Rahul and Muskaan in Lonavala - pg23 - last part

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sehar mehrotra

@sehar mehrotra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

tooooooooooooooo gooooooood..........👏👏

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ankita

@muskaan_ankita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#182

sonia.... I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY!! I HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES!! Its beautiful.... lovely... amazing!! I loved the way you ended it... just like a fairytale!! 😊 jana... do you have to end this?? 😭

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MOONA

@luvingRM

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

hey sonia so i m here commenting u

yaar end kyu kya .......????

last part was good

i lyked that scene wen muskan saw her pic n was taken aback n their confusion wen rahul thought muski dnt want to merry him :)

as komal said u shud start another one

hope to see u writing new ff

mOonA

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

Hey Friend 😊

I just read your story, and it was really a cute one. But i was very surprised that you ended it so soon. You should have taken it further. I loved the way you have portrayed Rahu & Muskaan's characters, its very much like their original characters in DMG.

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nadia1995

@nadia1995

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

wow tht was such a cute end!!😳

i luved it- but i dont want it 2 end 😭

great work sonia

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#186

AWESOME!!......this was really really good.....n it was so romantic n sweet.....

i do not think that u were goint too fast...the pace was steady....

n all the scenes were very nicely written........

the slap in the morning was really funny.....

n i like the way Rahul put a picture of her to tell Muskaan......that was very nice......n different

this ff was really good.....

hope u write more...

i am so sry for updating so late......i was actually out of town for the past 4 days.....

well GREAT JOB!!.....

-Simran

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nidz n

@nidz n

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

wow wow wow.......gr888888888 update....
but am realli sad dat it iz over.....
luved everything in it.....
do ri8 more ffz lyk diz...........n weneva u do plzzz pm me
take care

Edited by nidz n - 16 years ago

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ShehzadeeN

@ShehzadeeN

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Posted: 16 years ago

#188

hey. loved the whole story, wished u could continue it. do start another one soon! i will be waiting anxiously! :)

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Imane

@accountband

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Posted: 16 years ago

#189

Ok perfect ending i must say and with this ending we expect a new beginning because you are that amazing of a writer and we need you RM needs you.. this story was just beautiful it had everything... i must say we got talent and that's you... amazing... i am out of words to be honest... this was soo good i still have a smile on my face... but do contd with your new creation and make it exciting like this one i am sure each one of your piece is just fab and unqiue... because you write with great imagination and story... CLAPS... CLAPS AGAIN... STANDS UP AND CLAPs... yayyya... GOOD job and keep it up... Luv ya... Byez