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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423



thanku so much.. my name is surya.... i'am glad that you liked the part.....😊 i'll surely continue soon.... can i know your name please...😊

hi surya u can cal me Deepa....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

hi surya u can cal me Deepa....



hii deepa... you have a nice name....😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey suri i hope i am not too late to do comment on ur this part......😲.....well i have to say ki mehra ki entry jordar thi to garewal bhi koi kam nahi ......😉....lagta hai bahot maza aanewala hai is kahani me...........its just two same big joint family that is gonna be one supar dupar joint family.......👏👏👏........waise sabse pehle ghar ke bado.........bahot hi achche hai...khass karke yash ke dada dadi....mind blowing.......bhudhe pe bhi jawani....😳..kya baat hai main mar jawaa............aur phir kamal aur pallvi ki khatti mithi nok jok....😆.....waise ek baat to hai ki shaadi me yeh nok jok na ho to shaadi fiki hoti hai.........aur dusri aur hai veena jo bas ek aisi auart jo main bata nahi sakti ki itna zindagi ne usse kiya phir bhi woh lalit ko apna pati manti hai...😭😭😭.....lekin muje bura nahi laga kyunki agar main uski jagah hoti to main bhi yahi karti.............kyunki us waqt woh ghar se nikal jati to uske bacho ka kya hota....usne jo kiya woh apne bacho ki khushi ke liye kiya......😕😕😕.....yash ke liye kiya............yash aur ridzi ka rishta bhi bahot pyaara hai jaise ek bhai behen ka hota hai.............yash ne bilkul sahi kaha ki sachcha pyaar bahot muskil se milta hai use samundar ki reth ki tarah chod dena nahi chahiye......👏.....pyaar kismatwalo se milta hai..........ab muje pura yakeen ho gaya hai ki Yash aur Chah ki jodi bhagwan ke ghar se banke aayi hai.....😉....ab yakeen hai muje ki Yash chah ko woh pyaar karna bhi sikhayga aur use nibhana bhi..........thoda kaam muskil hai lekin pyaar karna hai to utna to karna padega.....😳😳😳....aur yash jis dard se gujar raha hai use bhi main samaj sakti hoon kyunki aaj yash ki jagah main hoti to main bhi kabhi us insaan ko maff nahi kar sakti.....😡.....shayad main us insaan ka naam bhi nahi leti kyunki usse itni nafart jo ban jati hai.......🤢🤢🤢.........yash ke dard ko batne ke liye sirf use ek jeevansathi chahiye kyunki kabhi kabhi aise dard hote hai jo hum maa, bhai, behen ya dost ke saath nahi bat sakte lekin woh dard hum apne pyaar ke saath bat lete hai kyunki pyaar ka naam hi dard aur khushi batna hai........😳😳😳.......ab sirf intzzar karna hai ki kis tarah se yeh dono milte hai....yash aur akshat ka jo rishta hai woh bahot hi achhca hai kyunki yash ki jo halat hai woh akshat se behtar aur kaun samaj sakta hai muje pura yakeen hai ki yash aur chah ko ek karne me akshat aur sneha unki madad karenge👏....kab delhi aur shimla kaha pe ek hota hai......ek baat to hai teri aur meri story me yeh shimla aur delhi kuch ulte ho gaye hai lekin lagta hai is jagah se hum dono ko pyaar hai........😆.....ple ple ple ple ple ab agle part me in dono ki pehli mulakat karado......ab raha nahi jata...........ple ple ple continue soon..........thanks....

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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part
i really liked the garewals introduction it was amazing the way u showed how pallavi was teasing kamal was really cute i really liked the way u potrayed gulshan and preeto's love it was really nice that even after so much years they still loved each other as much as they did at the start of their relationship.
I really liked the way u described veena and her relationship with all the other charachters,but i felt really sorry 4 her because of the way lalit treats her.Vasu is as evil as ever i really hated the way she was treating veena but the way pallavi answered her back was really good.
The intro of the youngsters was really good,the scene between yash and ridz was really cute i really liked the way yash advised ridz not to let small fights come between her and armaan.the phone convo between armaan and ridz was really intresting hope ridz forgives armaan and lets him explain.
The way ridz and yash ganged up to wake rishi and akshat was really sweet the way u showed the love between the brothers and ridz was really amazing.
im glad yash has got a good friend in akshat who really understands him.Also the scene between veena and yah was beautifully described,and the way u described yash's feelings towards his father were really good.Cant wait 4 yash and chah 2 meet.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow suri i could finally read the part gr8 part and i feel really bad 4 veena and yash i can imagine how frustrated he is gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi surya both partz r very gud yr.mje bht acha laga ke tmne ye ff aek diifferent andaz se start ki.itz really gud.keep up the gud work n do rite nxt part soooon.thnx
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow another great update thx for pm , its great to read from you .
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Posted: 16 years ago
waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😛😍 so cute so Ridhima loved by all superb😎😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉


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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely update.;.. enjoyed Pallavi bashing Vasu... Yash-Akshat bonding is gud.... very curious to knw abt the bet... i'm sure Yash would win... waiting for Yash n Chah meeting.. Plzz continue asap....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey suri very nice part dear...i have started liking yash character..i will be back with a big comment soon...

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