Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 87

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi! sam
it was such a good part
the part which casually started had an intense finish
the line "it is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired" was superb
i luv the way u play with the words
i luved everyone's take on lve
my take would be a mixture of each one's take
anji's take after ridz finished it was so shocking
she cant digest the attraction bet. ridz and armaan
and it was very wicked of rahul to invoke reactions from ridz as well from muskaan during their respective take of love
atul as usual was sweet and ya thank god he didnt allow ankit to pacify ridz
now i am eagerly waiting for armaan-ridz convo!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the pm!

love:
aishwarya


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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part Sam!!! loved how u took a light conversation between a group of friends to sumthing which opened them all up n gave us a rather hint of everything going on, in n around thm.. a beautifully written conversation, very easy to relate to...especially ridzie's n armaan's lines...i was like, omg, how true!! i wouldn't say i didn't agree to anjali as well, she had a point had she just been careful to have not hurt ridhima in the process...n atul..oh..i thought he wud say sumthing as intense as the others as well, coz he's the only one well aware of EVERYTHING here, all the links, all possibilities, everything...but liked wat he said, nonetheless...wat he said revolves around anjali, maybe?? n the part where u see armaan getting a bit jealous to knw that ridzie has confided in rahul was gud too!! wonder wats gonna turn up now...u can twist things so easily, girl, it was difficult to predict such an ending to the part.. enjoyed it a lot!!
luv,
anu.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey!!....I just came across your fanfic...amazing, seriously...I love how you have shaped the characters and the storyline...this part was also amazing...I hope Armaan does something that will shut Anjali up!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
ggr888 prt.. luvd d ay u bldng d story.. superb..
thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Whats up with Anjali? She is very obvious and high time Armaan takes this as a hint and makes a corrective action.
The update is full of LOVE Sam ... and reading so many perspectives from 1 person (i.e. U), am bowled ...
Well ... I know no positives and negatives about anyones opinions, but am also a believer of letting the person know of the feelings. Its always not for good or bad .. its just that u did the best and won't regret that the option was never tried.So totally agree with Muskaan and Rahul here.
Rahul is such a sweetheart ... first he puts AR in an embarrasing situation by giving away about Ridz being up entire night ... and then (in her hurt situation) calms her and walks away making way for Armaan to remain with her. Whats next on RM track? Waiting to read on!!!
Wow ... Ankit's changing tastes did not go unnoticed by his friends. Its very evident that Ankit is falling for Riddhima and can also comprehend the fate of this relationship .. but wondering what will be the reactions when truth surfaces!!!And dunno if its correct, but the moment Ankit feels that Armaan is a threat for AnR relationship, he would surely do something to create misunderstanding between AR.
Hey ... Atul having soft corner for Anjali .. now is he harbouring some feelings or its pure concern out of friendship?
Waiting to read the next bit ... please please please update soon.
Cheers,
Suvarna
Edited by suv.patki - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey--
just left a comment-- its like the second post after hte last part (ie on pg 108) ---- =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oohhhh!!! gosh!!! wht a lovely piece of creation hav i cum across..it is one of the finest story i hav ever read..
So u muz b confused..right!!! Tht who am i???...dnt panic i vill help u in this..
well to start of i m very new to tis forum..tis new tht tis is my first post dear..juz got registered to reply 2 ur thread..cudnt set myself aback 4rm replying..though i curse u 4 spoiling my sleep..hahahahh..😃😃
to begin with i came across this lovely piece of urs juz coincidently..while surfing the net..
it is the title of the story tht has actually attracted me or rather pulled me....as say
i m also in Bschool presently..persueing my 4th semester of MBA Program..
ven i opened the link i thought it to b something related to my curriculam..but after opening it the story was totally different..but i m glad tht i came across it..
u dnt knw wht hav u dne i was awaking till six in the morning yesterday n reading ur story..imagine haaaaahh..keeping aside my assignments..
hey though not fair on ur part to take my sweet nights sleep n dreams too mind u..lollolll
every part is very beautifully written..u hav dne complete justice to the story i muz say..i m also liking the rhythm u r following..slow n steady...
nt in any hurry i guess..
in ur story if the frenship is so sweet i wonder hw the confession vill b??cant vait..
belive me every incident u hav written i can practically relate to it..thtz the real magic of ur story i guess..itz so real n practical..allthose OB classess(yuks),assignments,placement secretary,freeking out on weekends..n lots mre..hahhaha
and ya i muz nt 4get itz nt only the story but also ur way of commenting n thanking people tht i luved...
i m also a book worm so got so many buks piled up in store 4 reading aftr reading ur story..luking 4wd to read them asap..
u can definately add one more fan in ur fan club..entry milegi na??😛..thtz hillarious yaa..but had to write it
k.k.k.i wont bore u further by my stupid comments..
but the post is incomplete without the word..
"THANK YOU"...
really yaa..thanx a ton 4 taking out urs precious time n writing it..
vill definately vait 4 ur next update..i guess the part vill b worth the vait...
👏
i dn knw much abt the forum but in any wayz if u can keep me informed ven u hav updated..it vill really b very greatful of u
as it vill b tough to keep a track regularly..
P.S. keep rocking the world at ur tips!!!!!
MONICA...
Edited by eternal soul - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
part 18 and 19 were amazingly written
i really enjoyed the way u are describing each charachters feelings
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wonderful update Sam.
Quite a part,
you seem to capture all the right emotions.
Dont know what else i can say at the moment.
Will be waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

u updatedddd !!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)
YaY--

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heyy-- sorry for the late reply-- i like to be totally relaxed wen i read FFs esp this one coz i enjoy it so much and if i'm in a rush then i tend to skim thru it and dont enjoy it as much as i wd have otherwise --

gr8 part-- yea it wasnt exactly the nice romantic part i wd hav liked bt it kinda set the stage for wat i predict will be a LOTT of fireworks in the near future, be it from anjali or even atul-- i just hope AR can overcome them-- which i'm sure they will be able to do--

anyway, cant wait to read the nxt part-- take care and update soon
oh and i was wondering-- can u recommend any FFs that ur readin or have already read (preferably with links)-- i'd really appreaciate it :D

I agree completely with you sweet sweetaddiction! I prefer reading something when I have the luxury of time otherwise it ruins the pleasure of reading...except when I am reading work memos...those the faster they're got rid of the better! 😆 Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!
I am travelling today but should have the evening free, so shall update the part if I have net access....and if the explorer does not decide to play hookey with me again!

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