Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 86

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetestcoolest

hey sam...

it was amazing..!!
this gives me reason enough to hate anjali more...
n poor poor ridzi...gawsh!!....well...she was just givin her opinion n that too aftr she had been asked numerous times....
atul is such a darling....trying to act cupid..hehe
n i simply adore muskii...just like rahul i also love her loyalty n love for riddhima....
great part...
will be waiting for th next one...want to know what armaan does now..
thnx
annahet

Hi Annahet,
Did I tell you I love your name and even more the meaning? Another name to keep in that long list that I maintain as a ready reckoner for as and when I have children...😆
Am so glad that you liked the part and yes, while I do feel sorry for Ridhima, she is an innocent victim here, but I feel equally sorry for Anjali...it must be difficult to watch your dreams slip away....
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG fan

I can say one of the best parts of thie FF. I hope that now Armaan and Riddhima start doing some introspection on their own feelings.

Hey Thanks! Hopefully, yes, Armaan and Ridhima will start to pay a little more attention to what they are both feeling.....
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
The part was superb sam...one of the best in the fic i have to say...at least for me it is...them quoting on love and Riddzie's take on it....mirrors mine and even i wanted to throttle angie...meanie *****..... but i sooo loved it Sam...all the emotions so gripping and you brought them alive... it was awesome...mindblowingly awesome (this is my special term for the special parts) I loved the part completely. The biting remark form Anji pissed of everyone and armi too...i for once wanted him to snap and put some sense in her head...she is so irritating me now...u know i even felt that maybe riddz should have retorted back but than it wud go against her character...she not the kind to get in cat fights and than even the hero would not have jumped to her aid..hehe...had i been there i would have bloody put her in her place, maybe that's why everybody thinks me good enough to take care of myself...but its nice to have someone taking care of u and it was so touching to see how rahul, muski and armi felt for her....and ok Ankit irritating me a bit here now thats not me anymore...hmm
but amazing part sam...i so loved it....
and now looking forward to the next one...did u say somethign about leaving for somewhere...does that mean no updates for sometime...ouch!! that wud be bad for us...but do update when u can....
love ya
Kratz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spln

hiya sam...just read the part....not coz i got up early, but coz i was up all night, unfortunately for no fun reason...but oh well...the tales can wait....

the part for now....aawww ur frends got together for good n have a wonderful family now, thats a brilliant thing to hear....i can not possibly agree anymore abt those discussions at the most random points of insti in days which are gone....too bad they're gone...n id love to sit on the steps heer in michigan n do the same but we have to resort to indoor cafe's ....the snow all around doesnt make things easier outside lolzzz...the point is discussions remain...n somehow...the very essential of emtions or debates...alwaz pass us by without a rigid conclusion, coz somewhere in the process of it soemone gets carried away....anjali ddi here...n um not surprised at all...it was abt time for her outbreak to come....ankit....gosh...his char as alwaz eludes the best of my sensibilities...he, like atul thot, is incorrible....shake the guy n wake him to a life, which is human!....

armaan ridhima, rahul muskaan...yeh....all of them fitting the bill as one would think. I was exceptionally delighted rahul's take on teasing Armidz abt the night out for coffee....thats the best n worst thing abt buddies as close....they are truly....the highest in the list of necessary evils 😆 u cant possibly live without telling them...n they cant possibly let u off at just that....if they let u off it wud also spell trouble....they cudnt do it right!!!somewhere i wonder sincerely....how much of the irritation is actually at being teased....arent there, in complete honesty, tons of momenst for a couple in love to actually hope something of the jests will be shot tehri way...i think its wanted, if not alwaz...at least not never!....

n the remaining of all things,....my star....sam...i ahve to say i was disappointed with his response...soemwhere in that reply he made me doubt, if he was actually as candid to his ownself...um not suggesting herein anythibng like u to have introduced the expected atul-anji track...no none of those insinuations at all...its just in general.....i can;t find myself believing for a char protrayed like atul's to ahve no better take on love itself....yes his interest n all may not have been showed, perhaps u may not have plans to go there at all...but cud he not have a real take on love at all? some how, for the amt of undersatnding of those issues he posseses n in lieu of all his wisdom, i see that hard to believe....i wud have loved to hear ,.,,.wat he would have said abt love....maybe some other time...😉

but thats the only irk, n that i guess arising from my bias for the guy!!!...

u portray the conversations extremely well sam...loved reading this one...the three musketeers n ur competence to have won the cash....my thits ditto for every one fo the 3 times i saw the movie!!!!it was a wonderful work by dumas...n i read it sooooo long ago...perhaps i will revisit it sometime soon!

I am begining to beleive that you are completely a noctural animal! I find you awake at all odd hours, but am glad to know there is someone else like me and I am not the only night owl...😆 but mine is slightly strange because travel so often and zig zag around time zones so my body clock is perpetually out of sync. 😆 ..so I grab sleep when i can and like an idiot am awake at 4.30-5 in the morning 😆
But hope what kept you awake was nothing more serious than coursework or some submission!
I can completley picture you sitting in the freezing cold and having long involved discussions! Yup its such an integral part of college life w/o which the experience would be so incomplete....as to my friends, whenever we all get together, we tease the woman mercilessly about her capitulation....but the guy is such a wonderful dude that I guess all of us knew it was a matter of time! But it did make for some rather uncomfortable moments in the interim!
Oh I compeltely agree with you, for a couple in love, and even more so when you feel the first impact of Cupid's arrow, the gentle teasing of friends is just as exciting and tantalising....
And I plead guilty to shortchaning Atul...I dunno but I thought the monologue on love was getting too long...the moment I posted it, I thought I shoud re-do it but it was too late...yes, it is an abberation to the way the character has been sketched and def not giving it its due....for a man who is sensitive, articulate, not having a deeper view is inconsistent...... so do him justice, maybe another time 😉😆
May I add that I am in complete awe of your incredible multi-tasking skills.....not to mention writing skills...
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rabiam

hey sam

fabulous part dear
hoping to see cute AR moments in the next part
take care
love rabu

Hi there! am so glad that you liked the part! As to AR parts, wait and read ! 😆
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Sam,

Sorry for not keeping up to date with your update, due to several occasion and school, I hope u will understand.

But just read it all!, wow woman, your on a roll!

"I thought you looked cute, actually handsome. Just a random observation, and, nothing beyond that, ok?" Now thats what I call having 'balls'

Hehe Armaan doesn't watch Hindi movies!?.....that was a good one!!

Oh no.....Angie is becoming jealous!....well I can't blame her....I guess it an insecurity that Ridz just entered her world with out her permission.

It also made me realise that no matter how different two people are, it's up to them to make their equation be effective. No matter what the differences, its their commitment to making things work that matters" Brilliantly said sam!

Loved how you expressed Muskaan's curiosity of Rahuls love life, as she herself is falling for him, *sigh*

he put down the book to go check why his mother was yelling the house down! Man.....that happens to me all the time!, Its soo frustrating, sometimes they call your name, n you reply, and they say nothing in return! Like arrgh! Lol

Gosh AR's dance was seriously tantalizing sam!

Read the rest of the parts sam....must say I have fallen in love with your writing style, pretty warm and soft!, my eyes are blearly open, wanting to finally read ur FF to the full!

Beautiful FF, and am intrigued to read more!

-Natasha

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanayq18

this part....was WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

LIKE A MILLION GAZILLION TIMES.....its my fav part uptil now....riddhimaz description about love...was sooooooo beautiful...it was almost as if it was coming out of a poets mouth...absolutely philosophically written...i am just loving this ff with every comin part...armaanz such a sweetheart to have controlled his anger and staying back with riddhima...and kiranz soo right about atul..i think he should knock some sense into everyone especially ankit...GOD...hahahhaha i dont know i just get irritated by him..lol...n anjaliz outburst was needed at this point of the story...although i hated her for being so insolent to riddhima and comparing her emotions to something out of a millsn boons story which is sooooo soooooo sooo wrong and NOT what she had said...it was like the best way a feeling like love could be described....absolutely fantabulous sam...im really really really looking forward to the next part...i can totally see where u are coming from...when u write about bschool life u must be relating to those two friends of yours...the endless...fun discussions ...chai sipping...its sooo much fun to be pennin down stuff thats sooo close to really cherised memories....srsly an awesomely amazing read sam....loved loved loved everything about it....from the minute meticulous details to the humungous outburst from anjali...uuuu surely put ur heart in every part which is seldom shown by many other fic writers....
LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UUUUUUUUUUU
Sana

Thanks young Sana for the wonderful comment! 🤗 I must admit penning down this part, did bring back some wonderful memories....in fact I actually called up these friends of mine to tell them how I was down-the-memory-lane trip! The girl gets very embarrassed about it though the guy is really very cute about it! And I guess Anjali's reaction is very normal....she sees something very dear to her, that she has waited for suddenly moving out of her grasp courtesy another woman so she reacts as anyone would.....
Ankit in fact, I think reverted back to being his ususal self, slightly sarcastic at this outburt but still harbouring a soft corner for Ridhima....
I guess verbalising their take on love is AR's first step towards togetherness, hopefully...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: gari14

heyyy!!!....am just astonished reading this part!!....

the whole discussion was just so perfect....something people would love to relate to!!....brilliant....!!...esp loved riddhima's POV about love....aww...beautiful.....reflected her innermost desires!!!....and yeah i so do not agree with anjali...!......am so glad armaan stood up for the poor girl...!!.....its high time anjali goes and confesses what she actually thinks of armaan...that would clear a LOT of things...and her misconceptions!!!.........eagerly waitin to see whats next?!?!.................waitin for nice....solid...AR convo....!!..great job once again!!youv got me hooked..!

Hey girl, am so glad that you liked the part......I love the Robert Frost line that Ridhima used so it found its way here.....yup its suddenly being brought home to Armaan that Ridhima getting upset bothers him....
actually Anjali would probably do just that except for the fear that what if Armaan does not return her affections...but I guess she's got to learn that sooner or later....well, there would be an AR convo but dont know how much people would like it....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Am unable to reply to responses any more cos every darned time , I use a quote option, the explorer shuts down on me....

.....I know a logical and sensible person would just respond using names and without the quotes but then I am not normal...there is something quite humilating about letting a piece of software get the better of me!
So bear with me while I try and figure out why? Provided of course that the darned software allows me to post this as well!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow sam that was wicked! the whole discussion on love was very moving! sooo glad you included this, got to see everyone's take on the much difficult emotion! i really admired what armaan said, i found it to be very true! but WOW ridz idea was sooo passionate and intense! the girl is a hardcore romantic! she possesses a very strong heart and mind! not sure i can agree with her completely on the matter, but her veiws are definaetly commendable!!!!
geeezzz angie is pissing me off now! that was sooo rude of her! cant believe her! seriosuly who does she think she is! she doesnt own armaan, he isnt even her boyfirend! she has no right to feel any animosity towards ridz! shes just a jelaous shrew! uff
but i loved how everyones first instinct was to comfort and defend ridz! armaan especially! hehe rahul and muskaan too, loved how mad she got at angie!
well i really enjoyed this part, and am really looking forward to seeing how armaan deals with riddhima, and her reaction!!!!

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