Look Through my EYES last part+epilog pg 50

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

It was a gud part. I anticipated it wud be Piyush. Happy dat Sujal also guessed sumthing fishy. But It was really stupid of Piyush to address Sujal like dat. But bechare ki bhi kya ghalti hai. He very well knws dat SUJAL IS THE BEST n he can NEVER compete him. Now lets see wat happens n wat our Sujal does. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

Hey dear..........

Its a nice part.................

U didn't tell how K looked like!!!!!!!!

I knew it was Piyush as i mentioned earlier.............

Oh God i didn't think K was that mischeivious or scheming.......really new....................it adds masala to the epi...............

Just 1 thing dear..........it was definately ur standard and don't get too muc pressured as we expect alot from ur FFs but remember that whatevr u write we all wud love it!

It was a bit short..but i still liked it!

Gud luck for the next part............

Plz post it soon dear(i understand u hav other things to do) but still plz try..............

Thanks for the update!

P.S :

I know that Sujal will find out evrything ................he is the Best....

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

thanks for the pm and the update is nice...so sujal got the doubt that somethin fishy.....next time post a big part...keep continuin....

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Wow.....the girl is in trouble now.....I hope Sujal is ready for some "knight in shining armour" act !!

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Meghna

@meggs

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

Yes..yes I knw most of u guessed her secret date was Piyush.. I had wanted it to b a surprise and I had actually not wanted this chapter to b in 2 parts but when I began writing it just went on and on .. So I decided to cut it into 2.. anyways as for K's dress? well it was a bit more formal and less provocative than the 1 she wore for s coz:-

1) She had a point to prove to Mr. Grewal? he had called her a "plain jane".

2)She didn't have anything to prove to Piyush and to wear such a dress on their first date wud send out a wrong kind of signal.. although she was going out with him it didn't mean tht she was very open or comfortable with him.. she hardly knew him and she wasn't tht interested in him either.. Piyush was ..u can say a 'get over Sujal phase' guy..

3)most importantly she thought tht every one wud lock her back in her room if they saw he going to a date in a dress similar to one she had worn earlier so she had decided to dress down a little?

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Hi sweetie... Why aren't u updating?

U didn't update on the 11 or 16 of Feb?

Plz update soon...............

Nice FF.......... i read it all over again while waiting............lol

bye

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#117

please continue soon.. 😊

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

hey dear!!! i didnt knw u had updated!! so sorry 4 the late comments!!! well wowww awesome part!!! sujal is jealous!!!! lolzzzzz even though he wnt admit it he is and no matter who Kashish dates he wud feel equally jealous i can say 4 sure!!! its not just bcoz he thinks Jake is the one she's ging ona date with....no matter hw much he tries 2 keep it in, he definetly does feel sumthing 4 her!!! and he is realising that it seems....and soo it was piyush after all....well im excited 2 knw wots gonna happen next and i hpe u update 2day!!! it is the 16th!!! and waiting for some romantic moments between SK

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Meghna

@meggs

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Posted: 16 years ago

#119

so so so very sorry for not updating

i know i broke my promise really sorry please forgive me. i didnt even write the 2nd date i was planning to post really sory but this is a very long part i hadnt expected it to have been this long plase sorry again, try and bear with me... with college and pressentations i really dont get time.... so this is the best i was able tyo manage hope u all enjoy