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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
hi candy...😊
best of luck for ur surgery.😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
too gud ud yaar.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 thoda confusing hai bt i hope tum dhire dhire sab clear kar dogi.😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
Naina is just too brilliant😊. bt Alekh is MAST... really😛 😛. kya condition rakhi hai us ne Huda k samne...bichara huda...jo insaan bina flirt kiye nahin rah sakta vo girls se bina baat kiye kaise rahega...???😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
cont soon. 😊
& get well soon champ.😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

the update was very nice...

how is naina going to hide from navin...as navin is naina's brother (or is my understanding wrong)....but seems that she did manage it for the time being...

Alekh was meant to win the bet....what was huda thinking....who can beat alekh when it comes to daru...

Hope that your surgery goes well...and you have a fast recovery...

will be waiting for your next update

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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
hmmmmm to ab plan kya hai in logon ka?😕
Mujhe samajh ye nahi aa raha hai ki Naina Naveen se chipte kyoun fir rahi hai?😕 Akhir vo us ka bhai hi to hai na.
update asap n clear all the confusions soon.😊
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
hey thanx frnds for ur wishes and ur nice comments.
i m f9 .
i m posting the new chapter .
i hope aap ko ye bhi utna hi exciting lage jitna ab tak lagta aya h.
so here it goes.................

CHAPTER 14

Present

Captain naveen receives a call.

Naveen- gudmorning sir

………

Naveen- yes sir.

……..

Naveen- don't worry sir. We will be on time.

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Naveen- ok sir. Jaihind sir.

He disconnects the phone and dials abhi's no.

He asked him to reach the headquarter within half an hour.

After half hour

Both naveen and abhi are standing in fornt of colonel wadhwa in his office.

Col wadhwa- captains lagta hai apki dua kubul ho gayi h.

Both see towards eachother.

Naveen- hum kuch samjhe nahi sir.

Col- main captain shekhawat k case k bare me baat kr rha hu.

Both are silent.

Col- aap log sirf mere juniors hi nahi ho balki meri beti k dost bhi ho. Main janta hu ki aaj kal aap log kya kr rhe ho. Aur jahan tak captain shekhawat ki bat h to he was my best officer. Mere hi orders pr wo kma me posted tha. I don't blv that crap the people say about him.

Abhi- we know sir.

Col- now you have a chance to prove others wrong.

Naveen- we r not getting it sir.

Col- captain ahluwalia u r transferred in KMA for a short time period but utilize this period as maximum as u can. I hope u understand what I want to say.

Both smile.

Naveen- I got it sir and dnt worry this hidden mission will be completed successfully.

Both salute colonel and turn to go when

Col- just a minute officers. All that happened now never happened actually. I hope u got it.

Both- yes sir.

And they left the office.

While going towards naveen' s house

Abhi- ab dekhna naveen hum apne dushmano se kaise badla lete h.

Naveen- haan abhi. Bahut intezar kiya h maine. Aaj lagta h us upar wale ne meri sun li.

Abhi- naveen ek bat kahu to manega.

Naveen- are bol na.

Abhi – tu ek bar aunty se mil aa yaar.

Naveen- abhi tu janta h ki wo bhi wahi honge aur

Abhi- aur tu unki shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahta. Pr tu jahan jar ha h wahan tujhe har waqt unka sama karna hoga. Tab kya karega tu. Dekh meri bat maan aur jane se pehle tu ek bar ghar chala ja.

Naveen- tu thik kehta h. main aaj rat ko ghar chala jaunga aur kal KMA.

Abhi- chal mera ghar to aa gaya aur tu apna khyal rakhiyo. Aur haan main yahan se apni koshish zari rakhunga bas tu wahan ka dhyan rakhiyo.

Naveen- ok then bye.

Back to KMA

Rummy- mama b tak apne jo bhi btaya h use to lagta h ki KMA me kuch gadbad thi.

Shalini- u r rite cadet aur jald hi ye sabko pta chal gaya ki gadbad kyat hi aur kyun thi.

Nick- hum kuch samjhe nahi mam.

Shalini- cadets ambala sabse important army bases me se ek h. yahan army k confidential documents kafi strict security me rakhe jate h.

Sam- mam ye bat to hume pta h.

Shalini- I know aur ye bat humare dushmano ko bhi pta h. isliye humesha se yahan attack hote rhe h un documents ko hasil krne k liye. Us sal bhi aisa hi hua pr ek alag tarike se.

Yuvi- matlab

Shalini- matlab ye ki attack hua but aise ki kisiko pta bhi ni chala.

Ashi- mam iska matlab humare secret doc lene me dushman kamyab ho gaya.

Shalini- maine aisa kab kha cadet. Haan pr wo kamyab ho jata agar captain shekhawat nahi hote to.

All are confused.

Shalini- yes cadets. Capt rajveer ko yahan special duty pr appoint kiya gaya tha. Intelligence ko khabar mili thi ki humari security infiltrate hone wali h Isliye capt rajveer ko yahan un doc ki security monitor krne k liye appoint kiya gaya tha.

Vick- aur capt rajveer ko cadet naina pr shaq tha.

Shalini- cadet naina ki harkate hi unhe us pr shaq krne k liye majbur kar rhi thi. Unhe shaq nahi pura yakin tha ki naina kuch chupa rhi h aur unka shaq sahi nikla.

Nicky- kaise mam.

Flashback

Time- 11 pm

Kma

Naina was searching something in the document room.

She was checking each and every file very care fully.

Damnit. Yahan to kuch bhi nahi h. kahan ja sakti h wo file.

Meri mehnat yu bekar nahi ja sakti.

Agar wo file nahi mili to sara plan fail ho jayega n I cnt afford that.

Then she heard that someone is opening the door. She became alert and hid herself behind the almirah.

Then she noticed a figure. She took her gun out and tried to hit the persond on the head but the person was quick.

He quickly turned around and hold her hand.

She got shocked after seeing the person.
note.............
sorry frnds main is bar pm nahi kar paungi.
as i dnt hav tym and mom ne bahut mushkil se permission di h pc use krne ki.
i hope u guys will understand.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Navin and Abhi have been called to the headquarters by Colonel Wadhwa in his office!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Col.Wadhwa does not believe the crap people say about Raj!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats really nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin is being transferred to KMA and now he can prove Raj innocent!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Navin assured him that this hidden mission will be completed successfully!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

So it is unofficial!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Navin ne bahut intezzar kiya hai aur ab lagta hai ke upar waale ne uski dua sunli!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Abhi Navin ko samjha raha hai ke ek aur baar woh apni mom se milne jaaye magar Navin does not want to as that person would be there as well!!!!!

Abhi completes that Navin unki shakal nahi dekhna chahta magar woh usse samjhata hai ke jaha woh jaa raha hai waha usse har waqt unka samna karna padega aur tab woh kya karega??😕 😕 😕 😕Jaane se pehle ek baar woh ghar chala jaaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin agreed to go home tonight and go to KMA the next day!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Here Rummy rightly guessed that KMA mein kuch gadbad thi!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini explained to them about important army documents and the attacks to get to them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini ne kaha ush saal bhi attack huya magar aise ke kisiko pata bhi naa chale!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Shalini now told them dushmaan documents lene mein kamyaad ho jaate agar Raj na hota toh!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

She told them he was appointed on a special duty documents ki security ko monitor karne ke liye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko pura yakeen tha ke Naina kuch chupa rahi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina document room mein kuch dhundh rahi thi magar usse woh file nahi mili!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

She is really frustrated kyunki agar woh usse nahi mili toh uska saara plan fail ho jayega!!!!!

Waha koi aa gaya and Naina took her gun out and tried to hit the person on the head!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

But that person was quick and turned around and held her hand!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina was shocked seeing that person!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

I think it was Raj who caught Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
wow so at least raj is still alive though obviously in trouble of some kind (from your update it looks like he's been falsely charged and put in prison!!!) now all i have to know for sure is that naina too is fine and i'll be soo happy and phir, i can read the ff in peace....lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
update was good, plz ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
that was good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99

Hi

Nice part dear..So Naveen is transferred to KMA..
How did Naina got caught??????
Do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
It was very nice....!!!👏👏👏 Do update soon....!!!😊

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