Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152 - Page 13

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

AWESOME UPDATE...TRUELY FANTASTIC👏 THANX😳

Raj MLA hai.....now this is a new character for him....because the raj in LRL did not like politicians at all.....it would be good to see what he would do if he was in politics....something that he has hated...bilkul sahi kaha...😃😃

Ins ke dialouges were superb.....typical to his sort....i mean this is what we would have all imgined him to be....haan...arjun ko thoda typical look diya hai...!!!

Raj and naina have been married...par yeh kaise? aur iske bare mein raj ki mom ko bhi pata nahi hai....aur to aur if they were married how is it that raj did not recognize naina when he first saw her.....app to suspense pe suspense add karte ja rahe ho....PATA HAI...😆😆😆...lekin is suspence ko khatam karne main thoda time to lagega hi na...!!!

Raj's story and boldness while saying all this waas just brilliant....Vikram is absolutely furious on him........vo to hoga hi...raj ne sahi dose jo diya tha us ko...!!!😆😆😆

And to top it all you have given us one more suspense.....whre did naina disappear????? ...hmmm mujhe bhi pata nahin hai...pata kar k next part main bata ti hun...!!!😊😊😊

Ab itne sare suspense add kar hi diye hai to jaldi se story aage badhate huae update kar dijiye ..... mai koshish karungi ki sater day night ko ud kar dun...agar mera net thik raha to...!!!

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

Wow Priya,

What a twist!!!! Rajveer an MP and Naina and JAj had already gotten married.....but there seems to be some kind of golmaal there as well cause naina first denies the marriage and anyway she doesn't recognise him at first does she? I mean, it's only when that stupid fiance of her calls raj by his name that she recognises him. hmmm...wait, she did recognise huda, i mean vishal....so does that mean she got married to vishal thinking he is raj or something... ha ha ha ha....😆😆😆lots of guesses & lots of confusions...😆😆😆

D*** priya, this is too confusing....I'll get a headache trying to guess the plot, so I guess I'll stop trying to.... yeh sahi idea hai...😛😛!!! tum headache kyoun leti ho...??? mai hun na yahan...'amrutanjan balm' k sath...😉😉!!! thoda time lagega lekin main sare confusion ko clear kar dungi...don't worry...!!!😃😃

btw LOVED the cute shayari at the end and also raj's "romantic" explaination ...thanx dear...!!!

and thanx soo much for the pm...pleasure yaar...!!!

Originally posted by: varshita

wonderful comic update. 😆...thanx...yaar!!!

Raj itna bada nautanki hai mujhe nahi pata tha.😆 yeh to kuch bhi nahin hai...yaar !!! age age dekh vo kya karta hai...!!!

Kya story sunai hai us ne Arjun ko aur gusse me hi sahi Naina ko bhi haan kehna pada na.😳...sach main...kafi achhi story sunayi thi...!!!

Arjun to poora darmabaaj hai film ka naam bhi bahut comic tha jo ye dekh kar aaya tha.😆...haan...yeh naam mere bhai ne mujhe suggest kiya tha...!!! vo kaha karta hai ki vo is naam se ek film banayega...!!!😆

Viram kitna natak dekha raha tha par Raj ne acche se lagam lagai us ki bakwaas par.😉...haan us ki bolti band ho gayi ...is ki wajah se...!!!😆

Par ab Naina kahan gum ho gayi?😕next ud main bata ti hun...!!!

Jaldi se update karna.

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

waah waah kya nautanki update tha. 😆😆😆thanx yaar

Manana padega Priya commedy itna acche se likhti hai tu ki mujhe lagta hai ab shayad tere se acchi commedy koi likh hi nahi sakta hai yahan.😉😉😉..tujhe to bas bahana chahiye mujhe chane k jhad par chadhane k liye...!!!

Raj ne Vikram ki dhamki ka jawaab dhamki me hi diya aur jo Vikram samajh raha tha ki Raj akela hai ab us ko pata chala ki already kitne log hain Raj k saath vahan par.😃😃😃sahi kaha...!!!😛😛😛

Ye Arjun ki bhi entry badi jabardast thi maana padega,😛😛😛 kya entry di hai tune us ko shaandaar.😆😆😆 Typical Indian police waala na.😉😉😉 Mujhe lagta hai vo Raj ko jyada pasand karta hai Vikram ki bajai ,😃😃😃 kaise haath roka tha us ne Rai Sahab ka.🥱🥱🥱arjun to apna har charecter main achha lagta hai...vo yeh character to thoda hat k hi tha na...!!!😃😃😃

Kya mast movie ka naam bataya hai us ne jo vo dekh k aaya hai.😆😆😆haan...yeh naam mere bhai ne mujhe suggest kiya tha...aur kahata hai ki vo is naam par ek film banayega aur script bhi mujhi se likhwayega...!!!😆

Raj ne kya kahani sunai hai sab ko Naina ko bachane k liye.😉😉😉 Arjun kitne interest se vo story sun raha tha aur Vikram apne daat pees raha tha.😆😆😆 Par ab mujhe lagta hai Vikram aur khatarnaak ho gaya hai.😕😕😕haan...khatarnak to hoga hi...raj ne us hathon se us k shikar ko jo chin liya hai...!!!😡😡😡

Raj k dial kaafi funny the jo us ne kahe the apne dil par haath rakh k aur doosra jo mithai k liye bola tha us ne.😆😆😆...sahi kaha...!!! 😆

Ye Naina kahan gayab ho gayi achanak?😕😕😕next ud main batati hun...na...!!!😊

jaldi se update karo.

Originally posted by: shayona18

please continue soon...........

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear...hiiiii😊

Update was just too gud...thanx...yaar😊

Wat is this mystery behind Naina's past...ques 1😆

Why is she so angry with Raj??????????? ...ques 2😆

Naina is not uttering a single word..Is she some cattle or wat??????Every other person is deciding abt her future n she is mum...😡 ...ques 3😆

Alekh's entry was refreshing but he was similar to some comic character...vo special entry main hai...!!!

Now that was an inresting twist..naina is Raj's wife or is he cooking some story..Watever it was It just shook me..😲 ...ques 4😆

Who was Raj reffering to when he made Naina say dat she was married to him..?? ...ques 5😆

Wat is dat which hurts Naina so much n bcos of which she accepted watever Raj said????Rajveer too understands her pain n he knows dat she is hurt..😕😕😕 ...ques 6😆

Raj n Vikram's encounter was really funny..Raj was throwing bouncers on Vikram n he didn't had any reply for dat..😆😆😆 ...haan...sahi kaha

Now where did Naina vanished off????? ...ques 7😆

Do update n clear all doubts...agar mera net thik raha to mai saterday night ko ud kar dungi...!!!

last ki shayri bahut gud thi really...thanx😆

Originally posted by: digimon_pokemon

both the updates were superb👏👏👏
👏👏👏 thanx😳

very interesting story so far and ur poem at the end was too cute😊...glad u liked it.😊

a lot of suspense and confusions.do clear them soon...i'll try

looking forward to the next update😊
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Originally posted by: shiropa

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yaar tune suspence me vi comedi daal di ...ab itna to chalta hai na yaar...!!!

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paar ye naina kaha gayi ...hmmm next ud main batati hun na...!!!

arjun's entry was superb ...kyoun apna arjun bhi to superb banda hai na...!!!

maine to visal ko arjun samjha tha. e visal kaun hai. matlab kaun play kar raha hain ...vishal ka charachter main maine 'vikash...i mean...huda' ko rakha hai...!!! use maine ek +ve charachter diya hai...!!!

you poem is superb ...thanx

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sorry reply korne me late ho gayi.bajay to tumko pata hi hain.😊 haan...pata hai yaar...!!!

i had recently joined in RP fc. a rocking place.are you there too?

or next update kab kar rahi ho. isbar vi tumne eise point pe chora hain ke kya kahu ...thoda suspence to chalta hai na yaar...!!!

again dying to know what will happen next ...bata ti hun na...thoda wait kar lo...!!!

par ek baat kya naina or raj ki sach me saadi hue thi?? ...ab yeh to tumhe age chal k pata chalega...!!!

warna naina ne eisa kyun kaha. jab ran ne usse us insaan ka vasta dia jisse vo sabse jaada pyaar karti thi ...confusion ko dhire dhire clear karungi...don't worry...yaar...!!!

oh e story jitna dikh raha hain lagta hain usse kahi jada interesting hain.isliye update soon😛 ...kya baat kar rahi ho...!!! interesting nahin... confusing kaho...!!!😆

and arjun is superb.maine kahi or arjun ko aise nehi dekha🤣

kisi ne thori socha hoga arjun vi kavi paan khane bala inspecter baan sakta hain😆 yeh naya get-up achha hai na...!!! typical policewala type ka...!!!😆

tell me kya suri ji is fic me vi hain.arjun ko dekh ke unki yaad ya gayi😃😃😃 ...pata nahin...abhi abhi to is fic ko shuru kiya hai...!!! dekhte hain age koun koun hain is fic main...!!!😕

and raj. e janab to bare sidhe dikhte the, pichli update me kitni herogiri sujh rahi thi or ab kitna shararat sujh raha hain.maine sapne me vi nehi socha tha ke vo aise is situation ko handle korega.😆 ...achha hai na...is tarah to us ne vikram ki band hi baja di...hai ki nahin...!!!😆

or sapne me aisa nehi socha tha itni suspence vari story me itna comedy vari update milegi.😆😆😆 ...hassna shehat k liye achha hota hai...yaar...!!!😆😆

sach me tum isse phele priyadarsana ki script writer to nehi thi.agar nehi thi to priyadarsana isse parke tmhe jarur apna script writer bana lenge😆😆 ...are nahin...!!! main un ki script writer nahin thi...!!! balki ek hi school main hum dono padha karte the...aur vo mere junior the...!!! baad main apni har script likhne k baad vo pahle mujhe dikhane aate the...!!! mai hi use correction kiya karti thi...!!! aur jis script ko vo mujh se correction nahin karwate the...vo film flop ho jati thi...!!! jaise 'billo barber' ki buri halat hui hai...!!!😆😆😆

again gussa maat hona😳 ...nahin yaar... mai bas tumhe miss kar rahi thi...!!!😃😃😃

you are a superb writer👏 ...ab kitna chane k jhad par chadhayogi...gir jayungi...yaar...!!!😳

flashback ke liye mar rahe hain😊😉😛 ...us k liye abhi thoda sa time hai...yaar...!!!

or tumhare update ke liye vi😛😛😛 ...koshish kar rahi hun ki saterday night ko hi ud kar du...par net ka koi bharosha nahin hai yaar...!!!

dekho itni busy raheke vi tumhare liye kitni bari reply kar di😛😊 ...isiliye to tumhare naam ka matlab 'TAJ' hai...!!!😊😊😊

ab jaldi se bari si update de do😛😛😛

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was awesome but confusing too

hope everything will be cleared soon

and sorry for the delay i was busy

plz continue soon

plzzzzzzz update dis😭