Unprecedented Ending!!(RN short ff) last part - Page 6

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

I am thinking hard abt wat to write and how to comment on dis last update ?really not getting the correct terms?u always leave me in a daze?nevertheless it was an awesome update dear. The way Naina remenbered all the past moments dat she n Raj shared were quite sentimental.😭😭😭.I wish luck had favoured both of dem but 1 cannot fight the destiny. Raj's confession was the most memorable part of this update..He was lying on his death-bed but he was still concerned abt Naina .(Dat is true love indeed)

I really didn't liked the way Raj died but as u have mentioned b4 i was expecting dis only.Raj made her promise dat she will live n punish the real culprits n i'm sure Naina will do so..But will she ever b able to live like a normal person.I can say no coz life is only worth living if we have some1 to die for.😭😭 n she has lost him forever.

U r n exceptional writer dear n i'll wait for the updates of WIT n do start a new fiction.

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

i'm speechless.................fabulous...............very realistic end indeed........👏

just d use of words n dos pictures added flavour to ur fic......⭐️⭐️

its was very nice short fic.......👏

plzz come up soon wid another good1 from ur collection

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hi Sofi ,

it's end. n the end is hurt me soooo much. i never expected such a end.....ur unpredictable.!!!
i really feel like crying.....😭 don't have word to express my feeling....it's one of ur short but fabulous fic.it's mindblowing !
keep such a wonderful writing....

it's tooo tooo tooo Good.👏

Originally posted by: me myself

ur are marvellous writer , seriously i had tears in my eyes😭

👏 .

it was painful but luv does hurt and raj naina is immortal and cnt be threatened by death.

Originally posted by: saridena

ditto she has quoted my thoughts

wonderful ending

looking forward for more ff

if u write do pm me

luv soumya

Originally posted by: rituka7

awesome
brilliant work
loved it

Originally posted by: crackpots86

hi sofi,

i m sad dis fic ended, i m sad coz raj died, i m sad coz naina will never be able to be wid her love....i m just sad.....but despite everything being sad, it still feels right...i m not angry or dissapointed about the ending coz it was just so practical....not everything in life is goody - goody n dats wat i loved abt ur fic.....

i hope u come up wid another zabardast fic wid our favourite couple....

love,

dhara.......

Originally posted by: starasdf

heyzz

👏👏👏wow u r a gr8 wirter👏👏👏

😭😭😭i wish it didnt have 2 end dis way😭😭😭

just speachless

Star⭐️

Originally posted by: Nishttha

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just amazing👏👏

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! thanks shai

Naina is going through the dangerous jungles in the middle of the night just for him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina just wants to find him and bring him back!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 but what we think does not happen always does it!!

She does not even think that he might be dead!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She loves him so much!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 eternal love i would say

Usse nahi pata kaha jana hai magar phir bhi dhundh rahi hai and finally she found a clue!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Her thinking back to the time when she had given him the rumaal was very sentimental!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 well i am glad u liked it atleast...

Raj looked at Naina with so much adoration that she forgot to breathe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He always takes her breath away!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was not shy anymore but rather bold and mature!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj loved this new Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳He always loved her but now she is exceptionally different!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj toh Naina ki har ada pe fida hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 what can i say raj toh gaya kaam se😉

Naina found her hankerchief stained with blood!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭O God!!!!

Her heart cried out in pain!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭She took his head in her arms and placed it on her lap!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Her love is just flowing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 but too late i guess

He thought he was hallucinating but then hardcore reality struck him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Even now he is confused what he should feel!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina is hurt by his words but he raised his fingers to touch her face and caressed her cheeks!!!!! So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina kehna chahti hai ke yeh saath ush din tai huya tha jab but she changed what she had to say!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Even now she can't say it openly!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 ofcourse it was hard on her to see him like this

Yes it is ironical that they had realised they are made for each other and are each others' life at this juncture when he is dying!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj gave her the proofs and told her everything and made her promise to bring justice and bring back honour to Navin's name and his!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Even at this point he is just concerned about Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊That is true love indeed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 true love that even dies for the other!!!

This was the end and they both knew it!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The law of nature and this was his turn and she would have hers oneday!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊But how will she live without him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 well that is cruel fate my dear

Finally he said he loved her and has always loved her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ya the final confession i guess...

Naina said he can't leave her alone and she needs him and loves him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Poor Naina!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj said he will always be with her, his soul will always be with her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊It was so heart wrenching!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina promised him and he said I believe in Cadet Naina 'Ah' Singh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

And he stopped and his last words were her name and his belief in her!!!!!!

She wanted to die right there with him and right in his arms!!!!

It was rightly said that would be an insult to her love and to the promise she made him and betraying him!!! 😊 😊 😊 their love is strong enuf to survive this loss!!!

His last confession gave her strength to survive!!!!! How could she let her love down!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina decided to live even though her heart had died and live as a mere mortal devoid of all emotions!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina really died that day and lived only to fulfil her promise!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭It was so terrible!!!!!! hmmm so true

She will never be able to live like a normal person because life is worth living only if there is someone to die for!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She had lost him forever!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Life was cruel!!! She had found her love only to lose it again!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 that is a reality we all need to accept!!

In the middle of the noght ended a journey of a beautiful soul!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

They had experienced everything friendship, love, hatred, trust, guidance, protection, solace and finally love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Magar pyaar ka izhaar karne mein bahut der kardi!!!! It came in the last moment!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 but it did come atleast once than that of undying and unsaid love

But yes theirs had definately been the most memorable love story ever!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I think unpe yeh gaana suit karta hai.......... 😊

Hum hain iss pal yahaan
Jaane ho kal kahaan
Hum mile na mile
Hum rahe na rahe
Rahegi sadaa yahaan
Pyaar ki yeh dastaan
Sunenge sadaa jise
Yeh zameen aasmaa......... 😊 thanks shai u always make an effort to post an apt song😊

Some short love stories go a long way!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Well said!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Some love stories live forever!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Tragic ending to a beautiful love story!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 thanks again😃