*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7

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minalpink100

@minalpink100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#391

HI FRIENDS HERE MY NEXT UPDATE IS THERE I HOPE U LIKE IT
FINALLY ALL ARE DICIDED TO PLAY CRICKET 2 TEAMS ARE READY
TEAM A TEAM B
GUNJAN BENJI
DIA MAYANK
DODO SAMRAT

FIRST TEAM 1 WON TOSS & DICIDE TO BAT FIRST
now team A batting starts first dodo & dia came for batting .nupur is sitting on chair & watching match mayank go for fielding & stand near from nupur where she sitting on chair because he dont want to go away from nupur & he is playing only because of nupur forced him.when mayank come for fielding nupur told him all the best & mayank smiles & give flying kiss
then match starts
benji bowling to dodo in first ball only dodo scored 6 runs my god all r happy except team B even nupur also happy she start tell common uday bhaiyya common then she to mayank's face winkes 😉at him even mayank also smiles 😊
then again next ball dodo scores 4 my god all r happy this time also except team B all r happy nupur so excited this time samrat & mayank go towards benji give some tips how to out dodo
again 3rd ball this time again dodo scores 4 dia & gunjan came & hug dodo even nupur also try to get up want to hug dodo she is trying to get up but her big stumach (uterus) not allow her get up suddenly then mayank suddenly see it run fastly towards nupur & helped to nupur get up & asked
mayank:- nupur tum ye kya kar rahi thi
nupur:- me uday bhaiyya ko jake wish karna chahti thi
mayank:- to mujhe bolna hota na me ajata warna uday bhaiyya ko lekar to ajata tum kyun akeli taklif utathi hu (with concerned voice)
nupur:- thanks mayank tum mujse bahut pyar karte ho na (tears r coming out from her eyes)
mayank:- meri jan se bhi jyada ab please rona band karo mujhe nahi deki ja sakta
waise bhi tumare uday bhaiyya waise kaunsa bade achivement kiy hai aaj tak khane ke alawa
nupur:- mayank tum uday bhaiyya ke piche kyun pade ho tu kabhi nahi sudhroge is bat me
mayank:- are baba gussa mat ho jao smile plz
nupur:- then nupur give smile
all r watching this scene when mayank & nupur see them nupur fully blushed mayank smiles towards them
dodo:- mayank nupur tum dono kitne romance karte ho yar my god tumhe bor nahi ho jata hai kya
mayank:- get angry tum bhi kitne khate ho tumhe kabhi bore nahi ho jata hai kya 😡 aur waise bhi me meri biwi ke sath romance kiye to tumhe kya problem
dodo:- with scaring tone but o meri sister bhi hai
mayank:- ha janta hu yahi lyf ke tradegy hai
then all r laughed 😊
then again match starts mayank tell to nupur dekho tum aram se bito tumhe utake cheer up karne se koi jarurat nahi hai kuch bhi chahiye to mujhe bolo samjhi na
nupur:- tik hai mr sharama thanks
mayank:- u r wel come mrs sharma 😊
now before bowling benji want to destroy uday's concentration so he start talkign himself dream girl girl friend & all then uday also start thiking like that & uday got out
again all r happy but uday got angry sit side of nupur
nupur:- uday bhaiyya upset mat ho jao play me ye sab hota hai
uday:- nahi nupur but o log cheating kiye hai aur ek bat batao nupur tumhe jab mayank sath rehte ho tumhe dar nahi lagta hai kya
nupur:- nahi to but kyun
mayank:- but o hamesha ita chilley jaise gussa rehta hai isi liye mujhe aaj bhi azeeb lagta hai ki o bap banane wala hai
nupur:- with angry tone tum ye kya keh rahe hai uday bhaiyya 😡
uday:- sorry nupur me to mayank ki bat kar raha tha
mayank:- ha uday bhaiyya o thoda gusse me hota hai but o bahut achhe hai me bahut lucky hu mujhe un jaise life partner mila aap uske bare me ise mat batayiye please
uday:- u r my same blood group wali sister ho na fir no angry be free smile plz
then both r smiled 😊
mayank heard this conversation & smiled
now dia's batting starts
in first ball only she hit 6 but unfortunately this time ball fastly hit to nupur stomach where she is sitting that time uday busy with talking in cell 😭
then suddenly she tell mayankkkkkk 😭
then are all scred mayank run towrds her madly
nupur nupur tum tik to ho na but pain is more she not able to tell any thing just she tell one sentence mayank bahut pain ho raha hai & become unconcious that time mayank fully scared hugged to nupur tumhe kuch nahi hoga nupur tumhe kuch nahi hoga gunjan starts crying di tumhe ye kya hogaya then mayank take her they went for hospital
this time mayank fully scared also slowly tears are coming out from his eyes also because he already lost his first child he dont want to happen same even he cant imagine also he is worrying abt nupur so much thinkings are coming out from mayank mind then samrat came
& tell to mayank
dude kuch nahi hoga trust on god
mayank:- ha but agar nupur ko kuch bhi hua to me zinda nahi rahunga aur o bachhe ke bare me bahut kuch dreams dekhi hai agar is bar pichli bar ki tarah then suddenly gunajn start tell nahi jiju isa kuch bhi nahi hoga
bagwan hai apke sath
dia:- jiju i m sorry mujhe kuch bhi nahi pata tha
mayank:- its ok dia tumne jan buchke thodi ki hai
then all r worrying mayank wants to call to his mom then suddenly doctor come all r worrying wt doctor will say abt nupur & abt child

to be continue
hi friends how is my update i think in this update romantic scenes are not there but i will write in next update please read i hope u will enjoy 😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 15 years ago

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#392

minal wow nice converstion
between dodo and maynk
minal this part is very nice and
romantic too
yar this time plz dont doo anything to nups child
minal yaar nice part
next part soon

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minalpink100

@minalpink100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#393

thanks lot aditi for u r sweet comments dont worry i will not do any thing to nupur child 😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 15 years ago

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#394

really sweet part
loved the convo b/w mayur n uday n nupur n uday
but omg poor mayur!!
i hope nothing bad happens

Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 15 years ago

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dsafhs

@LUCYRIBEI

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Posted: 15 years ago

#395

hey dear

it was ausome and loved

plz update long one

plllllllllllzzzzzz can do this plz

i was waiting for ur updates so plz cont soon

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 15 years ago

#396

wondeful update minal!!
u should write a whole mayur ff too! i mean this is one also..hehe
i have been ur fan since very looong but never really commented and i regret...

thanks for pm me!!
will love to read more !

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 15 years ago

#397

awesomeeeeeeeee update minal...........vry simple yet so sweeeeet...bt plzzz dnt let nythin happen to nupsi n her child......plzz........
continue soooooooooooooon dear..........😊

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

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Posted: 15 years ago

#398

omg!!! not again.... 😲 plzz dis time sab kuch theek kar dena minal..;plzz...waise d scenes r nice...n vl wait 4 ur next romantic update dear!!! 😛
tk cr...god bless ya!!! 👍🏼 love ya loads!!! 🤗
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 15 years ago

#399

Wonderful update dear.... Please let anything to happen to nupur and child...

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minalpink100

@minalpink100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#400

@ LUCYRIBEI, ~*mishu*~ nikki028,preethi ,AngelArTi1988

thanks lot for u r all comments friends dont worry i will not do anything to nupur child 😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 15 years ago