Rahul and Muskaan in Lonavala - pg23 - last part

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rabia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#151

hey

this is rabia her

i dunno whether ur name is suhani or sonia

but anyway

i jus read ur FF

n its awesome

m not a big RM fan but i think m gonna be one after reading ur FF

take care

love rabu

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vini

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Posted: 17 years ago

#152

Hey suhani...
im not too good with hindi... but i really like ur ff... just read a few parts... will finish it soon... but i tink u have a great imagination

ur like me... a dreamer.. lol !! i get thought when i sleep as well.. haha

Nice going... plz dont stop ... you have a lotta fans out there who love ur work... add me in !!

dont give up... trust me !!especially when u are so liked already !

Love vini

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mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#153

aww that was so romantic! thanks for the pm.

continue soon and pm me as usual. i'm looking forward to the next part.

-mona :]

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karishma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#154

wow
another excellent FF
👏
just don't know what to say
its just out of the world

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-DhruviBear(:

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Posted: 17 years ago

#155

halia! mar jawan kit na sona FF, seriously yaar [:

that was the cutest update awwwh [:

omg i want more, please hurry

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 17 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: ramusk
hey sonia

wowie dear awesome and fab part.... and so many little muskaans lol and muski singing na jaane mere...and last part was just Romantic ....u rock dear ...and i dint see dil toh pagal hain fully so for me the last scene was lyk a carnival....

Thanks Srividya! You are always quick to read and comment.

😆 Can you imagine a whole bunch of little Muskaans running around?!?! 😆

Actually Rahul sang the song but either way that song always hits the heart.

You should watch that scene in Dil To Pagal Hai. Its nice...

Originally posted by: divyashaz
IT WAS very cute n nice part thxxxx sonia
keep on 👏

Thanks Divya dear! Like I said you are like the most supportive person here. 🤗

If it wasn't for you I might have given up a while back.

Originally posted by: rukhsarahmed
thank u so much i love it thanks again for the pm

Thank you Rukhsar! 😊

Originally posted by: leaves45
wow I got shivers reading you part. excellent job.

Thanks Saima!!! Shivers huh? I think thats a good thing.. I hope..

Originally posted by: nidz n
amazing sonia....
wen diz story finishes am realli gonna miss diz.....
da story waz dam gud...
thanx 4 pm n continue soon..
take care

Thanks nidz n! I am also going to miss writing it. I feel like I am rushing it. 😕

The last part is done and I just need to edit it. So should be posted tomorrow.

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 17 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: imane568
OMG post the next part soon its soo addicting like i can read it over and over without getting tired ever... i could only wish RM were like this... Thank you soo much for writing this soo perfectly and with amazing chemistry.. you rock...

Imane! Thanks for the amazing compliments again! 😃

I wish RM was like this as well.

Well they kind of are this argumentative I guess but not the other stuff.

I will post soon.

Originally posted by: musicdiva
fab part! loved rahul teasing muskaan like crazy!! last scene was very nicely written too!!
cant wait for your last part! im sure it will be quite romantic!

simi

Thank you musicdiva! I did not even know you were reading this story.

Yea, the last part was sweet. I hope the last part is romantic enough.

Originally posted by: snow white

Roop tera mastanaa (Muskaan mouth drops open)
pyaar mera dewaana
Bhool kabhi humse na ho jaye

THAT'S OSOUM :-)

Hehe! 😆

I love the parts you pick to mention.

Thanks Sonia!

Originally posted by: ShehzadeeN
hey. finally got a chance to catch up, it is so amazing! i totally love it! do continue it and pls do not end it so soon! haha. i totally love both ur ff! :)

Thanks Nabila! I did not know if you were reading this one as well as the other.

Well its ending with the next part but I will try to continue the other one.

Originally posted by: aditi4ever

ur fanfic keeps gettin better and better too good

Thanks Aditi! I am glad you think so.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 17 years ago

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ramusk

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Posted: 17 years ago

#158

yaa i can imagine rahuls face when he sees lot of little muski's...hayye hayye he's just too awesome yaar

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 17 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita
such a sweet part... 😛 Thanks for the pm jaanu!!! why are you ending it by the way?? 😭 I am gonna miss it

Thanks Ankita dear!

It had to end at some time so why not now.

Originally posted by: luv_dmg_armaan
Thanx for the PM

amazing writing!! wow i can't wait to see what happens next could totally imagine everything taking place
awesome update!! update soon

tc
radhika

Thanks Radhika!

Originally posted by: justluvmayank
sonia you make me speechless.......................................

Thanks Sakina! What a nice thing to say.. I think... 😕

Speechless could be a good and bad thing. I am going to lean towards the good seeing as we are friends.

Originally posted by: stellarwind
great update!
lots of songs.
rahul hurt again.
muskii jealous.
antakshari.. nice.
and the end scene 😳
i do think it is rushed tho.
don't end it..
when will u upd8 te other one?

Thanks sonia! Thats the longest comment you have ever given.

I feel it is rushed as well but can I do.

The other will be updated sometime during this coming week if I am not too busy.

Originally posted by: lupin01
v. nice part superb update👍🏼 & thanxx 4 d pm.

Gracias Lupin!

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#160

Hi sonia...........i am so sorry for commenting late.........but i got busy in my personal life i hope u understand.........i love the whole part........it was fantastic.........mindblowing.........i love the way muski is caring for rahul............and now rahul finally figured it out his feelings toward muski.........so glad but whats that......i smell someone's heart.........oh thats our muski's...........that definetly is going to happen bcoz she is in love with rahul..........i just love the last scene i mean it is so romantic........i can imagine both of them................cant wait for the next part.........ple ple ple post it soon......thanks

love

Kashish