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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: spln
hey bhoomi...wohooo another one from u....was waiting for a start....girl u pull me away with ur themes theya re so totally from anyone's life so simple and yet so strong in their intent....this is yet abnother one of them i guess...will be waiting for u to unroll!

HI Naseem,

Another one from me... soemtimes I wonder u all must be wondering .. yeh kabhi to dimaag ko araam dey.. if not her's aatleast ours...lol... Theme.. I guess if there is a concept then i get eager to write it... and the parts or story forms in mind fast.. concept or theme is the base for me to feel like startign ... Its simple.. i odnt know.. i feel anyone shodul feel like relating to it.. .. hope u njoy this one..

luv u..tc

Bhoomi

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Hi Bhoomi,

Awesome part, not sure, what I like more, the para with stories or the 2 line shayaris, they are so good, you look like a born poet

So there was some fishy past about Meet/Meena, making Yogini all skecptic about marying him...

Yogini's mom like all moms so typical, that line, '30 ki hojaegi', is so typical, how can ii be a girl;s fault, if the right match never came to her in her 29 years of living, she can't stop her life for that can she? but thats what our society is made up....sad but true

Loads of courage for your Yogini....she needs it....

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Jodubai
Hi Bhoomi,

Awesome part, not sure, what I like more, the para with stories or the 2 line shayaris, they are so good, you look like a born poet

So there was some fishy past about Meet/Meena, making Yogini all skecptic about marying him...

Yogini's mom like all moms so typical, that line, '30 ki hojaegi', is so typical, how can ii be a girl;s fault, if the right match never came to her in her 29 years of living, she can't stop her life for that can she? but thats what our society is made up....sad but true

Loads of courage for your Yogini....she needs it....

Hi Jo,

Am so glad u enjoy reading those lines, poet ehehe I enjoy writing them and my readers have always

asked me to include them , its fun to read so I do keep them adjoining in between. So happy u liked them...

Yup so now U know the two neighbours..:) Past of Meet.. hmm hope u enjoy reading Jo.

Ya, Moms, this is about the kind of talking I have heard around , and its so so very common all around. 29 years and how can just oen thing wash away all the other aspects of life I really cant understnad... Sad but true face of society and I guess with times a lot of change will happen and hope all turns out good.!!

Loads of courage for Yogini..i hope u like Yogini and her spirit. Someone U can feel postive as u read her story.. i hope so...

Thanks jo for ur comments and encoruaging words...love to hear from U.

tc
Bhoomi

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

another fantastic update...i liked the spirit of yogini ..she represents the modern but traditional strong woman....i really hope people and society don compare age and marital status of women and look down upon them...i want to know more abt meet...wat has happend in his past tht yogini doesn't want to marry him..

update soooooon

niti

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sanjh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Loved the first part Bhoomi ... though i was a bit confused thinking..wheres d story going ..... what bhoomi is actually trying to show ......but i loved yoginis perception n thoughts abt the whole marrge stuffs.. she dreams exctly the way like we all do ... n whn her mothr worries so much that she shudnt cross 30 ... i was like ...gosh ...lol... but yogini is cool ...i wonder she still hoping n waiting ....dreams r very much there with her , didnt gt fade ... very inspiring haan ...hehe... those hindi lines were nice ...as i said very inspiring ...

2nd part says a lot .. lets c, wht happns next..hope yogini melts slowly... hey..i laughed reading those poetic line..meri zindagi savri huri hai,,dafaan karo yeh khyal.. was too funny yaar... n mr. Meet reminded me of ,''meet na mila re manka ''.... need to know more abt him ... so, waiting for d next part bhoomi ji ..... n yes, jhappis for u ....

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binita

@binidoshi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Hi bhoomi dear, gr8 u posted another ff....will wrap it up within 10 parts only ....aare yaar..even if u'd write 100+ parts..believe me none of us will be bored...but yup....u neither have the patience or inclination to write in a long ff...😆

Anyways coming to this one...surely hatke...really liked yogini's character....her dreams as a young girl n her matured outluk towards marriage as she grew older.....luks beyond marriage as the be it all in life....N even her birth mark....unfortunately there is so much of emphasis on the external apperance....and as we notice in many cases this outluk is frm the educated section of the society....

Btw liked the banner dear...luking frwd to reading the next part...

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: liya16
another fantastic update...i liked the spirit of yogini ..she represents the modern but traditional strong woman....i really hope people and society don compare age and marital status of women and look down upon them...i want to know more abt meet...wat has happend in his past tht yogini doesn't want to marry him..
update soooooon

niti

Hi Niti,

am glad u liked the part. So nice to kow u could sense the strogn spirit of Yogini... ya society will change hope so woman r treated better and equal without forcing them to take decision emotionally whcih always happens... Ya U will surelyget to know more of Meet.. Yogini doesnt want to marry him for very very simple things..whcih she has kept in heart from long... a feelign which is there inside her from long time of knowing him as fellow neighbour... .have updated next part.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: nisisanjh
Loved the first part Bhoomi ... though i was a bit confused thinking..wheres d story going ..... what bhoomi is actually trying to show ......but i loved yoginis perception n thoughts abt the whole marrge stuffs.. she dreams exctly the way like we all do ... n whn her mothr worries so much that she shudnt cross 30 ... i was like ...gosh ...lol... but yogini is cool ...i wonder she still hoping n waiting ....dreams r very much there with her , didnt gt fade ... very inspiring haan ...hehe... those hindi lines were nice ...as i said very inspiring ...

2nd part says a lot .. lets c, wht happns next..hope yogini melts slowly... hey..i laughed reading those poetic line..meri zindagi savri huri hai,,dafaan karo yeh khyal.. was too funny yaar... n mr. Meet reminded me of ,''meet na mila re manka ''.... need to know more abt him ... so, waiting for d next part bhoomi ji ..... n yes, jhappis for u ....

Hi Sara,

Am so glad Sara u r reading this one and enjoying as well.. heheh u were confused what am I upto hmmm so u liek Yogini here... ya she is so much like us.. but may be a more spirited one... dreams exactly the wya she does.. Isshh I better not reveal hehheheh... mothers talkign about 30 as hill formed or a huge storm coming .. its so very common... atleast I am yet to touch that mark.. but I hope my mom is chill about it... 😳.. So glad u r enjoying hte lines.. its funny soemtimes they sprung up and I feel nto to delet them...😆.. Zindagi one na... i was like hope kisiko ko paddhkey hassi aye like I too did.. its a more frustrated lines.. anger and feelgin weird.. sayign STOP IT nwo.....

Meet remined U abotu that wonderful song..wah wah... haiii hai.. i like that song.. hope u like the next comign up parts Sara dear.. tc.. luv to get ur comments..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: binidoshi
Hi bhoomi dear, gr8 u posted another ff....will wrap it up within 10 parts only ....aare yaar..even if u'd write 100+ parts..believe me none of us will be bored...but yup....u neither have the patience or inclination to write in a long ff...😆

Anyways coming to this one...surely hatke...really liked yogini's character....her dreams as a young girl n her matured outluk towards marriage as she grew older.....luks beyond marriage as the be it all in life....N even her birth mark....unfortunately there is so much of emphasis on the external apperance....and as we notice in many cases this outluk is frm the educated section of the society....

Btw liked the banner dear...luking frwd to reading the next part...

Hi Bini ,

Jaanu hehe U can read 100 parts as well.....😳 a kiss and jhappi to U.... U know I am like that .. I sometimes hti myself if I get into a longer story line...😲gettting shocked at myself.. heheh these short stories seem much fun for me and may be with my reaers as well.. . U felt its hatkey ..heheh areey Yogini is the centre here everyone likes her.. Nonee talkign abotu Meet😉😆... Ya educated people have too many things to worry and theybehave as if they r edcuated but they do thigns like an uneducated.. i mean asking huge sum od dowry and what not...

hey Bini so gla that u liked the Banner, hope u feel it did proper justice to the story... luv u lots tc dear...

Bhoomi

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

such a small 😭update...but it was fantastic...i'm eagerly waiting 4 deir talk...i think its really an unnecessary reason for yogini to not talk to meet..but sumwere i feel yoog likes meet..

luv

niti😳

ud soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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