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Posted: 16 years ago
hii minal!!
sorry 4 not repling!!
the 2 updts were great!
superb!!
cute mayur as always!!
continue when u want!
see yaa
love uuu
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Posted: 16 years ago

So dis is my nxt update is here….hope u all like it…the credit for dis update goes 2 minalpink,who guided me 2 write a romantic update…

Evng 7pm

Sharma house

Mayur bedrum….

Nupz sittin in da balcony n humming da song "chanda hai tu,mera suraj hai tu…"…..she was also slightly patting on da bulge….

Mayu came in da room after his office n sees nupz sittin in balcony n whispering song..he stands dere 4 15mins,listening n observing nupz…

He thinks all da past memories related 2 bth of dem..mayur…like,he 1st met wid nupur,deir dance on da song "khuda jaane",he proposed nupz,his marriage day..his 1st night wid nupz…

Suddenly he was inturrepted by nupz in his thots,standin in front of him n askin him…
N-kya hua mayank..?kya soch rahe ho?

M-kuch nahi jaan,bas un palo ko yaad jo humne saath bitaye..wo anmol pal jo tumne mere naam likhe….

N-jaise ki..?

M-(in teasin tone)-ummmm…jaise ki humaari 1st night(n he hug nupz 4m behind)😉

N-(blushin)-😳tum b na mayank,koi b baat lekar baith jate ho😳….chalo ab jaldi se change kar lo or khana kha lo,bahut thak gaye honge…..(caring tone 4 mayu)

M-(stretching his arms)-haa aaj to bahut thak gaya hu..bahut kaam tha aaj to….

Den all 3 have deir dinner n mom goes 2 her room n mayur 2 deir room..

Nupz go 2 change 4 her night dress n mayu lay down on bed…after changing,nupz cums in a nighty of light blue color..

While she was adjusting in bed along the side of mayu,mayu starts tokin in romantic mood….

M-nupur tumne us time baat ko badal di thi….

N-kab ?

M-jab maine 1st nite k bare me bola tha…

Tum itna sharmaati kyu ho mujhse abhi b…balki abhi to mere dusre baby ki mamaa ban ne wali ho…(mayu teasin nupz)..jo b ho par 1 baat achi hai kit tum sharmate hue bahut cute lagti ho…..😉

N-tum b na mayank….😳

M- mujhe to aaj b yaad hai humari 1st nite….

N-kya yaad hai(permittin him 2 tok bout dat..)

M-wahi tumhara sharmata hua,daraa hua sa cute sa face…mixd emotins me kya gazab ki khubsurat lag rahi thi tum…shaadi k jode me u were lukin gorgeous n heavenly lady…tumhaare is roop ko maine pehle baar dekha tha…upar se tumhaara sharmana,tumhaari khubsurati par char chand laga raha tha..

(nupz blushin 2 much)😳

N-tum b mayank us light golden sherwani me kya lag rahe the by god…

M-fir to jaise hi andar aakar tumhare pas aakar baitha,tumhari heartbeats itni badh gayi thi ki wo mujhe b sunayi de rahi thi..😆😆

N-pata hai mayank,1st nite k din,mai sach me bahut dari huui thi….maine aisa kbi is bare me nhi socha tha ki 1 din hum is situation me honge ki hum bol b nai paayenge 1 dusre se..sirf humari aankhe hi baat kareingi…..hum kabhi itna kareeb honge ki hawa b hume disturb karna nahi chahegi….sach me mayank us din mai to saatwe aasman par thi…

M-acha nupur sach me…(teasing her)😉….tumhari halat to us time dekhe layak thi jab mai dheere-2 tumhaare pass a raha tha..slowly slowly tumhaare lips k pass lips laa raha tha…jab maine 1st time tumhe lipkiss kiya tha..

Sach me nupur mujhe us din ehsaas hua tha shaadi or pyaar me kya relation hai…u r mine wali feelin mujhe bahut khush kar rahi thi…tum par sirf or sirf mera haq hai,mai hi tumhe chu sakta hu,mai hi tumhe us nazar se dekh sakta hu,tumhaare har 1 cheez,like tan man n dhan sirf meri hai..ye soch kar really mujhe bahut achca lag raha tha…

N-haan mayank,mai b apne aap ko us din bahut lucky feel kar rahi thi ki jis mayank sharma par itni ladkiya marti thi,wo sirf or sirf mera hai….m NUPUR MAYANK SHARMA….it feels gr8 mayank….😊.

After dat dey toked evrythng they dey done on dat nite..how nite jus passed away n how soon nxt day was started….dey thot dat "kash ye raat yahi ruk jaaye"

After dis romantic tok mayank come closer 2 nupur 2 gve her a lipkiss …closer n closer……..bt..

N-mayank sambhalkar…baby ko lag jayega….

M-arey yaar..(disgusted)😕…mai to apni is galti ko bhul hi gaya tha ki kisi raat maine ye galti b kari thi…..(teasing nupur)😉

N-achca to ye ab galti ho gayi…..by god mayank..jao mai tumse baat nai karti….😡

M-arey meri jaan mai to isliye galti keh raha hu kyuki ye mujhe raat me paas aane nai deti…dekho kitna dur hu tumse abhi b..(points 2wards d gap btwn dem)

N-koi baat nai dear..jab baby aa jayega,tab so jana mere close….

M-kaha nupur,fir to ye humaare beech me soyega…tum mujhpe kam or uspe jyaada dhyaan dogi…hai na..?

N-(teasing)-😉haan wo to hai…aakhir hai b to tumhaara part….

M-mai kahe deta hu….ki jab thoda bada ho jayega tab dusre room me soyega…nahi to uspe bura effect padega….

N-wo kyu…?

M-arey nupur ye b samjhaana padega ka kya…?arey jab hum raat me romance kareinge to baby kya sochega…uspe galat asar nahi padega……..?!

N-bahut aage ki soch rahe ho…abhi isi k bare me socho…samjhe….😳

To b continued…..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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waw waw kya bat hai good part scenes also good😊 mayank nupur conversations 😊i like it thanks lot for mention my name 😊u r very good writer than me thats y i m supporting u wnever i update so many my friends starts telling only plz update romantic one romantic one like that thats y i told u if u write romantic update all will like specially me i hope i will see more romantic update from u in future i will also write but i want from u r side also 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: minalpink100

rockyshanky

waw waw kya bat hai good part scenes also good😊 mayank nupur conversations 😊i like it thanks lot for mention my name 😊u r very good writer than me thats y i m supporting u wnever i update so many my friends starts telling only plz update romantic one romantic one like that thats y i told u if u write romantic update all will like specially me i hope i will see more romantic update from u in future i will also write but i want from u r side also 😊

hey tnx 4 u liked my update....i iwl try 2 gve sum gud romantic ones in future also....
bdw pls ans my 1 que..r arjun n rati in an affair in real life also..?
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Posted: 16 years ago
rockyshanky
i replied u r answer through pm read it & write one good cute update i m waiting 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: minalpink100

rockyshanky
i replied u r answer through pm read it & write one good cute update i m waiting 😊

hey sry minal..i ws nt ready wid da update....bt soon i wil post..
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Posted: 16 years ago
TOOO GOOOD
POOR NUPUR..LOL
EVERY TIME MAYANK TEASE HER..LOL!!
OK NICE PART
CONTINUE SOON
SEE YAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
HI FRIENDS NOW I M UPDATING MY NEXT PART
after lunch all are busy in their work means some are talking some are busy in sight seeing again mayank nupur got chance to stay together alone they are also going for sightseeing
mayank:- mrs sharma aap chup kyun ho
nupur:- nahi mayank ise koi bat nahi yaha ke cool nazara kitna achha hai na
mayank:- but usse achhi tum ho meri beautiful wife
nupur:- janti hu
then suddenly cool air start coming even nupur hairs are start flying
but this time mayank keep her hairs behind hairs then slowly start singing song for nupur

mayank:- sona sona lamha lamha
meri rahe tanha tanha akar mujhe tum thamlo
manjil teri dil ke rasta
mudke jara ab deklo isa milan fir ho na ho
sab kuch mera tum hi to ho ooooooo
then they are suddenly hug
bepnah pyar hai aaja tera intjar hai aja
sona sona lamha meri rahe tanha tanha
then they are moving from there slowly nupur kept her head on mayank's shoulder & mayank kept one hand on her waist also singing song
bichde bhi jo hum kabhi rasto me to sang sang rahenge sada
kadmo ki awaz sunke chlunga tumhe dundlunga sada( both r in eye lock)
bholi mohabbat ki ye khusboo ye hai hawa me pehli hui
chukar mujhe aaj mehsoos karlo o yadein meri manchali
aisa milan fir ho na ho sab kuch mera tum hi ho to
bepnah pyar hai aja tera intejar hai aaja ( then suddenly tears are coming out from nupur )
then mayank see it give one kiss on her tears
yado ki bago me hum tum bane hai zara dor tum tham lo
baho me fir se bikar jane do mujko fir se mera naam lo
me roshan na ho jo roshan tumhe karke khud ko bigal jaunga
subah ka suraj tumare liye hai me har rat dal jaunga
isa milan fir ho na sab kuch mera tum hi to ( again they hugged)
now mayank takes nupur in her arms ( mayank nupur ko utatha hai )

they both are in eye lock then suddenly nupur told to mayank mayank utaro mujhe pehle se hi meri weight bad gaya hai tumhe bahut bari hoga please
mayank:- nahi nupur ab me meri sweet biwi & sweet child dono ko utaya hu mujhe bahut khushi milte hai
again tears are coming from nupur then mayank niche utarta hai
mayank:- nupur tum ro kyun rahi hu
nupur:- nahi mayank ye khushi ki tears hai me bahut lucky hu mujhe tumare jaise hubby mila i m really luck girl
mayank:- nahi lucky me hu me kabhi nahi socha ta meri jaise akdu sadu ko tumare jaise sweet ladki milegi but kismat dekho me kitna lucky hu & then clean her tears & told me kabhi tears nahi dek sakta tumara smile plz
then both are laughed 😊
nupur:- mayank mujhe ab yad agayi tum sab ke samne kya kehrahe the jab lunch kar rahe the
mayank:- maine kya kaha
nupur:- yad karo
mayank:- o na bas majak kar raha tha dear sorry baba
nupur:- its ok & smiled then nupur see cute girl child playing in park she is far away from mayank nupur but nupur just seeing her may be that girl is 2-3 yrs old & told to mayank maynak dekho kitna achhi cute hai na o girl
mayank:- ha nupur thoda wait karo kuch dino ke bad hamra bhi baby ayega na tab o bhi itna hi cute hoga
nupur:- (with smile ) ha but tumhe kaise pata ki o itna hi cute hoga
mayank:- kyunki dad to me hi hoo na aur me to cute ho aur mom tum ho tum to mujhse bhi cute ho to hamara baby bhi cute ho hoga 😉
& us night tum bhi bahut cute lag rahi thi 😉 & winks at her
nupur:- suddenly became fully shy mayank tum bi naaaa kabhi nahi sudroge
mayank:- are baba me to sach bol raha hu usme sharmane ki bat kya hai really tum us night bahut cute lag rahi thi
nupur:- mayankkkkkkk bas bhi karo na
mayank:- ok baba again winkes at her
nupur:- by god mayank tum to bahut badal gaye ho shadi ke baad college me to tina padaku jaise the ab to by god duniya ke sabse cute romantic hubby ke award milana chahiye
mayank:- thanks my dear wife aur nahi ho to kya college me the to padi karna jaruri tha isi liye karta tha ab sab settle hone ke bad shadi hua aur marriege ke bad romance bhi jaruri hai o bhi itna cute wife mili to to isi liye karta hu 😉
nupur:- mayank tum bi na
mayank:- tum kya kam ho kya tumhe to duniya ke best sharmane wali wife ki award milni chahiye ha ha ha
nupur:- with angry look kyun?
mayank:- ha fir shadi hoke itna din hua fir bhi tum aaj bhi jabbi me pas ata ho to itna shamrati ho o bhi kabhi me tumhe kiss karu tab to tum atleast 15 min tak meri nazro ki samna nahi kar pati ha ha ha isi liye
nupur:- bas bhi karo me ab nahi shy honi wali hu kabhi nahi
mayank:- r u sure?
nupur:- ha
mayank:- sochlo
nupur:- ha fir me harne wali nahi hu
then mayank start coming very closely towards nupur then nupur realise wt she told before start thinking her self nupur tum gayi aaj but she dicide she never give up ready to face
but mayank fully closely come towads nupur then suddenly wall come nupur stanidng infront of wall then mayank come fully close to nupur ask again r u sure nupur ?
nupur:- hahaaa

this time mayank give one kiss to her neck nupur fully shy but she dicided to she never give so she act like she is strong then mayank hugged to nupur & start kissing her neck check & forhead this time nupur lost control even mayank also lost control over him then this time mayank deeply kiss to nupur lips even nupur reacted same way because they are lost their control that time nupur's dupatta fall no one notice it she wearing very deep neck salwar kameez when her dupatta fall down she looks too cute & hot then they broke form lip kiss then mayank give again one kiss to her neck he slowly touch her waist then he slowly starts move his hands from her waist to her stomach & again he start giving kiss ot her neck & finally he give one long deep kiss to nupur lips nupur reacted same way this time mayank tight his grip over nupur but nupur suddenly feel pain on her stomach suddenly realise even mayank also they suddenly broke apart
mayank suddenly ask to nupur kya hua nupur i m sorry i m really sorry me na out of control ho gaya tha tum tik to ho na he start asking with out stop
nupur:- nahi tumne jor se pakda na isi liye isi liye thoda pain laga shayad tumara baby ko gussa aya hoga ye sochke meri papa hamesha romantic mood me kyun rehte hai ye sochake 😉
mayank:- i m sorry nupur & he give her dupatta help to nupur wear her dupatta again neatly
nupur:- finally tum jit gaye mayank( with shyness )
mayank:- me nahi hum jeet gaye
then both are laughed
😊
then benji & uday comes
hi mayank & nupur
uday:-tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho
benji :- dikhayi nahi deta kya romance karte hai o dono 😉
mayank with angry face:- kya bola tumne😡
both uday & benji scared :- kuch nahi
nupur fully shy
mayank:- agar hum sach me romance karte hai tum logo ko kuch problem hai nupur meri biwi hai me uski sath romance hi karu ya kuch bhi karu tum dono ko kuch problem hai kya😉
uday & benji :- nahi kuch nahi u continue u r work
nupur:- nahi uday bhaiyya & benji mayank tum bi na hamesha gussa karte rehte ho actually kya hai na hum batein kar rahe the
benji :- tum dono ghar me bhi batein karte ho yaha pe bhi kya batein karte ho yar hamare sath bhi kuch batein karo na fir 😊
nupur:- ha kyun nahi
mayank:- benji tumare sath to tik hai but mera fev sala se karna hai to kal mental hospital me ek appointment fix karke ana padega
then all r laughed
nupur:- tum uday bhaiyya ka majak mat udao
mayank:- are nahi meri sweet wife
benji & uday:- ab chalo sab ko bulate hai kuch aur games khelte hai
mayank:- but nupur ko suit karna chahiye
benji :- waw kya love hai but ye muskil hai
mayank:- tik hai me bhi nupur ke sath bitake game dekta hu
nupur:- nahi hum idar enjoy karna hai aaj tum jake kheloge please bitna ke dekna meri kam hai plz meri bat mano na please mayank
mayank:- tik hai apki hukoom but me sirf part time kam karunga game me full time nahi
uday & benji :-tik hai meri dost ab chale
all r ready to play cricket
😊

hi friends please read my update & tell me how is it in next part u will get one surprise 😊






Posted: 16 years ago
lol u continue ur work, benji n uday r too funny
over all very sweet n romantic
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice and romantic update...continue soon...thanx for the pm...

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