Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet-RajeevAamna FF-New Link-PG:150

First Previous

Page

108

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: togepe30
Nice part..!
Waiting for Yash's entry !!

Regardz,

Vandu

no thanku vandu dear.. yash kii entry bohat jaldi hogi.. pukka...... i'll continue soon...😊

Quote

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: kvn1983
waoh🤗 its really a nice⭐️ and sweet one😍 plz continue it soo😛 & thanks for the pm😉

' , " ',This " , " ,
is God's Rain
", ' ," OF ,' , ",
" , Blessings., "
MY IT Wash
Away All UR
Troubles,Tensions & keep
HAPPY TO U

thank you so much... i'll surely continue soon..😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#93

wow suri amazing part loved the way chah is portrayed gr8 part cant wait 4 yash's entry cont soon

Quote

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
wow suri amazing part loved the way chah is portrayed gr8 part cant wait 4 yash's entry cont soon

jyothi dear thanks a ton.. yash is coming up in the next part.. i'll surely post the next part soon.. 😊

Quote

kashish

@goodkashish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Hey..........surili.....i hope i am not too late for my comments................for your 8650 words part, i dont have any words for you bcoz it was truly amazing.........as a writer i can understand that its not easy to write 8650 words.............so i really appriciate your hard work and time.............now u introdused us to mehra family which was really really nice........it was good to see how gayatri and prerna is taking care of house and children .........and both r right that chah is getting younger and we should think about marrige bcoz i believe that the marrige should be done in a time slot......not to early not to late.........i also understand why chah is avoiding love and wedding bcoz of her mom but i want to tell her that ......in this world not everyone gets cheated............i believe that the person who gets the true love they are angles form heavan..................and as an angle we should love each other not to cheat...........you chah kitna bhi apne dil ko rok le lekin jo hona hai woh to hona hai..............kisi ke dil ko aap apne dil se judne se nahi rok sakte kyunki woh aapke bas me nahi...............prerna ki is baat se sehmat hoon ki pyaar ka kya hai woh to kabhi bhi kisi se kahi pe bhi ho jata hai............pyaar waqt aur halat dekh ke nahi aata............jise pyaar ho gaya hai woh kehte hai ki pyar se jyada kuch khubsurat hai na kabhi kuch ho sakta hai............ab dekhte hai ki chah ke dil ke is bandh darwaze ko kaun khol ke andar aata hai.............i just wish ki kabhi chah ke saath koi dhoka na ho kyunki bahot muskil hoga uske saath................i just hope ki use apne hisse ka pyar mil jaye lekin main janti hoon ki pyaar bhi itni aasani se nahi milta...........lekin uski behene aur uska bhai uske saath hai..............what a nice family to have.............sab log kitna pyaar karte hai ek dusre se................sneha jo behen se jyada dost hai...........kajal ko chalti firti basket ball hai..........aur mr. armaan jo ki sapne me ridzi se pyaar karte hai woh bhi behen ke saamne .........ise kehte hai besharam..........lekin woh ridzi ke bare me serious lagta hai..........aur ek baat to hai ki koi bada ho ya chota lekin chah ki baat koi nahi tal sakta..........i just wish ki hamare hero bhi chah ki baat man le......i know woh bhi thoda akdu hi hoga agar heroine aise hai to..........lekin kehte hai na do opposites attracts eachother..............i really really really wish ki chah jaise dina se vaada kiya hai waise hi woh apne pyaar ka sidhe jake izhaar karde..........koi kya sochega kya waqt hai kisse kehne ja rahe hai uske bare me mat socha........sirf apne dil ke socho..........kyunki dil ki aawaz galat nahi hoti.................it was good to see chah's 2 personaliye............first the take carer and lovely daughter n sisiter..............second the hatered side for true love...................it was briliiliat part..........i just dont have words to write...........mind blowing...........too good........superb.........amzing..........u rock...........ple ple ple ple ple continue soon...........thanks

love

Kashish

Quote

golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#96

great part. chah is sweet. Liked her a lot. Its not easy for her to think abt marriage after wat happened between her parents. waiting for the next part

Quote

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: golu_1677
great part. chah is sweet. Liked her a lot. Its not easy for her to think abt marriage after wat happened between her parents. waiting for the next part

thank you so much golu... i agree with you from what chah has been through it is surely not easy for her to think about love & marriage... i'll surely post the next part soon....😊

Quote

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: goodkashish
Hey..........surili.....i hope i am not too late for my comments................for your 8650 words part, i dont have any words for you bcoz it was truly amazing.........as a writer i can understand that its not easy to write 8650 words.............so i really appriciate your hard work and time.............now u introdused us to mehra family which was really really nice........it was good to see how gayatri and prerna is taking care of house and children .........and both r right that chah is getting younger and we should think about marrige bcoz i believe that the marrige should be done in a time slot......not to early not to late.........i also understand why chah is avoiding love and wedding bcoz of her mom but i want to tell her that ......in this world not everyone gets cheated............i believe that the person who gets the true love they are angles form heavan..................and as an angle we should love each other not to cheat...........you chah kitna bhi apne dil ko rok le lekin jo hona hai woh to hona hai..............kisi ke dil ko aap apne dil se judne se nahi rok sakte kyunki woh aapke bas me nahi...............prerna ki is baat se sehmat hoon ki pyaar ka kya hai woh to kabhi bhi kisi se kahi pe bhi ho jata hai............pyaar waqt aur halat dekh ke nahi aata............jise pyaar ho gaya hai woh kehte hai ki pyar se jyada kuch khubsurat hai na kabhi kuch ho sakta hai............ab dekhte hai ki chah ke dil ke is bandh darwaze ko kaun khol ke andar aata hai.............i just wish ki kabhi chah ke saath koi dhoka na ho kyunki bahot muskil hoga uske saath................i just hope ki use apne hisse ka pyar mil jaye lekin main janti hoon ki pyaar bhi itni aasani se nahi milta...........lekin uski behene aur uska bhai uske saath hai..............what a nice family to have.............sab log kitna pyaar karte hai ek dusre se................sneha jo behen se jyada dost hai...........kajal ko chalti firti basket ball hai..........aur mr. armaan jo ki sapne me ridzi se pyaar karte hai woh bhi behen ke saamne .........ise kehte hai besharam..........lekin woh ridzi ke bare me serious lagta hai..........aur ek baat to hai ki koi bada ho ya chota lekin chah ki baat koi nahi tal sakta..........i just wish ki hamare hero bhi chah ki baat man le......i know woh bhi thoda akdu hi hoga agar heroine aise hai to..........lekin kehte hai na do opposites attracts eachother..............i really really really wish ki chah jaise dina se vaada kiya hai waise hi woh apne pyaar ka sidhe jake izhaar karde..........koi kya sochega kya waqt hai kisse kehne ja rahe hai uske bare me mat socha........sirf apne dil ke socho..........kyunki dil ki aawaz galat nahi hoti.................it was good to see chah's 2 personaliye............first the take carer and lovely daughter n sisiter..............second the hatered side for true love...................it was briliiliat part..........i just dont have words to write...........mind blowing...........too good........superb.........amzing..........u rock...........ple ple ple ple ple continue soon...........thanks

love

Kashish

kashish dear no thankoo for such a sweet & a long comment.. it is good to read about your views on the part... and i agree with the things you said... even i hope chah ko koi sachcha pyaar karne waala mil jaye.. who will help her see the brighter side of love..... 😃😃 i'll surely post the next part soon...😊

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

Quote

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#99

Hello jii.. how are all of you.. dekhiye jaise maine aap sab se waada kiya tha, kii main "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet", ka next part lekar jaldi hii aaungi, main us wade ke mutabiq aagayi… I did not make all of you wait for a long time…. I hope kii aap sabhi ko "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet" ka part three pasand aaye…. And guys thank you all so much for the comments you gave me for "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet" part 2…. Now carrying on with the story… pehle dekhthe hai kii pichle part mein kya hua tha.. issi liye pesh hai ek chota sa recap…

Recap:- well last part mein, we saw the family of the mehras.. hum ne mehras ke rishton ke bare mein jaana… hum ne yeh jaana ki gayatri ke liye prerna uski bahu nahii, balki uski beti hai… hum ne yeh bhi jaana kii mehras kitni close knit family hai.. ek kii baat dusare par asar karthi hai… they are all inter connected.. ek kii khushi dusare ke chehre par muskaan laathi hai… ek ka ghum dusare ke chehre par udassi laathi hai… we also saw the introduction of chah, our heroine of the fanfic… we learnt about her attitude, her beliefs… humein yeh bhi patah chala kii chah pyaar ke bare mein aakhir kya sochthi hai.. we got to know kii chah pyaar se durr bhaagthi hai, she is scared of pyaar.. we also saw kii chah kii sneha, kajal aur armaan ke saath kitni bannthi hai.. hum ne yeh bhi jaana kii sneha ek behen se zyada ek dost hai, kajal ko basket ball ka bohat shouk hai, aur armaan ko ridhimma se pyaar hai…. Hum ne mehras aur unke beech ke har ek shaks ke rishthon ko aur unki emiyath jaani… ab dekhthe hai agge kya hotha hai….. here's presenting "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet - part 3"…

*****"Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet - Part 3"*****

Hum dekh sakthe hai kii Shimla ka seher hai… yeh seher tourist ko bohat attract kartha hai… yaahaan chaaron taraf sadkon par hum ajnabee ko dekh sakthe hai, kyunke yeh ajnabee Shimla ghoomne- phirne aathe hai… Shimla mein hum har tarah ke logon se milenge… kuch log aise honge joh apne liye naukri kii talash karr rahe ho, ya kuch university ke students, joh padayi karr rahe ho…. Issi seher mein pichle chaalis saal se base hue hai the garewals… garewals joh kii Shimla seher mein bohat jaane maane prestigious family hai… the garewals are one of the most powerful, influential people in Shimla.. they are counted among one of the richest people their.. unki family kii shaan hii kuch alag thi.. they are respected all around in Shimla…. Joh bhi Shimla mein basthe hai, unhe yeh baat patah thi kii Garewals ko apni izzat kitni pyaari thi…. Ab hum jis Garewals ke bare mein itna bol rahe hai, chal kar dekhthe hai kii unke ghar kii kaun hai yeh garewals….
Hum dekh sakthe hai kii ek bada sa ghar hai… yeh ghar Shimla ke one of the most khoobsurat ghar maana jaatha tha…. Chaliye dekhthe hai kii jitni khoobsurat yeh Garewal house hai, kya utni hii khoobsurat us ghar ke rishthe bhi hai….
We can see the door, Wahaan likha hotha hai Garewal House, Jahaan pyaar bastha hai…. Ab hum andar jaakar dekhthe hai tho we see beautiful interiors…is ghar ko bade hii pyaar se sajaya gaya tha.. agar koi insaan us ghar mein aayega tho usse us ghar kii khoobsurathi se hii us ghar mein base pyaar ka ehsaas ho hii jaayega…..
Ab hum badthe hai us ghar ke Mandir kii taraf… Mandir mein hum dekh sakthe hai kii do log puja karr rahe hothe hai… woh Bhagwaan se us ghar kii shanti kii, us ghar kii ekta kii, prartna karthe hai….. after finishing their prayer jab woh mudhkar dekhthe hai tho we see a old man standing there.. & also a guy who is in his mid 40's….. these two ladies joh puja karr rahe hothe hai, smile at the two of them… and then hand them over the Prasad…..
The old man:- chahe koi bhi din ho, lekin aap dono kabhi bhi puja karne mein dairi nahii karthi na….
One lady says:- arre gullu jii, hum ne bhi aap se kitni baar kaha hai kii main aur veena puja is liye karthe hai taaki is ghar kii shanti bani rahe.. tho hum is ghar ke liye koi bhi cheez karne mein dairi kaise karr sakthe hai….
The old man:- aapki yahii ada tho humein bohat pasand hai preeto jii…..
Preeto:- kya gullu jii aap bhi.. itne boode ho gaye hai.. phir bhi aap aise… yeh kehkar preeto sharmathi hai…….
Now the person who is there says:- ayeee… hyee… kya baat hai… yahaan tho subaah subaah garewal house mein pyaar kii barsaat hone lagi…. Waise main tho kehtha hoon kii humare film producers ko ek love story banana chahiye… maa aur bouji ke upar.. aur us film ka title hoga, gullu-preeto kii amar prem kahani…
The old man:- oye chup kar nalayak… mera naam gulshan garewal hai.. main gullu sirf apni preeto jii ke liye hoon…. Samjha tu… aur waise bhi mera aur preeto ka pyaar bhikavu nahii hai… it is a personal matter you see..[yeh kehkar gulshan holds that persons ears..]
The person:- bouji samaj gaya main.. please mere kaan chodiye.. main jaantha hoon kii aapko aur maa ko publicity pasand nahii.. warna ab thak tho har ek magazine mein aap dono ke pyaar ke kisse chup hii jaathe… lekin bouji main zaroor aapke aur maa kii pyaar kii kahani ko jaan na chahoonga….
Gulshan:- kamal tu chup karega… aur hum tujhe humari prem kahani ke bare mein kuch nahii batane waale…
Kamal:- lekin kyun bouji…
Gulshan:- kuch baatein personal hothi hai… kyun preeto jii…
Preeto gets embarrassed & says:- aap bhi na bachon ke saamne….
Kamal:- aap dono ka pyaar dekh kar mujhe thoda aur Prasad khane ka mann karr raha hai.. bhabhi thoda Prasad milega…
Veena:- haan yeh le na…
Veena gives kamal the Prasad.. & then gulshan says:- arre preeto jii, ap kyun Sharma rahii hai…. Kya bachon ko kabhi pyaar nahii hua… aur yeh bachche tho humse do kadam agge hai.. tho inse kaisi sharam….
Preeto:- aap bhi na.. kuch tho sharam kijiye, aap ke abhi shaddi ke umar mein pothe, potiyaan hai aur aap ho kii aise keh rahe ho…
Gulshan:- preeto jii aise kaunsi kitaab mein likha hai kii pyaar karne ke liye koi umar thodi na hothi hai.. agar humare dil ko aap se aaj bhi pyaar hai tho hai… is mein humari koi ghalthi nahii….
Isse pehle kii koi jawaab detha, pallavi comes there & replies:- bouji main aapki baaton se bilkul sehmath hoon… pyaar karne ke liye koi umar nahii hothi…
Gulshan:- dekha preeto pallavi bhi meri is baat se sehmat hai.. aur tum ho kii khamaka…..
Pallavi walks to gulsha, takes his blessings, then she takes blessing from gulshan.. aur phir veena ke pass jaathi hai aur kehthi hai:- good morning bhabhi…
Veena smiles & says:- good morning….
Veena , pallavi ko Prasad de rahii hothi hai, before pallavi can put the Prasad in her mouth , kamal pallavi ke haath se prasad le letha hai…
Pallavi:- kamal yeh kya tha….
Kamal:- arre biwi jii ghussa kyun ho rahii ho… main tho bas tumhe yeh ehsaas dila raha tha, kii main bhi hoon yahaan… tumne yahaan moujood sabko good morning kaha, siwaye mere, tho maine socha kii shayad tumne notice nahii kiya ho kii tumhara yeh pati dev bhi yahii hai..
Pallavi:- kamal, very funny… ab mujhe patah chal gaya hai, kii tum bhi yahii ho.. ab chalo do mera Prasad…..
Kamal:- nahii main tumhe yeh Prasad nahii doonga….
Pallavi:- kyun nahii doge…
Kamal:- woh isliye kyunke tum puja mein late aayi.. issi liye tumko no Prasad..
Pallavi:- aise kahaan likha hai kii late se aane waale logon ko Prasad nahii milega….
Kamal:- pallavi aisa kahiin likha tho nahii hai, lekin tumhare liye aaj se yahii rule hai… kyunke tum roz late aathi ho.. issi liye aaj se jab bhi tum late aaogi so no Prasad… tumhare hisse ka Prasad bhi main hii khaa loonga…
Pallavi makes a face, then tells veena:- bhabhi dekho na aapka yeh pyaara devar mujhe Prasad nahii de raha hai.. aap kuch kaho na isse…
Veena:- koi baat nahii pallavi, agar kamal tujhe Prasad nahii de raha hai tho tu yeh le aur thoda Prasad….
Pallavi takes the Prasad from veena's hand & says:- thank you bhabhi….. warna yeh kamal tho mere hisse kii cheezein kha, khakar din par din mota ho raha hai.. [pallavi says teasing kamal]
Gulshan laughs and says:- yeh baat tho tumhari bilkul sahii hai pallavi…..
Kamal:- bhabhi this is not fair… yeh pallavi roz puja mein late aathi hai.. aur aap isse Prasad dethi hai… aap tho pallavi ko daantthi bhi nahii hai…. Aur waise pallavi main mota nahii ho raha hoon.. samjhi tum…
Pallavi:- tum mote ho rahe ho, kamal… tum zara ek baar khud ka weight check kar lo.. tab tumhe patah chalega..
Veena:- kamal, pallavi chodo na tum dono.. chalo ab ladna bund karo, aur nhastha karne chaliye sab… maa, bouji chaliye….
Now veena, pallavi, kamal, gulshan and preeto walk to the dining table to eat their breakfast…
Dining table par aake bhi kamal & pallavi keep arguing….
Kamal:- dekho pallavi, main keh raha hoon na main mota nahii hua hoon…
Pallavi:- kamal main jaanthi hoon kii sach kadwa hotha hai.. lekin tumhe tho sach ko accept karna hii hoga na… aur sach tho yahii hai kii you have put on weight… kyun bouji main sahii hoon na…
Gulshan:- haan , pallavi bilkul sahii keh rahii hai kamal….
Kamal gets irritated & says:- dekhiye main aakhri baar keh raha hoon kii maine koi weight put on nahii kiya hai.. aur pallavi main tumhe bata doon main aaj bhi waisa hii hoon jaise maine humare college ke dino mein tha… main koi mota-vota nahii hua hoon…
Now preeto tells kamal:- kamal zara tu meri taraf dekh….'
Kamal turns and faces his mother.. & preeto keeps seeing him…. Aur kamal says:- kya dekh rahi hai maa aap….
Preeto:- arre kuch nahii , main tho bas dekh rahii thi kii kya tu sachchi mota hogaya hai…
Now kamal thinks kii preeto uska saath degi & he says:- tho maa aap hii batayiye kii kya aap ko lagtha hai kii main mota hogaya hoon… aap in logon se keh dijiye kii main mota nahii hua hoon…
Preeto [just to tease kamal says]:- kamal mujhe lagtha hai kii tumhare bouji aur pallavi sahi keh rahe hai.. tu wakayiye mein mota hogaya hai…
Yeh kehkar preeto starts laughing, gulshan & pallavi join her in laughing…
Now kamal is getting irritated.. veena sees this & says:- kya aap log bhi, bechare kamal kii taang kheench rahe hai… aur kamal chal tu khana kha le…. Baaki baatein breakfast ke baad…
Kamal:- nahi bhabhi, aaj tho dhood ka dhood aur pani ka pani hokar hii rahega… pallavi agar main itna hii mota that ho mujhse shaddi kyun kii tumne…
Pallavi:- well main bhi kya karthi.. majboor thin a main.. aur kabhi kabhi majbooriyon mein insaan woh kaam kar jaatha hai joh woh kabhi bhi nahii karna chahtha hai…
Kamal is confused & says:- majboori, kaisi majboori….
Pallavi:- jaane do na kamal, tum jaankar bhi kya karoge.. koi fayada nahii hai.. issi liye chod do is baat ko aur apna nhastha karo…
Kamal:- nahii pallavi main jaan na chahthi hoon kii aisi kaunsi majboori thi jisne tumhe mujhse shaddi karne ke liye majboor kar diya tha…
Pallavi:- tum agar jaan nah ii chahthe ho kamal tho suno, main mere dil ke haathon majboor ho baiti…
Kamal:- dil ke haathon majboor… main kuch samjha nahii…
Pallavi:- iska matlab yeh mr.duffer kii mera dil tumhe chahne laga tha, main tumse pyaar karne lagi thi.. aur issio majboori mein, maine tumse shaddi kii..
Kamal gives a embarrassed smile…..
Gulshan:- kothiya tu itna bhi nahii samajtha kya…
Kamal:- nahii bouji woh… main…
Veena:- kamal dekh yeh sab baatein chod, aur tu humein bata kii tune pallavi se apni dil kii baat kaise kahii..
Kamal:- bhabhi, woh maine pallavi se apni dil kii baat… woh.… main..main..main…
Preeto:-kamal tu yeh kya bakri ki tarah mainnnnn..mainnnn… karr raha hai…. Bata na kaise kaha tune pallavi se apni dil kii baat…
Kamal:- woh darasal isse phele kii main pallavi se apni dil kii baat kartha, pallavi ne khud aakar mujhse apne dil kii baat keh dii…
Gulshan:- kya iska matlab, is bachchi ne tujhse bhi zyada himmat dikhayi aur tujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya…
Kamal:- nahii bouji aisi koi baat nahii hai, woh darasal main pallavi se apni dil kii baat kehne hii waala tha, kii pallavi ne aakar mujhse apni dil ki baat keh dii…..
Pallavi:- yeh bilkul jhoot hai…. Bouji, maa, yeh sach nahii hai…
Veena:- pallavi tho tu hii bata de kii kya sach hai…
Pallavi:- tho theek hai bhabhi sach suniye, hue yun kii kamal aur main ek hii class mein the… kamal hamesha mujhe dur-durr se dekha karthe the.. unki tho kabhi himmat hii nahii hothi thi kii yeh mujhse aakar baat kare.. jab bhi main inse baat karne jaathi thi, jab bhi yeh mujhse durr bhaagthe the…. Dekhthe hii dekhthe humare colehe ka akhri saal ka akhri din bhi aagaya, lekin tab bhi kamal ne mujhse kuch nahii kaha, aur issi liye tang aakar maine hii kamal se apne pyaar ka ikraar kar liya…. Aap jaanthe hai bhabhi jab maine inse apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya na, tho yeh tho jaise shock mein chale gaye the.. inhone tho mujhse kuch bhi nahii kaha.. aur phir jab yeh shock se baahar aaye tho mujhse kehne lage kii main inhe pinch karoon, taaki inhe yakeen ho jaye kii inhone joh bhi suna woh sach hai.. aur tab mujhe in par itna ghussa aaya kii maine inhe thappad marr diya.. aur main wahaan se ghusse mein chala gaya… aur tab inhe ehsaas hua kii kya hua, auir tabse lagatar paanch din yeh mere ghar ke bahar chakkar lagane lage… aur maine inhe avoid kiya.. mere pitaji bhi inhe paanch din se dekh rahe the…. Aur paanchve din mere pitaji ne tang aakar inhe ghar ke andar bulaya, yeh jaan ne ke liye kii aakhir baat kya hai.. aur tab bhi kamal ne badi hii mushkhil se , fumble karthe hue mere pitaji se kaha kii yeh mujhse pyaar karthe hai aur mujhse shaddi karna chahthe hai… tab mere pitaji ne bouji se baat kii aur humara rishtha tay kar diya…
Gulshan:- kyun re , tujhe sharam nahii aathi tune pallavi se apni dil kii baat keh ne se pehle iske pitaji se baat kar li..
Kamal:- bouji lekin maine pallavi se apni dil kii baat kahii tho thi na…..
Pallavi:- haan bouji inhone apni dil kii baat mujhse kahii zaroor thi, lekin humara rishtha tay hone ke ek hafthe baad.. aur aap jaanthe hai kyun bouji…
Gulshan:- kyun??
Pallavi:- kyunke bouji inhe theek ek haftha laga , is baat par yakeen karne ke liye kii humari shaddi ho rahii hai…
Yeh baat sunnkar veena, gulshan, preeto start laughing.. aur kamal puts his head down.. to hide his embarrassment… aur preeto , kamal ke sarr par tapki marrthi hai…. Even kamal joins them in laughing… aise hii hasi, khushi se yeh chaaron apna nhastha karr rahe hothe hai.. they keep talking continuously and enjoy their breakfast…. Jab wahaan vasu aathi hai.. vasu aathi hai with a frown on her face.. lekin us frown ke saath hamesha se maya ke chehre par ek fake smile plastered hothi hai…… she comes sits on the dining table… na kissi ko good morning kehthi hai.. aur na kuch.. seedha complain par utar aathi hai:- yeh kya hai… veena maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai kii tum roz roz yeh oily parathe matt banaya karo… subah nhasthe ke liye…. Agar tum yeh parathe banana bhi chahthi ho, tho mere liye bread toast bana diya karo… roz roz yahii nhastha kha kar main beemar ho jaaungi.. aur waise bhi mujhe lagtha hai kii tum chahthi ho kii main beemar ho jaun… tum jaan bhoochkar yeh oily cheezein banathi ho, jisse kha kar main beemar houn aur mere kitty party mein, mere social circle mein sab log mujh par hase….
Veena:- lekin vasu…
Vasu:- nahii veena.. mujhe Tumse koi safayi kii zaroorat nahii hai.. main jaanthi hoon tum aisa is liye karthi ho kyunke tum mujhse jalthi ho… tum kabhi mere us elite social circle ka hissa nahii bann sakthi, issi liye tum aise karthi ho.. dekh liya maa aapne aapki yeh chahiti bahu kya karr rahii hai… ab tho aap iske asli rang pechaan jayiye.. kab thak aap dhoke mein rahenge….
Preeto:- vasu tu pagal ho gayi hai kya, koi apni bhabhi se is tarah baat kartha hai kya….
Vasu:- arre maa, aap bhi kya.. jab mere bhaiyya inhe apni patni nahii maanthe, tho yeh meri vabhabhi kahaan se hui…
Gulshan:- [shouts at vasu saying] vasuuu.. agar tumhe aisi bakwaas karni hai tho tum yahaan se jaa sakthi ho.. hum log yahaan tumhari bakwaas sunn ne ke liye nahii baite hue hai…. Aur veena tumhari bhabhi hai, tho iska lihaaz karna tum jitni jaldi seekh jaaogi, utna hii achcha hoga tumhare liye…. Tameez se pesh aana seekh jao tum, isse pehle kii bohat dair ho jaye….
Vasu grumbles slowly lekin sabko yeh baat sunayi dethi hai:- tameez se pesh aaun.. my foot… haan main joh bolthi hoon woh bakwaas hai is ghar mein, joh karthi hoon woh bakwaas hai… lekin in logon ko veena joh bhi karthi hai woh kabhi bakwaas nahii lagtha… jaise is bakwaas nhasthe ko hii dekh lo.. lekin kissi ko nahii lagega kii yeh bakwaas hai….
Gulshan:- vasu tum aaj is khane ko bakwaas keh rahii ho na, kal ko jaakar aisa na ho jaye hii tumhe khane ka ek dana bhi na mile aur tum tadapthi raho…
Vasu:- aapki baatein tho mere samaj se hii bahar hai bouji..
Gulshan:- vasu meri baatein un logon ke samaj mein aathi hai jin mein thodi si bhi dusaron ko samaj ne kii shamtha hothi hai.. lekin tum mein tho woh nahii hai.. issi liye tumse meri baat samaj ne kii umeed bhi nahii rakh sakthe.. auur agar kissi ne tumse umeed bhi rakhi na, tho woh umeed aise hogi jaisi registan mein paani ko dhoond ne kii umeed…..
Vasu:- ufffff.. bouji.. aap na jaane kahaan kii baat kahaan le jaathe hai.. waise bhi ab main aapse tho koi baat nahii karna chahthi hoon, ab mujhe bohat bhookh lagi hai…. Veena tum joh aur mere liye bread toast bana do…
Veena joh kii apna nhastha karr rahii hothi hai, stops her nhastha aur table se uth jaathi hai, to make vasu's nhastha.. tab vasu phir kehthi hai:- waise veena tumhe bread toast banana aatha hai na.. please bread ko jala matt dena jaise tumne pichli baar kiya tha….
Veena:- theek hai vasu…
Ab veena wahaan se jaa rahii hothi hai , jab pallavi kehthi hai:- bhabhi ek minute…
Veena:- kya hua pallavi….
Pallavi kuch nahii kehthi, she gets up from her seat , she walks to veena aur veena ko wapas dining table mein uski ke chair ke pass laathi hai… veena looks at pallavi.. tho pallavi kehthi hai:- bhabhi aap pehle batiye aur apna nhastha kariye.. kehthe hai kii nhastha karthe waqt uth kar jaana achchi baat nahii hothi..
Veena looks at pallavi helplessly & says:-pallavi main bas abhi aayi vasu ka nhastha lekar aathi hoon main.. uske baad main kha loongi…
Pallavi:- nahii bhabhi.. nothing doing.. aapko aapke bte kii kasam.. aap pehle nhastha kariye…
Veena has no other choice, but to sit & have her nhastha… aur pallavi bhi apne jagah chali jaathi hai to finish her breakfast… yeh baat vasu ko aur bhi irritate karthi hai….. & she says…
Vasu:- yeh kya batameezi hai pallavi…
Pallavi coolly eating her breakfast replies:- yeh koi batameezi nahii hai vasu.. maine tho bas bhabhi se unka nhastha karne ke liye kaha.. bas thoda intezaar kar lo vasu apne bread toast ka… bhabhi apna nhastha khatam karke tumhe tumhara nhastha bana kar de degi… lekin agar tumhe itni hii bhookh lagi hai na tho tum yeh parathe kha sakthi ho.. haann lekin mujhe yaad aaya kii tumhare hisaab se tho yeh parathe bakwaas hai na.. chalo koi baat nahii vasu tu apne nhasthe ka thoda sa intezaar karo, aur hum log yeh tasty parathe ka nhastha enjoy karthe hai….. [pallavi says this with a smirk on her face..]
Vasu [in a angry tone says]:- pallavi tumhari himmat kaisi hui, mujhse aise baat karne ke liye.. mujhe lagtha hai kii tum bhool rahii ho kii main is ghar kii beti hoon….
Pallavi:- vasu mujhe bohat hii achche se yaad hai kii tum is ghar kii beti ho.. lekin shayad tum bhool rahii ho kii main aur bhabhi, is ghar kii bahuyein hai, yaani tumhare bade bhaiyon kii biwiyaan.. aur is naathe humara is ghar par hakh tumse kayi zyada hai… ek beti woh bhi joh tum jaisi ho woh is ghar ke liye bojh se zyada kuch nahii hai…
Vasu:- pallavi tum apni hadh parr karr rahii ho..
Pallavi:- vasu tum mujhe meri hadhh matt sikhao.. pehle tum khud hadh mein rehna seekh jao.. aur phir tum dekhna tumhe saari duniyaan theek nazar aayegi….
Vasu:- kamal, tum dekh rahe ho na apni biwi ko.. yeh bolthi bohat hai… agar tum mere kehne par 22 years pehle meri dost raji se shaddi kar lethe tho aaj humein yeh din dekhna nahii padtha…
Isse pehle kii pallavi kuch aur kahe, kamal kehtha hai:- vasu pallavi sahii hi tho keh rahii hai.. aur kya kaha tumne mujhe tumhari us dost raji se shaddi karna chahiye tha.. pagal ho gayi ho kya… woh raji tho bilkul tum jaisi hai, hum logon se tum jaisi ek ko sambhala nahii jaa raha hai aur agar main us raji se shaddi kar letha na tho hum sabko tum dono milkar kahiin ka nahii chodthe…
Vasu:- well.. whatever… woh tumhari choice hai… aur jab tumne pallavi ko choose kiya tho hum sab ne dekh hii liya kii tumhari choice kitni kharab hai… aur haan pallavi kya kaha tumne agar beti ghar par hui, tho woh us ghar ke liye ek bojh hai na, lekin shayad tum ek baat bhool rahii ho pallavi, tumhari bhi ek beti hai… tho kya woh bhi is ghar par ek bojh hai…
Isse pehle kii koi vasu ke is baat ka jawaab detha, vasu phir se bol padthi hai:- ohh… tho ab mere samaj mein aaya, waise bhi woh ladki is ghar par ek bojh hii tho hai… godh lii hui bachchi kabhi apni khud kii bachchi thodi na hothi hai… tho is mayine se hui na woh humare is ghar par ek jeeta-jaagtha bojh..
Gulshan shouts:- vasu ridhimma humare is ghar ke liye bojh nahii hai.. balki woh is ghar kii beti hai.. woh aisi beti hai jiski wajah se pariwaar ka sarr garv se ooncha ho jaatha hai… aur haan vasu ek aur baat, pallavi ne yeh nahii kaha kii ek ghar mein beti ka hona bojh kii baat hai, balki pallavi ne yeh kaha kii agar kissi ghar mein tum jaisi beti ho tho woh beti ghar ke liye bojh hothi hai… aur tum jaanthi ho, kii tum jaisi betiyaan kyun bojh hothi hai, woh is liye kyunke tum jaisi betiyaan na tho khud khush rehthi hai, aur na hii ghar kii khushiyon ko bardhast karr sakthi hai….
Vasu:- bouji, aap mere ilawa sabko apne sarr par chada kar rakhiye, lekin ek din yahii log aapko aapki sahii jagah dikhayenge… tab aapko meri zaroorat padegi….
Preeto:- arre chup kar tu… bohat hogaya….
Vasu:- is ghar mein sab logh mujhe bhii chup karane mein hii tule hue hai…. Aur veena tum aur kitni dair apna nhastha karogi… main jaanthi hoon kii tum jaan bhoochkar apna nhastha dheere dheere karr rahii ho.. taaki main bhookh se marr jaaun…
Veena:- nahii vasu.. aisi baat nahii hai… mera nhastha hogaya.. main abhi tumhare liye tumhara nhastha bana kar laathi hoon..
Preeto:- nahii veena ek minute rukh jaa… tu kahiin nahii jaa rahii hai…
Veena:- lekin maa…
Preeto:- lekin-vekin kuch nahii veena.. aur vasu agar tum bread toast khana chahthi ho tho kitchen mein jao aur khud bana lo….
Vasu:- maaaa…
Gulshan:- sahii hii tho keh rahii hai tumhari maa, vasu… ghar mein sabke liye parathe banthe hai… agar tum parathe nahii khana chahthi tho tum khud joh chahe banakar kha sakthi ho.. lekin veena tumhare liye bread toast nahii banayegi…
Kamal:- aur vasu tum jaanthi tho ho na kii kitchen humare is ghar mein kahaan hai.. agar tum nahii jaanthi tho veena bhabhi tumhe directions bata degi, tum wahaan chali jaana.. theek hai.. bhabhi aap zara vasu ko kitchen ka raastha tho batayiye…
Veena:- kamal, jaane de na…. kyun khamakha…
Pallavi:- arre bhabhi aap kitchen ka raastha vasu ko batane mein itni kyun hichkicha rahii hai…. Achcha chodiye agar aap nahii bataya chahthi tho koi baat nahii, main hii bata dethi hoon… vasu tum ek kaam karna yahaan dining hall se seedha jaana aur phir left mein mudh jaana.. woh left mein tumhe ek door milega, wohii kitchen hai, agar tum wahaan jaaogi tho zaroor pehchaan jaaogi…
Vasu:- aap logon se baat karna hii bekaar hai…..
Kamal:- tho tumse kisne keh diya kii tum hum se baatein karo…
Vasu gets up from the table & starts leaving the place in a huff.. jab woh dekhthi hai kii lalit has entered the dining hall, to eat his breakfast…. Lalit has a serious look on his face.. he is ready to leave for the office.. his face has no welcoming smile…
Lalit breakfast table mein apni jagah par bait jaatha hai.. and veena serves him with his breakfast… table mein ek tarah kii khamoshi si cha jaathi hai.. kyunke lalit does not talk to veena… aur pallavi tho lalit se sirf jab koi zaroorat hothi hai tab baat karthi hai.. kamal aur lalit ke beech it is mostly only the business kii baatein.. which they do in the office… gulshan aur lalit ka rishtha is still strained… bas naam ke liye un dono ke beech baap-bete ka rishtha tha, par aisi koi vibes nahii aathi hai unke rishthe mein… preeto jahaan thak baat karna chahiye tha lalit se wahiin thak seemit rehthi thi…. Yes they all loved lalit, but they are not in favor of what lalit is doing to veena for the past 20 years… but now veena ko koi farq nahii padtha.. yes at times she feels bad, lekin she just over looks that.. she feels kii uska dukhi hona is not right as her being sad effects the people of garewal house, people who love her & respect her.. issi liye veena ne kissi baat ka bura maan na bhi chod diya hai…
Now lalit was eating his breakfast bina kuch kahe.. tab vasu wahaan phir aa jaathi hai, with a smirk on her face…
Pallavi sees vasu & says:- vasu tum ab thak kitchen mein gayi nahii kya.. mujhe lagtha hai tum kitchen ka raastha phir se bhool gayi ho.. agar tum chaho tho main tumhe phir se bata sakthi hoon kii kitchen kahaan hai.. arre vasu mere pass isse bhi achcha idea hai, main tumhe khud kitchen thak chod aathi hoon chalo….
Vasu:- pallavi tumhare ehsaan kii mujhe koi zaroorat nahii.. main yahaan bas lalit ko badhayi dene aayi thi….
Kamal:- bhadhayi, kiss baat kii vasu??
Vasu:- kamal mujhe lagtha hai kii tum bhool gaye ho, aaj humare bhaiyya kii aur tumhare pyaari bhabhi kii shaddi kii saal-gira hai…
Yeh baatein sunnkar sabke chehre hardens.. they all become serious….
Preeto:- vasu, tu kab kya bol rahii hai zara derkh kar bol liya karr…
Vasu:- arre maine joh kaha usmein ghalat kya hai.. aaj lalit bhaisaab aur veena kii shaddi kii saal-gira tho hai na.. maa shayad aap bhool gayi aaj se chaubees saal pehle in dono kii shaddi hui thi…
Gulshan:- vasu bas karr….
Vasu:- arre main kyun bas karoon bouji.. is ghar mein , main joh bhi bolun sabko usse problem hothi hai… lekin aaj tho mai ek achchi baat bol rahii hoon.. aaj tho main aap se khushi manane ko keh rahii hoon, kyunke aaj hii ke din choubees saal pehle aapki yeh chahithi bahu is ghar mein aayi thi…. Ohhhhh… ab mujhe samaj mein aaya kii aap sab mujhe kyun chup hone ko keh rahe ho.. aap mujhse chup rehne ke liye is liye keh rahe hai na kyunke bhalle hii is ghar mein khushiyaan aayi thi, lekin jab se veena bhaisaab kii zindagi mein aayi hai masano jaise inki zindagi se khushi naam kii cheez hii chali gayi.. aur tho aur lalit bhaisaab, veena ko apni patni hii nahii maanthe.. veena tho bas lalit bhaisaab par ek bojh hai, joh bhaisaab pichle choubees saal se utathe aa rahe hai….
Kamal:- vasu chup ho jao.. bohat bol chuki ho tum….
Vasu:- kyun kamal maine kuch ghalat bol diya kya.. maine joh bola sach hii tho bola hai na…
Pallavi:- vasu, veena bhabhi chup hai iska matlab yeh nahii kii tum joh chahe bologi aur hum sab tumhari baatein sunthe rahenge..
Vasu:- tum log meri baaton ko suno ya phir na suno, lekin sach tho wahii rahega na joh main bol rahii hoon.. agar aap log meri baatein nahii bhi sunoge tho sach thodi na badal jayega.. lalit bhaisaab ke zindagi mein har pareshaani kii wajah bas yahii veena hai…
Preeto:- [shouts] vasuuuuuuuu…
Now lalit says:- maa , vasu par chillakar koi fayada nahii.. waise bhii vasu ne joh bhi kaha sach hii tho hai… sach ko hum kitne waqt thak jhutla sakthe hai maa.. sach tho yahii hai kii main mere aur veena ke is rishthe ko ek bojh se badkar kuch nahii maantha… agar yeh baat sach hai tho sach hai maa.. aap log iss sach ko mane ya na mane, sach tho sach hii rahega…
Gulshan:- agar tere liye woh sach hai, tho aaj tu meri taraf se bhi ek sach suntha jaa…
Isse pehle kii gulshan could continue veena tells him:- bouji rehne dijiye…
Gulshan:- nahii puttar.. aaj waqt aagaya hai kii main mere is bte ko kuch sachchayiyon ka yaad dilaun…. Tu sach sunn na chahtha hai na tho sunn.. tu is ghar mein hai, kyunke veena yeh chahthi thi kii tu apne ghar se, apne pariwaar se durr na rahe… tere liye tho mere is ghar mein jagah nahii thi, woh tho bhala maan veena ka jiski wajah se tu yahaan hai is ghar mein.. aur ek sach sunn woh joh teri bewafayi ka jeetha-jaagtha sabot hai na, woh is ghar mein issi liye rehtha hai kyunke veena yeh chahthi thi.. warna tumhare liye aur tumhare us bte ke liye is ghar mein koi jagah nahii hai.. samjhe tum…. Gulshan is very angry saying all this.. aur yahaan lalit ko bhi bada ghussa aatha hai, he just leaves the dining table giving veena a very angry stare….. yahaan table par ek tarah kii khamoshi si cha jaathi hai.. aur vasu is very happy… she is about to leave the place jab pallavi kehthi hai:- aag lagakar bohat khush ho na tum…. Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna vasu jis din issi aage ke lapton mein tum khud jalogi na us din tumhe is aag mein jaalne kii tadap ka ehsaas hoga.. yaad rakhna meri baat ko tum…
Vasu just leaves after giving pallavi a angry stare…
Yahaan dining table ki khamoshi durr karne ke liye pallavi starts talking and phir sabhi apne ghum chupakar baaton mein jhut jaathe hai…. Breakfast ke baad kamal leaves to the office… gulshan & preeto decide to go for a walk.. aur yahaan pallavi, just to divert veena's mind starts talking about the kids of the garewal house & their respective futures.. and this was indeed the best way to divert veena's mind from the sad thoughts…
Ab yahaan let us see gulshan aur preeto kya karr rahe hai.. they both are walking in the park.. park mein chalthe hue…. Preeto asks:- gullu jii… hum aapse ek baat kahein….
Gulshan:- preeto jii, hum tho kab se issi intezaar mein baite hue hai kii aap humse kuch kahengi….
Preeto:- dekhiye main mazaak nahii karr rahii hoon.. main joh baat karna chahthi hoon woh bohat zaroori hai..
Gulshan:- aisi kaunsi baat hai preeto jii.. boliye…
Preeto:- gullu jii woh hum soch rahe the, kii humare laad sahib kii padayi khatam hone mein bas ek hii tho saal reh gaya hai, tho humein uske liye ladki dekhni shuru karr deni chahiye..
Gulshan is confused & he says:- ladki?? Kiss liye preeto jii??
Preeto:- ji humare laad-saab kii shaddi ke liye…
Gulshan:- nahii preeto jii.. mujhe nahii lagtha yeh sahii hai… humari wajah se pehle hii veena itni mushkhilon se guzri hai.. lekin aaj kal ke bachche chahthe hai kii woh apna jeevan saathi khud chune.. issi liye humein lagtha hai kii humein humare bachon ko yeh aazadi deni hii chahiye…
Preeto:- main aapki baat se sehmath hoon gullu jii.. lekin aap ko meri ek baat ko maan na padega….
Gulshan:- aapki kaunsi baat preeto jii, batayiye…
Preeto:- gullu jii aapko yaad hai na kii hum logon ne mehra pariwaar se kya waada kiya tha…
Gulshan:- haan yaad hai.. humne yeh waada kiya tha unse kii humare ghar ke bade potha ya pothi kii shaddi unke ghar ke pothi ya pothe se hogi…
Preeto:- haan tho main yeh chahthi hoon, kii agar yadi humare bachon ne yeh zimedaari humein dii kii hum unke liye rishtha dhoonde tho humein sabse pehle mehras ko dhoond na hoga aur unse rishtha jodna hoga.. shayad issi tarah joh rishthe bees saal pehle choot gaye the wohii ban jaye… [preeto says this with a sad look on her face…]
Gulshan:- preeto jii main aapke jazbaat kii qadar kartha hoon.. lekin preeto jii hum tho yeh bhi nahii jaantha kii kya mehras humse koi rishtha banana chahthe hai bhi ya nahii.. aur tho aur hum tho yeh bhi nahii jaanthe kii aaj mehras kahaan hai, kaunse seher mein hai.. desh mein hai ya phir videsh mein…
Preeto:- dekhiye yeh sab main nahii jaanthi.. lekin agar humare bachche humein yeh hakh dethe hai ki hum unke liye jeevan saathi chune tho hum ek baar mehras se baat zaroor karenge…
Gulshan:- theek hai preeto jii.. jaisa aap chahe…
Now preeto & gulshan continue their walkingin the park… ab yahaan dekhthe hai kii garewal house mein kya ho raha hai.. garewal house mein hum dekh sakthe hai kii veena & pallavi, aise hii kaam karr rahe hothe hai..ab wemove up to the stairs aur wahaan we can see four rooms which are close to each other… we enter the first room.. us kamre mein ek ladki yahaan se wahaan, wahaan se yahaan chal rahii hothi hai… the girl appears to be very angry… woh khud se baatein karr rahii hothi hai.. khud kuch badbada rahii hothi hai…. Chaliye sunthe hai kii woh ladki aakhir kya keh rahii hai……
The girl:- woh samajtha kya hai khud ko.. ghar ko kya chala gaya.. mujhe tho bhool hii gaya… main tabse usse phone karne kii koshish karr rahii hoon, aur woh hai kii mere call ko pick hii nahii karr raha hai.. patah nahii maine kyun aise ek idiot se pyaar kiya… mujhe tho lagtha hai kii merit ho maati mari gayi thi, issi wajah se main us jaise insaan ko apna dil de baiti… Bhagwaan aisa nirdayi, kator pyaar karne waala kissi ko bhi na de.. waise bhi woh do dino mein yahiii tho aane waala tha na.. tab main usse bilkul bhi baat nahii karoongi.. aur tab agar woh mere peeche sorry, sorry kehkar bhi phirega, tab bhi main usse koi bhaav nahii dene waali hoon…. Lekin phir woh ladki apne aap se kehthi hai:- nahii ridhimma ek baar usse baat kar lo.. aur give him a piece of your mind.. tabhi tho us armaan the great ko bhi patah chalega kii tu hai kya cheez…. [yes that girl is ridhimma, joh armaan se ghussa hai..]
Ridhimma again tries armaan's number aur is baar armaan picks up the phone… armaan neend mein hotha hai.. aur woh neend mein boltha hai:- hellooo.. kaun ullu ka patta.. tabse pareshaan karr raha hai.. sone do na yaar.. aur joh bhi hai baad mein phone karna….
Armaan bas phone rakh ne hii waala hotha hai, jab wahaan se ridhimma chillathi hai:- armaannnnnnnnnnnn.. how dare you…. Tumhari itni himmat kii tum mujhe kaun ullu ka patta bolkar address karo..
Ridhimma kii awaaz sunthe hii armaan is totally awake and he checks the caller on her mobile.. aur jab he sees kii it is ridhimma's call, woh khud se kehtha hai:- wowww armaan, there you go.. pehle hii ridzi tujhse kum naaraaz thi kii ab tu aur naraaz kar diya.. ab tho mujhe lagtha hai gayi bhains paani mein poori tarah se…. armaan keeps grumbling and he realizes kii ridhimma is on the phone…
Armaan:- hii ridzi…
Ridhimma:- armaan.. go to hell….
Armaan:- ridzi meri baat tho suno…
Ridhimma:- armaan mujhe tumse koi baat nahii karni… aur tum mujhe phone karne kii koshish bhi matt karna..byeee…
Yeh kehkar ridhimma phone rakh dethi hai.. aur yahaan armaan tries to call ridhimma again.. lekin ridhimma cuts his call.. aur phir jab armaan continuosly keeps calling her, and sending sorry messages… ridhimma gets angry and switches off her cell phone… aur yahaan armaan khud se kehtha hai:- armaan beta tu tho gaya kaam se…
Ab back to garewal house…. Ridhimma is very restless.. jab pallavi calls her…
Pallavi:- ridziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…
Ridhimma comes down to where pallavi & veena are there & she says:- good morning mom, good morning badi-maa..
Both pallavi & veena wish her good morning.. ridhimma calls pallavi mom, though pallavi is her maasi… as pallavi has been her mother from the time she has known..
Veena:- ridhimma achcha hua tu uth gayi, zara jaa aur apne bhaiyon ko uta de na… un sabko university bhi tho jaana hai na…
Ridhimma:- jee badi maa.. main abhi uta doongi unhe….
Ridhimma goes up and stands in front of one room.. jab woh room ke andar jaathi hai, tho we can see everything in the roon is neatly arranged.. is kamre mein aisi ek bhi cheez nahii joh bikhri padi hui hai.. aam taur par ladkon ke kamre mein cheezein yahaan, yahaan padi hui hothi lekin is kamre mein tho aisa kuch nahii tha.. is kamre mein every thing was spic and span.. itna saaf tho shayad hii koi ladki bhi apne kamre ko rakhe……
Ridhimma now looks at the bed, expecting that, the person might be sleeping there.. lekin ridhimma kii hairani ke liye, bed par koi nahii hotha.. bed is neatly made.. aur bed ko dekhkar tho aisa lagtha hai kii koi soya bhii nahii tha wahaan….. ridhimma is surprised… and she starts calling out for the person:- bhai… bhaii.. kahaan hai aap.. bhai….
Then we can hear a voice:- ridzi kya hua… main yahaan balcony mein hoon….
Ridhimma walks to the balcony.. hum dekh sakthe hai kii a person back is facing us… ridhimma walks to him & says:- bhai aap yahaan hai, main aapko wahaan dhoond rahii thi…
The person:- kya hua ridzi.. main tho yahiin tha.. kyun dhoond rahii thi mujhe… koi kaam tha kya mujhse….
Ridhimma:- bhai woh bad-maa ne kaha tha kii main aapko jaga doon, issi liye main yahaan aayi thi.. lekin jab main yahaan aayi tho tho maine dekha kii aap bed par nahii the, issi wajah se main pareshaan hokar aapko dhoond rahii thi…
The person:- ridzi, main kahaan jaane waala hoon… jahaan bhi jaun, laut tho issi ghar mein aaunga na.. kyunke mere saare rishthe is ghar se jude hue hai.. tho tujhe pareshaan hone kii zaroorat nahii main yeh ghar chod kart ho kabhi nahii jaaunga…
Ridhimma:- bhai yeh aap bhi kaisi baatein karr rahe hai… aur aaj aap jaldi kaise uth gaye…
The person:- kyun main jaldi uth nahii saktha kya??
Ridhimma:- nahii bhai aisi koi baat nahii hai, actually roz tho main ya phir badi-maa hii aapko jagathe hai na, issi liye woh aaj mujhe thoda tajub hua.…
Aankh churathe hue the person says:- ridzi ismein tajub hone kii koi baat nahii hai, woh bas aaj meri aankh thodi jaldi khul gayi thi…
Ridhimma:- bhai kya aap sure hai kii yahii baat hai… agar koi problem ya pareshaani hai tho aap mujhe bata sakthe hai…
The person:- nahi ridzi.. mujhe kya problem hogi… main tho bilkul theek hoon….
Ridhimma:- bhai aap mujhse kitna bhi kahe kii aap theek hai, par mujhe nahii lagtha kii aap theek hai.. lekin koi baat nahii, jab aapko lage kii aap mujhse apne dil kii baat ko share kar sakthe hai, aap tab mujhse kehna.. aur dekhna main tab aapki problem chutkiyon mein solve kar doongi…. Yeh aapki is behen ka waada hai.. I will never let you down bhai…
The person , hugs ridhimma & says:- main jaantha hoon ridzi you will never let me down… achcha meri baat chod aur tu mujhe bata kii aaj meri behen kii aankhon mein woh khushi kyun nahii hai.. main teri aankhon mein halke se udaasi ko dekh raha hoon… ab tu mujhe bata kii teri is udaasi ke peeche wajah kya hai….
Ridhimma:- kuch nahii bhai… woh mera aur mere friend ka jhagda hogaya… issi liye mera mood thoda kharab hai…
The person:- hmm..well… kahiin tumhare us friend ka naam Mr. Armaan Mehra tho nahi… [the person asks raising his eye-brow]
Ridhimma is surprised kii how did her bhai get to know about armaan & she says:- bhai aapko kaise….
The person smiles:- ridzi tu humari behen hai, is ghar kii beti hai.. aur ek bhai ke naate mera yeh farz banntha hai kii teri khabar rakhe hum… waise armaan achcha ladka hai….
Ridhimma smiles & says:- thanks bhai….
The person says:- tho ab tum mujhe bata kii armaan ne aisa kya kiya joh tum dono kii ladayi hogayi…
Then ridhimma narrates the events which led to the argument between her & armaan, to the person… the person listens to everything quietly…
And after finishing ridhimma in a cuta tone asks:- ab aap hii batao mujhe bhai, kya main ghalat hoon… ghalthi tho sirf us ullu kii hai….
The person smiles & says:- ridzi main maantha hoon kii ghalthi tumhare us ullu armaan kii hai.. lekin mujhe lagtha hai kii atleast ek baar tumhe armaan ko apni baat tumhare saamne rakhne ka, tumhe samajha ne ka mouka dena chahiye… shayad iske pass koi wajah ho, jiski wajah se woh tumhe contact nahii kar paaye…
Ridhimma makes a face & says:- bhai aap us armaan kii side le rahe ho… jao mujhe aap se koi baat nahii karni….
The person:- arre ridzi sunn tho meri baat, main armaan kii side nahii le raha hoon.. main tho bas yeh keh raha hoon kii give him a fair chance to explain himself.. agar armaan kii explanation sunn ne ke baad bhi tujhe aisa lage kii ghalthi armaan kii hai, aur tujhe usse saza deni hai tab main tujhe nahii rokoonga.. lekin atleast give him a chance.. shayad he must have valid reason… main maantha hoon kii pehle armaan ne tujhse kaha kii woh tujhe call karega aur woh bhool gaya, yeh uski ghalthi thi, lekin uske baad usne tujhe kyun phone nahii kiya.. kyun usne tujhe manane kii koshish nahii kii, iski zaroor uske pass wajah hogi… bas ek baar baat kar le usse and sort out the differences….
Ridhimma makes a puppy face & says:- waise bhai uske pass ek wajah thi, jiske wajah se usne mujhe call nahii kiya…
The person lifts his eye-brow & say:- tho kya main jaan saktha hoon kii woh wajah kaunsi thi??
Ridhimma:- woh…… bhai.. maine na apna phone switch off kar diya tha kal poora din.. aur aaj bhi maine armaan ko subaah call kiya tha, woh neend mein tha, maine phir usse jhagda karke phone cut kar diya tha…
Before ridhimma could say anything, The persons says:- aura b bhi tumne apna cell off hii karr diya hoga…
Ridhimma:- haan bhai, woh armaan mujhe call karne kii koshish karr raha that ho maine apna mobile phir se switch off kar diya…
The person:- there you go.. no wonder.. dekh ridzi agar tu apna mobile off karke rakh degi, tho woh bechara armaan tujhse kaise baat karr paatha… kyun tujhe nahii lagtha main sahii hoon…
Ridhimma:- jee bhai… sorry…. [ridhimma holds her ears sweetly…]
The person:- ridzi tujhe sorry mujhse nahii balki armaan se kehna chahiye… tho bas be a good girl aur jao usse baat karlo.. woh bechara pareshaan ho raha hoga….
Ridhimma:- jee bhai.. main abhi jaathi hoon, lekin armaan se baat karne se pehle mujhe jaakar mujhe un dono ko bhi utana padega.. badi-maa ne unko bhi jagane ko kaha tha… ridhimma says this and is about to leave… jab the person says:- ridhimma main tumse ek baat kahoon…
Ridhimma:- jee bhai kahiye na….
The person:- ridzi, zindagi mein sachcha pyaar bohat mushkhil se miltha hai.. sachcha pyaar milna, koi jung ladne se kum nahii hai… kissi shaks se pyaar karna aur ussi shaks se pyaar paana bohat kum kismat waalon ko miltha hai… aur jab humein humara sachcha pyaar miltha hai na, humein kabhi usse apne haath se nahii jaane dena chahiye… kyunke joh pyaar hum ek baar kho dethe hai woh hum phir kabhi nahii paa sakthe.. issi liye main tumse keh raha hoon ridzi, chote-chote jagdo mein tum kabhi apne pyaar ko kho na de na… samjhi na meri baat ko tum…
Ridhimma:- jee bhai.. main is baat ka khayal rakhoongi… ridhimma smiles & leaves the room.. yahaan the person is again lost in his thoughts…
Yahaan ridhimma before going to the other rooms, goes down to veena & pallavi…
Veena:- ridhimma tumne theeno ko jaga diya kya.. un logon ko dair ho rahii hai na….
Pallavi:- bhabhi mere khayal se un logon ne yeh maan liya kii ridzi ke saath, saath unki university kii bhi chutti hai…
Veena:- haan aisa ho saktha hai.. waise bhi yeh chaaron har kaam saath hii tho karthe hai na.. tho ridhimma kii university kii chutti ka matlab unki bhi chutti…
Ridhimma:- badi-maa aisi baat nahii hai.. woh main abhi-abhi bhai ke kamre se aa rahii hoon..
Veena:- tho jag gaya hai kya woh… tune utta diya na use.. warna phir woh chillayega, kii kyun humne usse jagaya nahii….
Ridhimma:- badi-maa actually baat yeh hai kii, jab main bhai ke kamre mein gayi thi tab bhai already jage hue the… aur mujge aisa lag raha tha kii bhai kuch pareshaan hai.. aur jab maine unse unki pareshaani kii wajah poochi, tho unhone baat ko taal di… aur badi-maa, mujhe bhai ko dekhkar aisa lag raha tha kii bhai saari raat soye nahii the…
Veena yeh sab baatein sunn kar thodi pareshaan ho jaathi hai…
Ridhimma:- badi-maa, aap zara dekhiye na kya hua hai bhai ko.. main un dono ko bhi lekar aathi hoon…
Veena:- achcha theek hai.. main dekhthi hoon.. tu un dono ko jaga de…. Pallavi tum zara yahaan ka kaam dekho, main bas abhi aayi…
Pallavi:- jee bhabhi…
Here ridhimma goes to the other rooms.. while veena enters the room , jahaan kuch dair pehle ridhimma thi.. she goes and stands right next to him in the balcony..
And then she says:- kya baat hai yash…. [yes as most of you guessed it, it is our hero sahab yash garewal..]
Yash just looks at veena, aur phir apni nazrein pher letha hai….
Veena seeing yash quiet again says:- yash bata na mujhe kya baat hai..
Yash:- koi baat nahii hai maa…
Veena:- yash tu kabse mujhse jhoot bolne laga hai…
Yash:- maa, main aapse koi jhoot nahii bol raha hoon..
Veena:- yash main tujhe teri aahat se pehchaan sakthi hoon.. main jaanthi kii mera beta kab khush hai, aur kab dukhi.. aur aaj main yeh baat tho jaanthi hii hoon kii tujhe koi baat pareshaan karr rahii hai… aisi koi baat joh tujhe andar hii andar khaye jaa rahii hai…..
Yash:- maa kuch bhi tho nahii hai…
Veena:- achcha theek hai yeh baat chod aur mujhe yeh bata kii tu raat bhar soya kyun nahii… aur ab tu mujhse yeh matt kehna kii achche se soya hai raat bhar, kyunke main jaanthi hoon kii tu nahii soya hai…
Yash:- maa aap ne sahii kaha aap mujhe meri aahat se pehchaanthi hai… aap ne sahii samjha main main pareshaan hoon…. Lekin mumma main aap se meri pareshaani kii wajaah nahii bata saktha…
Yeh kehkar yash balcony se nikal kar, apne kamre mein chale jaatha hai.. he goes and sits on the sofa…
Veena smiles at his behavior aur woh khud se kehthi hai:- ziddii…. She then walks inside the room & sits beside yash on the sofa….
Veena:- ab bata mujhe kya hua hai??
Yash:- maine kaha na mumma kuch nahii hua… aap please mere liye pareshaan matt hoyiye…
Veena:- tu jaantha hai yash, tub hi apne papa kii tarah itna ziddi hai.. koi baat jaldi se nahii maantha…
Yash:- mumma please main mr. lalit garewal ko apna pita nahi maantha…
Veena:- yashh… tu yeh kya keh raha hai…
Yash:- mumma main sach hii tho keh raha hoon.. mr. lalit garewal, ne aaj thak apna pita hone ka kaunsa farz nibhaya jisse main unhe apna pita maan loon… aap hii mujhe batayiye mumma kya itne saalon mein kabhi woh the mere pass mera saath den eke liye.. meri baat chodiye mumma kya kabhi aaj thak mr. lalit garewal, ne aapke prathi ek pati farz nibhaya hai… nahii na mumma.. tho aap kyun apni zindagi mein unko itni emiyath dethi hai.. lekin dekha jaye tho unhone aaj thak kabhi aapki qadar hii nahii kii… aur aap hai kii… mumma aap jaan na chahthi thin a kii main kyun pareshaan hoon.. meri pareshaani kii wajah mr. lalit garewal hai, meri pareshaani kii wajah aapke chehre kii udaasi hai, jisse aap sabse chupathi hai.. aur joh meri sab se badi pareshaani hai woh hai aaj kii tareekh… aaj kii tareekh jisne aapki zindagi ko hamesha ke liye ghum ke andere mein dhakel diya tha aaj se choubees saal pehle… yeh kehne ko tho aapki choudeesvi shaddi kii saal-gira hai, lekin kya in choubees saalon mein kabhi mr. lalit garewal, ne aapko jaan ne kii, aapko samaj ne kii koshish kii.. nahii na mumma… kya kabhi unhone aapki baat ko, unki zindagi mein aapki presense ko mahatav diya.. kabhi nahii mumma… aur inhi sab baaton kii wajah se mujhe unse nafrat hai… mr. lalit garewal, hamesha se mere liye mr. lalit garewal rahe hai aur mr. lalit garewal hii rahenge.. mujhe nahii lagtha kii kabhi woh mere pita bann paayenge……
Veena:- yash aisi baatein matt bol.. woh mere pati hai…
Yash:- mumma aap unhe apna pati maanthi hai, lekin kya unhone kabhi aapko apni patni maana hai… mumma aap yeh ek tarfa rishtha aur kitne waqt thak nibhayengi, kabhi na kabhi tho yeh rishthe kii dor tootegi hii na mumma…
Veena:- main is rishthe ko kabhi toot ne hii nahii doongi yash.. jab thak main zinda hoon, main apne is rishthe ko zinda rakhoongi.. koi aanch bhi nahii aane doongi is rishthe par…
Yash:- mumma aap kis mitti kii bani hai… aapko kya dard ka ehsaas nahii hotha.. woh dard joh aap pichle choubees saal se apne andar dabaye rakh rahii hai…
Veena:- yash tune hii tho kaha na kii pichle choubees saal se main apne dard ko apne hii andar chupaye rakh rahii hoon, tho shayad issi liye ab mujhe dard ka ehsaas bhii nahii hotha….
Yash bangs his hand on the table & says:- mumma agar mere haath mein hotha na , main aapki zindagi se har woh cheez mita detha joh aapko takleef dethi hai, agar mere bas mein hotha main aapki zindagi se choubees saal pehle ka aaj ka din hii mita detha.. mita detha main.. yeh kehkar yash apne kamre se baahar chala jaatha hai.. aur yahaan veena tries to stop him saying:- ysh meri baat tho sunn…. Lekin yash rukhtha nahii.. aur yahaan veena ke chehre kii udaasi aur bhi badh jaathi hai…
Now yash apne kamre se bahar nikal tha hai.. and to change his mood, he enters the next room.. wahaan he sees ridhimma trying to wake a person, lekin woh insaan tho sunn hii nahii raha tha… yash comes to ridhimma & asks:- kya hua ridzi…
Ridhimma sighs & says:- dekhiye na bhai.. yeh aki bhaiyya, utt ne ka naam hii nahii le raha….
Yash:- hmm.. tho yeh baat hai…
Ridhimma:- aur tho aur bhai, main tabse inhe utane kii koshish karr rahii hoon, main jitna koshish karr rahii hoon, inki blanket nikal ne kii , utna hii yeh neend mein apni blanket ko phir se kheench rahe hai….
Yash:- theek hai ridzi, chal mere pass ek idea hai, jisse hum aki ko utta sakthe hai… tu idhar aa, mera idea sunn le…
Now ridhimma comes near yash, and yash says:- tho ab yeh sunn. Uske baad yash ridhimma se kuch kehtha hai, yash baatein sunnke ridhimma smiles and nods her head… now yash & ridhimma climb on the bed.. they both go on the either side of akshat… and slowly pull his blanket, phir suddenly both yash & ridhimma go near akshat's ear & shout:- gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd morningggggggggggggggggggggggggg..
Yahaan akshat joh chaine se so raha tha, neend se darr ke uth jaatha hai aur kehtha hai:- what the hell….
jab yash aur ridhimma phir se , is baar dheemi si awaaz mein kehthe hai:- good morning…
akshat makes a angry face & says:- kya good morning.. mere saare morning ka satyanas kar diya tum logon ne koi bhala aise bhii kissi ko uttatha hai kya kissi ko…. Ek dn tum logon se in atyachaaron ka badla loonga….
Yash:- [still giggling says] kyun bhai hum tum par aise kya atyachaar karthe hai…
Akshat making a face says:- atyachar karne waalon ko patah nahii chaltha kii woh mujh jaise bechare logon par kaise kaise atyachaar karthe hai… lekin yaad rakhna mera bhi din aayega…
Ridhimma:- bhaiyya aap humein tho kissi bhi angle se bechare nahii lagthe.. ab aapke yeh nakhre hogaye ho, tho kya ab hum chal kar woh maharaj jii ko utta sakthe hai…
Akshat:- ohh.. abhi thak woh utta nahii.. chal yash, chalo ridzi hum log jaakar usko apni style se uttathe hai…
Yash:- haan chal..chal.. ab main aur ridzi dekthe hai tere us bechare par atyachaar ko…..
Akshat:- hahaha.. very funny…. Ridzi tu jaa hum bas abhi aathe hai…. Yash tu rukh bas ek minute….
Ridhimma leaves the room, aur yahaan akshat aur yash rehthe hai…
Yash:- haan tho bol akki, kya kehna chahtha hai tu mujhse…
Akshat:- yash yeh tho tu mujhe batayega, kya baat hai…
Yash:- matlab main samjha nahii?
Akshat:- dekh yash tu mujhse apni nazrein chura tho saktha hai, khushi ka mukhota pehen par mere saamne, sabke saamne khush reh saktha hai, lekin tu yeh bhi tho jaantha hai na kii I can see through your at… main jaantha hoon yash, aaj kii tareekh se tu bohat nafrat kartha hai…
Yash is surprised & he says:- aki tu yeh…
Akshat:- hairaan hone kii zaroorat nahii hai yash, main tujhe pichle baayees saal se jaanthe hoon… mujhe ehsaas hai yash, kii tum har saal is din kiss toofan se guzarthe ho.. chahe woh toofan kissi ko dikhe ya na dikhe lekin woh toofan tumhara andar hotha hai… yash bata mujhe kya hua…
Yash:- kuch nahii aki, woh maine apna ghussa mumma par nikal diya.. usne aisi baatein keh di joh mujhe nahii kehni chahiye thi… mujhe lagtha hai kii maine unka dil dukhaya hai…
Akshat:- bas itni si baat, dekh tujhe apni ghalthi ka ehsaas tho hai na, tho tu badi-maa ke pass jaa aur unse sorry bol de.. I'am sure woh tujhe maaf kar dengi… dekh baat itni simple hai….. aur tu hai kii itni simple si baat ko complicate karr raha hai.. uff… kya karoon main is ladke ka Bhagwaan.. Bhagwaan…
Yash smiles & says:- tu mujhe hasana bohat achche se jaantha hai na….
Akshat:- haan main jaantha hoon, tujhe hasane ke tareeke.. kyunke dosti kii hai nibhani tho padegi na…
Yash:- achcha cha lab tu apna flimi style apni girl friend par use karna, abhi humein ridzi kii help karni hogi us maharaj jii ko utane mein..
Akshat:- haan chal, agar hum do minute mein bahar nahii gaye na tho ridzi chillane lagegi…. Yeh kehkar both akshat & yash rush to the next room.. ab next room mein scene kuch aise hotha kii ridhimma sofa par baiti apna sarr pakde hue… yash & akshat are just about to ask ridhimma kii kya baat hai, isse pehle kii woh poochthe yahaan we see a person on the bed, joh neend mein badbada raha hotha hai:- wowwwww..man.. she is so hot…. Kaash usse main apni girl friend bana saktha.. agar yeh ladki meri girl friend hothi tho rishi ke takkar ka koi nahii hotha is poore college mein, yeh dolly us shasha ko chod kar mere pass kyun nahii aathi.. woh shasha tho ek number ka hippopotamus hai.. aur yeh dolly she is item… yeh ladki na agar chahe tho rakhi sawant ko bhi takkar de sakthi hai.. wow.. she is soo hot… [rishi apna pillow hug karthe hue yeh sab kehtha hai..]
Ab yash aur akshat ko bhi patah chal jaatha hai kii aakhir ridhimma aise kyun baiti hui hai.. ridhimma, akshat & yash make a face.. and then akshat ko ek idea aatha hai, and he tells ridhimma kii woh neeche jaakar garma-garam chai lekar aaye… ridhimma goes down and comes back with in five minutes with a cup off hot tea in her hand.. then all the three walk to rishi, rishi ke pass baite hai aur us cup ko side table par rakhthe hai, then slowly akshat pulls off rishi's blanket, yash slowly drags rishi's hand to the side table aur dheere se he puts rishi's fingers in the hot tea, rishi who is still mumbling about dolly in his sleep, gets up with a jolt… and he holds his hand which is burning…. He sees the three of them , gives them a angry stare.. and blows at his fingers…
Now ridhimma says:- kyun bhaiyya, chai utni hii garam thin a jitni aapki dolly.. ya phir dolly isse bhi zyada hot hai….
Rishi in a irritated expression says:- yeh kyat ha.. yeh kya koi tareeka hai kissi ko neend se jagane ka…
Akshat:- woh kya hai na rishi tu neend mein apne pillow ko dolly samaj kar kya kya karr raha tha, issi liye hum jaan na chahthe the kii kya kii tujhe hot si dolly ke khwaab mein kya, is chai kii gharmahat mehsoos hothi hai ya nahii.. issi liye humne yeh try kiya…
Rishi:- aap logon ko mazaak sooj raha hai, aur yahaan meri ungliyaan jal gayi hai….
Yash:- rishi iska matlab tho yahii hua na kii tujhe hot cheezon se durr rehna hoga, aur tumhari woh dolly bhi hot hai na… tho durr raho usse… warna woh hippopotamus shasha, tera kachumbar banakar juice mein dalega aur teri us hot si dolly ko hii pila dega… yash yeh baat kehthe hii, yash, ridhimma aur akshat zor-zor se hasne lagthe hai… they are rolling wilth laughter on the bed…
Rishi:- hahaha.. very funny… lekin mujhe hasi bilkul nahii aa rahii hai..
Now yash, akshat & ridhimma together say:- ohhh.. tho tumko hasi nahii aa rahii hai.. koi baat nahii abhi aa jaayegi hasi tumhe…
Yeh kehkar, yash, akshat & ridhimma start tickling rishi, aur rishi bhi hasne lagtha hai uncontrollably.. and then all the four are on the bed, jab they start a pillow fight, au raise hii hasthe-hasthe they keep playing, hitting each other with the pillow, laughing their heart out… veena & pallavi come to see what is happening and they are happy to see the kids of the house united in as one.. they will the room with a hope that yeh bachche hamesha aise hii rahe…. Here yash, akshat, rishi & ridhimma continue their pillow fight happily with smiles all the way…..

Song In The Background:-

"Yuhi kat jaayega safar saath chalane se….
ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalane se….
yuhi kat jaayega safar saath chalane se….
ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalane se….
yuhi kat jaayega safar saath chalane se….
ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalane se….
hum hain raahi pyar ke chalana apana kaam….
hum hain raahi pyar ke chalana apana kaam….
pal bhar mein ho jaayegi har mushkil aasan….
pal bhar mein ho jaayegi har mushkil aasan….
housala na haarenge hum to baazi maarenge…
housala na haarenge hum to baazi maarenge…
yuhi kat jaayega safar saath chalane se….
ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalane se…
kehati hain ye waadiya badalega mausam..
kehati hain ye waadiya badalega mausam..
na koi parvaah hain khushiya ho ya gum….
na koi parvaah hain khushiya ho ya gum….
aandhiyon se khelenge dard saare jhelenge….
aandhiyon se khelenge dard saare jhelenge…
yuhi kat jaayega safar saath chalane se….
ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalane se….
yuhi kat jaayega safar saath chalane se….
ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalane se….
yuhi kat jaayega safar saath chalane se….
ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalane se…."

So guys here ends the third part of "Hogii Pyaar Kii Jeet"… main umeed karthi hoon kii aapko yash aur uske family kii entry pasand aayi ho….

Preview For The Next Part:- well next part mein villain kii entry hogi.. yaani swayam kii entry hogi… there will be a bet between yash & swayam… and the story will move forward by one more year & who will win the contract…..

I know the preview might be a bit confusing, lekin next part mein har confusion durr ho jayegi.. pukka…

Ab yeh jaane ke liye kii agge agge "Hogii Pyaar Kii Jeet" mein kya hoga… yash aur chah kii mulaqat kaise hogi.. kya kabhi mehras aur garewals kii mulaqat hogi.. aur kya joh rishtha ghar ke baadon ne tay kiya tha, woh faisla ghar ke bachon ko manzoor hoga…. Swayam kya karega yash ko neecha dikha ne ke liye.. yash aur swayam ke beech joh bet laga hai woh kaun jeetega… yash aur uske pita ka rishtha kya kabhi sudhrega… yeh aur kayi etc etc sawaal joh aapke dil mein hai, un sabke jawaab jaan ne ke liye padthe rahiye aur wait kijiye "Hogii Pyaar Kii Jeet" ke next part ka…

I'll be eagerly waiting for your comments, compliments, suggestions & criticism… I'll surely post the next part as soon as I can… and I have written about 10532 words in this part, hope all of you enjoyed this part as much as I enjoyed writing it…

& guys Happy Republic Day in advance…..

Take Care….
Byeeeee….

Love Forever
Rajeev 😳😳😳

Surya… 😊

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago