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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi! Guys this is my second attempt at ff writing and I know dat m first attempt was worst

But this time I assure u I will try my best

And this one will be a good one😊

So guys

These r the characters

1) Rajeev khandelwal as Rajeev khandelwal

2) Priyanka bassi(u can imagine anybody)as sana arya

3) Amnaa sheriff as amna sheriff

4) Arjun bijlani as arjun malhotra

A huge house was there ,fully derocorated and a lot of guest were entering the house

This was the party thrown by the businessman of the years

Mr.deepak arya

Mr.deepak-may I hav ur attention ladies and gentlemen

As u know this party is for my achievement ,for the award I got of the best businessmen of the year but this is not all for this there r two more reasons also for this parly

First because I and and mr.khandelwal have became the 50%-50% parterners

And secondly today, after the whole 4 years my daughter sana is back fron London👏👏

(then our heroine enters the scene descending the stairs wearing a black colour halter necked saree)

mr.deepak-this is my daughter sana

(then we hear lot a appaulse)👏👏👏

mr.deepak to mr.khandelwal-so ranbeer were's ur son Rajeev

mr.k(mr.khandelwal)-must be reaching usko bas shooting ke lie jana tha.

Mr.d(mr.deepak)-ya ya he's the super star of television afterall

Mrs.k-lo aa gaya

Rk😳-hi everybody.hey uncle congratulations(hand him over a gift)and this is sana right?

Mr.a-yes

Rk-hi I'm Rajeev
sana-oh really mr.superstar I din't know this

Rk-(smiles)😉

Sana-I think when I was born it was u only whom I first saw😆

Rk-haha ok sorry vaise u r looking really beautiful😳

Sana-thanx vaise tum bhi thik thak hi lagte ho

Rk-oh ya

Sana-ya haahaha😆

(then they hugged each other😳)

mrs-a-ok tum bacha log enjoy urself

sana-so dear how's ur present gf amnaa

rk-present? She was past. I dumped her

sana-u dumped her or she dumped u😉

rk-I dumped her . u know nobody hav that guts to dump me😉

rk-tere kitne bf's hai?

Sana-kya karoon kismet kharab hai koi milta hi nahin

Rk-milta nahin ya koi pasand nahin ata

Sana-dono

Rk-matlab

Sana-matlab koi milta nahin jo pasand ae.

Rk-ohh(laughs)😆😆

Rk-tera kuch nahin ho sakta?budhu

(then sana gave a cute smile) 😊

😊hey guys plzz reply karna

liked it or not both ways

critisism is welcomed😊 first ud hai islie chotu sa likha hai ok
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fanatic 21 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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too good start.............looks interesting !!!!!

updt soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys pllzz comment
kya mera fic itna bura hai?
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prerna1 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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too good
sounds interesting
plz continue soon
KRIZZY thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i want more replies plzzz plzz plzzz
Deeya thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it realli seems nice... sorry for commenting late........
i wonder wat the plot is gonna be,...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I need to know yaar is it RN ff ?
because aap ne likha hai Priyanaka Bassi(imagine ayone) what did it mean?
ne ways nice start.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanatic 21

too good start.............looks interesting !!!!!

updt soon

thank u dear
thank u very much for reading it.
i'll ud as soon sa possible.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: prerna1

too good

sounds interesting
plz continue soon

thank u dear
i'll ud as soon as possible
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sounds good. pls continue.😊

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