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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: liya16

oh my god bhoomi such a beauuuuuuuuutiful ending to a bautiful story....i'm still crying 😭...will reply in detali later..i'm not in a position to say anything...

tc

niti

HI Niti ,

dear am glad u liked the storya nd the way it ended.. tried ot make the end as the story straight to the point😉... but why u r crying... ?? ohh hooo the story ended on a postive note... is it as it ended... or with happiness of the couple in love... anywaysone thign for sure i can say U really have pushed so much more in this ff to keep posting.. there were very less replies but even one reply makes me absolutely thirlled to post the next part.. so after gettign ur reply i woudl gear up to post the next part... luv u for all these quick replies... and the encoruagment i got from it... cheers This story is Ours... hope i can write more and better ones..

luv u tc...

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: liya16
i'm back to reply...one of the best of ur stories very simple yet unique....so meet and yogini r together finally..i think it was beautiful wen meet proposed yogini and the way he sang 4 her was perfect ..i'm happy he loves her 4 wat she is...wish them happy married life..this story takes me back another story of urs advaika....whichshowed the strong side of woman rather than showing that she breaks down...hope u wirte another one soooooooooooooooooon ...will be waiting 4 another one..
luv u loaaaaaads and loaaaaaaaaaaaaaads and loaaaaaaaaaaaaads

niti

Hi Niti,

U back and me back here to reply ont his as well... Ur excimtent coudl be seen.. am so glad u liked reading this ff... one of the best stories I have written awwww thast so sweet of U... I hope I can continue to writign some more and some differnt ones.. with a lot of postive attitude.... Yup Meet and Yogini r to be together..as atleast in fictions lets get more of happiness...😳.. U liked the way Meet poropsed the way i wrote that segment..the song.. cute one.. ..

Advika is a story very clsoe to my heart.. i mean there have been veyr few storeis where i am confused and tensed wodnerign may be readers may nto agree with my point of view of the charcter.. btu when i get such response from u my friend and reaers... it really makes me relax so much.. Ya i guess in todays world women who break down r easily more prone to more exploitatins and the sympathy is given with an added feelgin that U r a burden.. its better to feel strogn and shwo strong.. atleast to urself.. as U knwo what u go throguh more than anyone else.. self pity can never do antyhing... it may make oneself mor eweak..

Another one.. ohh i wish I can.. uptil now no concept yet in my mind.. i will try to see if my mood give me soem thought soem concept... surely willl write when tehe conetp strikes.. till then u tc dear...

loads of luv to u too Niti.... felt touched and wonderful by ur comments and replies... thanks so much.. appreciate it a lot... loads of hugs... tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

hey bhoomi...how u get wonderful ideas to write such gud stories...hats off to u..

hey pardon me as i m writin so late..as i was quite busy with sme stuff and then i went to my nani ma 's house for 2-3 days..n aftr cumin bck i read ur story...u r just mindblowing...i just love the way u express feelings of the characters:-) I wud loved to see u as a script writer of a big banner movie one day.

Best wishes n lots of love,

Himani

Hi Himani dear,

How I get these ideas.... yaar ek choti si bhi jhalak of a particular emotions makes me to run my mind into a whole graph of an individual and the way things cna turn and the simple way it can be called a love story of two... adn i try that... if its soemthign i have written on.. i can excited to write.. thats how these stories coem up.. with readers friends as wonderful as u all..my mood is good and in flow to write.... 😃

Its ok dear.. busy ho saktey hai.. and nani ke yehan.wow...!!! mast mazaa ataa hoga na... So nice to know comign back u read the whole story..heheh mujhe script writer...😆 i guess thought okey shokey hain but language pe command cant say.. mereko door se hi nikaldengey.. I want to work only under ur banner one day😉😃luv u lots. dear..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: nisisanjh
The story has ended ??????????????????????? so early ......😔 wanted to read some more parts with beautiful shyri lines... those were too cute n light this time but very apt for the situation...dil ki baat ko dlg ke wajay aise shyri type karke kitni cutely likha tumne ... even loved d lyric of d song ...

whn meet says na ke he is actually feels gud that buys rjcted her before coz they have givn him d opprtunity to be that one spe prson of her life.... I liked it soooo much .... anothr sweet story frm u.....just like my Bhoomi...
luv n hugs dear

Hi Sara dear,

The story had to end naa.. intro mey hi kaha tha not more than 10 parts... 😉 early kahan.. i am use to writign 4/5 parts.. yeh to 9 parts they😲 and I wondered how to cut or edit but phir socha jaando.. cant read it again full....😆main khud bore hojati hun to read again.. i never understnad how u do 😉😆...shayri ehehh haan maine thode hi likhey .. only few were nice i guess.. lets see mood ke sath hi shayari mey woh baat atii hai.... lyrics of the song..i am very eager to hear abotu the chocie of song. so glad u liked.. i dont hear english songs myself that much. but i tried to adapt few which am aware and i liek.. so this is amogn the few i hear a dlike...myself..😆

oh ya that dialogue... heheeh I can imagine how u must have felt reading it.....it felt sweet story hope to continue with few more..but tillnow no conept no idea stirking..lets se.. aww ur Bhoomi... Urr Bhoomi isnt as sweet and cute as U r... 😳😃👏

luv u lots. dear... tc and have a grea time..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: golu_1677
another mind blowing fic. liked the way yogini told the truth to meet. then her talks abt life. then the reason why she was upset with meet all was so sweet. I just loved the fic. waiting for another fic

HI Golu dear,

So happy tht u liked this fic as well... it was light na...😉 not much of drama and twists or shock..😆..yup Yogini is very confidence and I guess that helpes her to be so optimistic and quite happy too with whatever she has.. to sum it..satisfied...Glad u liked all the process of the script...

I dont know when the next one coming... but as idea strikes i will try and post.. uptil now nothign on my mind...tc dear..luv u ..

Bhoomi

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Nimmi

@msuns

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

yaar...first of all...let me say sorry for replying after sooooo long....i was truly busy and couldn't get a chance to read before...but today I read it...and it worked like a sunshine for me...thank u soooo much dear for bringing back the positiveness....it feels so gud to read such a positive story...simply loved it....God bless u dear...humesha aise hi dusro ke life enlighten karte rehna...just like Yogini...

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: msuns
yaar...first of all...let me say sorry for replying after sooooo long....i was truly busy and couldn't get a chance to read before...but today I read it...and it worked like a sunshine for me...thank u soooo much dear for bringing back the positiveness....it feels so gud to read such a positive story...simply loved it....God bless u dear...humesha aise hi dusro ke life enlighten karte rehna...just like Yogini...

Hi Nimmi dear,

Sorry nahi bolneka dear.. i can understnad its fine.. U felt like reading as u knew its posted makes me sooooo happy ...😃 It worked like sunshine..thats a great compliment i hope i could add that 1 % atleast would mean so much to me... Postiveness to dalna hi tha..khir dost kinki hun.. I have such wonderful spirited friends i have to be doing ROCK n ROll....😉 Nimmi dear.. i am touched by ur sweet words... hope we all stay close in eachothers heart like this..and may all our lives be beautufl and with lots of happiness..

luv u loads n tc.. dear...

BHoomi

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Nimmi

@msuns

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

You deserve it dear...I forgot to mention one thing...

"I am among the most beautiful females... Though I can't say only me? I can say I am beautiful... I won't say attractive, as that's something I am not wanting to do as well? attract anyone? I would probably attract just one... Whom I will love?"

These are the most favourite lines of mine...I mean all her words r my fav...but this one is truly my words...what I always feel...be happy with yourself...be confident when you know you are right...and be frank if u know u r right...just loved the girl...she really rocks....

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: msuns
You deserve it dear...I forgot to mention one thing...

"I am among the most beautiful females... Though I can't say only me? I can say I am beautiful... I won't say attractive, as that's something I am not wanting to do as well? attract anyone? I would probably attract just one... Whom I will love?"

These are the most favourite lines of mine...I mean all her words r my fav...but this one is truly my words...what I always feel...be happy with yourself...be confident when you know you are right...and be frank if u know u r right...just loved the girl...she really rocks....

Hi Nimmi,

OO u like this dialogue or shoudl I say Yogini's thought process.. actually her charishma is in her will power nad her confidence self and this dialogues tells a lot of wanting to be loved btu not wantign to let anybody be that special one... So thats the little thought I tried to brign from these words.. Am so happy u liked this one.... 😃 Yogini Rocks.. and u too Nimmi.. thats what Yogini may be wantign to say to U...

luv u lots

Bhoomi

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Hi Bhoomi,

I loved the Hindi dialogue/thoughts u wrote in this story. They were so true and made the story that much interesting.

I truely in awe of ur skills! 👏

-Sona

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sparikh
Hi Bhoomi,

I loved the Hindi dialogue/thoughts u wrote in this story. They were so true and made the story that much interesting.

I truely in awe of ur skills! 👏

-Sona

Hi Sona,

I am glad that u liked the hindi thoguhts verses in the story.. I couldnt resist from including them in it.. Happy to know that made the story interestign for ur reading.. hope u enjoy ur time here... Aww I am touched that u feel I have some skills whcih are appreciatated ... so swet of u ... thanks for ur encouragment.. 😊

tc
Bhoomi

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

reopened at the request of the author...

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