap ki biwi bhag aayi...!!!"
Itna kah kar us ne Rajveer se hath milaya aur us k baad Vikram ki taraf aapna hath badhte hue kaha:- "Aap ko bhi bahat bahat badhai ho...Rai Saheb...!!! Aap bach gaye...shadi shuda ladki...vo bhi bina divorce k...aisi ladki se shadi karne par aap k izzat ka to janaja nikal jata...!!! Bhagwan ne bacha liya aap ko...!!!"
Ins Arjun ne Rajveer ki taraf dekhte hue kaha:- "To Sir ji...hamari mithai kab milegi...!!!"
Rajveer ne mushkurate hue kaha:-"Abhi chaliye...!!! Mithai kya...hamari maa ko is baat ka pata chalega to thoda naraz hongi mujh par...lekin aap ko mithai kya... aap k naam par pura mithai ka dukaan kar dengi...!!!"
Vikram ne gusse se... magar shant ho kar kaha:- "Yeh tumne achha nahin kiya Rajveer...!!! Sher k samne se us k shikar ko agar chin kar le jao...to sher aur bhi khatarnak ho jata hai...!!! Tumhe is ki saza milegi...jarur milegi...!!!"
Rajveer ne excited hote hue kaha:- "Sach...!!! Kab milegi...!!! Vaise aap koun si sher ki baat kar rahe hain...mujhe to yahan dur dur tak sher kahin dikhai nahin de raha hai...!!!"
Phir Rajveer ki nazar padi vahan par jahan par Naina khadi thi...!!! Vo chaunka...kyoun ki vahan par naina nahin thi...!!! Rajveer :- "Naina kahan hai...???"
Vahan khade sabi log chaunke...yahan tak ki Vikram bhi...!!!
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"yaroon...na naraz hona...na chillana mujh par...aur na hi karna shout...
janti hun k...phir se chod rahi hun...confusions k sath sath...bahat sare doubt...
par aap k sare sawalon k jawab hai hum charon{P,R,N &V} k paas...
lekin plz intezar kijiye 'flashback' ka...jab hum charon mil kar kar denge sare suspence ko out..."
To bhayiyon...aur bahno...agle sare parts ko padhna mat bhuliyega...jo ki ud hoga har😕😕😕day ko aur raat😕😕😕 baje...!!!
yaar...ab hassna aur mujhe gali dena band karo aur turant apne comments ko yahan bejhne ka prabandh karo...!!!
dhanyavaad...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
lolz ..... your such a nautanki, the poem at the end got me cracking ... aur mera gussa uran chu hogaya .... lolz

by the next part, you have to make long ....

anyways L.O.V.E.D this part, especially when Raj said that Naina's his wife, and he made that story up, lolz ... i was laughing like mad ...

i really want to know the Mystery about Naina's past.!!!

so update as soon as possible

and btw i loved your Alekh, well Arjun lolz ... paan eeek ... disgusting ... i can just imagine red blotches around his mouth .... ewww!!!! gross!!

anyways the update was great

but short

update soon and take care

yasmin
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
Its truly amazing. Just luved it. The way Raj handled everything was outstanding. Arjun was also gr8. I just can imagine Vikram's face n laugh like hell. Truly rocking part. But yaar suspense to kuch zyaada hi chhor diya. I wonder wats the truth dat made Naina accept dat Raj was her husband. Der is lots of confusions n lots of doubts. Pls jaldi se clear kar do.
W8ing eagerly 4 the next part. PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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raj naina ki shaadi very hilarious

ab naina kaha bhaag gayi raj to usse vikram se bacha raha tha
hope raj usse vikram se phele find karle
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey bhagwaan!!!!!!ye raj itna bada nautanki kyun hai?????😆😆😆kisne isse mla bana diya?😆😆😆isse to kisi matak company mein hona chahiye tha...kya kahani banayi hai!!!!👏aur ye insp.arjun to bhut bada cartooon hai😆issse yahan sirf khaane ki hi padi hai...aur vikram ke xrpressions soch kar to meri hassi nhn ruk rahi....raj ne sach mein uski neend haraaam kar di ab to....iss janam mein to vikram so nhn paayega😆par yaaar ye kya mystery hai?????kya hua tha raj aur naina ke beech????jaldi ud karo nhn to main ho jaaaongi....aur haaan ud ki tarah tumhaaari poem bhi bhut bhut bhut funnny thi😆 but i m really exited ki ab naina raj ke saath rahegi..😊..let's c aage kya hota hai... aur plzzzzzzzz yaaar isss baaar jaldi ud karna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Rajveer wants to say sorry to Naina but he could not say anything!!!!

Naina ka haath ab loose ho raha tha but Rajveer held her hand as if woh Naina ko apne se dur nahi kar sakta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Rajveer ne Naina ke saath akhir kya kiya tha jisse woh nahi bhul sakti??😕 😕 😕 😕

Rajveer isn't letting Naina go with Vikram!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊I loved the way he opposed Vikram!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Rajveer ne Vikram ki dhamki ka jawab dhamki se diya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Vikram samaj raha tha ke Rajveer akela hai magar jab uske aadmiyon ne Rajveer ko rokna chaha tab usse pata chala ke uske saath kitna admi hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Inspector Arjun ki entry kaafi zabardast thi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Typical paan chewing Indian policewala!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Arjun is so funny!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Usse toh sirf accha khaane ki padi hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Arjun ne socha ke Naina Rajveer ki mangetar hai much to Vikram's annoyance!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Rajveer ne sahi socha ke woh Naina ko inmein se kisi ke hawale bhi nahi sakta!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajveer kitna bada nautanki hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Usne kya story banayi Naina ko bachane ke liye!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kuch der pehle tak serious hero bana huya tha aur ab kitna filmy ho gaya hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Isko politician nahi kisi natak company mein hona chahiye tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Vikram toh itna gussa ho gaya ke apni gun nikalne wala tha magar accha huya jo Arjun ne usse rok liya and knew how to deal with him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kya title bataya Arjun ne film ka!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Usse lag raha hai yaha bhi wahi ho raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Yeh Naina kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai??😕 😕 😕 😕Is she some cattle or what??😔 😔 😔 😔Waha khade sab milkar uski zindagi ka faisla kar rahe hai and she is quiet!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Everyone is listening to Rajveer shocked and Vishal is having a hard time controlling his laughter!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina se jab puccha gaya ke Rajveer aur uski shaadi huyi thi yaa nahi usne inkaar kar diya!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒Woh yeh kyun nahi samajti ke Rajveer usse yeh bachane ke liye bol raha hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Magar Rajveer ne usse aisi kaun si baat ki yaad dilayi which hurts her so much and because of which she admitted that unki shaadi huyi thi??😕 😕 😕 😕

Rajveer also understands her pain but he had no option!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Magar kya Naina aur Rajveer ki shaadi wakai huyi thi??😛 😛 😛 😛Then why did she not recognise him and neither did he recognise her until they heard each other's name??😕 😕 😕 😕

Arjun ko toh abhi bhi mithai ki padi hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Rajveer keh raha hai uski maa ko ish baat ka pata nahi hai aur pata chalega toh mithai kya mithai ka dukan uske naam kar dengi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Vikram toh kuch kar hi nahi paya aur Rajveer ko dhamka raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆He has become even more dangerous now!!!

Magar Raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Kya bouncer pheka uspe!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ab yeh Naina kaha gayab ho gayi achanak??😕 😕 😕 😕

I hope woh Rajveer ko jaldi mil jaye isse pehle ki woh phir se musibaat mein padh jaye!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I loved you poem at the end!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊It was very funny and sweet!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 👏 👏 👏 👏


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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TOTALLY AWESOME UPDT INDEED.........

LOVED D WAY RAJ TACKLED D SITUATION

N FOR D DIALOUGES U SHOULD BE GIVEN AWARD...DEY WER MINDBLOWING

SPECIALLY OF DAT OF INSPECTOR N DEN RAJVEER ENACTIN D STORY......

AWESOME
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey fabulous part with lots of surprises n mistry.......u rocks dear...
now m waiting for flashback....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi
the update was awesome. Liked the nautanki part of raj. He really handled the situation very well, but would love to know what had happened between raj and naina due 2 which raj is feeling very sorry. Also liked arjun's part also. he was really great. now the mystery is where naina went. please solve this and update the next part at the earliest.
bye take care and best wishes
jyothi

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