At d bar..AK UPD pg 11..3/12

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heyyy evryone!!
hw r u awll???
hope u awl r doin gud...
guess wat m bak 2 annoy u..as i m startin a new ff At d bar....of our vry own ANGAD N KRIPA
quite alot of ppl hav joined if in d past years...
soo those who dont knoe me i m Iqra..17yrs old.doing ma Alevels...
waiting for ur feed bak!!
*courtesy 2 vallu dii 4 givin me ideas abt kripas past!!!
*At d bar*
Kripa looked at herself in d mirror admiringly...she looked gorgeous...yes pink realli suited her...
she was wearing a shocking pink backless knee length dress..wid dangling earings n lightmakeup...she brushed
her open long hair for d last time n was about to leave wen her eyes caught a photo frame...it was her late parents picture.............. actually her guardians picture.. she took d picture in her hands n looked at it closely..... so much she mumbled ......actually alot has changed in d past 6 months....................
her parents who she hates most now told her tht...she was adopted!!!!!! tht to b from an ORPHANAGE...it was horrible n more shocking was tht she got 2 knoe this fact wen her parents were living their last breaths as they were injured frm the accident...she was heartbroken !!n the day they passed away.... ...she found out they left their property worth millions 4 her...just to reassure her tht they never thought she was an orphan 4 them...she thought angrily...she was about to give it in charity...but then a voice came frm inside of her saying tht this was d only mark of her parents n she cudnt
give it away.....she knew tht she was calling a bigger trouble by keeping the money wid her...as her greedy step siblings wud surely ask her 4 tht............
she took a deep breath n wiped her tears tht were flowing frm her cheeks n decided tht from nowonwards she wont cry n live her life happily.......... forgetting her past n start a new beggining...she wud change herself to a rude spoilt rich gal frm a soft sensitive n shy one!!!she took a last look at suryabhan n gayatris picture n put it bak on d dressing table...stared at herself in d mirror smiled...n said Lets enjoy this new beginning Ms Kripa Sharma!!!walked away to Aqua *one of d famous disco in town*although she didnt knew the fact destiny was waiting 4 her wid a person that would change her life forever!!😉
thats wat called DESTINY!!
iqra...
hope u all like it
*i would like to dedicate this ff to ma late sista Isha..n ofcourse our dear fantastic writers here griffy,pallu di,vallu di,n me..lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good beginning.
Liked the intro of Kripa. She has no obstacles in her future life except her siblings. who are those? and how many? Hope they don't bring any troubles for her.
She certainly meets Angad now ..in the bar...how is he? another brat???
Looking forward for next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx deeya..😊.
i knew u wud comment...cuz i saw ur comments on rose ff..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: vallanki

Good beginning.

Liked the intro of Kripa. She has no obstacles in her future life except her siblings. who are those? and how many? Hope they don't bring any troubles for her.
She certainly meets Angad now ..in the bar...how is he? another brat???
Looking forward for next part.

aww thanx a bunch dii...
siblings??i havent even thought abt their characters lol...i dunt think thy hav a big prt in this ff..
sab pata hai dii tumko😛...i told u awlreadyy...dun reveal here😉...
another brat??
abi to ye pata chaleygaa!!!!😉keep guessing...is baar sumthin diff will happen!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey...grt introo....cont soon

thanx sweet honey...yea i will soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK 4eva

hey nice to see ur back
great concept....aww kripa is adopted.....wonder how many sibling does she has and do they know that she is adopted....hmm so lets guess that it is angad who she will meet at the bar
anyways plz plz continue soon

hey..
aww thanx alot 4 ur sweet comment..good question..do they realli knoe shez adopted??
we will see...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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promo on its way!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx hinna..special!!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gr8 intro! 😊
continue so0n! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: me_iq

thanx hinna..special!!😉



hmmmmmmm😳

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