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hey here frnzz i have uploaded mayur pic..(imaginary) after marriage...check it our n comment..tnx
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HI FRIENDS HERE MY NEXT UPDATE IS THERE BEFORE UPDATING I WANT TO SAY THANKS TO rockyshanky very good writer 😊
now finally samrat gunjan engagement is over now all r dicided to go to picnic for a change but because of work nupur's dad & uday's dad not going & mayank's mom also not going because she is going to her old friend house after so many days they are meeting so finally mayank nupur samrat gunjan diya uday benji are ready to go for picnic

scene 1
mayank nupur house
nupur getting ready standing infront of mirror she weaing a pink salwar kameez sleevless top looking so cute mayank standing side of nupur watching nupur but nupur not notice
then suddenly nupur notice
nupur:- mayank kya dek rahe ho
mayank :- come towards her tumhe
nupur:- kyun aaj tak nahi dekha kya tum mujhe
mayank:- nahi aaj kal tum aur achhi lagti ho aur hamara bachha bhi ek reason hai
nupur:- thanks but bachha bhi reason hai means tum kya usko dekhe ho kya
mayank:- nahi dear dekho hamara bachha day by day bada ho raha hai aur tumare cute pet bhi bada ho raha hai isi liye aise kehdiya dear ab samajme aya
nupur:- ha mayank ji but uska reason to aap bhi to hai 😉
mayank :- ha o to hai but apka bhi support bhi tha na fir 😉
nupur:- mayank tum bin a
mayank:- are baba itna sharmao mat tum jo hai wahi kaha main to & hugged her
nupur :- ha o bat bhi tik hai chalo ab chodo mujhe tayar hone do
mayank :- tum kaise bhi ho bahut achhi lagti ho
nupur:- me janti hu
then mayank leave her she going to put sindoor
mayank stopes her & told i will put
then he put sindhoor on nupur forhead then both r smiled 😊
mayank:- thanks nupur
nupur:- kyun
mayank:- tum hamesha meri name ke sindhoor mangalsutra ye sab pehanke mujhe respect deti hu na isi liye
nupur:- me tumse se bahut ppyar karti hu mayank
chalo ab ye sab chodo chalo ab jana hai
mayank : - ok baba then they both r leave


then are all are in picnic spot
gossiping ,talking all r doing then all are dicide to play some games
then all are dicide to sit toghether dicide which games will play but nupur slowly trying to sit on garden mayank see & helped to nupur sit comfortably on garden ( caring husband) all r see this scene & become happy
uday:- nupur sister tumari is halat ko dekkar mujhe bahut bura lagta hai tumhe har kam sambalke karna padta hai meri same blood group wali sister kaise hogayi
nupur:- with shy face are its ok uday bhaiyya mayank hai na mere sath so dont worry
uday:- ha isaka reason to mayank hi hai na
then mayank suddenly see uday's face& told kyun ye husband aur wife ka bich ke mamla hai aur tumhe kuch taklif ho raha hai kya
then udar fully scared holds benji's hand
benji :- dude thoda soch samjakar bat karo
nupur:- mayank jane do na tum uday bhaiyya ko kyun daradete ho hamesha bechara
mayank:- ye bechara hai na isi liye ye sab batein inke khayal ke bahar hai
uday:- ha mayank u r right mujhe ye sab samj ata hai nahi
then suddenly all r laughed
then samrat told we will play cricket
mayank :- nahi nupur nahi khel sakti hai na cricket nahi
gunajn :- hum hide & seek khelte hai
mayank :- nupur ke liye tik nahi hai
then all are starts shouting ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooo
suddenly nupur become shy mayank tum bina
are isme sochne ki bat kya hai o meri biwi hai aur o meri bachhe ki maa banne wali hai uska khayal to rakna padega na 😉
then all r starts laugh 😊
so finally it dicide to play antyakshari
then all r starts sing song all are enjoying mayank dicide to spend some time with nupur alone then he only starts his mobile ring then got up told to all phone excuse me afterwords 1 min he called to nupur & told nupur maa tumse bat karna chahti hai but idar awaz nahi a raha hai thoda age jana padega & he only helps to nupur to get up easily then all r continue with songs & all

then nupur mayank come away from all
nupur holds that cell :- mayank awaz hi nahi rahi hai maa ki
mayank :- o ayega bhi nahi
nupur : - means
mayank:- me tumare sath akele time spend karna chahta tha isi liye ye idea
nupur:- mayank tum bhi na kabhi nahi sudroge me ja rahi hu sab kya sochenge
mayank:- mayank holds her hand suddenly kyun hum husband wife hai to koi kuch bhi nahi sochenge samjhi
nupur:- fir bhi me ja rahi hu
mayank :- suddenly holds her waist & told mat jao & come towards her
but nupur going back then tree is come so it stops to nupur
but mayank slowly come towards her give one small kiss to her check & neck then they got eye lock then mayank slowly comes more towards her then nupur understand mayank's intention but she dont want to avoid that moment then she closed her eyes mayank give kiss to her lips then they deeply kissed this time no one is not there for distrub them no time limit also 😊
after half an hour they heard some one voice then they break apart
then nupur suddenly clean her lips from her dupatta mayank see & smiled 😊
but as usuall because of shyness nupur not able to speak with mayank even see his face also then gunjan comes
gunjan :- di mayank tum log idar kya kar rahe the aunty se bat hui kya hua tha kyun phone kiye the
nupur:- ha haaaaa hua tha kuch nahi bas aise hi phone kiye the meri hal janne ke liye
gunjan :- achha chalo sab lunch ke liye wait kar rahe hai jijaji app bhi chaliye
mayank :- ha gunjan
then nupur without seeing mayank's face she gone with gunjan mayank follows them & smiling
😊
when nupur mayank gunjan enters all r sitting round shape gunjan sit side of samrat & as usuall maynak nuput sit toghether side by side
uday:- arey nupur tumara chehra itna lal kyun dik raha hai
nupur:- kya nahi uday bhaiyya ise koi bat hai (this time she see mayank's face)
mayank:- winks at her & smiled 😊
samrat:- iska reason mayank ko to jarur pata hoga😉 winks
mayank:- ha jab o sharamti hai uski face red hota hai
nupur:- mayank kkkk
samrat:- nupur ji bolne dijiye na hum bhi to sunte hai aap itna kyun sharmagaye ho
mayank:- this time he supports to nupur kyun tumhe batane jaruri hai kya with smile
samrat:- nahi personal ho to nahi
then all r smiled nupur is fully shy 😉 smiled
mayank:- slowly tell to nupur all r busy in eating lunch tum sach me jab sharmati ho na bahut achhi lagti ho cute with red face 😊 aur uska credit sirf mujhe jata hai 😊
nupur:- is mamle me tumko koi hara sakte hai kya 😊
mayank:- ha fir yahi to reason hai tum ek cute sa baby janam dene wali ho 😉 aur tumara support ke wajaha se bhi & winks 😉
nupur:- tum bin a lunch karo pehle tumhe bad me bolti hu
both r smiled 😊




hi frends how is my update plz tell me 😊





Edited by minalpink100 - 16 years ago
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oh my god...!!! wat an update dear...maa hi dala aapk is romantic update....👏,....

guru hai aap to yaar...maan gaye...rock on..!!
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Originally posted by: minalpink100

HI FRIENDS HERE MY NEXT UPDATE IS THERE BEFORE UPDATING I WANT TO SAY THANKS TO rockyshanky very good writer 😊
now finally samrat gunjan engagement is over now all r dicided to go to picnic for a change but because of work nupur's dad & uday's dad not going & mayank's mom also not going because she is going to her old friend house after so many days they are meeting so finally mayank nupur samrat gunjan diya uday benji are ready to go for picnic

scene 1
mayank nupur house
nupur getting ready standing infront of mirror she weaing a pink salwar kameez sleevless top looking so cute mayank standing side of nupur watching nupur but nupur not notice
then suddenly nupur notice
nupur:- mayank kya dek rahe ho
mayank :- come towards her tumhe
nupur:- kyun aaj tak nahi dekha kya tum mujhe
mayank:- nahi aaj kal tum aur achhi lagti ho aur hamara bachha bhi ek reason hai
nupur:- thanks but bachha bhi reason hai means tum kya usko dekhe ho kya
mayank:- nahi dear dekho hamara bachha day by day bada ho raha hai aur tumare cute pet bhi bada ho raha hai isi liye aise kehdiya dear ab samajme aya
nupur:- ha mayank ji but uska reason to aap bhi to hai 😉
mayank :- ha o to hai but apka bhi support bhi tha na fir 😉
nupur:- mayank tum bin a
mayank:- are baba itna sharmao mat tum jo hai wahi kaha main to & hugged her
nupur :- ha o bat bhi tik hai chalo ab chodo mujhe tayar hone do
mayank :- tum kaise bhi ho bahut achhi lagti ho
nupur:- me janti hu
then mayank leave her she going to put sindoor
mayank stopes her & told i will put
then he put sindhoor on nupur forhead then both r smiled 😊
mayank:- thanks nupur
nupur:- kyun
mayank:- tum hamesha meri name ke sindhoor mangalsutra ye sab pehanke mujhe respect deti hu na isi liye
nupur:- me tumse se bahut ppyar karti hu mayank
chalo ab ye sab chodo chalo ab jana hai
mayank : - ok baba then they both r leave


then are all are in picnic spot
gossiping ,talking all r doing then all are dicide to play some games
then all are dicide to sit toghether dicide which games will play but nupur slowly trying to sit on garden mayank see & helped to nupur sit comfortably on garden ( caring husband) all r see this scene & become happy
uday:- nupur sister tumari is halat ko dekkar mujhe bahut bura lagta hai tumhe har kam sambalke karna padta hai meri same blood group wali sister kaise hogayi
nupur:- with shy face are its ok uday bhaiyya mayank hai na mere sath so dont worry
uday:- ha isaka reason to mayank hi hai na
then mayank suddenly see uday's face& told kyun ye husband aur wife ka bich ke mamla hai aur tumhe kuch taklif ho raha hai kya
then udar fully scared holds benji's hand
benji :- dude thoda soch samjakar bat karo
nupur:- mayank jane do na tum uday bhaiyya ko kyun daradete ho hamesha bechara
mayank:- ye bechara hai na isi liye ye sab batein inke khayal ke bahar hai
uday:- ha mayank u r right mujhe ye sab samj ata hai nahi
then suddenly all r laughed
then samrat told we will play cricket
mayank :- nahi nupur nahi khel sakti hai na cricket nahi
gunajn :- hum hide & seek khelte hai
mayank :- nupur ke liye tik nahi hai
then all are starts shouting ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooo
suddenly nupur become shy mayank tum bina
are isme sochne ki bat kya hai o meri biwi hai aur o meri bachhe ki maa banne wali hai uska khayal to rakna padega na 😉
then all r starts laugh 😊
so finally it dicide to play antyakshari
then all r starts sing song all are enjoying mayank dicide to spend some time with nupur alone then he only starts his mobile ring then got up told to all phone excuse me afterwords 1 min he called to nupur & told nupur maa tumse bat karna chahti hai but idar awaz nahi a raha hai thoda age jana padega & he only helps to nupur to get up easily then all r continue with songs & all

then nupur mayank come away from all
nupur holds that cell :- mayank awaz hi nahi rahi hai maa ki
mayank :- o ayega bhi nahi
nupur : - means
mayank:- me tumare sath akele time spend karna chahta tha isi liye ye idea
nupur:- mayank tum bhi na kabhi nahi sudroge me ja rahi hu sab kya sochenge
mayank:- mayank holds her hand suddenly kyun hum husband wife hai to koi kuch bhi nahi sochenge samjhi
nupur:- fir bhi me ja rahi hu
mayank :- suddenly holds her waist & told mat jao & come towards her
but nupur going back then tree is come so it stops to nupur
but mayank slowly come towards her give one small kiss to her check & neck then they got eye lock then mayank slowly comes more towards her then nupur understand mayank's intention but she dont want to avoid that moment then she closed her eyes mayank give kiss to her lips then they deeply kissed this time no one is not there for distrub them no time limit also 😊
after half an hour they heard some one voice then they break apart
then nupur suddenly clean her lips from her dupatta mayank see & smiled 😊
but as usuall because of shyness nupur not able to speak with mayank even see his face also then gunjan comes
gunjan :- di mayank tum log idar kya kar rahe the aunty se bat hui kya hua tha kyun phone kiye the
nupur:- ha haaaaa hua tha kuch nahi bas aise hi phone kiye the meri hal janne ke liye
gunjan :- achha chalo sab lunch ke liye wait kar rahe hai jijaji app bhi chaliye
mayank :- ha gunjan
then nupur without seeing mayank's face she gone with gunjan mayank follows them & smiling
😊
when nupur mayank gunjan enters all r sitting round shape gunjan sit side of samrat & as usuall maynak nuput sit toghether side by side
uday:- arey nupur tumara chehra itna lal kyun dik raha hai
nupur:- kya nahi uday bhaiyya ise koi bat hai (this time she see mayank's face)
mayank:- winks at her & smiled 😊
samrat:- iska reason mayank ko to jarur pata hoga😉 winks
mayank:- ha jab o sharamti hai uski face red hota hai
nupur:- mayank kkkk
samrat:- nupur ji bolne dijiye na hum bhi to sunte hai aap itna kyun sharmagaye ho
mayank:- this time he supports to nupur kyun tumhe batane jaruri hai kya with smile
samrat:- nahi personal ho to nahi
then all r smiled nupur is fully shy 😉 smiled
mayank:- slowly tell to nupur all r busy in eating lunch tum sach me jab sharmati ho na bahut achhi lagti ho cute with red face 😊 aur uska credit sirf mujhe jata hai 😊
nupur:- is mamle me tumko koi hara sakte hai kya 😊
mayank:- ha fir yahi to reason hai tum ek cute sa baby janam dene wali ho 😉 aur tumara support ke wajaha se bhi & winks 😉
nupur:- tum bin a lunch karo pehle tumhe bad me bolti hu
both r smiled 😊




hi frends how is my update plz tell me 😊





hey minal tnx dat u lyked my update..😊
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Terrific! 👏👏👏👏 Loved it. 😊
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awesum minal!!!! jst 2 much awesumness...muaaaaaaaaahs!!!! 🤗 cant say nything more than dis!!! totaly rocking....
god bless ya dear... 👍🏼
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
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Originally posted by: rockyshanky

<FONT size=2><FONT color=#00ff66>so after a huge applause 4m all of u,dis is my nxt update…</FONT></FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#0033cc size=2>@minal u continue wid urs…ok..</FONT>


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<FONT color=#cc0000><FONT size=2>Den mayank frees nupur 4m his tight hug n kisses her on cheek n go 2 get ready 4 da office. </FONT></FONT>



<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#cc3333 size=2>Meanwhile nupz go 2 kitchen n started helping maa bt as u all knw maa,she is alwz a caring mom,she doesn't allow nupz 2 do dat…</FONT>

<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#cc3333 size=2>.</FONT>

<FONT size=2>MAA- <FONT color=#ff00ff>nupur beta,tumhe doc ne mana kiya hai na kaam k liye…tum jao table par baitho mai nashta lati hu….</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR-<FONT color=#cc00cc>par maa………….</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>MAA-<FONT color=#cc33ff>ab apni maa ki baat nahi manogi..?</FONT></FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>NUPUR-</FONT><FONT color=#ff00ff><FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>by god maa…aap to bade ustad ho emotional blackmailin me…hehehe..!!</FONT>


</FONT>

<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#000000 size=2>nnupz go 2wards da table…..</FONT>

<FONT size=2>MAA-<FONT color=#ff00ff>achha nupur…</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR-<FONT color=#ff00ff>ji maa..?</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>MAA-<FONT color=#ff00ff>beta mayank utha ya nahi..</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR-<FONT color=#ff00ff>haan maa,ye uth gaye hai..bas taiyaar hokar aate hi honge…</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>Den all da 3 hav deir breakfast n mayu goes 2 office n nupr n maa r alone at hme….</FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2></FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>Both maa n nupur start seeing tv….a child show is being aired on dat….</FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>Nupur is excited n asks mom..😛</FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR-<FONT color=#ff00ff>achcha maa 1 baat puchu…??</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>MAA- <FONT color=#ff00ff>haan beta…</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR-<FONT color=#ff00ff>jab ye chote the,tab shararat karte the ya fir aise hi angry Youngman ki tarah the..?!</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>MAA-<FONT color=#ff00ff>nahi nupur..mayu to bahut shararti tha…din bhar dhama chaukdi macha kar rakhta tha..is pal idhar to agle hi pal na jane kaha..?!......par…..</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR-<FONT color=#ff00ff>par kya maa..?</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>MAA-<FONT color=#ff00ff>iske dad ka ye bahut ladla beta tha…or iski dad ki death tab hui jab wo 14yrs ka tha…😭bada sadma laga tha…itni imp age me is tarah k accident se it was obvious..(<FONT color=#ff00ff><FONT color=#000000>maa has tears in her eyes</FONT>)😭😭😭</FONT></FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR-<FONT color=#ff00ff>oh sry maa…<st1:State w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">maine</st1:place></st1:State> dukhi kar diya aapko…😭</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>MAA-<FONT color=#ff00ff>nahi beta..its ok…</FONT></FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#ff00ff size=2>U knw nupur..mayu isliye apni life me kisiko itna imp nahi deta tha,ki uske alag hone k baad wo fir se usi situation se guzare….</FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#ff00ff size=2>Fir tum uski life me ayi..tumse milne k baad <st1:State w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">maine</st1:place></st1:State> usme bahut changes dekhe hai…</FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#ff00ff size=2>Pta hai nupur,jab tum pehli baar humaare ghar aayi thi,<st1:State w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">maine</st1:place></st1:State> tabhi samajh liya tha ki mayank or tum future me saath hone wale ho..</FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#ff00ff size=2>Or mayank b dinbhar tumhaari hi baat karta tha..aaj tumne us se ye kaha..wo kaha…tum dono ka jhgda hua…jhagda colg me hota tha or upset ghar me hote the mahashay…</FONT>


<FONT size=2>NUPUR(surprised n blushing)😳😳😳-<FONT color=#ff00ff>to kya maa aapko pehle se pata tha..?!!!!</FONT></FONT>


<FONT size=2>MAA-<FONT color=#ff00ff>haa beta..mai sab jaanti thi…(<FONT color=#000000>in a teasing tone)😆</FONT></FONT></FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#ff00ff size=2>Or pata hai beta jab tumhe usne play me confess kiya tha n tumne haa boli thi,us din to wo bahut khush tha…bilkul 7th aasman pe..</FONT>


<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color=#ff00ff size=2>Bahut dino baad use akele me muskurate hue dekha tha..or pata hai 1 raaz ki baat…<st1:State w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">maine</st1:place></st1:State> pehli bar uske paas mayapari dekhi thi..😃😃omg beta mujhe to vishwas hi nahi hua ki ye wahi mayank hai jisne in sab khushiyo se muh fer liya tha…ye sab tumhaari wajah se hua beta…thanks nupur…muaah…meri bachchi</FONT>


wow..a great writer....truly!!! kp updating urs wen possible...luvd ur parts 2... 👏
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
Edited by AngelArTi1988 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Awesome update....aww MaYur are sooooo cute....Mayank is total sweetheart....loved it!

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thanks for u r comments i want u will also write some cute mayank nupur romantic update 😊

thanks friends thanks lot for u r sweet comments
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