LaagaChunriMeinDaag(AR)#2 LAST PART PG-15 02/05 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky_5

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Hiiiii everyone......I know u all must be wondering where did I get lost again........i'm very very sorry my pc has been giving me a lot of problems these days......after lot of efforts it has started again........i'll post the next part by tomorrow but no pm's will be sent because due to some errors my internet is not getting connected for long time.......I know u all are waiting eagerly so i'll manage posting the part somehow but sorry that no pm's will be sent.....so please keep checking this page......
Hope you all understand my problem & manage without my pm's for sometime......
luv u all,
pinky.
P.S. i'm sorry i havent replied to your comments this time due to technical problems but I dont want you to be waiting for more time so i'll update the part.....



hey pinky...
dont worry yaar hum pms ke baghair bhi kaam chala lein ge but u just try to post the part...
last part bhi tum ne aisi jaga rok liya tha tht we are like hanging fot the next on!!!!!😃
so u just update baqi humara kaam!!!!
love...
zanNy...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pinky no problems...take ur time...will be checking regularly!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hiiiiii everyone......Thankssssssss a lot for your patience & love & also for my birthday wishes.....A big hug to yachu dear for your sweet card......I'm glad you remembered......

RECAP:

It is revealed that the real culprit is amit.He tries to force himself on ridz.

PART-16:

Ridz looked around the room trying to find a place to run but there was no place.She kept going back & back but her leg hit the edge of the bed & she slipped on the bed.She tried getting up but amit hold her legs.He bought ridz underneath him & tried going close to her.Ridz tried protesting.She tried to hit him but he caught her hands.She tried kicking him but her legs were fully overpowered by his legs.She shouted for help & her face became wet with tears.She kept screaming & screaming for help while amit had buried his head on her neck licking & kissing it.She kept struggling but no one came for help.His hands went on her chest trying to open up buttons of her patient dress but a 3rd hand came & stopped him.Amit was pushed hard on the ground.He didnt even have a chance to know what was happening as he was been beaten like hell.Finally he saw armaan howling over him like a wild animal.

Am: armaan yeh tu kya kar raha hai????tu mujhpar haath utha raha hai??woh bhi is riddhima ki wajah se....bhool gaya ki main tera best friend hu???humaare beech koi ladki nahi aa sakti.....tu bahar jaa aur mujhe mera kaam karne de....

Ar: teri himmat kaise hui riddhima ko haath lagaane ki???

Am: dekh mere saamne tu natak mat kar....main jaanta hoon ki tu bhi wahi chahta hai jo main chahta hoon......sach mein badi gazab ki cheez hai yeh.....koi bhi aadmi isko dekhte hi apna banana chahta hai.....ek kaam kar tu mera kaam khatam hone de baad mein tu raat bhar iske saath aish kar....

He got another punch in the stomach.Armaan was beating him more badly than even before.

Ar: teri himmat kaise hui mere pyaar ke baare mein aisa bolne ki??

2 people came from behind & stopped armaan from killing amit.They were police officers.They caught amit & handcuffed him.Amit surely didnt expect police to be here.He was totally shocked.

Am: aap log mujhe giriftaar nahi kar sakte....maine kuch nahi kiya....

Ar: tumhaari saari sachaai saamne aa gayi hai.....main jaan chuka hoon ki saare illegal transplantations tumne hi kiye hai...

Am: kya????nahi.......woh.....main....maine kuch nahi kiya....armaan tumhe mujhpar vishwaas nahi hai?????

Ar: vishwaas???

Saying this he spat on his face.

Ar: maine aaj raat tumhaari aur riddhima ki saari baatein sun li....maine riddhima ko call kiya tabhi usne tumhe dhaka diya....tumhe dhaka dene ki wajah se woh paas wala table hil gaya aur uska mobile gir gaya aur bhagwaan ka karishma toh dekho mobile bandh hone ki bajaai chalu ho gaya...aur maine tumhaari saari baatein sun li....maine police ko turant inform kiya aur yahaan aa gaya.....aaj main jaan chuka hoon tumhaare mann mein mere liye kitni nafrat hai...ab tumhe koi nahi bachaa sakta....jail jaane ke liye tayaar ho jao....

Am: par tumhaare paas koi saboot nahi hai....

Ar: ek nahi balki bahut saare....baahar tumne jo peon ko khada rakha hai humne usse bhi giriftar kar liya hai......aur woh peon jisko tumne kal raat maara tha aur woh bhaag gaya woh bhi pakda gaya hai......ab tumhaare saath mile hue saare log pakde jaayege.....

Amits face looked as if someone had slapped him hard.He opened his mouth but no words came.The police took him away.Armaan turned around to see riddhimas condition.She was still in state of shock.There were no more tears but her face looked worse with this condition.Armaan went to her & cupped her face but she didnt respond to his touch.

Ar: riddhima....

No response.

He caressed her cheek.

Ar: riddhima meri taraf dekho.

With great effort she looked in his eyes.As soon as their eyes met her eyes got filled with tears.She hugged him immediately.She started repeating his name.

Ar: sshhh riddhima.....calm down.sab theek hai.....

Ri: armaan...usne.....mere saath....

Ar: its ok riddhima...

He kissed away her tears & kissed her on lips gently making her pacify that he was there with her & nothing wrong happened.She remained in his arms for a long time & didnt realise when she went to sleep.Even he didnt wish to leave her in this state & slept with her in his arms.Both felt complete & protected.

MORNING:

Ridz got up in the morning & found herself in armaans arms.She shuddered at the thought of what would happen if armaan hadnt come.But she felt armaans protecting arms around herself & knew nothing could happen till he was with her but she wondered for how long will armaan remain in her life.Just then armaan opened his eyes & saw her deep in thoughts.He gave her a peck on cheek & asked if she was okay.She gave a reassuring nod.She realised armaan would also be disturbed after knowing amits truth.She knew armaan had always meant him as a brother.

Ri: armaan tum theek ho???

Ar: haan main theek hoon....

But it was a lie & ridz could make it out from his face.

Ri: armaan main jaanti hoon tum amit ki sachaai jaan kar dukhi ho.....

Just then he broke into sobs.She had never in her entire life seen a man crying.He must have really been broken.She patted his shoulders as she knew it was her time to comfort him now.

Ar: usne aisa kyu kiya????maine uspar rahul-atul se bhi zyaada bharosa kiya.....yeh hospital ka incharge banaaya usse.....jab bhi vivek aur uske beech jhagde hote main hamesha uski side lekar baat karta.....aur usne????us ke liye hamaari dosti sirf ek dhoka thi....itne saal us ne mujhse jhooth pe jhooth bole......mujhse insaan pehchaanne mein galti kaise ho gayi????

Ri: its ok armaan...life mein aisi cheezein hoti rehti hai... jo hua usse bhool jaoo....samajh lo tum kabhi amit ko jaante hi nahi thi....usne jo kiya uski sazaa usse zaroor milegi....

Ar: fir bhi kaash yeh sab nahi hua hota....ab mujhe apno se bahut darr lagne lagaa hai...kahin mere apne mujhe chod na de...riddhima tum mere saath hamesha rahogi na???

Ri: haan armaan main hamesha tumhaare saath hoon....chalo ab rona bandh karo....tum rote hue bilkul achche nahi lagte....

Ridz wiped his tears.Just then they heard footsteps coming towards them.Armaan quickly got up from the bed & held ridz wrist as if checking her pulse rate.The door opened & entire mallik gang & naina enetered the room.They were all tensed.It seemed the police had informed them about amit.They demanded an explaination from armaan & armaan told them everything about the call & what amit tried to do with ridz.Ofcourse he had still hadnt told them about ridz being a prostitute.By the end of conversion anjali was already crying & hugging ridz.Little did she know ridz didnt need her consolation as armaan had already made her strong again.But still ridz hugged her back.Everyone was shocked on the revealation that amit was behind everything.Jr.armaan who didnt understand much was jumping in his mothers lap with happiness shining on his face after meeting his mother.

2 DAYS LATER:

Everything was normal.Ridz had discharged.It was the day of riddhima's performance.A very big day not only for her but even for armaan as they had finally decided that after ridz's performance they'll tell everyone the truth about their relation & even ridz identity.Keerti,Shubh & shash had also come to goa as they were incharge of sanjeevani & had to sign some documents & also wait till amits case ended.But the big question is will everything happen as AR predicted?Will their family approve of their relation?Or will AR's relation end?

It was evening time just 1 hr before the performance.Everyone had gathered in ridz dressing room to wish her luck when rahul got a call that amit had ran away from jail.

P.S: No pms because of technical problems my internet is not functioning properly.

Thanksssssss once again & hope you enjoy this part.....plzzzzzzz do leave comments.......

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Posted: 16 years ago
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*Edited*

First one to comment.............
i really liked this part di.............😛
soooo sweet..........
thanx for u r wonderful update di....
Edited by cute_unknown_fr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pinky...
awsome one dear...
but he ran away frm jail such a *******...
after all that beating up...
and armaan was sad...
the way u show their relationship is like so kool!!!
it seems so romantic and real...
best of luck fr the internet...
do try to update soon...

love...
zanNy... 😊

Edited by ~*evil zanny*~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
good one
and now dont dissappear again
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
woooooow awesome part really good
plsss continue sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pinky my sweatheart hope u had blast on ur birthday shorry late wish karne ke liye actuly irememberd but forgot shorryyyyyyyyyyy nd abt ur prt omggg yaar i ws scared but as armaan der no fear i jst lvd it yaar vry gud he should killd him but police aa gayi nd ridz ws totaly shaken up ohh god wht if ar wsnt der thank god yaar he consoled her nd all family now knows but not abt ridz truth hm nd she wll gonna perform nd shocking news amit ran away god wht gonna happen i hope nothing will get wrong cnt wait ab bahut zyada wait karna padega chalo no worries....
cont soooooooooon this is for u
happy chocolate day

nd this is for all of u
thodi si meri bhi hehehe..........
luv yachu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wwowowo...
dat was a brilliant update.. luvd it loadssssssss...
waitngg 4 d actuall performance
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww amazing part! amit is such a jerk, good thing he got arrested 😡
armaan and ridzy were so cute! making each other stronger 😛
i have a feeling armi's relationship is not going to be taken well 😔
they should make armi's family understand that ridzy is not really a prostitute, just a dancer 😕
oh well will be waiting for ur next part! cont soon 😃

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