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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1
The morning of December 25th dawned bright like any other day and had lighted the Mallik Manor...

The bright day had disturbed Mr.Armaan Mallik from his sleep...he searched the bed...and then routinely remembered that she would be in the kitchen

Preparing a scrumptious breakfast...

Yawning he got up from bed arranged it for a change and went in for a shower...

Noisy with the grinding in the kitchen she didn't hear footsteps entering the kitchen she wasn't aware until she was grabbed by the waist...

She wasn't surprised. It wasn't unusual for her...it was normal ...like every morning...

Armaan: Good morning honey he whispered...

Mrs.Riddhima Armaan Mallik hardly looked any older than 30...Nevertheless she was 42...

Riddhima turned to face her husband and replied...

Good Morning and Happy Anniversary adding a little kiss on his nose...I can't believe that 20 years passed on just like that..!!

Armaan: you know? ...I just love you when u do that...

Riddhima [smiling]: how come you never mentioned it before..?And I guess you are supposed to give me return wish?

Armaan: oh yea ...about that Basket ....yesterday night when I wished you on dot midnight should I relate a little replay for you as to what happened..?

Riddhima: [she looked a little quizzical].....go ahead..!!

Armaan: ok Madam so here goes...

You were snoring... [Armaan I don't snore ok]...he laughed...

Acha listen Na...you were snoring and I whispered a nice, seductive, romantic happy anniversary to you ...and you know what you did..?

Riddhima: what? [Eager to know ...]

Armaan: you said Happy Birthday to me, tell Raina and Shaina to sleep on time please...n go wash the dishes...!!!

Riddhima: don't tell me ?I couldn't have said that?

Armaan: you did and then cuddled close to me and slept ?but no complaints there? he grinned...

Riddhima: sorry Armaan...I know I was really tired yesterday..!! By the way have all of them gotten up? Its 10.00..!!

Armaan: Basket they are having their Christmas vacations let them sleep?ok forget all that... where is my present..?

Riddhima: oh yeah right?where is it Armaan??

Armaan: Right here basket you could give it to me like that... [Snapping his fingers]

Riddhima: what are you trying to say huh? [A smile appearing on his face...!]

Armaan: I'm trying to say shut up and give me a kiss..!!

Just then a voices coming closer and closer towards the kitchen came which later became four shouting yelps?

Armaan: here they go?sometimes I wonder if you ever trained them to interrupt us you know..?

Riddhima gave that "come again and say it" look...

But Armaan was saved because just then...

Falling into the kitchen came in four young teenagers all debating that they wanted to wish first [more like shouting]

Riddhima their mother calming them down she hugged them all together which was later joined in by Armaan their dad, they were a happy family. They had their differences and fights like every other family, but they sorted them out. Armaan Riddhima never brought even the smallest of fights among their kids owing to the fact that they were brought in a background in which a day never finished without the shouts and screams of their fighting parents..!!

But none of it mattered now that they were together..!!

Blessed with four kids Arima who was the eldest who was 21 followed by Rains and Shaina twins being 19 and their only son Rohan who was 17...

Arima was most special to the both of them, Raina and Shaina resembled their mother by most of the external look, and nevertheless they were like Armaan in all the habits they could possibly have owned!!

2 hours later after they had finished their lunch.

Armaan had been out since he had had his breakfast. He hadn't been back for lunch yet. Riddhima was busy putting away the washed dishes a little tensed about the fact that he hadn't been back yet.

Interrupting her thoughts,

Raina: Mom could we ask you something? [Speaking on behalf of all her siblings]

Riddhima: yeah dear ask Na..!

Shaina: Will you tell us today how you and dad met?

Arima: muma?please..!!

Riddhima: Hmm?Ok.[a small smile appearing on her face casually forgetting that Armaan was not yet home, recalling that day]

okay guys dats it for today ..will soon update ..plz keep checking ..!!!

plz feel free to comment or critize or even correct ..

Love Steffi😊

Part 2

Riddhima: ok all of you go out ...I'll clear d kitchen and join you...

Raina: promise mom..?

Riddhima: promise darling!

All of them together: ...yaaaay...!!

Just then Armaan came home.

Riddhima: Armaan where were you..?

Armaan: Riddhima?

Riddhima: [not hearing him] you just went out without even telling me..!!

Armaan: Riddhima?!

Riddhima: where were you..? And why are you soo late...?

Armaan: BASKET!!!!!???[Holding her]

Riddhima: I got so worried [making a baby face]

God he died for that.

Armaan: [smiling at that face] today if u remember is the completion of 25 yrs of our meeting..!! Right?

Riddhima: [now smiling] rite!

Armaan: so here I am today presenting you 25 gifts for being with me, for sharing my joys sorro..??,.......

Before even he could complete his sentence.

Riddhima: where are they..? Where are my gifts? [All excited and anxious she started searching his pockets, unknowingly tickling him] Armaan mujhe abhi dekhna hai!! Pleeeeej...

Armaan: [who was staring at her thoroughly out of shock and simultaneously getting tickled and wondering, man she has not changed, she is still a little kid]

You can't take suspense ...can you?[laughing with the tickling]

Riddhima: [widening her smile].. Uh Uh!! Something's should never be given up..!!

Armaan: yeaaaa...Rite...!!Chalo...after you... [Releasing her]

Riddhima knew the gifts would be up in the room.

Reaching the room she found everything normal. Clean and tidy..!! [Where were the gifts?]

Climbing down the stairs: Armaan there is nothing up in the roo....

Just then a shower of rose petals fell in on her and that was not it.. Every rose petal she noticed had something imprinted in a black...

Picking up a rose petal she realized that every single petal had d words 'I Love U'

A tear glistened her eye. She once upon a time had never thought a day like this was written in her life.

Maybe it was a gift for the getting through all the hard paths God had laid for her.

Armaan slowly climbing down the stairs and stopping next to her he put an arm around her and asked, you like it?

He knew the answer. It showed in those eyes.

Riddhima didn't say anything she simply held him back tight. Thank you is all what she managed to say.

They were not just two words. It had spoken all the unspoken words.

Just then a noise of someone clearing the throat was heard by them.

Both loosening their grip and finding the source of the noise.

Rohan: Not fair dad we had to see that the string was pulled right in time so that d roses fell on mom.

Arima: yeah even we should get some credit you know.

Riddhima and Armaan laughed out loud.

Armaan: all rite all rite. What do you guys want?

Raina: dad we can't wait any longer, mom promised us she would tell us how the both of you met!

Armaan: you did? [looking at Riddhima]

Riddhima nodded back smiling.

Shaina: yea mom did. Now that your back dad, both of you can tell the story together.[in a matter of fact voice]

Ok guys...thank u all for reading..i appreciate ur comments...

plz comment critize or correct....thank u again

Love,

Steffi😊

Edited by Steff_DMG - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey vryy sweeeeet prt yaar lvd it wow now thy bth wll tll thm story wow i am so excitd 2 know plz cont soooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy....it was really cute!!! continue soon..and thanx for d pm😊

ayesha

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hey guys this is my AR ff...
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1087488

you can have a look if you want..:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy.....great part!!! soo cute!! can't wait for the story!! plzz cont soon and thanx fr the pm!! <333
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey gr8 update even after 25 years of marriage der love seemz to be just as strong. nxt part iz gona b interesting as theyll start wid their flashback. do continue soon
luv iram
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Steff very cute part! plz cont soon but i wish it was longer.. thanks for da pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy guys ..thank u for reading that and thank u for d comments😊
n a small thing i want to clear....it is 20 yrs to thier marriage not 25....it is 25yrs since dey met n 20 yrs to their marriage..
okay so here is part 3.....as wished by sum1 it is longer...!!
Recap:
Armaan: all rite all rite. What do you guys want?

Raina: dad we can't wait any longer, mom promised us she would tell us how the both of you met!

Armaan: you did? [looking at Riddhima]

Riddhima nodded back smiling.

Shaina: yea mom did. Now that your back dad, both of you can tell the story together.[in a matter of fact voice]

FLASHBACK

Part 3

She couldn't wait for the 20th of December to come, but here the day was and so was she.

Smelling the scent of being in a home country is a different feeling altogether.

But she loved it. Being back in her home town was a total different feeling for Riddhima Sharma.

At last she smiled. Mumbai the city of dreams or Sapno ka shehar as she heard was a fact one could never deny. She had come to pursue her studies.

Who said America or Australia was better than India.

She personally thought there was no difference in these countries, whether America or India she got the same stares from boys, even some girls actually. Well who would look or stare if you had Bipasha's hair like she did in the Dhoom 2 bikini scene or eyes like her.

She was tall slim slender and fragile. Wearing a mini jeans skirt and a strapless pink top with a scarf around her neck she looked stunning.

She was happy to be back here after 7 years, 3 of which were in Australia and 4 in America.

Searching for who she found she whooped out and ran to meet her mother.

Riddhima was a lot like her mother in everything. That reddish black hair was inherited by her grandmother [her mother's mother]

Her mother Rachna Sharma was 36, she never looked like a mother of a 17 year old teenager. Working in stock market deals she earned a lot and financially had no burdens at all. She was even famous in news channels for being in the stock market business.

Riddhima: Mom [hugging her tight]... it's so great to be back home. Never will I ever go back again. Please don't send me there.

Rachna: I can't dream of sending you away but you know d circumstances. You'd rather be away than close to us.

Riddhima: mom no grieving, please I'm back home.

Rachna: yeah sorry dear, now that your back home you can get all the household stuff right. No more shopping for me to tell your dad to do. [Frowning and smiling a little]

Riddhima: no complaints there [grinning]...so how is dad?

Rachna: [that little smile disappearing] he hasn't gone better, just worst..!!

Riddhima just nodded solemnly.

Her dad Raj Sharma was 44 worked in the army, a womanizer and didn't fall asleep without harassing his wife. Riddhima had quiet often seen her dad watching fashion TV late night, he usually fell asleep watching the TV, leaving it on.

Reaching home she found her dad watching TV as usual at a loud volume. Mom was rite he hadn't changed, only gone worst.

Riddhima: [tentatively]: heyy dad..?!

Raj: hi beta, how are you? [Without even looking away from the TV]

It was like as if Riddhima had been away for a 2 day camp and was back home, but damn it had been 1 Long year since she had been away from her dad.

Riddhima: but she didn't care, all she knew as that she was back home to take care of her mother and to pursue her studies.

Being in a boarding school for the first 4 years had brought her up tough, and her dad being in an army was a bonus, she had learnt a lot that way. She new a lot, how to shoot, and she being a black belt, and even had a short course in kick boxing. So she had nothing to worry about. She was very independent.

Being back in Mumbai means meant a lot of shopping. But she had to wait for the 25th for her dad to go to Kuwait. He had to meet some friend of his whose daughter was getting married.

He wouldn't be back for a week or so.

So here she was grabbing the opportunity to go shopping once her dad had gone early morning at 7 to catch the flight. Her dad hardly allowed her to step out of the house for anything but school when she was small and even now. Well you could make out. It was not even 5 days that his daughter was back and he didn't even care. Neither well nor did she. He had created a kind of hatred in her heart for her dad.

So dressing up [a mini black spaghetti dress with a tiny white overcoat] she went to a new mall [bharath mall] that had opened recently. She had to buy a few kitchen items here that her mum wanted so she obliged.

She entered the food bazaar there to get what her mum wanted and then would go pantaloons, [something her mother had asked her to check out].

After buying what her mother wanted she went into the shampoo section. She didn't find what she wanted.

A little distance away in the gents section was a young handsome teenager checking out an after shave. Another guy simply standing next to him, waiting for the first guy to finish.

Heyy are you done man..? The 2nd guy asked the first.

Heyy rahul just answer me Na..!

The first guy [Rahul]: abbey kya hai yaar Armaan..? Tu bhi Na! Ek razor, after shave aur shaving lotion laane ke liye tu ek ghanta se yahan kada hai. Atleast mujhe toh jaane do..?

Armaan: arey rahul yaar, rukh Na? Tu itna hurry kyun karta hai yaar? Jaldi kya hai..? Kahan jaana hai tujhe? Date par? [Grinning]

Rahul: shut up Armaan. Chal mujhe jaana hai. Ma ghar pe intezaar kar rahi hai.

Armaan: sale tu mujhe seedha nahi ke sakta kya ki tumhari ma tumhara intezaar kar rahi hai.

Tu jaa yaar, mujhe aur time lagega.

Rahul: acha theek hai. Toh main chalta hoon. Kal milte hai.

Armaan: haan theek hai. Cya.

Finally finished and deciding what brand he wanted to buy, he was on his way to the billing counter. To reach there he had to pass by the shampoo section.

He stopped dead in his tracks.

okay all...its a long part ..i kno ..and not that interesting ..but its imp for me to write dis..u will get to kno later on..!

coming up: AR scene..how dey 1st met..!!😊😊
Edited by Steff_DMG - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazingggggggg sweeetie

i really loved it
plz continue sooon
its was soooo amzing
loved the whole concept
do continue soon
swanzzy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice prt yaar wow i am realy excitd abt their fst meating cnt wait cont sooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part steff!

continue soon n thanx for the pm😳

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