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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
Good part.
Jaldi se aage continue karo.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

hey just caught up with your FF.

Its very nice and different...here navin is alive and raj and naina are dead.
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

i will not be able to update for coming 10 days as i have to undergo a surgery 2moro.

but here is todays update.
hope u will lyk it..........

To be continued………………..

Alekh- naina ruk mujhe tujhse kuch bat krni h

Naina- abhi nahi alekh. Mujhe holi party ki preprn karni h .

Alekh- usi bare me kuch bat krni h.

Naina- to thik h na mess me chalk r bat krte h.

Alekh- nahi bahar chal

And he dragged her with him.

Naina- kya hua alekh.

Alekh- boss ka phone aya tha.

Naina- to

Alekh- hume kuch tym k liye apni activities rokni hogi.

Naina- but y?

Alekh- captain navin is here.

Naina- wat? Omg. Agar usne hume yahan dekh liya to sara plan fail ho jayega.

Alekh- tabhi to apun ne tujhe mess me jane se roka.

Naina- thank god main wahan nahi gayi. But wat abt holi party.

Alekh- we have to think fast.

Naina- I think I have an idea.lets go.

After some time

Raj- r u ready navin.

Navin- yes .

Raj- then lets go.

Both got out of raj's room and headed towards party hall. At the gate they found some cadets having colors in their hands.

Raj- what is this cadets?

C1-sir this is holi party.

C2- to aap bina colors k kaise andar ja sakte h.

Raj- ok then. You can continue.

C1- thankyou sir.

Cadets rubbed the colors on their faces and both of them entered the hall.

Hall was decorated very nicely. Aal faces were having colors. It was almost difficult to identify someone. Two cadets were talking with each other in a corner of the hall.

Alekh- man gaye naina kya idea nikala h tune.

Naina- dekha tabhi to naina best hain.

Alekh- but ye captain navin yaha kitne din rehne wala h.

Naina- I hope wo jaldi chala jaye otherwise problems ho sakti h.

Alekh- hope for the best. Chal ab party enjoy krte h.

Both of them went towards the bhang counter. There they saw that a competition was going between two senior cadets. After the competition finished….

Huda- kya yar sirf 5 glass. Abe mard ban mard .

Yudi-dude ye bhang h lassi nahi.

Huda- to huda kab mana kr rha h.

Ali- huda bhai keh to aise rhe ho jaise aap isse jyada pi sakte ho.

Huda- bilkul pi sakta hu.

Pooja- to ho jaye huda.

Alekh- chal aaja huda. Dekhte h aaj kaun jeetta h. tu ya apun.

Huda- wo to thik h kaidi pr jitney wale ko kya milega.

Alekh- jo wo chahe.

Huda- soch le kaidi kahin tujhe ye shart bhari na pad jaye.

Alekh- vo to tym btayega huda .

Both started drinking. One after one they started . after 10 glass huda gave in n finally alekh won.

Alekh- ab bol kya bolta h huda.

Huda- mummy ji ki kasam kaidi. Is bar to tu jeet gaya pr agli bar ye huda tujhe jitney nahi dega. Bol kya karu ab.

Alekh- tu aaj se ek mahine tak kisi bhi girl cadet se bat nahi krega.

Huda- abe pagal ho gaya h kya?

Yudi- that's gr8 dude.

Pooja- ab maza ayega. Huda n silent mode nice plan.

Alekh- ye teri saza h. manni to padegi.

Huda- tu pachtayega kaidi. Ek bar mujhe mauka milne de fir nahi chodunga tujhe. Yaad rakhiyo ye huda ka promise h.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Aalekh said to Naina ke kuch time ke liye unhe activities rokni hogi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

So it was Aalekh talking on the phone!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But what is he and Naina upto??😕 😕 😕 😕

Why is Naina hiding from Navin??😕 😕 😕 😕Naina is feeling relieved that Aalekh stopped her from going to the mess!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne kya idea nikala hai!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Holi ke colours ke wajah se unhe koi pehchaan nahi payega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Lagta hai Naina ne Shahrukh Khan ke Darr film se inspired huyi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Bhang peene ki shart lagi thi and Aalekh won!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Akhir peene mein Aalekh se koi jeet sakta hai bhala!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waah Aalekh ne kya saza di hai Huda ko!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼Ek maheene tak woh kisi ladki se baat nahi kar payega!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

This is too good!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Now he can't flirt with Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda is now threatening Aalekh!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
wow yaar, really...naina is just too good!! brilliant save! but aren't they (she and navin) bro and sis in this??? anyway the saza alekh gave huda was too funny. but i hope he doesn't try to take revenge later on and cause problems for naina
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86

Nice part. But 1 ques- arent Naina n Navin siblings?? Btw Naina escaped the situation very nicely.

Hope ur surgery goes well n then u cum up wid another exciting part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
very good, 👏 👏 👏
Ye Alekh , bhi na kabhi kabhi kamaal hi kar deta hai ye to.😆 😆 😆 My god i can't believe ki is ne apne bet jeetne k baad Huda k saamne itne mast shart rakhi 😲 😲 😲 vo bhi fmale cadets se baat na karne ki.😛 😛 😛 Par ab bhi mai confuse hoon ki aisa kya hai jo Naina aur Alekh Naveen se chipa rahe hain?😕 😕 😕
jaldi se aage update karo.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

best of luck fr ur surgery.....update was really good...but why is naina and aalekh hiding frm naveen???? the punishment given by aalekh was pretty good and intelligent choice........

hope u recover soon and give us another excitin ud....😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
that was so good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
That was very nice...👏👏
Yaar I keep on saying this...this is getting damn interesting....😉

U take care after ur surgery....😊



LOve,
Dhara...😊

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