Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152 - Page 103

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was wonderful
loved it completely
plz continue soon
and HAPPY NEW YEAR

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wonderful UD!!! 😃Thanqqqqqqq sumi😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Raj ka Naina k baalo ko suljhana....uske baalon ko bhi achha lag raha tha....isiliye to baar baar ulajh rahe the....😆😆....so basically Raj to baalo ko bhi charm kar deta hai...😆raj k charm k bare me kuch mat kaho yaar...ufff...😳 😆 😳 😆 😳 😆

And I'm glad to knw dat actually Naina's dad is alive.....I hope she can soon find him....along wid Raj. arre raj sath hai toh naina toh humain bhi dhundh legi...yeh toh sirf us k father ki baat hai...😆 😆 😆

And then Naina's dil....wah....kitne pyar se kaha....I love Rajveer!!! I luved that portion.....such a cute one yaar!!!😳thanqqqqqqqq😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

And then Raj ne Naina ko Malika k upar bithaya....and of course they were so close.....lovely song selection!!! Perfect to the situation!! mera fav song hai...yaar...aur jan kar achha laga ki tumhe bhi pasand aaya...😃 😃 😃

And then Raj Naina ko pahadi pe le gaya.....u knw wat....jab ladkiyan bahut daring nahi hoti....tab shayad aise darawne jagoh par le jana chahiye.....romance ka full chance hota hai!!!😆😆😆dekha mere fic me bhi raj kitna clever hai... sahi tym par sahi kaam karta hai...😆 😆 😆

And RN ne bhi perfect romance kiya.....lekin romantic scene me ye thriler suspence kaha se aya????? mere dimag se aa gaya yaar...tumhe toh pata hi hoga...'DIMAGLESS' logon ka dimag baht chalta hai...😆 😆 😆

Well....issi point pe yakeen ho jata hai.....ye LIONESS PRIYA ki fic hai....😆😆 toh yeh mera signature tha...😆

....btw....the flashbak was scary.....donno who's that person n wats the incident??? Ab tum bataogi tabhi to janungi na....isiliye jaldi batana.....ok?😆sorry yaar jaldi nahi bata payi...😭

And yes....Naina also confessed to him "I love u Raj" (I love saying this yaar😳😳😳me too....😳 😆)......aur mauhtarma ne iss point pe chhora....Oh God.....abhi main sone jaungi to issi k bare me sochungi......😕😕....😆😆jyada mat soch yaar...tere toh xams chal rahe hain na...phir mera naam bigad kar rahogi kya...😆 😆 😆

And now LRL JOKE!!!

So its abt Kolkatta n Bengali....😆😆....yupe😛 😛

that was cool....Kolkatta ka chakkar to tum janti hi ho....(stupid me🤢😆haan...😆)....and main to hu hi Bengali....so ye joke dekh kar mujhe laga....'wow'....😆😆😆 thanqqqqqqqqq😛 😛

....it was really nice.....ab Huda se isse zyada samajhdaari expect nahi kar sakte na....😆😆😆nahi yaar...Huda kafi samajhdaar hai...tabhi toh voh 'aami janina saab' se milne gaya tha...😆 😆 😆

Now Priya dear.....tumne kaha next part jaldi hoga....so me w8ing....(I just hope ye jaldi mere xam k exact pehle ki raat na ho😆😆) dekha main phir se late ho gayi...😭 😭

Anyways, HAPPY NEW YEAR 2010!!!😃😃😃to u too dear...😃 😃 😃

Thanks for the wonderful part....w8ing for the next one!!!😛thanxxxxxxx a lotttttttt Sumi for ur sweet comments...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: manatated

NAUTANKIIIII !!!!!! 😆

isska jawab tujhe aaram se aur achchese deti hoon baadmein! 😈

Hi priya ki bachchi....kaisi ho?

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

Damn it's been an age since i last commented lol 😆 just as long as you take to update lmao 😆yashmin yeh tum hi ho na...chalo mere sarr ki kasamm kahayo...ki yeh comments tum ne kiya hai...!!! mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai...!!! main aaj jarur beach par ja kar sare love brds ko lolly pops khilayungi😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

but let me tell you it's not my fault ... college hain hee aisa 😡 Kiss uloo ke patte nai yeh college banaya hain, agar mil jaaye toh ..... 😡😡😡 Anyways lets forget that, otherwise i'll be here all day and you'll probably just murder me lol ... college maine toh nahi banaya...yahi ques maine apne lec se bhi pucha tha...bichare ro pade...😆 😆 😆

although it should be me who murders you, first you take a life time to update, and then you give us a pea size update ... kanjoosi ki hadd hogayi 😡😆 Priya priya priya kya karu tera 😆is se jyada long ud...??? is se toh behtaar hai ki tu mera murder hi kar de...kyoun ki vaise hi kuch dino se long uds de de kar main already MOOV ki add bann chuki hun...😆

Ab lets forget all this otherwise we really would be here all day 😆mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai...😆

Vaise update kaafi accha tha lol ... okay not kaafi, but bahut accha tha 😳mujhe pata hai ki kafi nahi tha...😆

you really didn't think i would say anything else other than that did you ... ofcourse if it's a RN fic and you are the writer i will definetly like it 😃 just remember this because i'm not going to be complenting like this for a long time 😆 if your a kanjoos in giving updates, i'm a kanjoos in giving complements 😆voh toh tum ho hi chuki ho yaar...

Update romantic bhi tha 😳 aur emotional bhi 😭really...???😛

So Naina is here looking for her father, awww ,,, i hope she finds him soon, and i hope he is okay ... hope that stupid Gaurav and Vikram didn't do anything bad to him, although it's hard to expect anything from them other than that 😕 stupid little *beep* 😡😆arre yaar...naina k sath raj hai na...naina k dad kisi bhi multiplex me baith kar '3 idiots' dekh rahe ho...Raj unhe pakka dhundh nikalega...😆 😆 😆

Kair lets not get into that ... otherwise duiya bhar ki verbal abuses would be listed down here and i most probaly be banned from IF due to that 😆 now you don't want that ... and neither do i 😆he he he...😆

By the way the first part... haila, how cute ... Naina ka wet hair tangled in his button 😳 kya scene hain 😳😳😳 i could just imagine. thoda filmy tha...nahin...???😆

and Lmao ... Naina's fear of Malika 🤣🤣🤣 well i'm not suprised after the last encounter 😆😆😆 i'll react the same way 😆😆😆he he he...😆 😆 😆

But anyways the whole entire scene was amazing, especially the horse ride to the hill ... so magical ... kaash Naina ki jaaga main hoti 😳 hai dreams .... we could only dream, after all Raj jaisa hain kya iss duniya main sahi kaha yaar...'sigh'...

and for the BEST part of this update, the smoking hot kiss ... i was blushing through that entire scene imagining it, Naina back against Raj, him holding her from the waist 😳 God i'm blushing !!!!! ☺️☺️☺️ he he he...actually main us scene ko thoda aur RN romance k sath likhnewali thi...phir mujhe khud hajam nahi hua...😆 😆 😆

but yeah kya tha what was that dream kind of thing ... i hope this doesn't drive Raj away from Naina, otherwise get ready to get murdered 😈he he he😆...aage aage dekho hota hai kya...!!! parr itna yakeen dila sakti hun ki main RN ko jyada din tak dur nahi rakhungi...aur yeh pakka vaada hai...😃 😃 😃

Now for the Joke LMAO .... i was in stitches, seriously "Ami jaani na saab" 😆 Huda Huda Huda ... what an idiot 😆Huda k bare me Vishesh tippani...he he he...

Take Care Priya 🤗🤗... this is the last your hearing from me, cause i'm going into hiding 😆why dear...!!! ab tumhe reg comments karna padega...varna main tumhare liye ek paper ka Taaz Mahal bana kar gaane lagungi...'jo vaada kiya voh nibhana padega....kaisa bhi ud ho...boring ya torture ho...tum ko comments karna padega...jo vaada kiya voh nibhana padega...'

Originally posted by: manatated

NAUTANKIIIII !!!!!! 😆

isska jawab tujhe aaram se aur achchese deti hoon baadmein! 😈

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

ooh ooh ooh ooh 😆 Happy 2010 !!!! 😃🥳

Sorry yaar, last couple of months was too busy. IF ke liye bilkul bhi time nahin thi 😭, isliye paanch updates ki comments ek saath de rahi hoon. first of all, Love the sweet scenes b/w raj and naina.

Lekin naina ki dream se pareshaan hoon. I hope no tragedy happens. Loved arjun-vishal commentary:

Arjun bich me hi bol pada:- "Yeh kya kah rahe hain aap sir...??? Sham ka anchal kaise lehra sakta hai...??? Sham saree pahnta hai kya...???"

Vishal:-" Kyoun jab aaj kal ki Radha jeans pahan sakti hain toh kya Sham saree nahin pahan sakta...!!!" 🤣

Aur woh QSQT scene? Mindblowing! 👏 👏 👏

isiliye dono bhaag gaye...gana gaya...pahadi k upar ghar banaya...!!! yahan tak ki jis rashmi ko khana banana nahi aata tha us ne khana banana bhi sikh liya...lekin itni mehnat kar k baad bhi kya hua...dhai ghante k baad un dono k baapon ne un dono ko goli maar di...!!! sab se bura toh yeh tha ki Raj ne Rashmi k hathon ka banaya hua khana bhi nahi kha paya...bechara...!!!"

mein toh Arjun ki fan bangayi hoon

Naina jee itni kam umr ki hain...toh voh kaise apne uncle k uncle k umr k aadmi se shaadi karegi...??? daal me kuch toh hai hi na sir...!!!" too good!!!

Fantastic!!! 😆 😆 😆

Voh nandini ki flashback thoda confusing tha 😕, ankur aur arjun mein bhi kaafi confusion hai , batasakti hai ki kisko kaun actor play kar rahe hai?

arati

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi Priya.... Happy new year dear 🤗Hiiii Neelu...happy new year dear🤗
Awesome update.... 👏 thanqqqqq😃
Naina realised her love or Raj.... ab is baat ko voh realize nahi karegi toh main story aage kaise badhayungi...😉
They shared their first lis..woww..how romanic.... 😳 That scene ws superb...Naina felt protective when Raj is around ger... he he he...raj aas paas hoga toh sabhi girls yahi feel karenge yaar...😆 😆 😆
Naina confessed..finally...now waiing for Raj's reply... 😳voh bhi jald aayega...😆 😆 😆
Lovely update..mindblowing... 👏Thanqqqqqqqqq so much Neelu...😃

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Priya dear 😊 jee kahiye...princess😃

Wow !!!!!!!!! kya update hain yaar? matlab tumhe samajh me nahi aaya kya...😭

I loved every bit in this update?fabulous part, 👏 👏 👏cute n romantic one, mujhe saare RN ke scenes bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya 👏 👏 👏 👏, ooohhhooo...is ka matlab tumhe samajh me aaya magar mujhe samajh me nahi aaya😆 thanqqq...thanqqq...thanqqq...

but why so short 😆 😆 😆 ab princess gayi...jhaad me...kyoun ki main tumhari itni peetai karne wali hun ki...kya batayun...!!! kuch dino se long uds de de kar halat kharab hai upar se tumhe yeh ud short lag raha hai...😭 😭 😭

maine short kaha iske liye tu mujhe galiyan mat dena?this all because of u kyunki tumne itni beautiful ud di thi (as our new year gift) ki mera dil maange more ,so u see basically its not my fault agar mujhe ye ud short laga to 😉ah...is ka matlab yeh tumhara preparation tha...mujhe jhaad pe chadhane se pahle...phir thik hai...lekin niche Raj ko khada rakhna...varna mujhe catch-out koun karega...😆 😆 😆

Lagtha hain naina ki balon par bhi raj ka jadu chalgaya..they r listening to his baat only n they r not ready to leave him isiliye shirt ki buttons se ulajgaye ?its really a beautiful scene 👏 👏sahi kaha boss...naina har ek dhadkan aaj kal sirf raj ki baat maante hain toh phir naina k baal kya chiz hain...😉 😉 😉

Finally u revealed nainas raaz,Naina came to jaygad to search her father,ohhh to naina ke father ki life pehle se danger main hain ,I liked that chor aur heeron wali baat n mujhe pura yakeen hain ki nainas father is fine n she will meet her father so soon kyun ki raj ne kaha na to wo jaroor hoga, achha...??? tumhe kafi yakeen hai...😆 😆 😆

naina ne kitne sweetly poocha can I hug u ?.n after that the way raj hugged her ?.its so cute raj kuch bhi kare us fans ko toh cute lagta hi hai...😛 😛 😛

The wishing scene is also so nice..but scene ke bich main wo glasses kaha se aagaye 😆 😆 😆 finally naina realized her dil ki baat arre yaar...yeh ishq hai...kahin se bhi kuch bhi aa sakta hai...tum thoda dimag laga kar toh socho....😛 😛 😛

Raj ne naina aur mallika ki dosti bhi karadi?n its so funny ki kasie naina raj ko gudd khilane ke liye ready hogayi n its so cute scene how raj ne naina ka haath pakdkhe mallika ko gudd khilaya varna raj ko gudd khana padta na...😆 😆 😆

Raj ki jahan to sach main bahut khubsurat hain,the song is so nice n its perfect for the situation their ride to the hill ?its so magical,u have written it so beautifully achha...tum kahti ho toh maan leti hun...😆 😆 😆

Naina to pehle bahut dargayi when she is at the top of the hill?lekin jab raj ne usko apne karreb kincha apne seene ki taraf ?naina felt secured in his arms n enjoyed the view infront of her ab raj sath rahega toh koi bhi ladki kahin se bhi jump kar sakta hai...phir bhi naina toh sirf us hill par thi...😆 😆 😆

Raj n naina shared a passionate kiss also ,bich main raj ne ye kya dekha 😕 😕 😕 plz reveal it soon hmmm...try karungi...😕 😕 😕

Naina ne raj ko apni dil ki baat kahi,waiting to know what raj will do now batati hun na...thoda sa wait kar lo...😆 😆 😆

Thank u for such a wonderful part priya 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 n thanxxx to u too...for d sweet, encouraging n jhaad pe chadane wale comments...😃 😃 😃

Lrl joke is hilarious,I could not stop laughing huda is so funny 🤣 🤣 🤣 koi shaq...😆 😆 😆

Priya dear what a long note before the update of yours. 😆 😆 😆sach main kitna dhukh bhari daastan hain tumhari, kitna kuch tolerate karna padraha hana tujh...really u r such a big nauntanki, 😆 😆 😆 arre meri dil ki baat zubaan par aa gayi aur tumhe yeh nautanki lagg rahi hai. hey bhagwan yeh sunn ne se pahle...main marr kyoun nahi gayi...😆 😆 😆

tu ek baat sach sach bata,tu really darthi hain meri dhamkiyon se,if its true then I am so happy ,pata hain kyun ab lioness ko mere baton se darlage to isse badhi khushi ki baat kya hosaktha hain mere liye 😉 haan haan...pinjre k ander se sher ko toh koi bhi peanuts phenk sakta hai...ek baar samne toh aa karo dekho...voh halat karungi ki tum sach me kahne lagogi ki main sirf naam ki nahi bal ki kaam ki bhi Lioness hun...😆 😆 😆

Chalo ab jaldi se next part ke bare main socho nahi to tumhe pata hai na main kitni khatarnaak hun ...janti hun...bass vohi karne ja rahi hun...😃 😃 😃