Rahul and Muskaan in Lonavala - pg23 - last part - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kool_kiran

EXTREMELY WONDERFUL

THANKS FOR THE PM

Thanks Kiran for reading.

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

i m speechles...😲

how can some one have such a awesome part😲
plz plz plz contniue really soon

Thanks miss.sonia! Such a nice comment.
Will continue ASAP.

Originally posted by: sweetdamage

OMG that was AMAZING!! seriously!! so so so so sooo good! and the last bit was soooo cute...and no I didn't notice it was from Dil To Pagal Hai, cause i has been ages since I have watched that ovie :P

anyway...awesome part...do continue soon!! :D:D

Thanks sweetdamage!
I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

It was fabulous.and thanks for the PM😊

Thanks Radhika! Also thanks for commenting here instead of PM's.
Thanks jyothi-cool!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rani1224patel

wow its awesome.....can't wait for the next part....

Thanks rani1224patel!

Originally posted by: kvn1983

its really a nice one⭐️ plz dont stop writteing😛 ur r very gud writer😳 plz continue it soon😊😉

"F:Filed Of Love!
R:Root Of Joy!
I:Island Of GOD!
E:End Of Sorrow!
N:Name Of Hope!
D:Door Of Understanding!
Thats U my FRIEND."


Thanks Nidha!
I heard you are leaving IF for awhile. Hope you do come back.
You will be missed.

Originally posted by: rabiam

hey

this is rabia her
i dunno whether ur name is suhani or sonia
but anyway
i jus read ur FF
n its awesome
m not a big RM fan but i think m gonna be one after reading ur FF
take care
love rabu

Thanks Rabu!!!
Thats so sweet. I hope you do become a fan of RM. They are amazingly cute!

Originally posted by: muzic_chick247

Hey suhani...
im not too good with hindi... but i really like ur ff... just read a few parts... will finish it soon... but i tink u have a great imagination

ur like me... a dreamer.. lol !! i get thought when i sleep as well.. haha

Nice going... plz dont stop ... you have a lotta fans out there who love ur work... add me in !!

dont give up... trust me !!especially when u are so liked already !

Love vini

Thanks for reading Vini! I just love your writing.
Thank you so much for the support...

Originally posted by: monadarling2628

aww that was so romantic! thanks for the pm.

continue soon and pm me as usual. i'm looking forward to the next part.
-mona :]

Thanks mona!
I hope the next part feels as romantic to you.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: *priya523*

wow
another excellent FF
👏
just don't know what to say
its just out of the world

Thanks Priya!

Originally posted by: indianchaklii

halia! mar jawan kit na sona FF, seriously yaar [:

that was the cutest update awwwh [:
omg i want more, please hurry

Thanks indianchalii! That was nice of you.
I will help you out to the best of my ability with yours.

Originally posted by: goodkashish

Hi sonia...........i am so sorry for commenting late.........but i got busy in my personal life i hope u understand.........i love the whole part........it was fantastic.........mindblowing.........i love the way muski is caring for rahul............and now rahul finally figured it out his feelings toward muski.........so glad but whats that......i smell someone's heart.........oh thats our muski's...........that definetly is going to happen bcoz she is in love with rahul..........i just love the last scene i mean it is so romantic........i can imagine both of them................cant wait for the next part.........ple ple ple post it soon......thanks

love
Kashish

Thanks Kashish! You are back!!! Missed you much.
I am glad you liked it and thought it was romantic.
I hope I can entertain you with the ending as well.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ok guys its just about time for the last part. I just have to edit it. If I don't get too tired tonight I will post it. Otherwise definitely by tomorrow.

Thanks for reading.
Love you guys! ❤️
- Sonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
cool sonia RM in lonovala its awesome.plssss continue.i'm waiting fr ur next part.infact i'm imagining dem in real.g8 work👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey great FF!!!!dyin to read wats happenin next!!dun end tis FF its gd reali gd!😃😉 keep on postin plz!!😕i wanna read more..am waitin for the next pm cont sooonnnnn...

btw thks for the pm n add me on ur pm List yea,totaly appreciate it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sonia......amazing part...aww..so romantic..the singing..the antaksshri..Muskaan's jealously..then the braclet scene..sent me 2 dreamland..
Bu the best was..all the girls hair like Muskaan's..lol..veryyy innovative..nd super unique..overall awsomeeee!!!

Sorry for the late comment..my mouse wasnt working.

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow awesome do continue n plz me whenever u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hmm.. something fishy here.. new people are reading my story now?
Well whatever the reason, I can't complain.

Originally posted by: geneliya2

cool sonia RM in lonovala its awesome.plssss continue.i'm waiting fr ur next part.infact i'm imagining dem in real.g8 work👍🏼

Thanks geneliya2! I am glad you can imagine it.

Originally posted by: chloe638017

hey great FF!!!!dyin to read wats happenin next!!dun end tis FF its gd reali gd!😃😉 keep on postin plz!!😕i wanna read more..am waitin for the next pm cont sooonnnnn...

btw thks for the pm n add me on ur pm List yea,totaly appreciate it!

Thankssss chloe638017!
I don't remember PMing but I can PM from now on.
Although that just means one more time.

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Sonia......amazing part...aww..so romantic..the singing..the antaksshri..Muskaan's jealously..then the braclet scene..sent me 2 dreamland..
Bu the best was..all the girls hair like Muskaan's..lol..veryyy innovative..nd super unique..overall awsomeeee!!!

Sorry for the late comment..my mouse wasnt working.

Mansi! Its not a problem that you commented later. I knew you would read it eventually.
Thanks for liking it. Yea.. I had a dream about all these little Muskaan's running around with lipstick and their curly hair in ponytails with the bright long scarfs and it totally cracked me up.

Originally posted by: dhruviarmaanfan

wow awesome do continue n plz me whenever u update

Thanks dhruviarmaanfan! I wil sure PM you with this last update.
Coming up in just a bit!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ok, so its the last part and I don't think I did it justice enough for RM but I rushed through this whole thing and I tried to keep it entertaining. This part has alot of bhak bhak and not much else happening. I love the bhak bhak. I hope you do too. It also doesn't really end in a nice concrete way. I could write an epilogue or something but I might just let it be.
I did really enjoy writing this and I hope you enjoyed reading it!
This time guys can you please please comment! (even you silent readers)
I would love any input especially if I decide to continue on and write something else.
This is dedicated to the current RM resortians: Mansi, Srividya, Kashish, Sakina, Moona, and last but certainly not least but more especially Divya!!! Thanks for being so supportive. Love you guys!!! ❤️
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Previously:
She finally smiles and takes it but he quickly grabs a hold of her hand and pulls her into an embrace holding her from behind. She gasps. His touch sends shivers throughout her whole body. He runs his hands up her arms to her shoulder and then takes one hand and pulls away her hair to expose her neck. He kisses her cheek and moves down to her neck. Muskaan has her eyes closed taking deep breaths and leaned
back into him. He held onto her tighter.
Muskaan - whispers - Rahul..
⭐️ Part 7 - The End ⭐️


Muskaan - Rahul?.. RAHUL!!!
That finally snaps him out of his day dream which he is disappointed about. He thinks - Why can't I do this for real?
Muskaan - Rahul, meri bracelet de na..
Rahul is holding his hand up with the bracelet and she grabs for it but he snatches it away finally returning to himself.
Muskaan - Dekh.. mere paas time nahin hai.. teri in harkaton ke liye..
Rahul - Kyun? Kuch kham hai?
Muskaan - Tujhse kya.. bas meri cheez hai.. mujhe de..
Rahul - Ghusse hai mujhse?
Muskaan - Haan.. kyunki tu mujhe thang kar raha hai.
Rahul - Jhoot.. kuch aur baath hai..
Muskaan - Aur baath? Nahin toh..
Rahul - Hmm.. shakhal se toh kuch toh hai.. mujhe lagtha hai ke khal raat se..
Muskaan - Khal raat se kya? Yeh toh meri phoothi kismat hai ke tere saath yahan par..
Rahul - (instead of getting mad at her he just smiles and cuts her off) Tujhe uska naam maloom karna hai na?
Muskaan - (quickly answers) Haan! Umm.. I mean.. kiska naam? - pretending as if she didn't know -
She herself didn't know why she was mad at first but is beginning to realize that she feels jealous that there is another girl. And is trying her hardest to suppress these feelings but its not working.
Rahul - laughs slightly - Ab meri baath sun..wahan table pe uski photo hai.. jee barke dekh le..
Muskaan - Photo? Mujhe kyun dekhna?
Rahul - Ab ban mat.. dekh toh sahi.. main bahar kada hoon.. teri pyari si bracelet ke saath.. aa jana..
Muskaan - Theek hai? Jab time mile ga dekhloongi.
As soon as he leaves she goes running to the table. She finds the photo and is pretty much assuming it is going to be Kavita. Shes hesitating in turning it over. Does she really want to know?

She finally turns it over and is in shock. Its a picture of herself years ago standing next to a younger Rahul from when they were in Patiala. They were both a mess in the picture as they had one of their fights/arguments right before the picture was snapped. She didn't know he carried around their pictures.
A weird uncomfortable feeling spread throughout her body. She had butterflies in her stomach. And wasn't sure if she was relieved or more upset and nervous now. She definitely had not expected this.
Muskaan - out loud but to herself - Rahul mujhse pyar kartha hai?
Saying it out loud felt odd but also made sense at the same time.
Muskaan - Mujhse? Magar kyun? Kabse? Kya main bhi usse...
She sits down on the bed and starts replaying all the moments they shared and how much the fought but were never apart. How nice it has been since he started staying with her.. since their fake marriage. How bad she felt whenever he talked to or about another girl. How much she missed him when he was away. How many times he helped her with everything she had a problem with. She knew something had been going on for the past few months but she tried her best not to think of it because it always made her uncomfortable but now it was right in her face and he was waiting for her outside. She had to answer him now. But we fight so much. But I do love to fight with him. Love? Love? It must be love but
what should I do about it now. She had no where to go to escape right now and she didn't want to face all this now but there was no other choice. So how am I going to talk to him about this now.
Muskaan - Hmm... mujhe lagtha hai mujhe bhi ussi se pyar to hai magar main usse kaise kahoon.
Muskaan goes to change her clothes into this loose fitting light blue simple salwar kameez and brush her teeth and lays down and in these thoughts she ends up drifting off to sleep completely forgetting about Rahul waiting outside.
Rahul is standing outside refreshed with cool breezes hitting his face. He is exhilarated that he was this bold today. He is thanking Dr Keerti and this trip for giving him the nerve and opportunity to do this. Thanks to everything that happened here that he even thought she may feel something
back that he had enough guts to do anything like this. Now the big thing is going to be her response. Will she understand, will she also admit she feels the same way, or did he just ruin things. He knew this was not just a friendship and they weren't just together because of the fake marriage and he knew she knew that as well. But its hard to predict her responses (which is an understatement).
He waited and waited and started getting upset and then angry that she didn't even step out to tell him to come back in atleast. Then he became worried about what she must be doing or thinking. He decides to walk back in.
He sees her asleep and that totally makes him mad.
Rahul - thinking - Main itni dher se intezar kar raha hoon aur yeh aram se so rahi hai.
His first instinct was to check if she even saw the picture. He sees it laying next to her sweet curled up self on the bed and that made him smile for a second but hes still mad at her. Although he did not particularly want to disturb her he was annoyed and started banging the closet and bathroom doors as he went to use them. She wakes up slightly.
Muskaan - waking up out of sleep she hoarsely calls his name - Rahul?
Rahul - not planning on it but almost yelling at her - Kya?
Muskaan - Aise chila ke kyun bol raha hai?
Rahul - Aise kaise? Chila nahin raha.. Bol kya hai?
Muskaan - Yahan aake meri baath toh sun na..
Rahul - still talking quite loudly and abruptly - Bol...
Muskaan - Rahul?
Rahul - Hmm.. - getting more annoyed that shes not saying anything -
Muskaan - Itna ghusse kyun hai? - still talking sleepily -
Rahul - Nahin hoon.. ab batha?
Muskaan - Abhi bhi lag raha hai ke tu hai... mera jawab nahin sun na?
Rahul - Tera jawab mujhe patha chal gaya.
Muskaan - thinking really? - Kaise?
Rahul - Khamoshi sab kuch keh dethi hai..
Muskaan - Oh, toh batha ab kya karein?..
She was a little surprised that he knew what she was thinking but she was relieved that he wasn't making a big deal of it.
Rahul - surprised at her question - thinking - what does she mean? Does she expect me to do something different now that she has rejected me?
Rahul - says - Jaise hain waise rahein ge.
Muskaan - surprised by his answer - Kyun?
Rahul - Kya kyun?
Muskaan - Aise kyun rehain ge?
Rahul - Toh kaise rahein?
Muskaan - Humare gharwale kya sochein ge?
Rahul - Kis ke bare main.. abhi tak koi problem toh nahin hui.. natak theek hi toh chal raha hai..
Muskaan - Kitni der natak karein ge? Shaadi ke bina hum kaise rahen ge?
Rahul - Kya?
Muskaan - Shaadi?
Rahul - Shaadi? Humari?
Muskaan - Nahin.. bachon ki shaadi.. abhe gaddhe.. tune hi to kaha tha ke.. dekh main waise type ki ladki nahin hoon. Yeh batha dethi hoon tujhe.
Rahul - finally putting it together - Toh tera jawab haan hai?
Muskaan - Ullu.. itni der se kya baatein kar rahe hain?
Rahul - laughs - Main to soch raha tha..
Muskaan - Kya?
Rahul - Ke tu mujhse nafrat karthi hai? Bahar aayi hi nahin.. so hi gayi..
Muskaan - Buddhu.. kuch bhi soch raha hai.. maine kab kaha tha..
Rahul - Toh - sits down next to her and leans closer getting into a naughty teasing mood - tu mujhse pyar karthi hai?
Muskaan blushes and turns away pushing him - Rahul!
Rahul - Batha na?
Muskaan - still doesn't know how to say it - Ja yahan se... mujhe bathein nahin karni..
Rahul - Keh dhe na..
Muskaan - Nahin
Rahul - Please??
Muskaan - Nahin
Rahul - Pleeeeasee??
Muskaan - getting angry - Nahin.. bola na nahin.
Rahul - Theek hai..
Rahul goes back outside pretty much playing like he was mad although he was slightly annoyed. He knew she was going to come out for him this time.
Muskaan - out loud to herself - Piddha.. kotta.. ullu da patha.. kya soch tha hain apne ap ko? Jab chaye hastha hai jab chaye ghussa.. Yeh bhi koi baath hui?
She does indeed go after him. She sees him standing outside leaning agaist a column. She doesn't even realize that she has tears in her eyes. This whole thing has been so emotional for her.
Muskaan - Rahul?
He is not talking.
Muskaan - Rahul.. sun na.. naraz hai? Aise kaise ghusse ho gaya? Itna moody hai.. lagtha nahin pathi hai.. more like a wife..
He laughs. She hears him and smiles and is happy with that.
Muskaan - Ab line pe aaya na?
She walks towards him and awkwardly hugs him from behind putting her head against his back. She couldn't figure out what else to do.
Hes taken off guard.. but is ecstatic.
Muskaan - whispers - I love you
That makes him smile even more.
He takes her hand and pulls her in front of him. She just stares at his shirt as she can't possibly look up at him right now.

Rahul - Phirse bhol.. kuch sunna nahin..
Muskaan - looking away - Rahul, itna tang kyun kartha hai mujhe.. - scrunching up her face -
He sees she has tear in her eyes.
Rahul - Yeh kya?
Muskaan - Kya?
Rahul - Yeh.. - concerned - wiping away the tears.
He pulls her into a hug.
Rahul - laughs - .. I love you
Muskaan - Hmm.. - she couldn't say it again right now -
They just stand there for a few minutes.
Muskaan - Rahul.. ab kya karein?
Rahul - hmm.. pyar.. ofcourse
She tries to pull away from the tight embrace and hits him on his chest. He tries to pull her tighter and leans in. She tries to push him away again.
Muskaan - Aise nahin.. shaadi se pehle kuch nahin.
Rahul - raises his eyebrows - Kuch nahin?
Muskaan - Nahin
Rahul - 'Nahin' tere favorite word hai kya?
Muskaan - laughs - Nahin.
Rahul - Hmm yeh nahin.. kisses her hand..
Muskaan - Hmm.. yeh toh theek hai.
Rahul - Ok good. Aur yeh nahin.. kisses her forehead
Muskaan- Umm.. yeh bhi theeeeek hain
Rahul - Acha.. toh yeh nahin.. kisses her cheek
Muskaan - she blushes - Yeh.. yeh bhi chale ga...
Rahul has this devious smile on his face.
Rahul - Aur umm.. - starting to lean in towards her lips -
Kid - Bhaiya?
They both jump and see this child slowly walking towards them holding his blanket and toy.
Rahul - Isse abhi aana tha.. sara mood kharab kardiya..
Muskaan clears her throat. She is happy that this child appeared because this was going to quick for her. This was all new to her but everything seemed so natural. She didn't feel as ashamed and awkward as she imagined she would. Everything was actually moving along fluidly but that scared her even more. She was afraid how fast things would move. It was probably because they were already so comfortable and used to each other as friends for so long.
Muskaan - trying to get out of his grasp - Rahul chod mujhe..
Rahul - trying to be fakely nice to the kid - Kya hai bache?
Kid - Mujhe neendh nahin aa rahi..
Rahul - mutters - Toh main kya karoon? - not letting her go but holding her wrist tight
She pinches him and breaks free and goes running and looks at her disappointed but he goes with the child. After putting the child to sleep which took about 30 minutes, he comes back to their room running fast but can't seem to find her. He goes out to terrace as he knows thats her favorite place here. Shes sitting on a chair with tears running down her cheecks. Her face looked absolutely glowing and stunning in the moonlit sky.
Rahul - Muskaan kya hua?
She sniffles and turns away trying to hide her tears.
Rahul - Muskaan batha na? Mujhse tera rohna nahin saha jatha. Bandh kar aur batha baath kya hai.. Maine kuch..?
Muskaan - Kuch nahin
Rahul - Kuch toh hai
He wipes away her tears while kneeling down near her.
Muskaan - Patha nahin kya hua.
He laughs.
Rahul - Jhalli khudi!
Muskaan - Aye!.. main roh rahi hoon aur tu has raha hai..
Rahul - Sorry baba patha toh sahi kya hua hai
Muskaan - Maine kaha na patha nahin
Rahul - Ok ok toh theek main kaise karoon ga
Muskaan - Kis ne bola hai tujhe theek karne ko
Rahul - Ab tu meri biwi hai toh tujhe theek toh main hi karoon ga.. Aaja..
Rahul pulls her out of the chair and sits down himself and pulls her down to sit on her lap.
Muskaan - Rahul.. koi agaya toh?
Rahul - Nahin aayega.. darwaza bandh kar diya aur waise bhi..
Shes blushing while he is holding her tight in his arms.
Rahul - Ab kaise hai?
Muskaan - Theek hoon
Rahul - Lag toh nahin raha
Muskaan shows him her slight smile.
Rahul - Ok chale ga.. tera mood thoda thoda karke acha kardoon ga.
She looks up at him and they just gaze into each others eyes. He again starts leaning in and she dodges by moving her face away.
Rahul - Mujhse sahi nahi jaati yeh doori
Muskaan - Doori? Chipak ke baitha hai. Agar yeh doori lag rahi hai.. toh aur kya chahiye?
Rahul - Patha doon?
Muskaan - Isshhh...
Rahul - Oh.. main bhool hi gaya.. teri liye kuch laya tha.
Muskaan - Mere liye? Khab laya?
Rahul - Hmm.. Maa ne diya tha ek ya do mahine pehle.
Muskaan - Aur mujhe diya nahin? Tu chupake rak raha tha kahin? Kya hai? Dikha na.. mujhe tofhe bohot pasand hai.
Rahul - Patha hai.. ek minute.. rukh na..
He takes out a small box from his pocket. She snathes the small gift box from his hands and opens the bow of ribbon that was tied around the gift. She opens the box and find a gorgeous sparkling ruby ring.
Muskaan - Bohot sundar hai!
Rahul - Tere se zyada nahin.
Softly, he held her hand feeling her soft and smooth skin and placed the ring into her ring finger and it fit beautifully.
She places her hand out admiring it. He takes her hand in her own intertwining his fingers with hers.
Rahul - Now its perfect.
She thinks of the ring as an engagement ring and almost starts crying again. This night is becoming the perfect night. The awkwardness is all gone for the moment.
Rahul pulls her closer to him and she rests her head on his chest.
They stay like that for quite some time without saying anything and enjoy the embrace.
Muskaan - Hum kab thak aise baithe rahenge?
Rahul - Hamesha ke liye kahoon toh theek hai? Itne kareeb hum hamesha ke liye reh sakthe hain?
Muskaan shakes her head.
Rahul - Ok, subah hone tak to meri bahon mein reh sakthi ho, na?
Muskaan cuddles in closer and he puts his hand around her.
Muskaan - Rahul! Ek baat puchoon?
Rahul - Hmm?
Muskaan - Tum mujhse bohot pyaar karte ho?
Rahul - Koi doubt? Aur tum?
Muskaan - Pehle tum bathao...
Rahul slowly moves out of the hug slowly and places his finger on her lips.
Rahul - Shh!
They just look at each other again and say everything with their eyes. This time Muskaan moves in but Rahul nods not wanting her to do anything she isn't comfortable with and she will feel guilty about.
He softly presses his lips on hers and it is a short lived kiss but perfect at this time.
They both feel a little embarassed.
Rahul starts wrinkling his face and acting like he is in pain to lessen the awkwardness.
Rahul - Muskaan utho... meri to taangey mar jayengi. Ab main toh kabhi chal bhi nahi paoonga.
Muskaan jumps off his lap and stands up and says - Acha? Kisne bathaya tha mujhe?
Rahul gets up as well and goes inside jumping right onto the bed.
Rahul - Mujhe patha tha ke main is bed par kabhi na kabhi toh sohoon ga sahi.
Muskaan - Tujhe patha tha? Hmm? Uth ja!
Rahul - Share kar sakthe hain na? ( with a puppydog sweet face)
Muskaan - Theek hai. Magar tujhe right side main sona padega. Main sirf left main so sakhthi hoon.
Rahul - Mujhe bhi left main sohne ki aadat hai.. chalo hum dono ekh hi side main sothe hain.
Muskaan - Rahul!
Rahul - Ok theek hai.. jho tum kaho..

While laying in bed in the dark with just some slight light peeking in they were just looking at each other and holding hands. He was playing with her hand and kissing it.
Muskaan - Yeh kab aur kaise hua main nahi jaanti par ab tum kahin nahin jaoge na?
Rahul - Kahin nahin.. kabhi nahin.. jab thak saas hai tere saath hi rahoonga
Muskaan - Hmm.. Itna romantic kabse bane?
Rahul - Azma ke dekha nahin tune magar main toh aise hi hoon aur kuch tere pyar ka asar hai.
Ab sojha meri khwabon ki shehzaadi aur mere hi sapne dekhna.
She turns around and he puts his arm around her and they cuddle together and drift off to a dreamful sleep while Rahul slowly sings and hums intermittently.
Bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
Honth se halke halke, bol na halke

Aa neendh ka sauda karein, ik khwaab dein, ik khwaab lein
Ik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye talein
Kithane dino se yeh asamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula dein

Bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke

Next thing you know its morning. The sun rays was trying to peak in from behind the curtains. Rahul woke up first and notices Muskaan is laying facing him on the bed fast asleep.
Rahul blinks a few times to make sur ehe is really awake. When he first awoke he though everything that happened was a dream but now I realizing that this was all real and that makes him very happy.
Rahul - looking at her says lightly - Wow!
Rahul stares at her for awhile and then wants her to wake up also and is trying to figure out how to do that. He takes her hair in his hands and tries to tickle her face with it. This does the trick. She starts getting irritated and scrunching up her face. She moves her hand to swat away whatever is bothering her. And again goes back to sleep. Rahul smiles and does it again and again and she slowly wakes up more and more each time. The last time he does it she goes to swat again but ends up slapping him.
Rahul - Ouch! Kis jaanam ka badla le rehi hai. - touching his cheek -
And that finally wakes her up but she is stretching, rubs her eyes, and looks over at him.
Muskaan - whispers - Rahul?
Rahul - Haan main. Tu sapna nahin dekh rahi.. abhi abhi tune mujhe bare kaske mara - still rubbing his
cheek
Muskaan - Sorry.. mujhe kuch thang kar raha tha. - rubbing his cheek -
He is trying not to smile and that makes her suspicious.
Muskaan - Rahul! Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?
She starts remembering last night and blushes .
Rahul - Tujhe ghoor raha tha aur kya?
Muskaan - Oye! Maine tujhe kab permission di mujhe ghoorne ki?
Rahul - whispers in her ear - Kal raat. Ab mujhe tere pe sab hak hain.
Muskaan smiles and hits him
Rahul - Ab tu phas gayi.
Muskaan - Haan yeh baath toh theek kahi tune .. main phas gayi magar...
Not letting her finish talking he just leans in and kisses her forhead, eyes, nose, cheeks, chin and then her lips. The kiss starts off soft and becomes more passionate as she kisses him back this time. Muskaan runs her hand in Rahul's hair. Rahul places his arms around her and palms on her back and pulls her closer. His hold around her got tighter as she kissed him more passionately with every moment and he responded back with the same. They finally part and just look into each others eyes.
Rahul - Agar har subah aise uthoon toh meri toh life hi ban gayi..
Muskaan blushes and smiles.
The phone rings and its news of their time to go back from Lonavala. They aren't looking forward to it but as long as they are together everything will be alright. Everything will be perfect.
....................................................................................................................
Hmm.. thats it.. what do you guys think?
A little cheesy?
A little rushed?
I didn't get a chance to PM yet so don't think I did not PM you in particular.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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