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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
Rahmina, i am actually sad that you wrote the FF. It is so beautiful and its exactly how I was hoping monday would go. but we all know bidaai never goes as predicted so I am very sad that ur FF is not going to be the actual episode on monday :)
but still beautifully written
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Thanks Jiya. My prediction about Indrajit came true so maybe this will to.

Part 3



After Vasu had hung up on Mamaji, she went to her bedroom to get ready. Indrajit walks in.

Indrajit: Vasu..
Vasu: Abhi nahi, hum thoda bahar ja rahe hain.
Indrajit: Kya main pooch sakti hoon kaha ja rahe ho?
Vasu: Main Sharmaji ki ghar ja rahi hoon.
Indrajit: Kis liye?
Vasu: Woh aap log jab gaye the tho aap logo ne bohut galatiya ki. Main un galatiyon ko sudharne ja rahi hoon.
Indrajit: Excuse me. Galatiya tho tum karti rehti ho. Hum logo ne kya galat kiya? Bolo. Tell me.
Vasu: Woh aap log mere biger gaye the mere bete ke rishta lekar. Ab main ja rahi hoon mere bete ke rishta lekar.
Indrajit: Kya? Tum Ragini ko accept kar chuke ho?
Vasu: Haan. Main aapne Ranvir ko koh na nahi chahti hoon aur agar Ragini uska choice hain tho bala main kyon usko accept na karoon?
Indrajit: I can't believe it. Mujhe yakeen nahi ho ra hai. Tumne tumhare faisla kaise badal di?
Vasu: Woh.. hum phir se toh baat kar sakte. Abhi mujhe vaha jaana hoga. Kya aap humare saath aayenge, humare bete ke rishta ke liye?
Indrajit: Of course! Yeh kya poochne vali baat hai? Kya tumne Ranvir ko bataya ke tumne Ragini ko accept karli?
Vasu: Nahi.. abhi tak toh nahi bataya.
Indrajit: Chalo. Hum dono milke Ranvir ko batayenge.

Vasu and Indrajit both go to the living room where Ranvir was sitting and staring into space.

Vasu: Ranvir?

Ranvir is just sitting there thinking about Ragini. How is he going to tell her what happened. He promised her and her father and he was regretting that he could not fulfill his promises.

Vasu: Ranvir!
Ranvir: Jee Mom?
Vasu: Humein tumse bohut zaroori baat karni hain.
Ranvir: Mom, kya yeh baat main nahi ho sakta?
Vasu: Nahi. Yeh tumhare liye bohut important hai.
Ranvir: Kya Mom?
Vasu: Humne socha hai ke ab tumhari shaadi kara doon...
Ranvir: Please Mom, mujhe is bareh mein koi baat nahi karni.
Vasu: Lekin Ranvir, suno toh..
Ranvir: Nahin Mom, please. Aapne jo faisla ki, woh maine bhi aapna faisla bana diya lekin yeh shaadi vaadi ki baat main aapse nahi kar sakta. Please Mom. Dad, Mom ko samjaye na.
Indrajit: Ranvir, tum pehle Vasu ki poori baat toh suno.
Ranvir: Nahin Dad. Mom, Dad, mujhe thoda kaam hai, main aata hoon.

Saying that Ranvir turns around and starts walking away.

Vasu: Ranvir, main ab ja rahi hoon Sharmaji ke ghar. Ragini ki haath tumhare liye mangne.

Ranvir stops dead in his tracks and turns around.

Ranvir: Mom..
Vasu: Haan Ranvir, tumne teek suna. Main Ragini ko aapne ghar ka izzat bana chahti hoon.
Ranvir: Kya? Kya yeh sach hain? Phir se kahiye, na please?
Vasu: Ab main poori din kya tumse kehte rahoongi? Vaha Sharmaji inteezar kare honge.
Ranvir: Mujhe Ragini se phone karna hoga.
Indrajit: *laughs*

Sadhana, Aalekh, Choti Ma, Chachu, Avni, and Naveen come from their rooms for breakfast. They see Ranvir looking really happy.

Ranvir: Bhabi! Bhaiya! Choti Ma! Chachu!
Sadhana: Kya huwa Devarji?
Ranvir: MOM NE RAGINI KO ACCEPT KARLI! Woh Ragini ka haath mangne ja rahe hain aapki Mamaji ka ghar!

Everyone looks shocked and happy except for Avni and Naveen.

Sadhana: Kya? Mummyji ne haa kardi?
Aalekh: Matlab ab dost ki jiji, tumhari dost banegi?
Ranvir: Haan bhabi haan bhaiya.
Choti Ma: Vasu, thank you. Tumne aaj hum sab ko khushiya di.
Ranvir: Areeh maine toh Mom ko thanks karna bhool hi gayi. Mom, thank you so much. Aap nahi jaante ke main kitna khush hoon. Mere pass toh lafz hi nahi hai aapko bolne ke liye ke main kitna khush hoon. I love you Mom.
Vasu: I love you too Ranvir.
Ranvir: Mujhe Ragini ko phone karna hoga.

Ranvir runs to the phone and calls Ragini. Ragini picks up.

Ragini: Hello.
Ranvir: Hello Ragini
Ragini: Ranvirji aap..
Ranvir: MOMNE HAAN KARDI!
Ragini: Kya?
Ranvir: Mom aaj ja rahe hain tumhare ghar, mere liye tumhare haath mangne.
Ragini: Kya?
Ranvir: Haan.
Ragini: Par kaise? Aur..

Sadhana, Aalekh, Choti Ma and Chachu start dancing to Lo Chali Main. Ragini listens on and is embarrassed, but at the same time can't believe that it's true. She smiles and is lost for words. Ranvir at his house is just standing there smiling watching his whole family celebrate...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
wow!!! amazing update Rahm.. i hope something like this happens on the show too.. i just cant see Ragvir crying anymore..
please update soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Part 4

So we all know how the story goes when Vasu goes to the Sharma house and asks for Ragini's hand. I'm not going to write that all out since we've already seen from the Lo Chali dance up until the day of their engagement. I'm going to write from then on because I certainly can't write better than the Bidaai writers.

At the Sharma house, Mamaji is getting ready while Kaushalya is sitting around moping. Mamaji decides to talk to her and knock some sense into the poor woman. He sits down next to her.

Mamaji: Kaushalyaji, aap meri baat ko samajne ki koshish kijiye. Aap jo darr leke bete hai na, woh aapka vehem hain. Aap isko nikaal dijiye aur aapki beti ki khushi mein shamil ho jaaye.
Mamiji: Ek Ma jaanti hai ke uski beti kaha khush rehe sakti hai aur kaha nahin. Us ghar mein Ragini ke liye bas do din ki khushi mile gi aur kuch nahin.
Mamaji: Yeh baat aap itna yakeen ke saath kaise keh sakti hain?
Mamiji: Kyunki us ghar mein Sadhana hain aur jaha Sadhana hain main us ghar mein meri beti ko hargiz nahin bejoongi.
Mamaji: Kyon? Kya Sadhana ki pyaar mein aapko zaara sa bhi kaami mehsoos huwi? Kya kuch Sadhana ne nahin kya humare liye. Areh usse ne toh aapna zindagi kurbani de di. Woh toh Bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukur jo Aalekhji itna achcha nikle nahin toh hum jijaji ko kya muh dikhate? Boliye? Sadhana ne Ragini ke liye aapna pehr thoda tha, hospital mein thi woh sirf is liye ke woh Ragini ke shaadi na thode. Woh Sadhana hi thi jo meri operation ke liye paise diye the. Aapka suhaag bachaye the. Kya aap yeh sab bhool gayi hain?

Mamiji doesn't respond. She keeps on crying.

Mamaji: Kaushalyaji, agar Sadhana aapki apni saagi beti hoti, toh kya aap is rishte ko tukra te? Agar aapki jawab na mein aayi toh sab kuch katam hogaya.
Mamiji: Ji..
Mamaji: Haan ya na?

Mamiji starts crying even harder. Mamaji gives her a disgusted look and walks out. Ragini was walking by and notices her mom crying and comes in.

Ragini: Ma, kya huwa? Aap roh kyon rahi hain? Ma? Boliye na. Ma? Ma, main jaanti hoon ke aap is rishte se khush nahin hain lekin Ma aap toh jaanti hain ke main Ranvirji se kitna pyaar karti hoon aur inke siva mein kaise aapni zindagi bitaongi? Maine toh faisla kar liya tha ke main unko chod doongi lekin jab bhi koshish ki, kuch na kuch rokh liya. Kya yeh Bhagwan ka diya huwa raasta nahin hain? Kaise bhool jaaon unhone jinne humare liye itna kuch kiya? Kaise bhool jaaon unki pyaar ko jo meri jeena ka vajah ban gayi hain?
Mamiji: Ragini..
Ragini: Ma, please, aap maan jaaye na? Please. Sab is rishte se kitna khush hai siva aap aur main toh sagaai peh nahi jaa paoongi jab tak aap mere saath na chale. Please Ma, maan jaaye.
Mamiji: Bohut pyaar karte ho na tum Ranvirji se? Chalo, aaj main bhi haar beti tere pyaar se. Main chaloongi.
Ragini: Sach?
Mamiji: Haan. Yeh baate baad mein hoti rahengi. Abhi mujhe teri bauji se thoda kaam hain. Tu ja, jaake tayar ho.
Ragini: Achcha Ma.

Mamiji goes and finds Mamaji and she folds her hand in front of him..

Mamiji: Ji, mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Main ab is rishte se khush hoon aur aap logo ke saath jaaongi. Main na chahte huwe Sadhana ke saath bohut galatiyan ki. Kya karti, meri maamta mein jo kaami reh gayi thi..
Mamaji: Na, aapki maamta mein koi kaami nahin thi. Kaami agar thi woh aapki soch mein thi.
Mamiji: Na jaane kaha kaha se yeh soch aate aur mujhe chain nahin dete.
Mamaji: Choriye yeh saab baatein. Beti ki sagaai hain, aapko tayar bhi toh hona hain.

Ragini calls Ranvir and tells him her mother has agreed and that they will be coming to the engagement afterall. Ranvir immediately runs and finds Aalekh and takes him into his room...
Finally, the Sharma family come to the Rajvanch house...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
Part 5

The Sharma family are invited in with all the love and respect that they could have ever hoped to receive. Ranvir stares off from afar just watching Ragini. He could not take his eyes off of her. She looked so beautiful in her lehenga.

Sadhana: Kya Devarji? Aap agar yunhi dekhti rahenge toh un logon ki swagath kaise karenge?
Ranvir: Bhabi..
Sadhana: Kya bhabi bhabi? Jaaye aur namaste kijiye aapki hone wale sasural walo se.
Aalekh: Ranvir, tum na, mere saath chalo aur mein tumhe sikata hoon ke namaste kaise ki jaaye, okay?
Ranvir: Jee bhaiya.

Ranvir, Sadhana and Aalekh walk over to the family and take their blessings. They all are seated and talking to one another. Aalekh winks at Ranvir at one point and Ranvir points at somewhere else and all the lights go out. Everyone went silent. Vasu started calling for someone to come and see what happened when Aalekh silenced her.

Aalekh: Badi Ma, lights aa jaaye gi.

All of a sudden a spot light falls on Ragini and the entire room is lit again, but by very dull lights. Only Ragini stood out as she had the most amount of lights on her. Ragini looked a bit embarrassed. Everyone was staring at her. Ranvir comes out of no where and:

Ranvir: Ragini, yeh mere zindagi ka saabse haaseen din hain. Yeh tumhare liye

And he starts singing:

Tu hi toh jannat meri, tu hi mera junoon
Tu hi to mannat meri, tu hi rooh ka sukoon
Tu hi aakhion ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak
Aur kuch na janu mein, bas itna hi jaanu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

Kaisi hai yeh doori, kaisi majboori
Maine nazron se tujhe choo liya
kabhi teri khusboo
Kabhi teri baatein
Bin mange yeh jahan pa liya
Tu hi dil ki hai raunak,
Tu hi janmo ki daulat
Aur kuch na janoo
Bas itna hi janoo
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu

Then he gets closer to Ragini and grabs her hand and puts a ring on her finger. Malti runs and gives Ragini the ring they got for Ranvir and then Ragini puts that on Ranvir's finger.

Another spot light falls on Sadhana. Aalekh comes out and starts singing:

Cham cham aaye, mujhe tarsaye
Tera saaya ched ke chumta
tu jo muskaye
Tu jo sharmaye
Jaise mera hai khuda jhumta
Tu hi meri hai barkat, tu hi meri ibadat
Aur kuch na janu, bas itna hi janu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Sajdhe sar jukhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu
Tujh mein rab dikhta hai
Yaara mein kya karu


Aalekh hands Sadhana a flower. Everyone looks on happy and starts clapping. The lights come back on. Everyone starts congratulating the other and hugging one another. Vasu tells Sadhana to show Ragini her house and take her suggestions when it came to how she wants her room to be like. Ranvir and Aalekh, without a word, follow Sadhana and Ragini.

When Sadhana and Ragini reach Ranvir's room, he comes in:

Ranvir: Bhabi, aapko neeche koi bularaha hain.
Sadhana: Kaun, devarji?
Ranvir: Jee, woh mujhe pata nahin. Woh.. uh, Pratam hai na, usne mujhe bataya.
Aalekh: Haan dost, chalo tum.

Aalekh grabs Sadhana's hand and is taken out of the room. Ranvir and Ragini are left alone. 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Rahm ur amazing!!! the 5th part is just how imagined the scene on monday/tuesday to be like :)
brilliant work dudette!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
read all the three parts... and its too good.. seriously... loved mamaji-mamiji scene sweet and short... mamaji ne toh short cut mei mamiji ke dimaag se kachra nikaal pheka😆😆😆... yeah also liked ragini in ur FF as she at least stood up or her love... and how can i forget to mention the song sequence in ur FF... awesome.. awesome..awesome👏👏👏... hope the creatives come up with something like this so that the next week becomes a treat for us as it is becoming after reading ur FF....

please please please update the next part soon... eagerly waiting for the cute RagVir moment...


*~VASUNDHARA~*

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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Part 6

Ragini and Ranvir are in Ranvir's room. Ranvir walks towards Ragini.

Ranvir: Haan, toh bataye, aapko mera room kaisa laga?
Ragini: Jee, achcha laga.
Ranvir: Kuch improvement ki zaroorat nahi hai?
Ragini: Jee, nahi. Achcha, sab log neche humara intezaar kar rahe honge, chaliye.

Saying that Ragini tries to walk out the room except she stopped by Ranvir who holds her hand and pulls her back, right up against a wall.

Ranvir: Ragini, jab tumhein itna mushkil se paya hoon, main tumhe aise kaise jaane dete?
Ragini: Ranvirji, agar koi aa jaaye toh? Choriye aur yahan se jaaye.
Ranvir: Toh kya hua? Tum ab mere ho chuki ho. Haan, just phere lene ki dereh hain. Aur tumne aaj se shuru kar di mujhe bedroom se nikhal dene ki?
Ragini: 😳 Magar..
Ranvir: Ab tumhara agar magar choro aur mujh par deyan doh. Mujh bechare par kuch toh rehm karo.
Ragini: Accha? Kya ki jaaye aap ke liye?
Ranvir: Jo maangu gi voh doh gi kya?
Ragini: Haan.
Ranvir: Ek bar phir sochlo. Jab mangoon gi tab toh dena hi hoga.
Ragini: Aap mang kar toh dekhiye. Mere bas mein jo hai voh toh mein aapse doungi, na.
Ranvir: Accha, toh mujhe ek kiss chahiye.
Ragini: Kya? Lekin, main kaise..
Ranvir: Simple hain, main kar ke dekhaun?
Ragini: Nahi, mera matlab yeh nahi tha
Ranvir: Lo bhai, maine mang liya, ab baaki sab tumhari maarzi.

Ragini puts her hand over Ranvir's eyes which makes Ranvir immediately remove his hands from the sides of the wall and put it over her hands. She then quickly gives him a kiss on his cheek, whispers I love you and runs out the room.

Ranvir stands there for 20 seconds unable to move with the biggest smile on his face and then he runs after her...
Edited by Rahm - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Rahm ur the best!!!!!
finally theres a proper kiss ..lolzz😆😳
im sick of the forehead kisses..
ur just too good dear ... this part is so beautiful!!
i loved it!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 7

On her run downstairs, Ragini bumps into Sadhana and Aalekh who were just coming to tell Ranvir and Ragini to come down for dinner. Ranvir then joins them and they all go downstairs. The dinner was a huge feast. Ranvir, Ragini, Aalekh, Sadhana, Malti and Vineet sat on one side of the table while on the other side it was Mamaji, Mamiji, Choti Ma, Chachu, Avni, and Naveen. Indrajit and Vasu sat at the two heads of the table.

Ranvir who was too busy staring at Ragini puts his hand on a really hot roti and pulls his hand back really fast knocking over some rice. Everyone laughs at him.

Sadhana: Devarji, aap jiji se kam aur aapke kaane par zaara sa deyan dijiye.
Malti: Jhoot toh main bolti nahin, jab Ragini inke samne hain, toh bukh aur pyaas kaha se lage gi?

Ranvir blushes a bit. Ragini looks at him and smiles. He immediately smiles back.

Sadhana: Jiji aap bhi shuru ho gayi? Hum sabne itna pyaar se yeh menu prepare kiya aur aap toh kuch khaa hi nahi re.
Vasu: Sadhana, meri bahu ko ab ched na maat.
Ranvir: 😃

Dinner goes smoothly and after dinner the pundit comes and says that the only available date is next week itself and nothing else for another year. Everyone agrees that next week would be perfect as no one is willing to wait another year, least of all Ranvir.

It's time for the Sharma family to go home. Indrajit insists that the drivers will drive them home. Ranvir and Aalekh make a plan. When it was time to leave, Ranvir tells Ragini that Aalekh is calling her in his room. Ragini goes to find out why. Ranvir then puts Mamaji and Mamiji in a car and sends them off saying that Ragini went because Aalekh called her and he'll send her in the next car. He then puts Malti and Vineet in one car and sends them off.

Meanwhile Ragini is upstairs with Aalekh.

Ragini: Jijaji, kuch kaam tha kya?
Aalekh: Haan, woh, maine, woh.. tumhari painting banayi thi!
Ragini: Oh..
Aalekh: Lekin woh toh Ranvir ke paass hain. Uh, chalo hum Ranvir ke room mein ja kar doondte hain, okay?
Ragini: Lekin Jijaji, mere jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai. Ma aur Bauji neche intezaar kar rahe honge.
Aalekh: Woh mujhe nahin pata. Mujhe tumhein woh painting dekhani hain aur waise bhi, woh log toh tumein chor kar nahi jaayenge na? Don't worry. Okay?
Ragini: Achcha...

Ranvir goes to his room to find Ragini and Aalekh there.

Ranvir: Ragini! Tum abhi tak gaaye nahin? Sab log toh chale gaaye.
Ragini: Kya? Aise kaise? 😕
Ranvir: Lagta hain woh log nahin chahte ke tum wapas waha jaoun.
Ragini: Ranvirji, main kaise ghar jaaongi?
Ranvir: Areh, tum ghar hi toh ho.
Aalekh: Ranvir, tum dost ki Jiji ko Mamaji ke ghar le jao.
Ranvir: Chalo bhai, main tumko le chalti hoon.

Ranvir drives Ragini a little further and then pretends the car broke down. He then tells her they'll have to walk by foot the rest of the way. He then holds her hand.

Ranvir: Ab yeh maat bolo ke koi dekh le ga.
Ragini: Main kuch nahin bolungi. Aaj main itna khush hoon ke main aapko bata bhi nahi sakta. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ke main koi haseen sapna dekh rahi hoon.
Ranvir: Ragini, yeh khushi maine sapne mein bhi nahin mehsoos kiya tha. Ab toh kissi tara yeh hafta par ho jaaye aur tum hamesha ke liye mere paas aa jao phir dekhna jo tum sapne mein bhi nahin mehsoos kiya, woh sab mein tumhein dekhar rahoonga.

With that, Ranvir kisses her hand and they hug. They walk the rest of the way home quietly, enjoying the comfort in the silence. Ranvir drops Ragini off and goes home.

After Ranvir reaches home, he calls Sadhana and Aalekh and tells them to come outside.

Ranvir: Bhabi, shaadi ke waqt kya kya hota hai? Mera matlab, phere hote hain, but kaise aur mujhe kya karna hoga?
Aalekh: Areh stupid, itna bhi maloon nahin tumhein? Main dhikati hoon.

Aalekh finds a pot of clay and he grabs Sadhana's hand and a flower off of a bush and then he sits down with Sadhana and remembers their wedding and he does it all straight from throwing the flower into the pot (he's pretending there's fire there) to taking the pheres with Sadhana. He then pretends to put on the mangal sutra and the sindoor.

Ranvir watches on with a big smile while Sadhana was just following Aalekh mesmerized by him. After Aalekh finished putting on the sindoor, Sadhana couldn't help herself, she hugged Aalekh even though Ranvir was there. She had completely forgotten that Ranvir was there until he cleared his throat and when she looked at him, he looked away...
Edited by Rahm - 16 years ago

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