Rahul and Muskaan in Lonavala - pg23 - last part

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

Sonia it was beautiful yaar!!!! I can't believe you ended it. Now start a new one and go update your other one. I'll update mine regularly now since i have finals next week and then 1 month break!

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mohini_agarwal

@mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

aww that was the perfect ending, sonia! you did full justice to this ff as well as the other. i'm looking forward to your other ff's that will come in the future. do pm me if you write another one.

-mona :]

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kanwalp10

@kanwalp10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#173

i just read all the parts in one long go.

great work!

id love to read what you write any day :)

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kashish

@goodkashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#174

i dont want to say anything bcoz i am sad..........why did u end this superb ff on Rm.........but anyway.......i believe in that all good things come to end.........and this is not just good but the best ff...........i love the last part ........i mean it was excellent..........i didnt expect that in upcooming part.........but it was like a treat for me on my birthday..........it was very very nice part.............i loved it completly.................i wish that it could run more but it didnt...............and i cant say continue bcoz it ended................but i love to amke a request to make a new ff on RM bcoz i am eagarly waiting for it........thank u so much for giving me a nice ff like this...............i just love it...........u r a very telanted writer and u know how to make a story so ple come up with a new stroy............thanks......

love

Kashish

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ramusk

@ramusk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#175

hey sonia....

gr8 dear.....perfect timing...everything was in its place.....

rahul's playful madness...muskaan getting flashes of their past and my fav of all " Mere khwabon ki shehzaadi" and that song..
awesome beautiful and fab....am outta words to decsribe this and ....

actually am sad this lonavla has ended but its a perfect ending for it but still ur other FF is there for us......

and lastly thank you for dedicating it to the resortians......

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52703

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Posted: 16 years ago

#176

Hey Sonia,

I think you did an amazing job with this FF. It was lovely to read your writing. I still havent read some of the earlier part but will make sure to catch on them. I hoped you would have taken this further but in the end you should be happy about what you wrote. I think your a lovely writer and i hope you continue writing and entertaining everyone.

Aww and the last update had me smiling / laughing all through. It was a subtle way to end. Well done!!!!! Now i just hope for you to keep writing more in the future & this FF has been entertained me for hours altogether, so THANKS a lot!

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Sonu

@x.sonia.x

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Posted: 16 years ago

#177

you didn't pm me.
and you realy ended it?
i didnt think you really were ending it.
it was a great part.
again. a little quick but i loved it.
rm are too cute w/ there misunderstandings still.
write a epiloge. pls. pls. pls.
also up8 ur other ff!
and write something else also.
i loved it.