Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 85

heyyy!!!....am just astonished reading this part!!....

sam!!

awesome update....is all i can say..in a mood i am incapable of describin at d moment...maybe a bad time to read such a wonderful update..!!

d dealings were brilliantly described....emotionz..finally...honesty i carry wen i comment...one d things i koe nutterz luv abt me..wen it cumz to comments on ter ficz..and wit u i stick 2 d same...maybe couple comments bck i think i mentioned it to kratz..who so dearly luves yur update...much more than me...yahh and i said i luv her updates bt it misses one thin...i juss cant c throguh it...n its finally here...atleast for me to c and feel...."emotions"...
dt was really fab work frm you..:D

Love is blind, Love is blind
a fact such that only two can know
them in love or them blind..
Why i ask, is the need that occurs?
Love is...love. I quote thee for you to know.
Don't rub my wounds that love scratched in me
I am not blind..are you in love?

Maybe this would tell how your update was to me...yup m touched..maybe u mite hve noticed..i give tem a verse....them deservin updates.. :)

i wud hve told u much in detail..if it werent for ma fowl mood...!!

luv nijaL =)

hey sam!! this part was absolutely amazing...i understand why you like it so much, its so....realistic i'll say. i loved the love conversation, it really helps to figure out the characters' personalities. oh and i absolutely loved riddhima's take on love....it was really very sweet, and meaningful.....but anjali's comment...ouch hahah, im surprised i dont hate her yet. but thats probly because i can see that your not portraying her as a bad person, just insecure i suppose. Anyways, im loving ar's relationship....and its perfect....dont rush anything! lol i find it totally awesome that your making their friendship develop, and its very important for them to be friends.....i doubt love just happens in a second...lol i guess thats my take on it, but yeah, i love how their becoming better friends and more fond of eachother.

awesome part!! really enjoyed reading it! and thanks for the pm as usual!

great part! plz continue soon! i hope armaan realizes what anjali feels for him and sets things straight!

fantastic update, sam! i loved the way you penned down armaan and ridhima's take on love. <3 i was actually not surprised that anjali made such a rude remark about ridhima's thoughts, afterall she was told to share her thoughts and when she did, she was shunned by anjali's words. anjali should follow herown advice and grow up. anyways, i'm glad that atul, rahul and muskaan are supporting AR but why is ankit trying to change himself to be like armaan? does he really think that ridhima will like him any more than a friend after that?

Hey!

Originally posted by: armaans*basket*

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Sammm!! I am so sorry fot not having commented on the last part...i dunno why, i just lost track of time and i have been so sleep deprived in the past few days, i couldnt think straight...Anyways, i opened the link even before you had updated the title or sent out the pms so technically, this time i am the first reader hehe...

This part was, by far, my favorite in the whole story. I dunno why, i could SO relate to this part. The whole conversation was so real and authetic, and the way u portrayed everyone's POVs differently was awesome....i liked Armaan's outlook to it....and well, as u know, in the matter of love, i go the Ankit way but its not that i dont believe in it....i do, its totally the utmost desire of every human to be loved....but i am just letting time take the toll on me hehe....

Anjali's outburst...hmmm!! well, that was unexpected...one time shes so sweet to Riddhima and the second she just bursts out on her....guess the closeness b/w AR is really getting on to her...but one thing that i dun understand...Anjali is such a clear-headed strong minded girl, why not go and confess to Armaan? But then again, i guess u answered this question in the part itself....

Hmmm, so teh next part is what i am looking forward to now...it better be a long AR part...and yes, the three muskeeters, though not an absolute fav with me, was a good read...

Fav character in this part: this is difficult...it varies between Atul and Riddhima...for once, we saw the softer side of Riddhima where she's reduced to tears if someone ridicules her opinions and emotions...i loved that!! Atul, loved his support for AR, its like he is the only one sensing whats going on...hehe...

Fav scene: Armaan disentangling himsefl from Anjie and telling her to go ahead. That part truly showed how he cares for Riddhima, and how he doesnt want to expose his anger onto Anjie...and Rahul dragging Muskaan away...was awesome too...hilarious, the way Muskaan went like 'bitchy bitch' hahaha...Armaan's 'dear Rahul' made me grin like an idiot..hahaha...

Fav dialouge: an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired!!....this line totally made me smile...it was extremely well put, even if its a quote, its how u incorporated it into the dialouge...

Okkayyy...so now that my analysis is over....hope to see u updating soon...loads of love..

Kiran

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

u updatedddd !!!!!!!!!!!!!! =)
YaY--

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Sam,
Fabulous, superb, outstanding part actually don't have the right word to tell but yeah I completely loved, I am in love with ur FF.
U describe every emotion so brilliantly.
Man u r a book of knowledge (let me say u I haven't read a single book that u mention but yeah I'll read them soon)
Thnx a lot for the PM and continue soon.

Kashish

Originally posted by: aravi

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OMG sam that was awesome !!!!!!! u know the bestpart of ur fic is that i cant decide what i liked the best for that matter which part i liked the best with every update of urs my fav bit keeps changing well u noe due to xamz n all i cant catch up with my gang gosh n ur references to group convos soo makes me pins 4 our get-togethers i tell you srsly it's so much fun and well we actually faced an almost similar situation recently still cuming back i have noo words to explain well angie n ankit are a little messed up but then AR are no less in that department but i sooo adore atul i guess i missed his take on love but the other's esp armaan's :

I believe it's foolhardy to not express what you feel for someone. We all want to fall in love. Because that experience makes us feel completely alive. Where every sense is heightened, every emotion is magnified; our everyday reality is forgotten.....It may only last a moment, an hour, and an afternoon. But that doesn't diminish its value because we are left with memories that we treasure for the rest of our lives.....so why would you not want to grab that chance at happiness?

aww now that's quite a wonderful thot sam kudos you put it all very well but the best were riddhima's thot so true and heart touching every word has d depth to it i actually read it over thrice in a row hehe

"I can't imagine not taking a chance at love........to me love is an all consuming emotion which is tempestuous in its passion and gentle in its caring.........it preserves and protects, it teases and excites, it is ecstasy and it is torment, it's friendship set on fire, a web of involuntary responses, and as someone once said, an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired!!!!

so damn true if one actually gets thinking !!!! then armaan is so adorable he cudnt digest the fact that riddhima shared their moment wid her dear rahul while he cud easily wit atul n i luv it wen he refers to riddhima as "his sea urchin" he's really one of his kind n yet like u can so relate to him GOSH talk of weaving magic with words sam u r brilliant !!!!!!!! then angie's heated response aww riddhima on the verge of tears god wat a finish to such an intense talk but i love muski i tell ya n the proctective loyal attitude of hers i can so relate to her on that level i myself am that possessive about my frndsbut this convo actually got RM back on the track or it's just that i feel so?????? i am sooo looking forward to AR convo here ans sam did i see u updating soon like almost yesterday am alredayyy sooo excited!!!!

love ya

RV

p.s - the three musketeers aahhaa i read that one the third one is Aramis of all three he is the most flippant if i remember correctly the book's totally worth a read which character u liked the best???????

Am so happy that the part was nostalgic for you in as much it reminded you of your gang...and I guess love happpening amongst the gang is a given when there are a bunch of young kids with active hormones!