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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
hi frnds.......
i m back with a gud news.
i have been recommended for airforce.
after clearing my medicals i will be ready to join it.
my medicals are on monday to friday.
so next update will be after that.
thanx 4 ur wishes but i still need that so pls dnt stop praying 4 me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
cool!! you want to be an air force officer .... all the best for it 👍🏼

take care


yasmin
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Hey Congrats! ⭐️ 👏 and all the best...I'm sure you'll pass with "flying" colours 😉 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
here comes the next update frnds....
hope ki apko interesting lage..............

Chapter 12

Back to present……….

A car was on its full speed on the roads of delhi.

Jai ho..jai ho..jai ho..

A guy picks the phone.

Hello

Oh god. Dnt worry I will be there very soon.

Yes .

I m sure abt it.

Just 15 min more.

After fifteen minutes.

Someone was knocking a door.

Door opened.

A lady came out.

Hi mom. Kaisi ho.

Main to achi hu pr tune itni der kyun laga di.

Der? Are apko 15 min kaha tha to aa gaya 15 min me.

Tu kabhi nahi badlega haina.

Mom u know na. perfect ones never change.

Thik hain. Ab andar to aa.

Both of them moved inside.

There they saw a man there.

Aap yahan kya kar rhe h?

Beta ye

Ek min mom. Apne mujhe btaya kyun nahi ki ye yahan h.

Aap janti h ki main inse nahi milna chahta fir bhi

Person- kab tak beta ? kab tak mujhse nafrat karoge. Jo kuch bhi hua vo sab

Guy- vo sab sirf apki galati thi. Aapki vajah se maine un do logo ko kho diya jinhe main sabse jyada pyar karta tha. Sirf aap us hadse k liye jimmedar h.

Aur main apko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta.

Without listening anything else he left the house.

Person- kaise yakin dilau use ki main chah kr bhi kuch nahi kar saka.

Lady- dnt worry bhaiya.is waqt uske zakhm hare h. samay k sath wo bhi samajh jayega jaise main samajh gayi.

Person- I really hope ki aisa jaldi ho jaye.

Back to KMA

SAM-I cnt blv it. Naina aur alekh karna kya chahte h?

Yuvi- tu chup karegi.

Rummy- hume aage sunne de kya hua. Mam aap aage ki kahani sunaiye na.

Shalini-ok to suno.

KMA

Time-1300 hrs

I know mere alawa bhi kma me koi h jo apni asliyat chhupa rha h.

But u dnt worry boss. Main bahut jald uska pta laga lunga. Ok boss.

He cut the phone n turned .

There he found captain abhimanyu staring at him.

Abhi- main soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki tum aisa karoge raj. Tumne hume btaya kyun nahi?

He asked angrily.

Raj- kya hua chauhan ?

Abhi- tum puch rahe ho kya hua? Tumhe kya laga tha ki tum nahi btaoge to hume pta nahi chalega . hum soch bhi nahi sakte the ki tum aisa karoge.

Raj couldn't understand wat is he saying.

Suddenly abhi started laughing.

Abhi- just see ur face. I was just joking.

Raj- oh man. I was thinking ki aisa maine kya kar diya n u were joking. U r too much chauhan.

Abhi- wase tumne humse kyun chupaya ki navin aa rha h.

Raj- tumhe kaise pta ki wo academy aa rha h.

Abhi- are uska phone aya tha to usne btaya.

Raj- wat? Uska phone aya tha. Aane do use. Chodunga nahi. Mujhe kehta h ki chauhan ko mat btana aur khud phone krke btata h.

Abhi- wat usne mana kiya pr wo to keh rha tha ki tune mana kiya.

Both- ye nahi sudhrega.

Abhi- chal abhi hum chalte h . hume bc k office me kuch kam h.

Abhi left.

Raj(thinking)- thank god abhi ne kuch nahi suna warna sara plan fail ho jata.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Facinating part yaar and I hope your tests went well. but I want to know who those two were that the guy was talking about in the beginning....not to mention the identity of the guy, but i guess i'll just have to wait *sign*. I just hope nothing has happened to RN
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
Hey congrats for getting into Air Force....👍🏼
Lol...an Air Force officer writing fics based on Army officers...😛😉

Anyways... the update was interesting...👏
Who were the three people in the first part..???
And wat is Raj upto...???😕😕

Love,
Dhara....😊
Edited by crackpots86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

best of luck for going into air force.... 😊😊😊

raj was shocked thinking that abhi had heard his conversation😲,he seems to b hiding something ,he is as mysterious as aalekh and naina
the update was v. nice ,but wat is raj upto????😕everything seems so fishy...,
wish the mystery gets cleared with upcoming updates.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
The part was very nice. But seems very mysterious. Every1 is doing sumthing secretly. I wonder who wer the 3 ppl n wat mistake they wer talking abt. Again Wat was Raj upto? All these need to b cleared. So PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj aur Huda ko waha kuch nahi mila!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Raj ne Huda se kaha ke woh ish incident ke baare mein kisi ko kuch na kahe!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was late and was sweating profoundly!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Now what was she upto??😕 😕 😕 😕

Aalekh thinks its their good luck that they have to submit the reports of their drill to Raj and not to Nair!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar Naina does not think so and thinks ke aaj ka din wakai bahut kharab hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ko toh Raj ke naam se hi bukhar aata hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆I hope jaldi yeh bukhar pyaar ka bukhar ban jaye!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne Raj se kaha ke uski mo ka birthday tha aur isilye usse leave chahiye thi and she had come to talk to BC about it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is lying and even Raj understood that she is hiding something from him!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Nicky aur Ashi ko Naina ka behaviour ajeeb lag raha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Vikas ko lagta hai ke usne Huda ko pehle kahi dekha hai but he can't remember where!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

BC ke office mein koi search kar raha tha!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Magar kaun??😕 😕 😕 😕

When Naina said she does not want any leave Abhimanyu was impressed with her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Abhimanyu told Raj that un six cadets mein kuch toh baat hai especially Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Uske jaane ke baad Raj kehta hai he is right Naina is different!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina and Aalekh are partners!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Both are after the file magar kal raat woh Naina nahi thi!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕I think it was Ritu!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aalekh and Naina uska pata lagane waale hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Yeh ladka kaun tha who had gone to meet his mom!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Uske uncle ne aisa kya kiya tha jiski wajah se usne unhe kho diya jine woh duinya mein sabse zyada pyaar karta tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

But he said ke woh kuch nahi kar paya!!!!!

Ab Raj bhi kuch chupa raha hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Woh kisse baat kar raha tha??😔 😔 😔 😔

Navin aa raha hai and he is upto his mischiefs as usual!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is feeling relieved ke Abhi ne kuch nahi suna warna sara plan fail ho jata!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
hey frnds
thanx for ur beautiful comments.
n sorry frnds .
main aap sab ko alag alag reply nahi krti but it is bcoz of tym shortage.
i hope u will understand.
i m posting the next part.
it is short but it will clear some of ur doubts.
i hope u will enjoy it.

CHAPTER 13

Present

A handsome person is standing in front of two photographs.

He has tears in his eyes.

"kyun? Akhir kyun? Kyun chhod kar chale gaye tum dono mujhe?

Tum dono jante ho main tumhare bina kuch nahi kar sakta.

Fir kyun kiya tumne aisa. Manta hu main tumhe bahut tang karta tha pr tum mujhe dat dete mujhe marte pr tum aise kyun chale gaye mujhse itni dur.

Tum dono meri ankhon k samne the to lagta tha ki ye duniya kitni khoobsurat hain pr ab to is duniya se nafrat hone lagi hain."

"bas kar . kab tak chalega aise. U have to move on. Aur kisne kaha ki wo humse dur hain.

Wo humare dil me hain aur humesha rhenge."

A voice come from backside.

He turns and find his friend there.

"acha hua tu aa gaya. I was waiting for you" he said wiping his tears.

"koi khas kam tha kya?"

Bahut khas.

Aisa kya kam hain?

Mujhe case mein kuch leads mile hain. And he gives him details.

"that's great navin.in points se hume kafi madad milegi "

Navin- u r right abhi. Aur ab main un logo ko nahi chodunga jinki wajah se raj aur naina aaj humare sath nahi hain.

Abhi- main nahin hum. Wase ek bat bolu kahin na kahin us hadse k liye main bhi zimmedar hu. Agar main us din naina ki bat man leta to aaj wo dono humare sath hote.

Navin- nahi abhi isme teri koi galti nahi hain. Tujhe to kuch pta hi nahi tha. Pr jinhe pta tha unhone kuch nahi kiya.

Abhi- tu mila tha unse?

Navin- haan aaj ghar gaya tha to vo wahan the.

Abhi – tujhe dekh kar lagta hain tu wahan se usi waqt chala aaya hoga. Navin tu galat kr rha h. unki wajah se tu aunty se bhi dhang se nahi mila. Yar aunty pehle hi naina ko kho chuki h. ab tu hi unka sahara h. tu samajhta kyun nahi.

Navin- kya samjhu abhi. Main us insane ko apni ankhon k samne tolerate nahi kar sakta.aisa lagta h ki main unka khun kar du. Unhi ki wajah se aaj raj aur naina …..(he culdnt complete his sentence)

Abhi- take ur tym navin but itna samajh le ki is waqt aunty ko teri sabse jyada zarurat hain.

Saying this abhi goes out of the house .

Navin starts remembering old days.

Flashback

Place- KMA

Time-10.30 am

Today was declared a holiday bcoz of holi. All kma cadets were busy in celebrating holi.

A girl was running and two guys were running after her.

Kahan tak bhagogi ." a guy said.

Another- aaj to tumhe rang laga k rahenge chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.

Girl- aap dono mere piche kyun pade hain. Aap ko pta hain mujhe rang lagwana acha nahi lagta.

Both- tabhi to.

Suddenly girls collided with someone and fell down but she didn't touched the ground. She landed safely in the arms of the person. They got lost in each other's eyes..

Then two guys came there and saw that.

One to another- le raj ye yahan bhi shuru ho gaya.

Raj- ye kabhi nahin sudhrega abhi.

Both- (louder) yahan koi aur bhi hain.

Then the other two realized wat they were doing.

Raj- so finally u r here. I m very happy to see you.

Raj hugged the person.

Abhi did the same after him.

Abhi- chalo ab aap dono ka intro bhi karwa dete hain.

Raj-he is captain navin singh ahluwalia

Abhi- and navin she is doctor captain shalini singhal.

Navin- hi shalini.

Shalini- hello.

Raj- abhi hum kuch bhul rahe h.

Navin- kya bhul rhe ho?

Raj and abhi winked at each other and then they rubbed the colour on their faces saying

"HAPPY HOLI".

Raj- you know shalini tumhari tarah navin ko bhi colours pasand nahi.

Shalini smiled and once again navin got lost in her beautiful smile.

Abhi(whispers)- bas kar navin. Kab tak use ghurta rahega.

Navin- main kaha.

Abhi- rehne de.

Raj- lets go and get freshed for holi party.

They moved towards their rooms.

Someone was watching the whole incident and got worried seeing navin there.

He/she told someone else too about navin arrival.

Then they decided to stop the activities for sometime till navin is here.

To be continued………………..

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