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Posted: 20 years ago
continue soon. can u plz explain what is happening in the flashbacks i don't get what is happening?
g8 fan fic.
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Originally posted by: tru_capricorn

continue soon. can u plz explain what is happening in the flashbacks i don't get what is happening?
g8 fan fic.
heena

Sorry for the confusion heena, Basically Aaliya is running in the woonds screaming Bhaya and bhaiya because a man is chasing her. Finally she comes of to stop but suddenly the Man was faster than her appeared in front of her and grabbed her hair, gave a tight slap. The effect of tight slap made her fall down, her head hits the tree and she falls down consciously.

The next we know that Angad appears fights with the man, The man produces a knife from his pocket and goes for Angad, but Angad did not notice this because he was busy bashing him off. However at that time Aaliya regain conscious the first thing she sees is the knife, she screams Bhaiya. Angad notices it suddenly twists his hand which he was holding on to and made him stabbed himself (the Man, on the stomach). He was quite shocked what he has done'

I hope this helps

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CONTINUED

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The next think he knew was he was in the dark.

*Back to present*

Suddenly the door opened, A lady stood in front of him and she had her tied up in close bun, she had few scratches on her face and her clothes were bit ripped. He knew this person he thought as he was lying on the floor could not make the person face. The person came in; 'Aaliya' he muttered in whispery voice, is relieved.

'Bhayya' she said as she ran and hugged him tightly.

She started sobbing loudly on his shoulder and he hugged her back. He was glad to have her back. Although he did not have any blood related sisters but he was glad to make one.

Aaliya, she was the same age as Angad but is not that rich unlike Angad's. Her mother died as she was born and her father worked in Soul academy as a manager of marketing department. He was paid very well that he can make up of his social life and of course at the end he had enough to save for the leisure. Aaliya was the 'jaan' of her father; he never let her feel about the mother presence. He did everything for her that her mother did. He had himself gained a lot respect from the company by Dilip and Naina. Moreover they promised him to pay him and look after his daughter after he dies. Angad knew this of course. One day suddenly her father has to go out of the country for some deal but sadly the plane he was to fly on to was overtaken by the 'secret spies.' At that time they were wanted in the country, however they planted a bomb in the plane because they were not given the amount they asked for the MP of Mumbai. The conditions at that time were very poor but socially and economically. Unable to pay the amount, 'the secret spies' jumped off the plane by parachute leaving the bomb. The most heartbreaking thing was that this was all watched by the viewers in Mumbai. However Aaliya at that time was 20 saw the plane exploded she was shocked and unable to react. The both khanna's' (Naina and Dilip) took no sympathy towards her but instead snatched everything from her including her house, money etc. The house she was living on to was of the company.

Angad saw all this happening in front of his eyes, indeed both did have any relationship at that time. They were best friends. He would visit her very often; she along with his dad played and spent a lot time together. Even her dad allowed him to call him dad as well.

He was angry at his parent but was not able to do anything. He secretly sold his properties in the Name of Aaliya khanna's. He promised her that he will always be there for her as his brother. Both never hide anything from each other.

Aaliya he said softly, everything will be O.K

Your Brother is here, why worry.

Why does it always happen to me, what have I done to deserve this? She asked still crying.

They both pull away.

Suddenly he thought about the dead body.

'Aaliya, where is..'

before he could ask, she cut him off by saying;

'The police knows everything, she then explains after you killed him you fainted, I then took you here, I then called the police told them exactly what happened, this man was also 'wanted' in police record, so we are free'

'But, I don't understand, I killed him aaliya'

'bhaya.. please don't confuse yourself, you have done nothing wrong'

'Nothing wrong, Aaliya, what are you talking about, I have killed someone dammit' he shouted with anger frustration taking over him. He was guilty, responsible.

'Bro, you don't believe me' she said

'How is it possible for me not being punished after I killed someone?'

She was angry for him not trusting him yet she was sad. She irritably grabbed his arm and took to his car. She drove to the police station.

At the police station

Aaliya: Inspector can I have details about the incident that took place 3days ago

3 days thought Angad; it means I have been sleeping for three days, hows that possible. He was confused again but brushed it away easily because it was not important than this.

'Sure Madam' replied the Inspector.

'According to the police record we have been searching for this man nearly three months. This man has not only raped 4 women but also murdered 12 people because of money. He was also the part of underworld deals that we found out last week. We are very thankful for you to hand the man to our hands'

'But I killed him' he said slowly

The police officer was none other than Amit Verma. He was the same person who handled the cases of A-K fights. He raises his eye brows as he recognizes the man.

'Mr. Khanna' he said sharply 'Are we in trouble again'

This officer was not with Aaliya at that time but others were. . However he was known to the situation as the others told him'.

He swears that he could just kill him right now by revealing the things to her. What does he think of? He certainly did not want to know this to her because as always she will team up with the girls to defend the girls' power and tease men.

'you both know each other' she said trying to Know more.

'Err yeah, so it was me who killed him' he said trying to avoid the topic.

'Are you sure Miss, it was him' the inspector was surprised but again wanted to confirm the news

'Yes sir' she replied with full confidence but she could sense something wrong.

The inspector eyed him carefully however the Khanna returned him by giving him the smirk back.

'Looser' he thought. He was back to normal, he realized he done the right thing. That man deserved the right to be killed

'Oh in that case we leave you Mr.khanna' he said dryly.

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He spent all the weekend with Aaliya. Aaliya was now going to join the college because she just came back from London as she has just finished doing modelling. She was anxious and excited to join the college.

Angad however did not even go to his own home in the last 3 days because he knew would be really bothered instead of listening the long lessons.

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In the class

Kripa along with harshini entered her class her eyes were looking for someone expecting him to be here. She goes and takes her seat. The class was about to began suddenly she freezes when she saw Angad entering the class;

He was wearing red t-shirt with FCUK jeans. He took his seat next to Kripa. (Just to remind you all, this was the seating plan that the professor has set).

She looks at him horrified with wide eyes

Angad notices this and is just confused why she is looking at him like this as if she has seen the ghost. He returns looking back giving the usual smirk.

She is still horrified and frightened because she was sitting next to the murderer.

(Remember she does not know everything, she has just seen the knife in his hand and the man lying on the floor)

She gulps down; Angad on the other hand is confused because she is reacting very different.

In the whole lessons she does not even look at him but stays away from him. She does not even say anything to him or tries to fight with him.

As the lesson is finally over she quickly gets up run to the door.Harshini notices this is confused.

Angad just think; maybe she got her lesson back, but why is he sad. She is different today, she did not even argue with him. He liked the moment when he fought with her even if he was angry but something was wrong.

In the canteen

Angad along with his gang whole time eyed Kripa to see what she reacts and to do something to make her angry but to his surprise she would not look at him just ignore him.

Kripa on the other hand was familiar that Angad was staring at her like whole down, she was nervous and yet again terrified. She thought; OMG, what if he has seen me, may be he wants to.. .' this thought just send shivers on her spine. Somewhere on her heart it's saying that she is wrong.

'but how' she thought because she saw this in front of her eyes what else the evidence could be'

Misty was jealous because she saw Angad looking towards Kripa whole time.

Aaliya however witnessed the whole scene, she can make out that there is something wrong and senses the tension between those two.

Once Kripa walking in the corridors, she bumped into someone without looking who he the person she quickly bents downs to pick her books as she was getting bit late to the lesson. As stood up she becomes petrified as she saw Angad standing in front of her looking at her. She quickly rushes leaving Angad puzzled there.

He noticed that she was actually FRIGHTENED of him and no longer cursing or creating a fight. He was sad at the same time because he was being ignored which does not why? He asked himself 'why does he care' but no answer. He had the sudden urge to know the reason why was she reacting the same way .

She snapped her finger in front of him; 'Bhayya' she called

'What' he replied?

She noticed his tone was bit sad decided not to ask because she knew he would not just answer him as he was determined what he has to do.

She also saw Kripa taking the left at the end of the corridor, she realized it was the same girl who was Angad starring at the Canteen.

'I got lesson, see you later' he said hurry making his way out. He can see Aaliya will start her long interrogation. So he rushed out quickly.

Next Preview: Angad and Kripa consultation

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Keep your comments coming in as it tells me how many of you out there are reading. 😉

luv ya all

sanya

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Posted: 20 years ago
awwwwwww sooo goooooood
plz cont soooooon
it was just fabbbbbbbb 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome yaar
ur too good
plz cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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I just loved it...
it was gr8...
plz cont. soon...
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Continued

It was her free period, she did not have any less for an hour and even Harshini is in lesson now. She did not know what to do, so she went to toilet to freshen up herself.

As she locked her door, she turned around to find Angad standing there smirking at her. She did know how to react but she quickly unlocked it and ran out.

As she came out, she was breathing harder and harder and was sweating. She wanted to know what she has to do anything with Angad. She thought 'Oh no may be he saw me'

Angad on the other came outside the girls toilet perplexed look on his face.

'Why were you in the girls' toilet' asked Aaliya

She has been deliberately followed Angad whole day because he was reacting bit different, although she has visited the college before but today was something different. She saw kripa running out of the toilet with a worried look on her face.

'I went into the wrong toilet' lied Angad, hoping that she would take that.

'Who do you think you are hiding from? I know what you were doing'

He frowned, 'were you following me?' he asked

'Come on, stop changing the subject, what's wrong' she asked simply rubbing her nails on the nail shaper, trying to be cool.

'Aaliya, I don't what the hell you are going on about, I have to go' with that he again disappeared into another corridor

'I will get you soon' she said making her own way to her lesson.

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The college has just finished, she stood there outside by the gate waiting for Harshini. It was a lot crowded at that time because most people finished at the last lesson. After fifteen minutes it was silent, only few people came out but no sign of Harshini. She checked her watch again and let out angry frustration;

'Where could she be?' she thought, it's nearly 15 minutes late. Suddenly her cell rang and the screen name said, Harshoo

'Hello'

'Harsh, where are you, I have been waiting for you ages?'

'Sorry.. Kripa but I forgot to tell you that I came home early'

'Are you alrite?'

'yeah, I am fine, it's just I got a minor headache'

'oh O.K, I'll get a taxi home'

it was nearly getting dark and which reminded of her the night of 'murder'. She shuddered wishing to get a lift soon. She waited there for two or three and decides to give up. She was about to walk away to the nearest Taxi station suddenly when a strong pairs of hand grabbed her and made her turn around.

As she turns around she could see the cold red eyes starring at her and it was none other than Angad. She has not seen him like this before. She was scared what he will do too her.

Angad who was unable to take the reaction when he saw that Kripa reacted different this day, she was afraid of him and ignored him which no girl ever dared to do. He was sad and yet angry at the same time.

He pushed her to the wall; they were so close that they can hear each other breathes

She tried to push him away but he was too strong she could not do anything. Tears slowly came out of her eyes and she looked down. She does not want to die; she can see he is very dangerous. She was that sad she wants to back New York. He was confused of what he has done to her that she was crying and she never saw her crying. Suddenly the felt of remorse covered his heart and he immediately stepped back and disappeared.

She can't believe it what just happened. She was confused of how to react.

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preview: the moment u were all waiting for 😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
when will u post da next part??

btw dis part is awesome....just luv it!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
i can't wait plz post soon...................
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lovely part...the pair did not talk at all....plsss cont soon.

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