Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 89

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rhama2

hi! sam
it was such a good part
the part which casually started had an intense finish
the line "it is an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired" was superb
i luv the way u play with the words
i luved everyone's take on lve
my take would be a mixture of each one's take
anji's take after ridz finished it was so shocking
she cant digest the attraction bet. ridz and armaan
and it was very wicked of rahul to invoke reactions from ridz as well from muskaan during their respective take of love
atul as usual was sweet and ya thank god he didnt allow ankit to pacify ridz
now i am eagerly waiting for armaan-ridz convo!!!!!!!!!

thanks for the pm!

love:
aishwarya


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Hi Aishwarya, you're welcome for teh PM and am glad you enjoyed reading teh part...that line is a bog favourite of mine and Robert Frost was bang on....that so aptly describes what one feels....Yup, Rahul is playing mischeif in the hope that the two see some sense...
by the way, something that has intrigued me, what is the genisis of your user name? rhama2 is no way relate to aishwarya?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sam 😊
Well I'm new to your FF but have been reading it from quite a long time as a silent reader. But I guess no one can stay away from the charm of your FF for so long so here I am with my comments...
The concept really amazed me initially, but I love it now with the way the story is going. Yuor writing style is fabulous; I can so imagine a picture in my mind while reading it...and oh ya i think the pace is fine coz everytime you read the next part there is something else happening, a new turn in the story or a new emotion added to the classic.
Speaking of emotions, I seriously feel that the way you have showed both the shades of a common man is wonderful. You have portrayed the scenes and penned them down so beautifully. Ankit and Anjali being the villain and vamp here respectively, I don't know why but I'm afraid of Ankit more than of Anjali although the plot gives you an entirely different view...But loving the story a lot.
Continue soon. I look forward to your updates eagerly...even in my lectures lolz...😆
Luv Shivani 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
you never fail to take me to where ever it is that u want me to go.. u in fact have complete control of my mind while im reading....i just realized that...thats something!!

and ofcourse their takes on love..irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired.....*sigh sigh*
uv got me waiting on tenterhooks.....cant wait for armaan n her convo.....

the way u write..its almost like being there...being part of the situation & responding to all of these beautiful characters...so right & wrong in their own ways.....there r no heros n heroines their all just in the most exciting part of their life..handling it in the best way they can....amazing

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Posted: 16 years ago
Woahhhhh that was something Sam!! How do u pen this with such finesse? The "Love talk" made me want to re read it again and again, the ay u just eem to add newer and complex dimensions to ur characters never ceases to amaze, for example Ridz here.....brilliant Sam....spare me some tips pls!!


Need i asay Anjie is irritating a tad bit now?? Haha i bet all ur readers hav the same the view!! Great update Sam, iving some serious complexes here .:)
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Posted: 16 years ago

I know I promised a complete review a long time ago...and I'm really sorry about the delay. Exams and other commitments crept up on me.

I love how Ankit described Ridhima, Rahul and Muskaan as "The Three Musketeers"...I definitely get the feeling that they are friends for life. Wow, Armaan really did get Ridhima into a messy situation. I wonder how many people will ask her about her bout of illness. 😆 She needs to get him back big time for that one. And now Rahul joins in? Poor Ridz! That's an interesting question that Atul asked...it really got everyone to reveal their inner views about how to go about expressing love. Anjali's answer explains why she hasn't been honest with Armaan yet...and it also seems to indicate a sense of insecurity on her part. I think she has a greater fear of rejection than any of the others. Ridhima's reply was BEAUTIFUL. Her description of love really brings out the poetess in her. I absolutely adore that phrase, "an irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired." Okay, now about Anjali's outburst...I probably have a slightly different take on it than most people. In a way, I don't think what Anjali said was completely false. Ridhima's impression of love is a little overly idealistic and romantic. There's a lot more to maintaining a relationship than what she described. So...I really wouldn't have had a problem with Anjali disagreeing with Ridhima's statement BUT ONLY IF she had done it in a more sensitive manner. Telling her to "grow up" really wasn't the right way to go about it. I hope Armaan will be able to comfort her.
Great part! Can't wait for the next one. I'm sorry if I'm not always able to post a review. I'm in first year medical school...so free time is hard to come by. But I definitely love the story enough that I'll be keeping up with it even when I'm busy. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bernard shaw

Hi there! Have typed out a looong response till the silly explorer decided to close on me so love's labour lost!

Hope your chapterisation is complete and you are all set to crack your thesis! The letter I guess captures the eternal truth and one of the joys of being a student'as my other half keeps telling me, thank God for last minutes, otherwise you would not end up getting anything done at all, lol!

I loved The Da Vinci code, as in the book, as well, and I agree with you, the movie did not do anything for me'much of the essence and the mystery was lost in the movie'to be fair, the kind of story it is, this was bound to have happened'. Though I must admit, I am biased! I am of the firm opinion that movies very rarely if ever do justice to a book! Though having said, that I do end up watching the movies! Talk about being a glutton for punishment, lol!

The only Eleanor that I know of the mother of Richard the Lionheart and strangely enough also because she set up something called courts of Love wherein lie the origins of the system of the modern day jury'beyond that, I must confess, I know little'in fact my knowledge of English history is reasonably suspect, lol! And I must say, I admire you immensely'.the range of knowledge and the cross section of books that you read is amazing!

The Three Musketeers ' I think I have read and seen it in every form by now! Be it books (both original and kid's versions), movie and animations! Just love the book. Wonder how come I never remembered the line and used it! It would have been pretty appropriate for the trio as well! Also loved The Man in the Iron Mask..actually all classics, must buy and keep for my future generations to read'.sometimes I fear with so much television, the next generation kids are hardly going to be readers'

And I guess I completely agree with you about Anjali'which is why I don't see her as an out and out villain'I can empathise with her'it's tough to watch your heart's desire slip away, especially when you have patiently waited for it and someone from no where comes in and you're left out in the cold'

"A mighty pain to love it is,

And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;

But of all pains, the greatest pain

It is to love, but love in vain."

As to "Sorry Timothy" it's a by-line that's constantly repeated in a Brit series called Sorry where the main character is a grown up guy called Timothy, whose even older father keeps chastising him on his language even though the words are really not offensive!

Am sitting at the airport, waiting for my flight and browsing the net and trying hard not to read the book that I am carrying with me now, lol! Bad choice for the flight and an airport wait!

I like spending time (well some not too much) at airports and observing people'its amazing how interesting it can be and what a wonderful insight it can give you to the human mind esp. when they react to something like a delayed flight '

hmm...i've never actually observed ppl at airports, mainly i think cause i spend my time browsing the bookstore 😆. but yeah, now that you mention it.....it must be indeed fascinating.
glad you agree about the Da Vinci Code...actually most bookworms i've come across agree that film adaptations aren't a patch on the originals
and you're right about Eleanor or Eleanor of Aqutaine as she's commonly known, she's a fascinating character. She was the Queen Consort of the King of France and even accompanied him on his crusades before he annulled the marriage citing adultery and her inabitily to give him a male heir 😡 she later married the future Henry the Second of England; Richard the Lion Heart and John the First are her more famous sons. Henry and she had a tempestous relationship marred by his frequent infidelities....the event i mention is a quasi-historical one where elaenor coming to know of her most recent rival sends for the lady and asks her to choose b/w two cups one of which has poison. She further declares that she would drink the other one and thus let fate decide who's to be henry's lover. their relationship has been immortalised in various stage and screen adaptations as The Lion In Winter one of the best ones starred Katherine Hepburn as Eleanor
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sam
loved it yaar
um running out of time now will comment later
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Posted: 16 years ago
I thought I had an uncharacteristically detailed impression of this update yesterday, and just as I decided to post it, my laptop acted up on me... and I lost the entire stuff 😭... so there go all my efforts down the drain. To cut a long story short... Armaan getting miffed with Ridhhima for the perceived "breach of confidence" from her side on the late night and into the wee hours tte--tte was cute 😊. And to my mind, Ridhhima getting flustered on being asked to give her take on love was natural... with Anjali's reaction attesting that her apprehensions were not unfounded.
Going back on my previous comment, I do feel that it's time for Armaan to do some introspection as to why Anjali reacts the way she does when AR are around... and while Armaan can't be blamed for misleading Anjali, he definitely needs to come clear with her for his own relationship with to progress smoothly. And looks like AR are going to have help from several quarters ...😊 did love how Rahul knew who Riddhima would look to for support after Anjali's outburst.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

awesome part Sam!!! loved how u took a light conversation between a group of friends to sumthing which opened them all up n gave us a rather hint of everything going on, in n around thm.. a beautifully written conversation, very easy to relate to...especially ridzie's n armaan's lines...i was like, omg, how true!! i wouldn't say i didn't agree to anjali as well, she had a point had she just been careful to have not hurt ridhima in the process...n atul..oh..i thought he wud say sumthing as intense as the others as well, coz he's the only one well aware of EVERYTHING here, all the links, all possibilities, everything...but liked wat he said, nonetheless...wat he said revolves around anjali, maybe?? n the part where u see armaan getting a bit jealous to knw that ridzie has confided in rahul was gud too!! wonder wats gonna turn up now...u can twist things so easily, girl, it was difficult to predict such an ending to the part.. enjoyed it a lot!!

luv,
anu.

Hi Anu,
I agree with you, Anjali could have a different point of view and it would have been better received had it been delivered gently...but love does strange things to us, doesn't it? So much so thats ometimes we do not recognise who we become till its too late...its like you put your best foot forward when you are dating! 😆
And I plead guilty to Atul being shortchanged...given the person he is, there should have been more, but honestly I thought it might get too long, so I cut it short which was unfair...well maybe another time....
Yup, Armaan begeining to finally acknowldege what he is begining to feel but he's too stuborn to fully realise it....
Shall update soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey sam,

i was at the ny library today, dont know if uve been there....but if ur anything like ur characters or me...its heaven! lol well i was searching the catalogue and saw the scarlet pimpernel there....i think ur story has persuaded me to read it. since i cant take stuff out of taht library, i mite get the book from my local library to read....just for kicks hehehe

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