Rahul and Muskaan in Lonavala - pg23 - last part

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Dhruvi

@dhruviarmaanfan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#191

wow wat a part awesome part lovely gorgeous

romantic

really sad that this awesome ff ends lovely so when is ur next ff coming waitng n do pm me abt ur next ff

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jyothi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#192

a gr8 part and a gr8 story well written do write some more

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CHLOE2901

@CHLOE2901

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Posted: 17 years ago

#193

wow am lost for words!! it was FAB!👍🏼 u reali did justice to it N i tink m so goin to read it again frm the begining! u might as wel start writin a book😉 keep on writin the other FF n plz ppppppllllllllzzzzzzzzz dun 4get to PM me for the other FFs!lookin forward to it!

name is Ain btw n fyi...

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#194

Juz read them.....and u r amazing !!! Art an another one soon !

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sonia

@miss.sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#195

was that the lasst part of the ff?😔

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz say no

Not letting her finish talking he just leans in and kisses her forhead, eyes, nose, cheeks, chin and then her lips. The kiss starts off soft and becomes more passionate as she kisses him back this time. Muskaan runs her hand in Rahul's hair. Rahul places his arms around her and palms on her back and pulls her closer. His hold around her got tighter as she kissed him more passionately with every moment and he responded back with the same. They finally part and just look into each others eyes.

that part was the best(want more of that)☺️😛

Edited by miss.sonia - 17 years ago

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-DhruviBear(:

@-dhruvi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#196

I am lost in words. What to say? The was such a beautiful end

"Not letting her finish talking he just leans in and kisses her forhead, eyes, nose, cheeks, chin and then her lips. The kiss starts off soft and becomes more passionate as she kisses him back this time. Muskaan runs her hand in Rahul's hair. Rahul places his arms around her and palms on her back and pulls her closer. His hold around her got tighter as she kissed him more passionately with every moment and he responded back with the same. They finally part and just look into each others eyes. "

That was sooo dayum cute. I don't want this to end. Can't you write some more please [:

But I understand, something things are better ended perfectly like this. Oh and you have to promise to send me a link to any new FFs you write, please! Make some more RM FF please, I don't want the cuteness to end please, I'm addicted.

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Sonia

@Sarah9bella

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Posted: 17 years ago

#197

Rahul - Ab ban mat.. dekh toh sahi.. main bahar kada hoon.. teri pyari si bracelet ke saath.. aa jana..

i can imagine that scene and it's lovely

i am little bit upset coz that's an end of the very beautifull FF

but believe me it's a great ending ,or a perfect ending

when u stared ur new FF plzzz send me his link

ALL THE BEST

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Sonu

@x.sonia.x

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Posted: 17 years ago

#198

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Edited by stellarwind - 17 years ago

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Neha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#199

ufffffffff how romantic!!!!!!!!!!!

great job

plzzzzzzzzz dont stop!!!!!!!!

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#200

Sonia!! I wanna giv ya a standing ovation..seriously..👏 It was simply beautiful. Written in a simple , suttle..yet passionate way..sometimes..bought tear n my eyes..sometimes made me smile..(HOW CUTE CAN THEY GET??) There are soooooooo many things I wanna mention..its 2 AM half-sleepy..so I might not tell all the things..Will def. PM you 2m..wid a full detail..:))

My mosttt fav. scene was..when Rahul says ke one day I wud get the bed..nd den she says..I want left..nd he says he also wants left..nd then Rahul says..its k..well sleep on the same side..😆 Cuteness personified!!😳

I love you so much Sonia for writing such a beautiful FF..Pls don reply 2 mine..as Ill edit it properly 2m..🤗

Good night..:))