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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: spln
hey bhoomi, i duno how but i missed like 6 parts worth of update n got to read them all together now hun....the track is fab, yet another out of the box concept, n yet so simply possible, it was good to have ended reading at my break point where they developed the start of some bond, it will go a long way i guess...hope to catch up more in time from the further parts...

ps: think i forgot to mention....loved the banner for the fic....i duno how many better banners i have seen on the forum...great job!

Hi Naseem,

U missed few parts to read before..but i know how much busy u may be... u have two storyies onur hand to complete yet how u manage to reply and read i dont know girl... u r amazing in that ... So read now and u liked the track... its simple and I dont know how much justice i coudl do.. i like the concept and i tried...Its a short story and hpe u like how its ends... Wil be positng the part in few secs...

Hey u liked the Banner... yup I made it..and I dont knwo how to use photoshop only a few tools i know. will learn more.. and hopefuly better work will come up... thanks dear for appreciatign it...makes me feel so nice ....tc Naseem..luv u..

Bhoomi

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

oh man an hour ago left a comment n now ur done with wrapping up the fic,...gosh boomi ur fast...n yeh i love the way u ended the change in mind had to happen but u tok it all very well kudos girl, loved reading the fic!

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Hi Bhoomi

will be back!

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Hey....Fabulous ending to a Superb story....!

Y dont you get into writiting for short films.....Or episodic shows....hahaha!!!

Reading your fics reminds me of a show that used to come on Zee tv earlier...It was called Rishtey -The bond of luv ....It used to have 5-6 episode stories.....Very sweet, touching and sensible stories...! I used to luv watching the show...They too used to tackle subjects like u do in your fics..!!

Waiting 4 the Next Story from your stable !!!

Luv,

Vandu

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

oh my god bhoomi such a beauuuuuuuuutiful ending to a bautiful story....i'm still crying 😭...will reply in detali later..i'm not in a position to say anything...

niti

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Himani

@mad_lovee

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

hey bhoomi...how u get wonderful ideas to write such gud stories...hats off to u..

hey pardon me as i m writin so late..as i was quite busy with sme stuff and then i went to my nani ma 's house for 2-3 days..n aftr cumin bck i read ur story...u r just mindblowing...i just love the way u express feelings of the characters:-) I wud loved to see u as a script writer of a big banner movie one day.

Best wishes n lots of love,

Himani

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

i'm back to reply...one of the best of ur stories very simple yet unique....so meet and yogini r together finally..i think it was beautiful wen meet proposed yogini and the way he sang 4 her was perfect ..i'm happy he loves her 4 wat she is...wish them happy married life..this story takes me back another story of urs advaika....whichshowed the strong side of woman rather than showing that she breaks down...hope u wirte another one soooooooooooooooooon ...will be waiting 4 another one..

luv u loaaaaaads and loaaaaaaaaaaaaaads and loaaaaaaaaaaaaads

niti

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sanjh

@nisisanjh

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

The story has ended ??????????????????????? so early ......😔 wanted to read some more parts with beautiful shyri lines... those were too cute n light this time but very apt for the situation...dil ki baat ko dlg ke wajay aise shyri type karke kitni cutely likha tumne ... even loved d lyric of d song ...

whn meet says na ke he is actually feels gud that buys rjcted her before coz they have givn him d opprtunity to be that one spe prson of her life.... I liked it soooo much .... anothr sweet story frm u.....just like my Bhoomi...
luv n hugs dear

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

another mind blowing fic. liked the way yogini told the truth to meet. then her talks abt life. then the reason why she was upset with meet all was so sweet. I just loved the fic. waiting for another fic

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: spln
oh man an hour ago left a comment n now ur done with wrapping up the fic,...gosh boomi ur fast...n yeh i love the way u ended the change in mind had to happen but u tok it all very well kudos girl, loved reading the fic!

Hi Naseem,

HEeeheh My updates r soemtimes too quick.. i cant help it.. as most of the times especially for my short stories , the whole fic is already written completed am just posting it each day ... 😃 .. Am glad Naseem to liked the story and the way it ended.. already in the intro had mentioned its not more than 10 parts...all kind words of encoruagment from U means so much.. .. Am glad u enjoyed reading it... 😃.. tc luv u

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: togepe30
Hey....Fabulous ending to a Superb story....!

Y dont you get into writiting for short films.....Or episodic shows....hahaha!!!

Reading your fics reminds me of a show that used to come on Zee tv earlier...It was called Rishtey -The bond of luv ....It used to have 5-6 episode stories.....Very sweet, touching and sensible stories...! I used to luv watching the show...They too used to tackle subjects like u do in your fics..!!

Waiting 4 the Next Story from your stable !!!

Luv,

Vandu

Hi Vandu dear,

Am happy u liked reading the fic, it was TP only.. eheeh me and into writign short films..ya yaar am not that good.. timepass keliye and to let out my workign mind into wrodsi do all this..warna Still so much more i have to learn I know... Episodic shows... haai I wish someone starts it again...I use to enjoy Zee Rishtry even recently when there was Tv strike gogin they showed the repeat rerun of it..and it was so much fun to see those sweet sotries... I dont know how much i can..but i wish if soem of these turn into short film.. it woudl be fun rather than looooooooooooooonggg epicss... with senseless entertainment🤢..

Next from me.. areey Ab tak no concept in mind.. jaise concept ayee I usuallly get excited to write..and more anxious to make u all read bhi..lol.. lets see when mood brings back me here posting... luv u lots tc...

Bhoomi

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