Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152 - Page 105

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

jug jug jiyo priya beti!! itne achhe update ke liye tum jo maangogi milega.. 😆 1 min 1 min...aphle tumhare pair toh chu lene do...!!! ok...ab meri maang RESERVED raha...dimag laga kar sochungi...us k baad mangungi...😆 😆 😆

awesome update 😊 😊 Thanqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq Mehendi...😃

kaun kehta hai tumhe romantic update likhne nahi aate 😉 tumhe nahi lagta...yeh ud thoda aur romantic ho sakta tha...matlab kuch toh kami thi...

naina ki saansein tez ho gayi...kiss ho gaya aur i love u bhi..aur kya chahiye 1 sweet romance mein
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a round of applause also... 👏 ab itni sari taliyaan mili hain toh main toh 7th floor se jump maar sakti hun...ba-sarte ki niche raj khada ho...😆 😆 😆...nyways...thanqqqqq so much mehendi...😃 😃 😃

raj ka naina ke baalon ko suljhana...naina ke baalon ka raj ke button mein ulajhana...so cute 😊 😊
and then raj showing b'ful forest from a hilltop...and they so close...good..love is in the air 😉 😆 😆 but whats with that body??...and the vision raj had??
hope it doesnt separate them anyhow 😭 😭 main toh yahi try karungi na ki RN alag na ho...par mere khurafati dimag ka koi bharosha nahi hai...😆 😆 😆

huda ki to kolkata ki sair ho gayi aur stupidity ke test mein wo 1st bhi aa gaya 😆koi shaq...😆 😆 😆 😆
nice update 😊 Thanqqqq😃
waiting for next 😃
mehendi 😊


A Very Happy New Year also 😊Happy new year to too dear...😃

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya Hiiiii suhana How r u??? f9...aur tum...??? achhi hi hogi...jiju jo hain khayal rakhne k liye...😛

Update se pehle itna lamba warning note kyun de rakha tha...???😆😆..It was too funny n typical Priya.😉lamba note dena pada...kya karun...sab ko lagta hai ki mera dimag kharab hai...parr sach toh yeh hai ki mere doston ne mera dimag kharab kar diya hai...!!! aur ande aur tamatar k bare me main sach kah rahi hun yaar...trust me...😆 😆 😆

Tum to bekaar mein hi sochti ho ki tum romantic updates nahin de sakti..Itna accha to likha hai.It was very sweet n romantic😛kahaan yaar...??? pahli baat likhne k baad writer ko lagna chahiye ki yeh ud achha tha ya nahi...!!! mujhe khud is me kami nazar aati hai...aur tum toh achha kahogi hi...dosti ka farz jo nibhana hai...😛 😛 😛

Naina ke baal ki wajah se hi sahi par kuch romantic to hua unke beech mein..😉sahi hai boss...😆

Naina ne Raj ko apne Jaigarh aane ka maksad bataya..Such a tragic story..😭😭

Bechari apne papa ko dhoondh rahi hai jo accident mein bach gaye the..

Mere khyaal se in sab ke peeche Vikram n Gaurav hi hain.😡😡haan...yahi dono mahan aatma hain in sab k piche...raj bhi yahi doubt kar raha hai...

But Raj ne usko bahut support kiya..Usne usko ek vishvaas de diya hai ki uske papa zinda hain😛

Raj ne Naina ki friendship Mallika se kara hi di😛😛yupe...😆 😆

Kitni romantic jagah wo le gaya Naina ko😉😛..The song was perfect for the situation.😛Naina bhi apne ko rok nahin paayi n den they shared a magical kiss.It wud really help them to cement their relationship..😛yeah...par main kis liye hun....😆 😆

But itna acche moment ke beech mein Raj ne kise khun mein dooba dekha.thoda sa tym lagega...phir pakka bata dungi...😃 😃

Aakhir Naina ne usse apne pyaar ka izhaar kar hi diya...Is baat pe mujhe ek gana yaad aaya..I hope tumhe accha lage

"Tum tu ek aaina ho dil mein jo hai labon par,
Tum ko samjha hai maine ab tere paas reh kar,
Teri palkon tale hai pyaar ka aashiyana,
Dheere dheere hua hai dil tumhara diwana,
Mera humsaya ho tum

Dhup mein saya ho tum,tumse khushiyan hai payi
Dil ne aitbaar kiya hai tum pe humrahee,
Thoda sa pyar hoa hai thoda hai baki" wowwwwwwwwwwwww nice song dear...mujhe sach me baht achha laga...thanqqqqq😃 😃 😃

Dekhe ab Raj kya karta hai??? vohi karegajo main us se karwayungi...😆

LRL joke was too funny..Huda se aur kuch expect bhi nahin kiya tha..😉😆😆yeh baat toh hai...😆 😆

Do update soon

Bye

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Great update👏Thanxxxx a lot Nisha...😃 😃 😃

Naina ke baloon ki uljan suljate hue raj aur naina dono ek dusre mein kho gaye...😳yeah...yahan parr akele jo hain...koi disturbed karnewala bhi toh nahi tha na...😉

Naina ne raj se kaha ki who Jaigarh aapne dad ko dhundha ne aayi hai...she believes that he is alive and in Jaigarh...😭

Raj understands that naina is fighting a very painful battle😭 and tries to give her his full support. Who naina ka vishwas banaye rakhne ki koshish karta hai. Naina feels confident that with raj by her side she will complete her mission. raj ka farz bhi toh banta hai na...after all naina ka husband hai yaar...😉

Finally Raj ne naina ki dosti Kamini se karva di. 😉kamani nahi MALLIKA😛

Raj naina ko kitni khoobsurat jagah par le jata hai...and even though naina is afraid of heights she feels secure in Raj's arms.

Itni romantic jagah mein Naina bhi apne ko rok nahin paayi n den they shared a passionate kiss. bahak gaye bichare...😛

Naina confesses that she loves raj...😳yupe...parr raj ka abhi tak baki hai...😉

Par itne romantic moment ke beech mein Raj ne itna daravna sapna dekha...usne kise khun mein dooba dekhathoda sa tym de do...phir batata hun...😃

waiting to know raj's reaction...please continue soon.

Originally posted by: tanushree.panda

hii priya,Hiiii Tanu...😃

ud was too romantic par end mein yeh tragedy kaise hogaya par atleast naina said it. yupe...parr abhi tak Raj ne kuch nahi kaha...hope ki jaldi hi sabb kuch thik ho jaye...😃

bohot achhe moment par stop kardiya. Thanqqqqq😆

waiting for ur next ud please ud asap.

Originally posted by: danish1

awesome updates. Thanxxxxx 😃

what was that which rajveer sees thru his closed eyes ,a body wet with blood..............a sort of thing .i couldn't get it.

i guess itl'l b clear in next update. ahhh...thoda sa tym hai abhi is suspence ko reveal hone me...😃

take care😃

Originally posted by: sun_423

hii priya..Happy New Year.. Hiiii surya...happy new year to u too dear😃

😊 sorry i'am commenting late.....priya i read tere naina ff's part which you have recently posted... that was soo sweet... romantic..cute.. Thanqqqqqqqqq Darl...😃

raj-naina are too good together.. but then yeh kya what was the necessity for raj to have that weird thoughts about blood & all.. they became a kawaab mein haddi between the two of them... na na...aise mat socho yaar...main kabab me haddi nahi banayungi...bass kabab me aage koi haddi ya phir hadda na aaye...usi ka intezaam kar rahi hun...😆 😆 😆

but i'am glad that at least naina has confessed her feelings to raj.. raj knows what is running on naina's mind & heart, that's what i'am happy about.. i hope raj confesses soon too.. raj confess toh karega aur jaldi hi karega...parr style thoda sa alag hoga...😛 😛 😛

then we would get to see some sweet moments between the two of them..... anyway very well written part.. keep up the good work going....

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👏 Thanqqqqqqq so much dear...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

waise dear why do i feel that because of the thought which raj has got in his mind, about the blood & all, raj kudh ko jaan booch kar durr karega kudhko naina se.. may be he will hurt naina & in-turn hurt himself.. but shayad he is doing it for naina's safety.. well this is just my guess... now i don't know if i'am right..😊ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆...tum guess karo...parr mujh par yakeen bhi karo ki main RN ko kabhi alag nahi karungi...aur yeh pakka promise hai....😃 😃 😃

priya please continue your ff's soon.. waiting for all your 3 ff's eagerly..😊jo hukum sarkaar....😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: preet09

hi priya......
i just read ur fanfic
it was just great
it was really emotional at sometime but due to raj it becomes very funny also
like d it alot
plz update it soon
luv preet

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

awesome , superb n excellent. 👏 👏 👏kya baat hai yaar...is baar toh tune kuch jyada hi tarif kar di meri... 😛 😛 😛

Tune aur maine ek saath apne fics me i love u bulwayaa na heroine se. yeah...chal jhappi pate hain...

That was a cute surprise for me because i didn't expect that ur going to make Naina confess about her feelings. ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆...

Raj ne jis tarah se Naina k baalon me se vo nikaalne ki koshish ki fir dono baar baar jis tarah kareeb aa rahe the just loved this part yaar. really....!!! thanqqqqqq😃 😃 😃...par sach kahun toh voh scene thoda FILMY tha...nahi...😆

Mallika se abhi bhi Naina ko dar lag raha tha par Raj ne bhi kitne acche dhang se Naina ka dar door kar diya aur i think just like Raj, Mallika Naina k saath bhi ghul mil jaayegi na. arre raj sath hai na...sab kuch sahi hoga...😉 😉 😉

Naina k Jaygarh aane ki vajah batane aayi thi Naina Raj ko ye baat Raj ko kaise samajh me aayi ye mujhe samajh me nahi aayi. Par jo baat Naina ne Raj ko batayi that was clearly confusing. arre prv parts me likha toh tha na ki naina ne raj se kaha tha ki voh us se kuch imp baat karne aayi hai...aur raj ne pahle hi kaha tha ki voh us ki help karega...isiliye raj ko pata chal gaya ki naina apne makshad k bare me batane aayi hai...!!! aur rahi baat naina k father ki...toh jab voh milenge...toh khud hi sab kuch kuch clear kar denge na...😃

Naina apne father ko dhoondhne aayi hai yahan aur us ki mom ki death ho chuki hai that's sad. Par i know Raj aaram se dhoondh lega us k dad ko. arre sasur jee hain us k...😆

Horse riding waala scene aur dono k rock pe jaane waala scene bahut accha tha. Us par Raj k dialogue aur mast bana rahe the us ko. Phir jab Raj Naina ko uper le jaa k vo scene dikhata hai that's really awesome. thanqqqqq dear...😃 😃 😃

Ab to Naina bhi apne aap ko rok nahi paayi aur us ne vo keh diya jo Raj bhi samajhta hai, par achanak ye sapna kyoun aa gaya Raj ko?
Kuch honewaala hai kya yahan? kuch nahi meri jaan...baht kuch honewala hai...aur jo honewala hai us k baad meri peetai pakki hai tum sab se....😆 😆 😆

update soon yaar 11 dino se tum ne koi fic update nahi kiya hai.😡 😡 😡 sorry yaar...baht sare prob me fass gayi thi...😭 😭 😭